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What’s the Story? The Director
Meets Their Screenplay
Peter Markham
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Contents
Acknowledgments ix
Introduction 1
PART A
The approach 3
2 Premise 10
3 Theme 16
4 Genre 21
5 World/setting 39
7 Tone 49
8 Structure 55
9 Passage of time 63
10 Character 69
16 Endings 124
PART B
The case study—Contrapelo screenplay by
Liska Ostojic and Gareth Dunnet-Alcocer 137
19 Screenplay 139
21 Conclusion 181
References 182
Bibliography 183
Index 184
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Acknowledgments
There are many who imagine the director’s job is restricted to directing the
actors, that above all it is about getting good performances. There are those
would go on to say it’s about deciding how to shoot those performances, in
the process “covering” the action of a scene adequately so that its footage
will cut together. Among directors, some approach their craft by deciding
on a moment in the screenplay and working towards, then away from it—as
if those gradients might be the sole contours of dramatic narrative. Indeed,
although most filmmakers acknowledge the task of bringing the screenplay
to the screen, they perhaps do not entirely appreciate the nexus of dra-
matic construction and filmic discourse—by which I mean the visual and
auditory language of cinema and TV, the tone, the rhythm, the aesthetics,
the manipulation of time, and the nature of a film’s address to its audience.
I used to believe that when a director considers a screenplay, if they are
doing their job, they think about the merits and demerits of its story, what
the characters want, what their goals might be, what is text and what sub-
text, and how, artistically, logistically, and fiscally, the film might be made.
I knew they should know how to “break down” a scene. I knew they should
have opinions and insights as to how good or bad the script was, and what
elements might need fixing, but I did not know of any structured approach
by which the director could engage with the screenplay in order to under-
stand it at both the granular and the architectural level, to mine the deep
strata and foundations of its narrative, to trace its connectivity and fathom
its identity in order that this comprehensive understanding might inform
each and every subsequent area of filmmaking craft. It was in teaching
Directing at AFI Conservatory in Los Angeles, as Discipline Head for eight
years and as Senior Lecturer for over six years beforehand, that that short-
coming, thankfully, evaporated …
While working with the directing “fellows”—some directors, many
writer-directors—in the thesis presentation class throughout those fourteen
years, also as an adjunct before that, and in teaching some 450 young, tal-
ented, and diverse filmmakers from around the world, I developed more
clarity and greater method, one that has been proven to work. Indeed, many
of the “fellows” in my classes have gone on to achieve great success in film
2 Introduction
and TV, winning awards at Cannes, Sundance, the Motion Picture Academy,
Busan and other major festivals throughout the world.
Writing What’s the Story? The Director Meets Their Screenplay has
given me the opportunity to evolve that process considerably and to pre-
sent—untrammeled by time constraints and the limitations of a three-hour
class—a guide to the essential understanding that, by way of forensic ana-
lysis of story and screenplay, together with an accompanying imperative
of creative vision, must inform the director’s approach to all areas of their
filmmaking. This book provides a key to the director’s and writer-director’s
engagement with their film, whether feature or short, or their TV episode or
season, at the fundamental levels of story, screenplay, character, and image,
these forming the bedrock of all subsequent processes—creative, technical,
logistical, and budgetary.
While there are many books about screenwriting, and many about
directing that focus on performance, on camera, on physical production,
and on the industry, and while many of them are very good indeed, it seems
to me there is a dearth of guidance when it comes to considering how the
director might engage with the screenplay at the key creative level. What’s
the Story?, by contrast, looks in both directions—at the screenplay one way,
at the shoot and the cut the other. With some twenty-two essential topics,
explored and then applied to the case study of the included screenplay of
the short film Contrapelo, co-written and directed by my alumnus Gareth
Dunnet-Alcocer, this book addresses the problematic lacuna of much film-
making literature, with each topic being explained in its own right while the
various topics are tied together through their connection to the overarching
craft of the visual storyteller.
Here is an approach that will appeal not only to students but to practiced
filmmakers too. It will be of value not only to directors and, I hope,
screenwriters, but to filmmakers of all disciplines. Cinematographers, pro-
duction designers, costume designers, editors, and producers (in no particu-
late order) all practice crafts rooted in story and storytelling. I hope that
What’s the Story? can be not sectarian but unifying. Feeding our common-
ality as filmmakers, it’s a foundation on which to build the mutual trust and
insight that going forward makes for a coherent and productive collabora-
tive process, understood by everyone.
A note on references
Specific films are referenced in order to illustrate specific points. While it is
recommended that the reader go on to watch those films, they will not need
to have seen them in order to understand the points made within their par-
ticular context. Few will have seen each of the films mentioned—this book
is not a test for cinephiles but an exploration pertinent to all filmmakers.
Part A
The approach
1
What’s the story?
Directors are storytellers. In order to tell the story in their screenplay, they
need to understand what a story is.
When filmmaking students (and some teachers too) are asked to tell the
story of a film, they will often begin by saying “It’s a story about …” or even
simply “It’s about …” Say Wong Kar-Wai In the Mood for Love is the film
under consideration, they might offer “It’s a story about two lonely people,”
or “It’s a story about two lonely people in a relationship,” or simply “It’s
about loneliness and love.” None of these sentences describes a story. “Two
lonely people” refers to the film’s main characters. “Two lonely people in a
relationship” describes characters in a particular circumstance. “It’s about
loneliness and love” is more of a thematic than a narrative notion, a con-
cept, an abstraction. Of course it’s important for the director to know their
characters, to grasp their condition, their circumstances or state of being,
and of course it’s helpful to have a sense of the thematic aspects of their
movie or TV episode and what these may be about, but unless the director
understands what a story is, they won’t be able to tell one, and if they can’t
tell one they won’t be able to incorporate those other aspects—characters,
circumstances, theme—into the elements of their craft.
The Shorter Oxford English Dictionary (OED) defines story thus: “A
narrative of real or (usu.) fictitious events, designed for the entertainment of
the hearer or reader; a series of traditional or imaginary incidents forming
the matter of such a narrative, or a succession of significant incidents.”
A story is a progression. Two lonely people fall unexpectedly in love but,
faced by their mutual sense of guilt, find themselves unable to maintain their
romance, so they go their separate ways. That’s a story.
Evident in this progression, as it pertains to dramatic narrative, is an
element of conflict. There is an obstacle that the lovers face—their sense
of guilt, which conflicts with their mutual attraction. A tale of the couple
meeting, falling in love, and living happily ever after might be a story but
would be unlikely to prove a very compelling one. Devoid of suspense and
dramatic tension, it would pose no questions and would leave an audi-
ence with nothing to want for the characters, whom as a result it would be
unlikely to care about. Also integral to story, at least in its manifestation of
Theme 17
provide a broad sense of the nature of a film’s underlying thematic conflict,
an insight that invites representation in the movie’s visual discourse and the
contrasts it incorporates whether through imagery, location and production
design, costume, lighting, casting, sound (which pertains to “the screen of
the mind” and can therefore be construed as a visual resource), or other
elements of craft. In Hitchcock’s classic spy thriller and romance Notorious
such broad conflict might be described as espionage vs. romance, dissimu-
lation vs. honesty, or manipulation vs. intimacy—contrasts manifested
as much within the shifting power play of protagonists Devlin and Alicia
as between the two strands of the film’s narrative: their journey as lovers
from suppressed sexual attraction to emotional intimacy and their journey
as secret agents seeking to uncover a Nazi conspiracy. When Devlin first
rescues Alicia, giving her a pick-me-up to help her overcome a hangover,
Hitchcock shows him, as he approaches her, from her point of view so that,
as he towers over her, he’s shown upside down. Devlin’s motives at this point
are far from kind; he’s dissembling, in the process of recruiting Alicia for a
mission that may place her in lethal peril—so the skewed angle transpires
to have been appropriate. At the end of the film there’s a scene that mirrors
this, when Devlin again rescues Alicia, on this occasion saving her life. As
this later scene echoes the first, so its staging reflects the earlier blocking,
but on this occasion, as Devlin approaches the prone Alicia, she’s suffering
from the effects not of alcohol but of a poison administered by antagonist
Alex Sebastian. Now Devlin’s motives are unimpeachable—he’s no longer
acting as an agent but as lover. As he approaches Alicia, the director chooses
not to upend him. He remains as upright as his intentions. Romance wins
out over deception, at least in the story. In the plot, on the other hand, it’s
the deception inherent in espionage that triumphs. Although the opposites
are mutually exclusive, the film seems to be saying that both are necessary.
Irreconcilable opposites provide the foundation of drama, so the lack of easy
answers, of any readily definable message, renders a film less a vehicle for
moral instruction and more a vision of the human condition. Most import-
antly, it makes it all the more compelling.
There can be more than one set of thematic opposites in a film, and
another in Notorious is love for the parent vs. love for the lover. The former
loses validity and function, the latter gains in both. For the male, so the
film suggests, mothers such as Alex Sebastian’s become encumbrances,
entrapping their sons, whereas, through romance, sweethearts such as Alicia
promise maturity. The thematic concern here is universal, not only to much
of this director’s work (think of the mother and son in Psycho), but also
to life in general, not only from Hitchcock’s male perspective—love for
parents generally superseded at some point or points by love for a partner. In
scenes between Alex and his mother, production design, shot composition,
and framing are increasingly employed to entrap the hapless Nazi son. The
director traps the lovers cinematically too, but finally releases them while
shutting the door on Alex.
18 The approach
Another way of positing theme is to think of it as issue: ethnic oppression,
the dangers of social media, corruption in politics, the “War on Drugs,” and
other contemporary concerns—although, as with Egri’s abstract noun, this
fails to get at a story’s core, the heart of meaning that nourishes narrative
and drama.
More useful for the director is to have insight into theme in yet a further
sense: the combination of thematic opposites to yield the single truth of a
contradiction or paradox:
The previous chapter on premise raised the notion of the question a film
asks not of the protagonist but of the audience. This might be called the the-
matic question, and relates to this idea of thematic conflict or paradox. “Do
we find meaning in life through duty or transgression?” might be a theme in
Breaking Bad. “Do we find freedom through our relationships or ourselves?”
is perhaps the quandary posited by American Honey. A film does not need
to give an answer to the thematic question. Indeed, it should avoid solutions,
leaving the audience to ponder. The best films, like the best novels or short
stories, live on in this way, their narratives, characters, events, images, and
questions capable of haunting for a lifetime.
Just as a theme of this nature may surprise the viewer or audience when
it reveals itself, it may have surprised the writer when they discovered it in
their story. Perhaps the director was the writer, and was surprised to discover
it after they had been writing for a while. Often, because the subconscious
plays a fundamental part in the creative process, the most powerful themes
are found as the writing of a story develops. Starting work on a story with a
clear theme in mind can lead to an overly schematic and didactic film. When
the director “meets” the screenplay, they should beware of any narrative
erected on the foundations of philosophical or political certainty or noble
intention. Story is sovereign. It needs to talk back to the filmmaker with its
own sense of theme as it talks back through its characters and their actions.
If it surprises a screenwriter, or a director, when it emerges, the chances are
a theme will surprise an audience.
Thinking back to Sophocles’ Oedipus Rex, theme might also be considered
as a warning. Unlike a moral, such an admonition is not so much didactic as
chilling. One might see the ambiguous and shocking ending of Lee Chang-
dong’s Burning as one such example. Take this path of obsession and look
where it will lead you! The emotional experience of engaging with the film
lends the warning a force that a simple caution would lack, the result for
the audience being somehow both chastening and gratifying at one and the
same time.
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LILIES
Fig. 162
Fig. 163
And I hope that even now one of the living blossoms is before you,
for I want you to see for yourselves what plan these lilies use in
flower building.
The building plan of the cherry, you remember, began with a green
cup or calyx.
Do you find in the lily any green cup?
No, there is nothing of the sort in the lilies. You see only a circle of
flower leaves. In the last chapter you learned to call such a circle the
corolla. But the wise men say that without a calyx there cannot be a
real corolla. So in the lily we will speak of the “flower leaves” instead
of the corolla.
Fig. 164
Next we find six of the pins with dust boxes, or the stamens.
And then we come to the pin with a seedbox below, or the pistil.
So the building plan of the lily has only three divisions:—
1. Flower leaves.
2. Stamens.
3. Pistil.
If you look at the lower side of the outer row of flower leaves, you
will see that they are streaked with green; and that when the flower
is still in bud, only the green, thick parts of these leaves are exposed
to the wind and cold, while the more delicate parts of the blossom
are hidden almost as snugly as though they were covered by the
leaves of a green cup or calyx.
Fig. 165
These lilies are pleasant flowers to study. Their different parts are
so large and simple that you have no doubt as to what they are
meant for. The bees could hardly overlook their great, showy
handkerchiefs; and the heaping dust boxes must powder the visiting
bees so freely with golden or brownish dust, that plenty of this is sure
to be carried to the pistil of a neighboring blossom; and the flat tip of
this pistil is so large and so sticky, that, once the dust is brushed
upon it, it is sure to stay there until its wonderful work is
accomplished.
The gay tulip (Fig. 165) is a cousin to the lily. It is built on almost
the same plan. There is no green cup in the tulip; but every tulip has
1. Flower leaves.
2. Stamens.
3. Pistil.
The tip of the tulip’s pistil is divided into three parts.
ABOUT STAMENS
Fig.
166
There are many different kinds of stamens. I will show you some
pictures that will give you an idea of their great variety. Here is one
taken from the flower of the shin leaf (Fig. 167). The dust makes its
escape through two little openings at the very top of the box.
Fig.
167
That shown in Fig. 168 is from the barberry. The sides of the box
open like a door which is hinged on top. This arrangement lets out a
quantity of dust.
Here is a collection of stamens of different sorts. Fig. 169 has two
boxes at the top of its stalk, and so has Fig. 171. Fig. 172 has a
crosspiece, with a good-sized box at one end, and only the little
beginnings of a box at the other. Fig. 170 has a similar crosspiece,
with a box at one end only.
Fig. 168
Fig. 169
You see that flower faces show quite as much variety as do the
faces of the people you know. You must not expect to find stamens
all alike, any more than you would expect all the boys and girls you
know to have noses of the same shape, or hair of the same color.
Fig. 170
Fig. 171
Fig. 172
This picture (Fig. 173) shows you all the stamens of the pea
blossom. Do you notice that quite a number of these (nine, in fact)
grow together close about the pistil, while the tenth one stands
alone? That is a strange custom always observed by the stamens of
the pea.
Fig. 173
Fig. 174
Next we see all the stamens from one of the tiny flowers of the
golden-rod (Fig. 174). These are very much larger than life. There
are five of them, fastened together in a sort of tube. Split open this
tube and flatten it out. Now they look like five little sisters, arm in arm
(Fig. 175).
And here, again joined in a tube, we see the stamens of the
mallow (Fig. 176). From the hollow of this tube stand out the tops of
the mallow’s pistils.
Some flowers have so many stamens that you would find it almost
impossible to count them. This little blossom (Fig. 177), the
enchanter’s nightshade (drawn much larger than life), has only two.
Fig. 175
Fig. 176
Fig. 177
I hope that you children, from now on, will be unwilling to pass by
a flower without looking to see whether its stamens are few or many;
and I hope you will try to carry away in your minds a clear idea of the
size and shape of their dust boxes.
FLOWER DUST, OR POLLEN
W HEN a child smells a flower, he is apt to put his nose right into
the middle of the blossom, and to take it out with a dab of
yellow dust upon its tip.
When he brushes off this dust, of course he does not stop to think
that each tiny grain holds a speck of the wonderful material we read
about some time ago, the material without which there can be no life.
And probably he does not know that the dust grains from the lily
are quite unlike those which he rubs upon his nose when he smells a
daisy; that different kinds of flowers yield different kinds of flower
dust.
If you should look through a microscope at a grain of flower dust
from the lily, you would see an object resembling Fig. 178.
Fig. 178 Fig. 179 Fig. 180 Fig. 181 Fig. 182
Fig. 179 shows a grain from the pretty blue flower of the chicory.
Fig. 180 is a dust grain from the flower of the pine tree. Fig. 181 is
from the laurel, and the odd-looking Fig. 182 is from a dust box of
the evening primrose.
Fig. 183
The next picture (Fig. 183) shows you a group of dust grains from
flowers of different kinds, one looking like a porcupine, another like a
sea shell, another like some strange water animal, and all, I fancy,
quite unlike any idea you may have had as to the appearance of a
grain of flower dust.
When you are older, I hope it may be your good luck to see
through a microscope some of the odd shapes and curious markings
of different kinds of flower dust, or “pollen,” as this flower dust is
called in the books.
And now that you know something of the appearance of flower
dust, perhaps you wish to learn a little more of the way in which it
helps the flower to turn into the fruit.
ABOUT PISTILS
Fig.
184
Fig.
185
Perhaps you wonder how a dust grain brushed on the pistil’s flat
top can ever reach the baby seeds hidden away in the seedbox.
I could not tell you to-day how this is done were it not for those
wise and patient men and women who have spent days and weeks
and months, and even years, in watching and studying the ways of
plants.
But first let me ask you a question.
What happens when a healthy seed falls on moist ground?
Why, it seems to take in the moisture, and to thrive upon it. It
swells up, and at last it bursts open, and it sends a root down into
the earth.
Now, something not altogether unlike this happens when a lily dust
grain falls upon the moist tip of a lily pistil. The dust grain sucks in
the moisture. It grows bigger and bigger. The outer skin becomes too
small for the swelling contents. At last it bursts open, letting out a
little tube.
This little tube works its way down through the stalk of the pistil,
almost as a root pushes down into the earth, and at last it reaches
one of the seeds in the seedbox below.
And into this tiny seed the little tube pushes its way.
Fig.
186
The tube has carried with it that speck of wonderful living material
which every dust grain holds. And when this living speck has been
added to that which the seed already holds, a great change begins
to come about.
This new touch of life, added to that already present, gives the lily
seed the power to grow into a lily plant.
The other dust grains that were brushed upon the flat top of the
lily’s pistil act in just the same way. Apparently without difficulty the
different tubes find their way to the different seeds, till at last each
one has received the fresh touch of life without which it cannot grow
into a lily plant.
Fig.
187
I cannot show a lily dust grain in the act of sending out its life-
bearing tube; but above is a dust grain (Fig. 186) from the thorn
apple. You see that it has burst open, and that a tube is pushing its
way out.
This picture (Fig. 187) is that of a pistil seedbox cut open, showing
you a tube that is working its way from the dust grain above to a tiny
seed in the seedbox below.
As I told you in the last chapter, the name “pollen” has been given
to this wonder-working flower dust. A grain of flower dust is a grain of
pollen.
In many flowers you will find a pistil much like the one that you see
in the lily.
But there are as many different kinds of pistils as there are
different kinds of stamens.
This pistil (Fig. 188) is from the grass of Parnassus, that pretty
white flower which you find in the wet meadows in August and
September. It has no real stalk, you see, like that of the lily; but it is
quite thick all the way from top to bottom. In Fig. 189 it is cut across,
showing the seeds inside.
Fig. 188 Fig. 189 Fig. 190 Fig. 191 Fig. 192
Many pistils that are joined in one piece below, where the seeds
are held, separate above into two or more parts. Fig. 190 shows the
seed holder of a saxifrage, divided into two pieces above; Fig. 191
gives that of the Saint John’s-wort, separating into three parts; that of
the sundew (Fig. 192) separates into six parts. Fig. 193 is a section
of the pea flower. This is cut lengthwise so as to show you the seeds
which line the inner surface of the pistil. Here you have the baby pea
pod.
All these flowers have only one real pistil,—one pistil which may
persuade you, by the way in which it separates above, into thinking
that there are more than one. So you must be on your guard in this
respect, and remember that flowers have a way of playing tricks with
all but the most wide-awake of boys and girls. Look long and
carefully before you declare that a flower has only one pistil.
Fig. 193
Here we see half of a buttercup (Fig. 194). The buttercup has a
great many entirely separate pistils. Look sharply at the picture, and
you will see them crowded upon the little thimble-shaped object in
the middle of the blossom. Do not confuse them with the stamens,
for the buttercup has also a great many stamens. When buttercup
time comes round, I want every one of you to look at these many
pistils and stamens.
Fig. 194
Fig. 195
Fig. 196