In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e- books rather than

paper books.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the modern era, AN INCREASING AMOUNT OF READERS ARE
SPENDING MUCH MORE TIME ON TABLETS RATHER THAN WITH
PHYSICAL BOOKS. gives preference to reading(V) on their gadgets
rather than TRADITIONAL FORMS OF BOOKS.(a) One of the drawbacks
of mobile DEVICES (b) is the potential distraction from notifications,
emails, or other apps that can interrupt a person. However, in my opinion,
the benefits of mobility in usage (PORTABLE(adj) PORTABILITY (n) and
reduced BOOK prices are of greater importance. In this essay, I will pro-
vide a more detailed evaluation and provide examples to support my argu-
ments.
(a) clumsy… new generation? the question just says ‘people’ not
‘young people’
(b) Platforms aren’t devices
(ANSWER) I believe one of the most obvious drawbacks of using a tablet or
phone as a device for reading ARE the disruptive notifications. OKAY (EX-
PLAIN) Sounds that alert about received emails, for instance, negatively
affect an individual’s ability to maintain focus. OKAY (RESULT) This is
primarily due to the external distractions that take attention
away from the task X (this is a CAUSE - DUE TO -). Based on previ-
ous research conducted in the United States in 2023, participant’s concen-
tration on tests fell rapidly after receiving notifications about new emails,
which led to a 50 percent increase in incorrect test responses. SURE ,
OKAY
as a result, many users of e-readers take significantly longer to finish a
novel than if they read by the paper book.

LIGHTWEIGHT
LIGHT
(ANSWER) However, I believe that the benefits, namely the portability of the
gadgets and their affordability, are of higher importance for contempo-
rary readers. GOOD. OKAY. (EXPLAIN 1) The lightweight devices'
LIGHTWEIGHT DESIGN offers the convenience of carrying an entire li-
brary all around the PLANET and they can be accessed immediately,
anytime, anywhere. without taking a heavy real-life version with. I UN-
DERSTAND, BUT THE GRAMMAR IS MESSY, (EXPLAIN 2) Moreover,
online bookstores often provide cost advantages to customers, and they can
read desired titles for a lower price. OKAY….UMMM, For example, re-
cently printed versions of books in Ukraine almost doubled in price, while
the digital version remained at just 5 Taiwanese Dollars. . UMMM….
In conclusion, despite the potential deterioration in READER’S attention
SPANS that IS CAUSED BY INTRUSIVE notificationS, having an electronic

version of books can help ameliorate these concerns. FROM THE OTHER
SIDE/ , reduced cost coupled with mobility in the Digital Era enables read-
ing everything a person wants cheaply and from all around the globe.

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