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Communication Studies IA May/June 2024 Theme - Art
Communication Studies IA May/June 2024 Theme - Art
TERRITORY: Jamaica
THEME: Art
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Table of Contents
Table of Contents......................................................................................................................2
General Introduction...............................................................................................................3
Preface.......................................................................................................................................4
Reflective Piece.........................................................................................................................5
Analysis.....................................................................................................................................8
References...............................................................................................................................10
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General Introduction
The focus of this Internal Assessment surrounds itself on the importance of art and
how we use this as a medium of communication. The desire to focus on this theme was due to
the increased awareness of how communication does not limit itself to the verbal scope but
From this topic, I intend to find several secondary sources that will be crucial in
creating both the exposition and reflective piece. This will allow me to delve into the impact
of art on how we communicate effectively. My reflective piece will discuss this idea by
utilising journal entries to present how a woman can communicate her complex feelings
through paintings. My speech will focus on the effectiveness of art as a medium and
communication can take place in different formats will allow me to cultivate success easier
due an increased awareness. Personally, I will be able to have a heightened awareness and
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Preface
For my reflective piece I have chosen journal entries entitled “Language of Paint”.
The use of journal entries for this reflective piece was chosen due to its ability to express
intimate feelings which plays a significant role in both communication and expression
through art.
I believe that this piece best tackles the chosen theme as it acts as a means of
inspiration that encourages individuals to express themselves in ways that challenge the
piece is to highlight the fact that effective communication can take place through the use of
art. The intended audience are Caribbean persons who face struggles with emotional
expression. They were chosen due to emotions being traditionally suppressed and
and realism due to its accurate portrayal of a young artist. Additionally, it would be shared
using both magazine columns and read aloud on the radio making it an accessible piece of
literature. This would maximise the opportunities for the target audience to be engaged whilst
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Reflective Piece
Dear Diary,
Today I finally got a chance to collect my mail and go to the seaside. I must say that I
don’t think I can ever mature enough to not be flustered hearing sailors use their coarse
language. Anyway, when I finally opened the letter that William sent me, I was incredibly
disappointed when I read what he had to say to me. “I’m sorry Eliza, I can’t keep engaging
with your silly games and your even sillier dreams of becoming an artist”. That line stuck
with me even more than his degrading comments on my nomadic lifestyle and inability to
You would think that his words discouraged me but instead I spent the rest of the day
staring out at the sea and found new inspiration. I came home and painted. I painted how his
letter made me feel. I must admit it took a lot out of me to not tear the canvas from the easel
and set it ablaze half-way through painting but I succeeded. In the end I was left with a
depiction of a small lark with its wings pinned to its sides trapped in a wrought iron cage that
was placed facing a large open window. You could feel the irony ooze off the paint and fill
the small room I repurposed into my studio. I wanted him to see that he was cruel as whoever
encased and taunted the lark with its desires just out of grasp.
September 2, 1947
Dear Diary,
I decided against sending my painting to William. I decided to not send him anymore
letters or painting again. I don’t think he has noticed because he still sends me mail. He
seems to grow more hysterical the more letters of his that I’ve read in recent times. The only
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thing that seemed to change is that he started leaving me tokens in each envelope he posts.
They started off as small sketches of myself on crumpled coffee stained paper along with
poems in French detailing his love for me as well as begging me for forgiveness. However as
time went by he started mailing large abstract portraits of him and I as infamous lovers in
history. In the last painting he sent, we were Helen and Menelaus. William was able to make
himself look even cockier and more possessive than his letters did and every time I saw it
I was lost in my own mind that during my errands last Saturday I walked right into the
back of my priest. His soft plain language so heavily contrasted the harsh intricate language
William used in his letters it momentarily stunned me. We walked in step with each other and
his presence was sobering. The unobtrusive small talk about everything and nothing left a
pleasant hum in my thoughts as I travelled home. It was as I stepped over the threshold of my
door that I was once again plagued with the soulless feeling William inspired within me. I
would be lying if I said his delusions did not fuel my art. But this time when I came to after
painting I saw a canvas with myself as a martyr, William as a Roman soldier and my priest
embracing me. Itched into the bottom were the words omnia vincit amor; love conquered all.
Dear Diary,
I sent the painting to William and he came to see me. His fancy words, teary voice
and shaky hands made me sick to my stomach. He kept saying “Mi a beg yuh please nuh do
mi dis” over and over again whilst being unable to look me in the eyes out of shame. I turned
my back to him so he knew I was over him and whatever he had to say. I took it a step further
and exited my small flat to see if he understood the message. He did not. He followed me in
the streets and on to the seaside where I read his letter in August.
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The same sailors and their obscene language peppered the shoreline. This time their
words weren’t the one that caused my cheeks to be red but the desperation that William
reeked of. His stuttering words and his lack of eye contact made his words fly over my head
and into the sea breeze around us. I clenched my fists and stared out into the water. Once
again my mind ran wild and I dreamt of painting once again. I came home and painted. On
the canvas I saw a wolf with the head of a lamb cowering before a small lamb with the head
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Analysis
relation to her environment. This piece featured significant occurrences of dialectic variation
and communicative behaviours. They worked conjointly to accurately portray the intimate
The journal entries featured artefacts and kinesics. The standout feature of this piece
is the use of art to present ideas to both the audience and other characters. This
communication is done through the use of widely acknowledged symbols such as ‘a caged
bird with pinned wings’ and the ironic use of ‘wolves and sheep’. The effect this had was that
it showed the various ways in which a message could be communicated. Kinesics also
played a key role. By ‘avoiding eye contact’ and having ‘shaky hands’, it effectively
communicated the anxious attitude of William towards Eliza. This aided in the
characterisation of his defeat as an egotistical character alongside peaking the interest of the
audience. In these ways, one can acknowledge the effectiveness of artefacts and kinesics in
Dialectic Variation played a significant role in these journal entries. The shift in
William’s character was heavily supported by the shift in his dialect. Initially, he spoke in the
acrolect “I’m sorry Eliza” which transitioned into the basilect “Mi a beg yuh” as he became
more frustrated. The William that used acrolect when writing haughty letters to Eliza was
diminished to his base dialect (Creole) upon strong rejection. This code-switching was
chosen as it heavily resonates with the Caribbean audience who are familiar with dialectic
The use of Latin “omnia vincit amor” by Eliza also served as a form of dialectic
variation and its main function was to aid in her communication through art.
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In conclusion, it is easy to identify in the journal entries of “Language of Paint” the
importance of communicative behaviours and dialect variation. They play a significant role in
understanding and appreciating the context of the diary entries. Additionally, they work
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References
garagelandmagazine.blogspot.com/2014/10/miscommunication.html?m=1.
Essays and Letters.” Internet Archive, Inter-National Cultural Centre, 1 Jan. 1961,
archive.org/details/in.gov.ignca.38423/page/n89/mode/1up.
Ragans, Rosalind. “Art in Your World, The Language of Art.” Art Talk, Art Source, pp. 16–
19.
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