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Text Evaluation Tesfaye
Text Evaluation Tesfaye
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1. Introduction
According to Harmer (2007), English was already well on its way to becoming a
genuine lingua franca, which is a language used widely for communication
between people who do not share the same first (or even second) language. As
we know, English is a foreign language in Ethiopia. English is taught in formal
education institutions as one of the mandatory subjects in the education
system.
Both grade 6 and grade 12 English texts are designed for Ethiopian students
who learn English as a foreign language. The contents of the book are arranged
in themes and topics, which are contexts to present the language contents to
be imparted. That means a week's lesson is under a topic and three
consecutive weeks lessons The text book follows new approaches in language
content, organization of the contents, classroom methodology, teachers’ and
students’ roles, and techniques of assessment despite poor literary evaluation
methods.
First, the writer of this paper selected the old text book volume 1 for grade 6,
which was published in 2017. Three animal fables and one poem are presented
in the text. The book has five chapters. Though the language contents of the
book include word study, reading comprehension, vocabulary, listening
comprehension, speaking skills, grammar, reading fluency, and writing skills,
the concern of this paper is to evaluate literary text preparations based on
language parameters.
The second part of this study aims to evaluate the literary aspects presented
for Grade 12. The text generally consists of 12 chapters with vast informative
texts and some literary pieces or extracts, which are under the evaluation
agenda of this paper. In the text book, four novels, four poems, and one story
are selected to be evaluated, but detailed explanations will be given on limited
texts due to time constraints because they have similar contents.
2. Discussion
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Genre: Biographical novel
Message: The main concept of the poem is how blacks are bullied and
discriminated against around the world. This poem is the answer to all the
white's bullying based on ethnicity. The poem is written to encourage a positive
image
2. The narrow path by Francis Serolmey
Genre: Story
Theme: "The Narrow Path" is the coming of age story of a young Ghanaian boy
during 1920's colonial rule. Selormey, via the main character Kofi, takes us on
an educational and cultural journey as Kofu tries to navigate through
childhood and adolescence under the rigid cultural and religious guidance of
his father.
3. No longer at ease 1960 By Achebe
Genre: story
No Longer At Ease is set at the brink of Nigeria's independence, some sixty-
plus years later. This second novel vividly demonstrates the moral destruction
colonialism wreaked on Igbo society and culture.
4. Devil on the cross by Ngugi wa.....1980
Type: political novel
Theme: One of the cornerstones of Ngũgĩ wa Thiong'o's fame, Devil on the
Cross is a powerful fictional critique of capitalism. It tells the tragic story of
Wariinga, a young woman who moves from a rural Kenyan town to the capital,
Nairobi, only to be exploited by her boss and later by a corrupt businessman.
5. Western Civilization by Aughostinho
Genre: poem
Theme: The poem is about the nature of Western civilization brought to Africa
which ironically turns out to be injustice, torture, exploitation and creation of
poverty to Africans. The labourer in the poem lives a poor life working hard for
the colonialists and finally dies of hunge. It is Ironical poem. It’s about
exploitation, injustice, torture etc.
6. A taxi driver on his death 1974 by Timothy Wangusha
Genre: poem
Theme: The poem speaker further explained that he wasn't risking his life
because of the passengers (he didn't even know them), or for proprietor's gain,
or for self-love. Concealing my blood under the metal". The poem has the
themes of anticipation, insinuation, judgment and guilt.
7. Vultures by Achebe 1971
Genre: poem
Theme: Vultures symbolize death and decomposition. The poet tells us that
these symbols of death and evil, who eat the decaying corpses, can have a
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loving side. This image of love contrasts with their evil nature. bashed-in head
– another image of violence that creates a terrifying/ugly picture of them.
Genre: Poem
8. Money order by Senegalese writer Sembene Ousmane 1968
Genre: fiction
Theme: The portrait of how a small sum of money, arrived in a poor country,
gets to corrupt and upset people, radically transforming everything that
touches.
9. Building The Nation by Henry Barlow 1973
Genre: poem
Theme: The poem deal with diverse themes like political opportunism and
sycophancy, war, the paradox of God and the richness and beauty of nature.
Any text that the teacher selects should have at least some potential interest
for the students. This is, of course, difficult to judge, as a new selection of
individuals appears before teachers each semester with different life histories,
ideas, and preferences. Seeking to address this when putting together a
literature or language textbook, the textbook authors endeavored to choose
texts that we thought would have a certain universal appeal and a common
humanity. We implied from the concepts that the literary works created for
grade 12 students are far from them, as the evaluation criteria are designed to
test vocabulary and general reading comprehension.
For students with literary backgrounds, some of the texts are familiar to them
as they learned some extracts from the same novel in their previous grade
levels. For instance, The African Child by Camara Laye is also presented in
grade 10 so that students have background knowledge about the novel. They
can understand the text, but not with a sense of literary interpretation. The
students can understand through a bird's-eye view and are keen to know the
meaning of words since the text is aimed at grading or scoring better marks.
Unfortunately most of the literary texts from grade 12b text book are not
available at book shops but soft copies of them are available online. No more
resources to allocate activities from the texts coz accessibility of internet is not
reliable for all learners of grade 12 students throughout the country.
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Except evaluating techniques of literary texts, students’ level of maturity and
emotion is not too far from grade 12 students.
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C. Surprisingly, the literary text presented in both text books is not available in
printed form. They are only available online, but how many students can
access the internet countrywide in Ethiopia? It's really challenging. If the
texts are not readily available, it is impossible to supply pupils with extracts
from them in the class room.
D. Is the level of difficulty of the texts equally understandable for all pupils in
private and government schools, as well as in remote areas of the country as
well as towns? It is doubtful. It doesn’t fit all students equally.
E. Some of the extracts are difficult to understand, even the concepts, because
of linguistic difficulty. All the texts don’t invite students to share their prior
knowledge literary texts.
The texts must fit our students emotional and maturity levels.
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Literary texts should get along with Ethiopian students social, cultural, and
literary backgrounds.
The author of this essay concludes by advising teachers, students, and other
interested parties to study the whole literary masterpieces included in both the
grade 6 and 12 text books for enjoyment and research and to see alternatives
to design better literary works for our country pupils.
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Reference
Harmer, J. (2007). How to teach English new edition edn. Oxford: Pearson
Education Limited.