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B1 Blended Writing Dispensa 02 - 22
B1 Blended Writing Dispensa 02 - 22
● Farewell expressions 16
● A sample story 23
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The Writing Test
Introduction
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Writing Part 1 – Writing a short text
Writing short texts usually takes the form of a message. A message is a very important part of
everyday writing. We do it because it is often necessary to write something short to someone for a
specific reason. The following are just a few of the types of messages that we are often asked to
write in our everyday lives:
d. A regular postcard or e-postcard sent to a friend, friends or family while visiting another
city or country.
Let’s look at why we write these types of short texts. One of the most common reasons is to
inform.. A short note left on the kitchen table could inform the others who live there that you
will be late coming home, or that there is no milk left, or to be aware that something is not
functioning in the home. A mobile phone text message or whatsapp message can also be
used to inform someone, for example, of an upcoming event. In addition to this, short texts can
also be used to invite, thank, apologise, suggest, congratulate, instruct, make an
arrangement to meet, etc…
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The following are two examples of short texts. The first one is a note (post-it) and the second one
is a mobile text message/whatsapp. What is the purpose of writing these short messages?
Jean
Yasmine
Hey Marc,
The first message asks someone to do something and the second message invites someone to
attend a social event.
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What’s missing?
Read the following notes, notices and cards. Writing the missing line for each one.
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Functions Bank for Writing Part 1
The following is a table with reasons why we write short messages, followed by the possible
language functions used:
Reason Language
Congratulating ● Congratulations on … !
● Congratulations! It’s great that you …
● Well done!
● Well done with … !
● Way to go!
Offering ● Shall I …?
● Can I help you with …?
● I can give you a hand with … , if you want.
● I’ll …. , if you want.
● Let me know if you need any help with …
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Saying «no» / refusing ● I’m sorry, but I can’t …
● (Thanks, but ) I’m afraid I can’t …
● Sorry, but it’s impossible for me to …
● I’d like to, but I can’t …
Saying what you liked/disliked ● What I really enjoyed / liked /loved / hated was
…
● I really enjoyed / liked / loved / hated …
● What I liked / enjoyed/ most was …
● My favourite (part of the …) was …
● The best thing (about …) was …
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For extra practice, try the following two exercises:
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The Rubric (instructions) for Writing Part 1
In Writing Part 1 you are given a situation and three points to include in the text. You must write
between 35 - 45 words and include all three points.
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Checklist for Writing Part 1
You went to a friend’s house for dinner. Write a card of 35-45 words to
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Student Response N.1
Hi Mary,
Thanks a lot for the lovely evening on Saturday. I really liked the soup.
What about meeting again soon? Are you free next Saturday for lunch at
my house? Let me know soon.
Anne
The student has included all three points, the grammar and tenses are correct as well as
expressions and vocabulary. The word count is 35, so it qualifies as a good answer to the question.
What’s missing?
(Answer: It sounds cold, not at all like a thank you card to a friend)
Hi Mary,
Thanks a lot for the lovely evening on Saturday. I really enjoyed myself.
Everything you made was great, especially the soup. What about meeting
again soon? Are you free next Saturday for lunch at my house? Give me a ring
and let me know soon.
Sue
All three points are included and the student has added a little more information, yet still within the
word limit (45 words). This response would receive a higher mark than the first one because it
sounds friendlier.
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Writing Part 1 task
Using all the information that you have learned on writing short texts, complete the
following Writing Part 1 task.
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Writing Part 2 - Introduction
You have two options in Writing Part 2: Writing an email or Writing a story. In both options you
are required to write approximately 100 words.
The instructions for Writing Part 2 (an email) usually look like this:
Let's look at a sample answer to this email and then we’ll examine, on page 15, what makes
it a good example.
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Start with an opening greeting:
How are you? I hope you are well. I was happy to read your email.
For the main part of the email, using the information given in the question, make reference to
your friend’s comment and answer the first question. Note the use of the linker and to join the
two ideas together:
You're right! I love going to the cinema, and the last film I saw was the
new James Bond film called Spectre.
You can choose to begin a new paragraph to answer the second question. Don’t forget to give
reasons for your answer. Use linking words when possible:
What about you? Do you like going to the cinema? Write back soon. I’m
looking forward to your email.
Lastly, the closing greeting, followed by your name. Once again, as in the opening greeting,
there is a comma at the end of the closing greeting.
Best wishes,
(Your name)
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Farewell expressions
There are many ways to say goodbye in an email.Some expressions you could use are the
following:
● Bye!
● Bye for now!
● All the best,
● Best wishes,
● See you soon!
Remember that the overall look of the email can improve your mark, so the individual paragraphs
should be separated by leaving a line between them.
The first line of your email is very important because it tells the reader why you’re writing.
Match the two halves of these sentences to make the first lines of different emails.
First lines …
Start …. …. Continue
1. The reason why I’m writing … (e.) a. … hear from you.
2. I’m really sorry … b. … I last wrote to you.
3. Hi! Did you … c. … to tell you about my last holiday.
4. Thanks a lot … d. … hearing from you.
5. I’m thinking of … e. … is to invite you to visit my town.
6. It’s a long time since ... f. … for your email.
7. I really enjoyed … g. … have a good holiday?
8. It was great to … h. … to hear about your accident.
9. You asked me ... i. … coming to Japan soon.
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…. and last lines
A good last line will help the reader to feel positive about your email. Match the two halves of these
sentences to make the last lines of different emails.
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Spelling, Punctuation and Paragraphing
In the Idoneità B1 exam, an email that doesn’t have too many spelling or punctuation mistakes will
make a good impression.
Read this email from a student who lives in Scotland, to her penfriend. There are some spelling
mistakes and punctuation errors in the email. Make the corrections.
Dear Nathalie,
what I’m planing to do this year in july. I’m happy to tell you
swiming in the lake. Its very cold water, but we still enjoy it!
What are your plans for this summer? Looking forward to your
next email.
Love, Fiona
Look at the email again. You could break it into three short paragraphs. Where would each one
begin?
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Checklist for writing an email
Students were asked to write an email of about 100 words in reply to this:
Read Fiona’s response to Thomas and answer the questions in the checklist below.
Dear Thomas,
thank you for your email. I’ve just received it, i’m happy to know that
you’re quite optimistic about your future. I hope you can realise your
dream in a new country and a new job. I decided to stay with my old job
until I’m able to obtain better qualifications, in fact I’m taking an
english course at evening school. I hope to get my cambridge B1
Preliminary Certificate. If I pass the exam I’ll have more options for
my career. So, I’m going to stay in my city for the next five years,
although I’d like to visit a european country during my holidays. Good
luck with your new job and your new life in a new country.
Best wishes,
Fiona
1. Yes
2. Yes
3. No Reorganise in 2 or 3 paragraphs.
4. Yes Which tenses are used?
5. Yes
6. No. Correct the punctuation errors. (There are 8 common errors. See solutions
on page 20)
Dear Thomas,
Thank you for your email. I’ve just received it. I’m happy to know
that you’re quite optimistic about your future. I hope you can realise
your dream in a new country and a new job.
I decided to stay with my old job until I’m able to obtain better
qualifications. In fact I’m taking an English course at evening school.
I hope to get my Cambridge B1 Preliminary Certificate. If I pass the
exam, I’ll have more options for my career. So, I’m going to stay in my
city for the next five years, although I’d like to visit a European
country during my holidays.
Good luck with your new job and your new life in a new country.
Best wishes,
Fiona
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Functions Bank for Writing an email
The following are examples of expressions you can use when writing your email in Writing Part 2.
Many of the examples are similar to the ones used for Writing Part 1:
Function Language
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restaurant.
First social line of an email ● Thank you very much for your last
email.
● I’ve just read your interesting email.
● It was very nice to hear from you.
● I hope you and your family are well.
Introducing the reason you are writing ● You asked me about / why / what /
where / how /what kind / for advice
…
● You want to know….
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Option 2: Writing a story
The second option for Writing Part 2 is writing a story. You are required to write approximately 100
words. You will either be given the title of the story or the first sentence. The following are two
examples:
Story with first sentence given: I felt nervous when the phone rang.
A sample story
The following is a sample task as you will see it written in your exam and a sample answer to the
task.
I felt nervous when the phone rang. It was just after midnight and I was
trying to sleep. Who could it be?
I got up and ran to the phone. However, as I was running, the phone stopped
ringing. I was angry, but I went back to bed again because I was tired. I
had spent most of the day studying for an exam. All of a sudden, the phone
rang again. “Goodness! This is annoying!”, I thought. This time I picked up
the phone quickly and shouted, “Hello?!”. I waited for an answer, but
nobody said anything. Then, I heard, “Happy birthday, sister!”
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How to write a good story
Now let’s take a closer look at the elements that make a good story (refer to the sample story on
page 23).
Well-defined structure
Similarly to the email, you should try to include 3 clear paragraphs in your story. Don’t forget to
leave a line between each paragraph. Each paragraph has a function:
● 1st paragraph: setting the scene
● 2nd paragraph: narration of all the events that happen.
● 3rd paragraph: conclusion/resolution of the story
Stories tend to take place in the past, which makes it necessary to use a range of past tenses
appropriately.
There are three main past tenses you should aim to use if you choose to write a story for your
Writing Part 2. They are known as Narrative Tenses. They are:
Past simple: This is the main verb tense to describe actions that happen one after the
other:
I got up and ran to the phone.
I was angry, but I went back to bed again because I was tired.
Past continuous: Use this verb tense to describe a longer action in the past
… I was trying to sleep.
or for a longer action interrupted by a shorter one.
… as I was running, the phone stopped ringing.
Past Perfect: Use this tense to describe an action that happened before the time of narrating
this story.
I had spent most of the day studying for an exam.
I had forgotten that it was my birthday.
Time phrases
One of the great differences between writing a letter and writing a story is the need to pay careful
attention to the time over which the story develops. In order to define the order of the events in the
story, we must use time expressions or time phrases. Here are a few examples:
● Then
● After that
● Not long afterwards
● As soon as
● While
● Meanwhile
● As
● Some time later
● A little later
● ____ minutes later
● A moment later
● Later (that morning / afternoon / day / night…)
● Just then
Practice using some of these expressions by modifying the sample story above, for example:
As soon as I fell asleep, the telephone rang again.
● Suddenly
● All of a sudden
● Without warning
● Just at that moment
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● Unexpectedly
● Out of the blue
● Out of nowhere
● Right away
Practice using some of these expressions by modifying the sample story above, for example:
Just at that moment I heard someone shout, “Happy birthday, sister!”
and but / yet however because also too though even though so
Direct speech
Sometimes it’s necessary to reproduce the words the characters actually say or think. If you
choose to use Direct Speech in your story, correct punctuation becomes very important.
Look at some of the examples from the sample story on page 25 and take note of the
punctuation:
Practice using direct speech by modifying the sample story above. For this exercise, it would be a
good idea to write the sentences on a piece of paper.
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Finishing your story
This paragraph should be separated from the rest, and it’s a good idea to start it with one of the
following expressions:
● In the end
● Finally
● When it was all over
● Eventually
● After everything that happened
● Luckily
The following exercises can help you start thinking creatively about stories and give you extra
practice on narrative tenses and linking words.
Read the story below and put each verb into the correct tense.
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Linkers and verb tenses
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