Opinion essay: Tienes que fijar tu opinión en el primer párrafo y usar dos adjetivos

como ‘exciting’, positivo, y ‘daunting’, abrumador en sentido negativo, no es muy

conveniente, porque son contradictorios. Eso te habría valido para el de
‘discussion’. O al menos, termina el párrafo decidiéndote por una opción u otra!

SHOULD EVERY STUDENT SPEND A COURSE IN A FOREIGN COUNTRY?

Studying abroad is an opportunity that many students consider, but not all of them
have the chance to experience. From my view, all students should have the
opportunity to spend a course in an foreign country for all its benefits for
their future.

The benefits of studying abroad are numerous. Firstly, it exposes students to a new
culture, which can broaden their horizons and help them develop a more global
perspective. This is particularly important in today's interconnected world, where
cross-cultural communication skills are increasingly valuable. Secondly, IT can help
students develop language skills, which can be a valuable ASPECT in many fields.

It is obvious that the cost of studying abroad can be really high, but I think that the
government should provide a financial help for all the students who need it and
deserve to receive this unique and valuable learning experience that cannot be
replicated in a classroom. Only then, equality on education can be guaranteed in
such a competitive work world.

In conclusion, I believe that every student should spend one course in a foreign
country and that studying abroad should be encouraged and supported as much as
possible. The benefits of studying abroad are simply too valuable to ignore and
every student should have the opportunity to experience them. By doing so, we can
help prepare the next generation of global citizens for success in an increasingly
interconnected world.