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As he starts making his way down the hill to get the ball, on
his way down he almost trips but catches himself before he
falls. When he gets to the bottom, he picks the ball up
inspecting it. Then as he’s about to walk back up the hill,
the birds stop chirping and he hears a twig snap further down
the hill. He looks around trying to see who it was and not
seeing anyone.
The camera then switches to a medium shot far away from this
person looking for whatever made the noise. As he walks
towards the camera he hears a snap behind him again, as he
turns around the camera switches behind him as well. The
camera stays in the same place but he turns around and keeps
walking to investigate the sound and as he does that an
unknown person walks past the camera unknow to tennis ball
guy.
POV SHOT:
Tennis ball guy looks around hoping to see that it was some
sort of animal that made the noise. As he’s looking around a
dark figure appears for a split second. Tennis ball buy starts
to run away and drops the tennis ball.
Title fades in
The camera cuts back to the top of the ditch back to the path
at the start of someone else walking. As they walk past an
opening in the bush, he sees tennis ball guy laying on the
ground dead. He rushes down the hill to check if tennis ball
guy is alright but when he gets down the hill, he notices the
blood of tennis ball guys hands and shirt. Upon seeing this,
he panics. It then cuts.
Detective Nickleson:
Yeah… its him…
Detective Nickleson:
We need to find this guy… The public is getting worried. We’re
gonna have a problem soon if we don’t get this guy.
Detective Nickleson:
Clean this up and get him out of here.
We enter a room with one person sat inside. It’s the detective
and he’s looking through loads of old files on victims of the
killer. As he’s searching through each case becoming more
infuriated each file he looks through.
Detective Nickleson:
Come one… there has to be something.
Detective Nickleson:
Hello, the detective here
Detective Nickleson:
Another one?! Yeah, I’ll be there. Give me 15 minutes.
The camera cuts to a dark hallway low the floor with a doorway
out of focus. It opens as we the killer step inside. This
person slowly walks into the hallway, the camera then switches
to a medium shot of the killer’s waist as he pulls out a knife
and keeps walking, showing the bracelet as well. The camera
follows the killer into a dark room and he disappears into the
darkness.
The camera cuts to a shot low to the ground with the door not
in focus. It opens and the detective steps into frame
mimicking the killer as the camera switches to a waist shot of
the detective showing the bracelet. The camera then switches
to a medium shot again walking into the room where bag guy was
killed. The camera goes low the ground looking at bag guy as
the detective steps over the camera and walks towards the
body. He crouches down the get a closer look.
Detective Nickleson:
God’s sake…
Detective Nickleson:
As I said in the press conference, this person was very
efficient and no evidence has come up to link it to anyone,
the choice to keep this case open for this long has only put
the parents through more pain, but it was clear some time ago
that this case was a dead end.
THE END.