TOPIC SENTENCES-HOMEWORK-CHILL EDITED

1. Sports encourage people to get exercise, they provide opportunities for

interacting with others, and they give a sense of belonging to a group.

Thesis statement: Sports encourage people to get exercise(1), they provide

opportunities for interacting with others (2), and they give a sense of belonging to
a group(3).

Topic sentences (1): Firstly, we can play sport every time when we free from work
or from school due to sports promote physical activity, fostering healthier
lifestyles for us.

Topic sentences (2): Secondly, sports can help us build a lot of connection with
others because engaging in sports facilitates social interaction and teamwork.

Topic sentences (3): Finally, we can get a long with a group or a community so
easily by participation in sports fosters a sense of camaraderie and belonging
within a community.

2. Employers should not allow workers to listen to music at the office because it
is distracting, it hurts teamwork, and it can lead to disagreements.

Thesis statement: Employers should not allow workers to listen to music at the
office because it is distracting(1), it hurts teamwork (2), and it can lead to
disagreements (3).

Topic sentences (1): Firstly, we can all agree that listening to music at work can be
distracting and reduce productivity.
Topic sentences (2): Secondly, there are many reason costing the break of
teamwork and one of them is music can hinder effective teamwork by creating
individual distractions.

Topic sentences (3): Finally, differences in musical preferences may lead to

conflicts among coworkers.

3. There are several advantages to living near the office, including saving time
and money, and being very convenient.

Thesis statement: In my opinon , there are several advantages to living near the
office, including saving time (1)and money (2),and being very convenient(3).

Topic sentences (1) : Firstly, living near the office is an advantage because it saves
time and helps us improve our health by walking.

Topic sentences (2): Secondly, the main reason for all of us have been concerned
about is the money so living near the office can help us saving money on
transportation.

Topic sentences (3): Finally, living close to the office makes it easy to access work-
related activities and be available at any time.
4.There are several factors to consider when you choose a university to attend:
school fees, studying facilities, and the teaching staff.
Thesis statement: There are several factors to consider when you choose a
university to attend including school fees(1), studying facilities (2), and the
teaching staff (3).

Topic sentences (1): First, we need to think about tuition fees first because tuition
is quite important to consider when choosing a university.

Topic sentences (2): Second, what we need to pay attention to is learning facilities
because a university with full learning facilities is an environment that can help us
develop our learning.

Topic sentences (3): Finally, we need to choose a university with good quality and
expertise of faculty because it directly affects our future learning process.

7. Personally, I prefer to shop online for some reasons.

Thesis statement: Personally, I prefer to shop online for some reasons like
convenience (1), multiple choices (2), and easy to comparing the prices (3).

Topic sentences (1): Firstly, the main thing that I prefer to shop online is the
convenience and accessibility from anywhere with internet access.

Topic sentences (2): Secondly, the variety of products available online exceeds
that of traditional retail stores.

Topic sentences (3): Finally, shopping online often provides better opportunities
to compare prices and find deals.