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Personal Essay Final
Personal Essay Final
Raeann Ramlal
Mrs. Robar
Grade 12 English
15/04/2024
administrators, rather than on the basis of merit, some students enjoy opportunities that
should have been fruits of other students’ labour. My essay delves into instances where the
lives of some of my secondary school classmates, have been adversely affected by nepotism,
due to them not being readmitted to the higher level of education. I have a strong moral and
value system which obligates me to highlight this issue and bring to the forefront its adverse
Envision a situation where students, with equal ambitions and abilities, walk separate paths
connections, are deprived of readmission despite having met all the required criteria of the
school’s administration. Conversely, other classmates, who are deficient in the requisite
qualifications, are fortunate to be readmitted due to their status. This explicit distinction
highlights the prejudice that pervades in the Secondary school I attended for five years in
Trinidad, after graduating from my primary school, this reality shocked me as if lightning hit
me. However, I later learnt that this was the status quo in most of the denominational
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secondary schools in Trinidad, i.e the schools that funded by both the Government and their
This status quo goes way beyond my classmates. When worthy students are disregarded in
favour of those with dominant acquaintances, the integrity of the school is compromised.
Meritocracy was understood to be the school’s cornerstone. The erosion of this pillar results
in a deficiency of trust in the school by those who do not benefit from this unfair treatment.
Further, it creates disenchantment among those adversely affected, along with me due to my
The pervasiveness of relationships overriding merit in educational institutions aligns with the
general status quo within my society, where nepotism overrides the protocols of most
institutions. In the private sector individuals with good financial standing and those with
social status decide who gets what positions or benefits, in most instances this is based on
connections. Similarly, within the central government and state enterprises in Trinidad, some
politicians interfere with the grant of employment opportunities, the award of contracts, and
other financial opportunities to benefit their friends and family. As a consequence, qualified
individuals with no elite associations are deprived and left failing in the shadows, while the
small elite group continues to benefit from their connections. This culture creates
socioeconomic inequalities, stifles fair public advancement and declines the overall growth of
The status quo of relationships being the criteria to advance in my society diminishes the
principles of meritocracy which a country should abide by. A new culture of entitlement is
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bred and individuals are awarded benefits without earning them. As such, the fundamental
values of persistent hard work, commitment and professional skill sets become a thing of the
past, resulting in a stagnant society. This regression is very dangerous to the overall
advancement of the country especially when existing in a world with complex challenges like
It is very important to initiate change in the status quo at both the school and societal levels to
treat this deeply ingrained issue. Transparency and equality should be engrained in the fabric
of the educational institution's selection processes, ensuring that merit remains the main
criterion for advancement. Concurrently, society, starting with me, needs to participate in
ensuring that awareness of this destructive practice and its effects are changed to allow for a
new and refreshed culture based on merit and integrity which can allow for a more objective
society.
The status quo of relationships and financial status allowing for advancement within the
school’s system is a bitter pill for me to swallow. Its consequences extend way beyond my
classmates who are denied readmission that they are rightfully entitled to. This systemic bias
diminishes the real fabric of my society. By bringing this issue to the forefront, I hope to
ignite conversations about the destruction that the present status quo of nepotism and
favouritism is causing in school systems as well as society. I would also like to lobby for this
status quo to be changed to allow for transparency, equality and meritocracy, and unitedly
attempt to achieve a future where this supersedes relationships and financial status, allowing