(1) WHY DO YOU THINK REVENGE SONGS ON EX-BOYFRIENDS OR GIRLFRIENDS ARE SO POPULAR?

(2) DO YOU THINK REVENGE SONGS MIGHT HELP PEOPLE RELIEVE THEIR PAIN OR FEEL BETTER? WHY?

EXPLAIN?

Nowadays, revenge songs on ex-partners have gained significant popularity in the music industry. There are

several reasons why these songs resonate with people and have become more popular. (this rephrases (1) it
acknowledges the fact that revenge songs are more popular, explain why in the body.

In my opinion, the lyrics of such songs can (modal) help individuals relieve their pain or feel better after a

breakup. (this answers question (2) and briefly gives your opinion, explain why in the body.) (48)

Firstly, revenge songs have become popular because, in today’s society, there is a greater emphasis put on

self-expression and standing up to injustices. These songs help individuals to express their frustrations and

reclaim their power after a breakup. (reason 1, why the songs are popular) (38)

Additionally, Social media plays a role in making revenge songs more popular and accessible. Songs can

easily be promoted (passive) by artists, which (relative pronoun) can reach a wider audience (reason 2, why the songs
are more popular.) (26)

I believe that revenge songs offer a form of release for individuals dealing with a breakup. Music has the

ability to evoke emotions and create relief for pent-up (phrasal verb) (built-up) feelings. When someone listens

to a revenge song, they are able to (semi-modal) channel their own anger or sadness through the lyrics.
(conditional phrase, using when ) (explains reasons for opinion to question (2) (49

In conclusion, The rising popularity of revenge songs on ex-partners can be attributed (passive) to the desire

for empowerment, the influence of social media and the need for emotional outlets. As I see it, they have a

valuable place in the music world. (42)

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