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CONTENTS
Introduction Before We Begin
1 Be Where You Are
2 Find the Extraordinary in the Everyday
3 Harness the Power of the Particular
4 Speak from the Heart
5 Stand in the Audience’s Shoes
6 Give Your Stories a Shape and a Point
7 Speak Your Truth
Conclusion Before We End
Sources
Acknowledgements
For my mum and dad,who taught me that the best stories are true.
Before
We Begin
Storytelling is the most powerful way to put ideas into the world.
ROBERT MCKEE
“Stories are our most persuasive
technology.”
PPLAUSE ERUPTED AS Oprah took the stage. She was at the Golden
In 1964, I was a little girl sitting on the linoleum floor of my mother’s house in
Milwaukee watching Anne Bancroft present the Oscar for best actor at the 36th
Academy Awards. She opened the envelope and said five words that literally
made history: ‘The winner is Sidney Poitier.’ Up to the stage came the most
elegant man I had ever seen. I remember his tie was white, and of course his skin
was black, and I had never seen a black man being celebrated like that. I tried
many, many times to explain what a moment like that means to a little girl, a kid
watching from the cheap seats as my mom came through the door bone tired
from cleaning other people’s houses.
It took Oprah exactly one minute to tell this story. In that minute, she had the
audience in the palm of her hand. Now, I can guess what you’re thinking: Of
course the audience was mesmerised, because the words came out of Oprah’s
mouth. She’s a gifted storyteller. And while that is true, she wasn’t born with
more advantages, better story skills or more interesting stories than you. She
learned over time how to find, own and tell her stories well, and by doing so
became her most influential and inspiring self.
Stories are our most persuasive technology, and Oprah has learned how to
harness their power to have the impact she wants. That’s exactly what you’ll be
learning to do in this book.
Beyond Telling: Storytelling vs Story Skills
Storytelling is not just an art that professional writers need to master; it’s a skill
we can all hone to help us become better communicators or leaders, marketers or
parents. Most people reading this book are not interested in writing the next
blockbuster novel or screenplay. They want to develop the untapped skills they
can use every day to influence and inspire the people they love or lead, parent or
serve.
Becoming a great storyteller isn’t about simply learning how to leverage
stories to get attention or manipulate people. Being a great storyteller is about
learning how to build connection and trust with your audience. In the digital
media era, the focus has been on mastering the delivery of your words and your
story. And while the act of telling the story matters, it’s equally important to
understand how to craft the story in a way that engages your audience.
It’s often said that storytelling is a gift. What people mean is that storytelling
is an art reserved for the chosen few—the gifted, talented or anointed. In these
days of perfect prose rendered so by rounds of editing we never see, flawless
oration aided by invisible autocues and skilled TED producers, rehearsed for
months behind closed doors—it’s easy to buy into this myth.
But it turns out that storytelling is not an art, it’s an act. It always has been,
since the days when our tribal ancestors began to find ways to share with each
other what they knew to be wise and true.
I grew up in a house with no books, but that didn’t mean there weren’t any
stories. My parents were born into poor Irish Catholic families. They had ten
siblings apiece and left school with barely any formal education, in their early
teens. They got jobs on factory assembly lines to help support their families.
They never learned to express themselves in the written word, but there was
nothing to stop them telling their stories. As I grew up, those stories were all
around me in the ether of everyday conversations over cups of tea at the kitchen
table. Stories lived and breathed on the street corner outside our garden gate and
on the doorsteps of every home on our council estate where adults and children
gathered. I learned that stories are a potent glue that can bind or divide a
community. They are data that teach us emotional truths.
You already have good stories to tell. It’s how you tell them that makes them
great. The goal isn’t just to deliver the information, it’s to capture the
imagination. We don’t have to be smart enough to manipulate people; we have to
be sincere enough to move them. Well-told, true stories are how we do that. But
how do we begin to tell them? Perhaps the better question to ask is: How do we
become the kind of person who can tell them?
Great storytellers develop a set of seven skills we can all hone.
In the seven chapters that follow, you will learn more about each of those
skills and how you can develop them to become your most inspiring and
influential self.
“The best storytellers are:
1. present
2. aware
3. specific
4. vulnerable
5. empathetic
6. intentional
7. brave.”
1
Instructions for living a life. Pay attention. Be astonished. Tell about it.
MARY OLIVER
“Presence is a luxury every storyteller
affords.”
Y HUSBAND AND I are sitting in our favourite café on a Saturday
In a fast-paced world, we’re so busy trying to get things done that we don’t
allow ourselves the time to slow down long enough to notice. Why just walk
when we can walk and listen to a podcast or an audiobook at the same time?
This habit of killing two birds with one stone is also killing our storytelling
potential. For every podcast we listen to on our walk, we’re forsaking the
opportunity to notice and ignoring a dozen potential stories. The truth is, you
can’t pay attention to two things at once. If you want to be a better storyteller,
you need to act like one and prioritise mining the everyday world for story
moments. Your attention belongs to you, and you have the choice to reclaim it.
The celebrated Irish writer Maeve Binchy once told a story of overhearing a
conversation between two women on a bus journey into Dublin. A woman was
telling her friend about her parents’ twenty-fifth wedding anniversary. She was
heading into town to buy them a card. ‘Isn’t that lovely,’ the friend said.
‘Not at all,’ the woman replied. ‘They have a dreadful marriage. But you
know, the worse the marriage, the bigger the card.’
That snippet of conversation was the inspiration for Binchy’s bestselling
book Silver Wedding.
Gail Honeyman’s bestselling novel Eleanor Oliphant Is Completely Fine was
inspired by a newspaper article the author read about the problem of loneliness.
At the time, loneliness among people other than the elderly wasn’t a topic that
was readily discussed. Honeyman’s curiosity was piqued by an interview with a
young woman in her twenties. She explained to the reporter that she often didn’t
talk to anyone from the time she left work on Friday until she returned to the
office again on Monday. This story didn’t fit with the typical world view of the
isolated elderly person living alone after losing a partner or far away from their
family. The unanswered questions this article sparked in the author’s mind
became the inspiration for Honeyman’s protagonist.
I can remember the jovial greeting that warmly welcomed us every time we
went. ‘Hey Rev,’ they would say to my dad. He’s a local pastor, and they treated
him like a celebrity.
‘Hey young fella, how you doing?’ they would say to me, making me feel
just as special.
The men would talk about politics and sports and music and world news,
national news, neighbourhood news. There was some talk about women and
what it was like to be a black man in America. But many times, they also talked
about health. The conversations about health were lengthy and deep. The men
often recounted their doctor’s recommendations to cut salt in their diet or to eat
less fried foods or to stop smoking or to reduce stress. They talked about the
different ways you could reduce stress, like simplifying one’s love life, all ways
to treat high blood pressure.
It isn’t that you don’t have any stories to tell. You just need to practise
finding them.
STORY SKILL: BE PRESENT
T who tell them.’ It’s also true that great stories happen to people who
look out for them. You become a good storyteller by being curious
enough to find meaning in the everyday—not just curious about events that
happen around you, but also moments that happen to you in your life every
single day.
When I work with clients and students who want to become better
storytellers, they often voice the same nagging doubt: I haven’t done anything
earth-shattering in my life. I don’t have an epic story to tell! Many of us believe
that we don’t have a big enough story to tell unless we climbed Mount Everest,
won the Nobel or went broke (and then made millions). I’d like to dispel the
notion that the only stories worth telling are about epic adventures.
I blogged for over a decade before I began writing novels and short stories. It
was a good discipline. Because I knew I’d be posting three times a week, I was
constantly on the lookout for stories to share. I’ve had a lot of practice at finding
meaning in the everyday—discovering stories that are hidden in plain sight, right
under my nose.
How many people did you talk to today? Or maybe a better question to ask
is, How many people did you choose not to talk to? In the 1970s, when I was
growing up, people talked to strangers. Conversations would strike up at bus
stops or while handing over change in a bakery. Not so much anymore. A few
months ago, my husband cautioned me about talking to strangers while we were
riding on the tram. ‘People will think you’re weird,’ he said. And he was right!
His words of warning were a reminder that often the only voices to be heard on
public transport these days are those of the mentally ill. The rest of us—the
apparently sane ones—spend our time stroking the glass-covered rectangles in
our hands, smiling into them as we scroll and swipe through the content that
makes up our digital diet, while pointedly ignoring everyone to our left and
right. Who are the weird ones?
One of the things we’ve lost in the smartphone era is the stories that arose
from everyday conversations with friends and family or surprise encounters with
strangers. Now we prefer to text rather than call people. It’s just more efficient.
No more long, drawn-out conversations we hadn’t bargained for. We use our
smartphones and earbuds as shields against unanticipated interaction. Now we
can avoid making polite conversation with checkout operators or strangers who
cross our path. The price of this emotional distancing from others is a loss of
connection to our communities and ourselves.
Tell Small Stories
I’m about to help you challenge the misconception that you don’t have stories
worth telling. This might sound obvious, but part of the skill of being a great
storyteller is finding everyday stories to tell. Great storytellers are consistently
mining their life and personal experiences for stories, noticing the world around
them or researching other people’s stories. You need to spend time digging for
your stories before you can hone them. Oprah did just that for her Golden
Globes speech. That ordinary moment in time has become part of her origin
story.
Look for Ordinary Heroes and Heroines
We are used to seeing and hearing stories of high drama in novels and on movie
screens—Batman or Superman saving the day, rushing to the rescue of children
who would otherwise plunge to their deaths in icy waters, their school bus
balanced precariously on the twisted metal of a stricken bridge. But not every
story needs to be an epic tale of a caped crusader who saves the day or the world.
Some of the best stories are about ordinary moments in our lives that teach us to
be braver or kinder, more open-minded or loving. Many heroes and heroines
who cross our paths will never know that they made a difference to us. A teacher
who helps her students believe in themselves. A colleague who challenges the
status quo on behalf of the team. A partner who supports a dream. Our stories
help us reflect on the everyday events that make a difference in our lives and
reveal the best of who we are.
Build a Story Library
Before you can share your stories, you must identify, gather and develop them.
The best storytellers have a system for finding and recording the stories or
potential stories they hear all around them. Some writers, like David Sedaris,
journal every day. American novelist and storyteller Matthew Dicks chooses a
‘story-worthy’ moment from his day and enters it into a spreadsheet every
evening. You can use a pencil and paper or a notes app on your phone. Create a
story ideas folder on your computer or capture them in a notebook. You don’t
need to rely on your memory to capture the ‘story-worthy’ moments in your day.
In teams and organisations, it’s important to create a mechanism for sharing
stories. When companies think of sharing stories these days, it’s most often
through social media. But stories need to be told internally as well, to build trust
and pride, chart a path forward and learn from mistakes. Consider the ways you
can capture and keep your stories. You might have a monthly gathering where
you share customer stories and archive the best of them. These stories can be
used as research for innovation and in marketing. You can ask clients and
customers to share their experience of working with you. Feedback and
testimonials are a great way to gather stories about how your company makes a
difference.
Your stories can and should be recycled, told in different situations to a
variety of audiences. That’s why it’s important to discover and keep a record of
the stories you can tell and remind yourself when you should tell them.
Mailchimp, the email marketing service, is doing a brilliant job of sharing its
customers’ stories. They have an audiovisual content strategy, creating podcasts
and short films that showcase their customers.
While the story I’m about to tell you isn’t a work-related story, it is one that
almost got away, and that’s why I want to share it with you. It might have
remained a throwaway remark in a conversation if I hadn’t been aware that there
was more to the story.
My parents still live in Dublin, where I was born and raised. I haven’t lived
there for more than thirty years, but I know deep in my bones that Dublin is very
much a part of my story. I Skype Mum and Dad from Australia every week.
Skype is the only reason they have an internet connection, and it’s changed the
kind of conversations we can have. A few months ago, Dad told me a story about
his father that I didn’t remember hearing before. He happened to mention
something in passing during one of our chats about a song he remembered his
father singing when he was a child. Here’s the story that unfolded during our
conversation.
My grandad, William, was a baker. He married the love of his life, Ellen, and
they had eleven children together. Tragically, my granny Ellen died, aged just
thirty-eight, soon after giving birth to her last child—a son my grandad named
Michael. My dad was ten at the time, and he remembers the nuns coming to their
house soon after Granny died, offering to help with the children. The nuns’ plan
involved splitting the children up and placing them with other families. Grandad
wouldn’t let the nuns past the front door. He politely refused their help because
he wanted to keep his family together. He did concede to his sister raising baby
Michael. But he cared for the rest of his brood with the help of his community.
Soon after Granny died, Grandad enlarged and framed a small photo he had
of her. That photo lived above the fireplace in his front room until the day he
died. Dad remembers my grandad singing an old sailing song to that photo,
sometimes through tears. The chorus went something like, ‘I’ll stick to the ship
that I love.’ That ship, Dad says, was the family.
Whenever my dad decorated the front room for Grandad, the only thing he
cared about was when Granny’s photo would be back in its rightful place.
When I got off that call with my parents, I couldn’t help thinking how easily this
story might have been lost. When we’re the most interested person in the room,
we discover the extraordinary in the ordinary. We dig a little deeper and find
meaning in the seemingly unexceptional.
Recall your first day at school, first friend, first trip overseas, first
job, first kiss, first loss.
Write about your favourite uncle, your favourite place, favourite T-
shirt.
Use a life events timeline to map out some moments or memories
in your life.
Talk to your parents and grandparents, and gather stories from your
childhood.
Pore over old photos or yearbooks.
Look at the recent photos on your phone. Remember when you
took them and why.
Just listen:
One Christmas at the very beginning of your twenties when your mother gives
you a warm coat that she saved for months to buy, don’t look at her skeptically
after she tells you she thought the coat was perfect for you. Don’t hold it up and
say it’s longer than you like your coats to be and too puffy and possibly even too
warm. Your mother will be dead by spring. That coat will be the last gift she
gave you. You will regret the small thing you didn’t say for the rest of your life.
Say thank you.
Lydia is late for breakfast. As always, next to her cereal bowl, her mother has
placed a sharpened pencil, and Lydia’s physics homework, six problems flagged
by small ticks.
You can do this with small, factual details in your stories that create intimacy
with the reader or listener. Notice how good writers, comedians and speakers
drop specific details into their stories. They might not talk about going to a café
to buy a coffee; instead, they will talk about waiting in line at Starbucks for a
caramel latte. You won’t need to pepper every sentence with details, but
including some detail grounds your reader or listener in time and place, drawing
them into the moment with you.
Show, Don’t Tell
The most common storytelling mistake I see is the failure to help the reader or
listener experience the story. Your goal when you’re telling your stories is to
bring the audience on an emotional journey—not just a factual or chronological
one. Yes, the best stories are true. Great stories contain facts, but convey the
truth by helping the audience live it. You can help your reader or listener
experience the story by bringing them into the moment with you.
What do I mean by that? Start in the action. Think of every story you tell as
opening with a lead-in sentence, such as, So, there I was... or So, there they
were... Sometimes the lead-in sentence is spoken or written, but it doesn’t have
to be. Rather than telling people that events unfolded, help them experience how
events unfolded. Bring the audience into the moment by sharing sensory details,
and communicate feelings, not just the facts. Consider the example from Celeste
Ng’s work I gave earlier. The author could have told the reader that Lydia had a
pushy mother. Instead, she chose to show them with the tiny detail about the
reality that Lydia lived. So, the reader doesn’t need to understand physics
homework or have any experience being a teenaged girl; he or she will be
carried along by the feeling of disappointing your parents.
We can all tell stories about particular experiences in our lives that have
universal themes. Here is a story I tell from my childhood about failure and
resilience. This was the day I learned that failure is the flip side of ambition; in
order to have one, you need to experience the other.
The community fair is in full swing. Competitive gardeners and proud bakers
turn up in equal measure to show their handiwork. I have my eye on a prize. I
learned to bake at my mother’s hip and by the age of twelve there wasn’t much I
couldn’t tackle. This year I am going for it. I am entering the children’s baking
competition with the Strawberry Chocolate Box—a luscious creation I’ve seen
on the front cover of Woman’s Weekly magazine.
‘Just write down what you need on the list and we’ll get it when we go
shopping,’ Mum says in the days leading up to the fair. She doesn’t raise an
eyebrow when strawberries and good-quality dark chocolate are added to the list.
That week she spends a quarter of the weekly grocery allowance on the
ingredients for that cake.
I lock myself in the kitchen for two whole summer days and set to work. I
pick perfect rose leaves from the garden. I use a tiny paintbrush to painstakingly
coat the back of each one with chocolate, before peeling them once they’re set to
reveal perfect edible leaves. The sponge rises like a dream in the oven and each
ripe strawberry used to decorate the top is drizzled with even more chocolate.
The finished result looks just like the cake on the magazine cover—almost too
good to eat. And some would say, too good to have been made from scratch by a
twelve-year-old.
On the day of the competition we line up at the battered blue door of the
community centre to hand in our entries. Mum enters an apple tart and I am
competing in the open children’s category. The Strawberry Chocolate Box stands
proudly alongside the lopsided Rice Krispies cakes and fairy buns with their
wobbly icing. There is a lot of oohing and aahing over my entry, and more than a
couple of questions about how much help my mother has given me. But it seems
like there is no contest. Nothing can touch the Strawberry Chocolate Box.
When the big moment arrives, the two judges come forth holding a sheet of
paper with numbers of the winning entries carefully printed on the front. I crane
my neck and strain my eyes to see if I can make out my number through the thin
sheet of paper. They commend all the entries and begin announcing results in
reverse order. I stand patiently, heart pounding, waiting for my number to be
called. It never happens. The Strawberry Chocolate Box hasn’t won a prize. My
best efforts have failed. All my hard work is down the drain. The word is the
judges found it hard to believe that a child was capable of producing a cake this
polished without help. They don’t believe that this is my work. My cheeks grow
hot as we begin packing up the remains of our cakes. I don’t trust myself to
speak because I know if I do the tears will come.
Later, outside the hall, my mother turns to face me. She looks me in the eyes
and says: ‘Never be limited by the small dreams other people have for you.’ It
takes a few minutes for the words to sink in. I say nothing. I just nod. ‘Now let’s
go home and get the kettle on,’ she says, taking my hand. ‘We still have a lovely
cake to eat for tea.’
When we’re specific, we take our audience on an emotional journey with us.
They may not have experienced exactly the same challenges as us, but they can
relate to the experience of having tried and failed, loved and lost, pushed through
and prevailed.
It’s the spring of 1988 and I am standing on the welcome mat outside the parish
priest’s house holding my fiancé’s hand. I have butterflies in my stomach. It’s
not every day you get to ask a priest if he will officiate at your wedding. This
was the church where I grew up. I was baptised there. The church where I sang
in the school choir at Sunday Mass. I let go of my fiancé’s hand and knock.
Father R., in a red V-neck jumper and sheepskin slippers, opens the door a
crack. He doesn’t look happy to be disturbed but retreats down the hall to go get
his diary. We are left standing at the door. When he returns, he starts quizzing
my fiancé. ‘I don’t know you. Where are you from? What religion are you?’
When my partner answers that he was raised a Muslim, Father R. closes the
diary and looks me squarely in the eye. ‘Have you any idea what you’re doing?
What are you going to do when your children are abducted and taken to
Pakistan? I’d urge you to go away and rethink this decision.’ I am lost for words.
He closes the door in our faces. I stand rooted to the welcome mat and listen to
the sound of the sheepskin slippers shuffling back down the hall away from us.
It’s just past 6 a.m. on what promises to be a gorgeous summer day. I’m at
the gym, standing next to my weights, ready for the class to begin. Some of us
regulars who always show up early are chatting with other members around us.
Words between two friends having a conversation next to me cut across the
space between us.
After the class, my friend asks if he can have a word outside. He apologises.
Tells me he shouldn’t have said what he did. But as I look into his eyes, I see
what he really means is that he’s sorry I overheard him. And now I am sad
because I know our friendship can never be the same again.
Later, his partner messages me to ask if things are okay between us. I explain
why I don’t agree with his view that I am being oversensitive. I text him a long
message saying that our words matter. My thumbs tap out the words that say it’s
not okay for people to abuse him because of his sexuality. I say it’s up to us to
create the future we want to see, and by saying nothing or shrugging it off, we
are complicit. And after I hit Send, I create my ‘if-then’ strategy. If in the future
someone says or does something that is racist, then I will say: ‘That is not okay.’
I will have faith in the power of those words to create a ripple effect, one
interaction at a time.
If we want to influence and inspire people, our messages must not just engage,
they must also move people to act or have a change of heart. Mutual respect,
understanding and trust are how we gain the commitment we need to change
things. We must show up with our whole hearts.
Carve your name on hearts, not tombstones. A legacy is etched into the minds of
others and the stories they share about you.
SHANNON L. ALDER
“That’s what stories are for: to teach
us how to call on ourselves in good
times and in bad. Stories are a
compass for the heart.”
NCE UPON A time. The four words that begin our earliest childhood
Is this a threat?
Is this boring?
Is this too complicated?
In the seventh grade, this new kid joined our class. In the interest of
confidentiality, her Convocation Speech name will be ‘ELLEN’. ELLEN was small,
shy. She wore these blue cat’s-eye glasses that, at the time, only old ladies wore.
When nervous, which was pretty much always, she had a habit of taking a strand
of hair into her mouth and chewing on it.
So she came to our school and our neighborhood, and was mostly ignored,
occasionally teased (‘Your hair taste good?’—that sort of thing). I could see this
hurt her. I still remember the way she’d look after such an insult: eyes cast down,
a little gut-kicked, as if, having just been reminded of her place in things, she
was trying, as much as possible, to disappear. After a while she’d drift away,
hair-strand still in her mouth. At home, I imagined, after school, her mother
would say, you know: ‘How was your day, sweetie?’ and she’d say, ‘Oh, fine.’
And her mother would say, ‘Making any friends?’ and she’d go, ‘Sure, lots.’
Sometimes I’d see her hanging around alone in her front yard, as if afraid to
leave it.
And then—they moved. That was it. No tragedy, no big final hazing.
One day she was there, next day she wasn’t.
End of story.
Now, why do I regret that? Why, forty-two years later, am I still thinking
about it? Relative to most of the other kids, I was actually pretty nice to her. I
never said an unkind word to her. In fact, I sometimes even (mildly) defended
her.
Saunders gave graduates the gift of a small story, reminding them that whatever
they achieve in life, however high they climb, they should remember to treat
others with kindness. When we’re empathetic, we tell our stories in the service
of others. We understand that our stories serve a purpose and we can tell them
from a place of generosity.
Be curious.
Listen, not to wait your turn to speak, but to understand.
Avoid judgement.
Ask questions.
Widen your circle.
Examine your biases.
Read and research.
Get to know your audience.
Describe the change your audience wants to make.
Decide how you hope the audience will be changed by having
heard your story.
Watch and listen to how the audience reacts or responds to your
story as it unfolds.
Knowing your audience will help you choose a story that will resonate.
You might choose to change the audience you’re addressing as you
workshop your stories later. But for now, consider choosing a story
you’d like to tell just one friend or colleague who wants to get to know
you or your work better.
Begin with the end in mind by asking yourself the following
questions:
The purpose of a storyteller is not to tell you how to think, but to give you
questions to think upon.
BRANDON SANDERSON
“Unlike anecdotes, stories are
constructed in a way that makes them
meaningful and memorable.”
TORIES ARE LIKE oxygen, they are all around us—an essential part of our
S lives. They not only entertain, influence and inspire us—stories are
literally the making of us. Without stories, and the shared beliefs they
enable us to embrace, we would not be able to come together to create
communities and societies. Stories are the currency of collaboration and the
backbone of our civilisation. We can agree that stories are powerful enablers of
change and that we find great storytellers compelling. Scientists can even show
us how story affects our brain and our physiological responses.
We understand what a story does and why it’s important. But do we know
what a story is?
Here’s one way to think about it, and our working definition for this book: a
story is an account of a character, in a set of circumstances, facing choices, who
undergoes change.
The actions the character takes (their choices) to overcome obstacles and
resolve conflict change them, their world view and in turn the audience’s world
view. Memorable stories show us how challenges are overcome, how conflict is
resolved and how the hero or heroine changed as a result. The hero or heroine
doesn’t always get to live happily ever after in the material world, but they
usually experience a change of heart. In compelling stories, reluctant heroes and
heroines find the courage to love, lead and sometimes lose with grace.
All stories have a plot—the events that make up the story. Great stories also
have a particular structure, which causes a visceral emotional response in the
listener or reader—making the story more meaningful and memorable, and thus
effective. The information we give the audience must be released in a particular
sequence to elicit this response. As we’ll see, how we structure the stories we tell
changes the way the audience responds. We can intentionally craft our stories to
elicit that response in our audience. And in the end, isn’t that the whole point of
telling a story in the first place—to inspire the change we hope to see in the
world?
In Toy Story, when Woody realises after Buzz Lightyear’s arrival that he may
no longer be Andy’s favourite toy, he is faced with choices that change him
forever.
In A Christmas Carol, when the ghosts confront Scrooge with visions of his
life, he chooses to change and becomes a more empathetic and generous human.
When the owl arrives with the letter from Hogwarts, Harry Potter is faced
with the choice of whether or not to embrace his identity as a wizard.
You can feel the effect of a great story. But unless you’re a professional
storyteller, it’s unlikely that you learned the secret to revealing the right part of
the story at the right time to elicit reactions in others. That’s what you’re going
to learn in this chapter: how to craft your stories so that they have a shape and a
point that captivates your audience.
Your story has one job: to be meaningful and memorable to your audience.
You do that by having a beginning, middle and end that as a whole engages the
audience, shows the hero or heroine’s challenge and describes the change he or
she undergoes. If the work doesn’t do all three of these things, then it’s probably
an anecdote, not a story. Think of these three principles as charting the emotional
path for your audience.
You need to ensure that in the beginning and middle of your story, your
audience has questions about what happened and will happen next, and that
those questions are resolved by the end of the story. The best storytellers don’t
conclude by explaining the moral of the story; they allow their audience to
experience an insight or epiphany through the story. When the bad guy in the
movie goes to prison, when the heroine sticks to her values and follows her
heart, when the hero follows the call to adventure, we see that being true to
ourselves in the face of adversity makes us step up to be kinder, more
resourceful and more resilient.
Once you learn to recognise the patterns in strong stories, you won’t be able
to unsee them. And soon you’ll be able to replicate them to craft your own
compelling stories.
Scaffold Your Stories
All stories have a beginning, a middle and an end. At the start of the story, the
storyteller engages the audience. In the middle, he or she shows the challenge
the protagonist must overcome. By the end of the story, the audience can see
how the protagonist has changed as a result. Particular details are revealed to the
audience during each part of the story. These three stages of the story chart the
internal and external journey you must take your audience on.
When I’m teaching story skills, I share what I call the 5 Cs of storytelling.
The 5 Cs give stories a particular structure that invests the audience in the
outcome as the story unfolds. They are: Context, Catalyst, Complication,
Change and Consequence. Think of these 5 Cs as scaffolding for your stories.
Here you introduce us to the hero or heroine’s world and show us how
something changes in that world. Your goal here is to engage the audience.
Capture our interest. We must know who, when, where and what. Draw us in.
Set the scene and make us care about what happens next to arouse curiosity and
surprise.
Who is involved?
Where and when does the story happen?
What does the hero or heroine want?
What changes in the hero or heroine’s world?
We need to understand the problems facing the hero or heroine, and see the path
he or she chooses to overcome them. Engage your audience with the hero or
heroine’s struggle, both their inner and outer dilemmas. Don’t just detail facts
and events; demonstrate what’s at stake emotionally for them. Your goal is to
elicit empathy.
The story’s resolution sparks an insight. Show your audience how the hero or
heroine’s fate, character or world view changed as a result of their actions. What
can we learn from their journey? Make sure your ending aligns with the goal you
had in mind at the start of your story and that it fulfils the promise you made to
the audience at the beginning. Your goal is to evoke wonder, hope or joy.
We are introduced to the heroine’s world and something that changes in her
world.
Susan introduces us to her family life and values, as she’s going to camp for the
first time.
When I was nine years old, I went off to summer camp for the first time. And my
mother packed me a suitcase full of books, which to me seemed like a perfectly
natural thing to do. Because in my family, reading was the primary group
activity. And this might sound antisocial to you, but for us, it was really just a
different way of being social. You have the animal warmth of your family sitting
right next to you, but you are also free to go roaming around the adventure land
inside your own mind. And I had this idea that camp was going to be just like
this, but better.
Complication: The Obstacle
Susan is made to feel like the unaccepted outsider. So, she tries to fit in.
But the first time that I took my book out of my suitcase, the coolest girl in the
bunk came up to me, and she asked me, ‘Why are you being so mellow?’—
mellow, of course, being the exact opposite of R-O-W-D-I-E. And then the
second time I tried it, the counsellor came up to me with a concerned expression
on her face, and she repeated the point about camp spirit and said we should all
work very hard to be outgoing.
Susan tries to fit in but doesn’t feel right about doing it.
And so, I put my books away, back in their suitcase, and I put them under my
bed, and there they stayed for the rest of the summer. And I felt kind of guilty
about this. I felt as if the books needed me somehow, and they were calling out
to me, and I was forsaking them. But I did forsake them, and I didn’t open that
suitcase again until I was back home with my family at the end of the summer.
Then she has her epiphany: She’s not broken. It’s society’s attitude to introverts
that’s broken.
Now, I tell you this story about summer camp. I could have told you 50 others
just like it—all the times that I got the message that somehow my quiet and
introverted style of being was not necessarily the right way to go, that I should
be trying to pass as more of an extrovert. And I always sensed deep down that
this was wrong and that introverts were pretty excellent just as they were. But
for years I denied this intuition, and so I became a Wall Street lawyer, of all
things, instead of the writer that I had always longed to be—partly because I
needed to prove to myself that I could be bold and assertive too. And I was
always going off to crowded bars when I really would have preferred to just
have a nice dinner with friends. And I made these self-negating choices so
reflexively that I wasn’t even aware that I was making them.
Now this is what many introverts do, and it’s our loss for sure, but it is also
our colleagues’ loss and our communities’ loss. And at the risk of sounding
grandiose, it is the world’s loss. Because when it comes to creativity and
leadership, we need introverts doing what they do best.
The heroine’s character, fate, world and world view are altered.
Susan overcomes her fear of public speaking and accepts the call to spread the
message about the need to accept and create a culture that embraces both
extroverts and introverts.
So, I just published a book about introversion, and it took me about seven years
to write. And for me, that seven years was like total bliss, because I was reading,
I was writing, I was thinking, I was researching. It was my version of my
grandfather’s hours of the day alone in his library. But now all of a sudden, my
job is very different, and my job is to be out here talking about it, talking about
introversion. I prepared for moments like these as best I could. I spent the last
year practising public speaking every chance I could get. And I call this my
‘year of speaking dangerously’.
CONTEXT: Quiet girl from a bookish family is living happily in her ordinary
world.
CATALYST: She goes to camp with her suitcase full of books.
COMPLICATION: The girl is teased about her introversion.
CHANGE: She puts her books away and tries to fit in but doesn’t feel right about
doing it.
CONSEQUENCE: Susan overcomes her fear of public speaking so she can spread
the message about the need to accept and create a culture that embraces both
extroverts and introverts.
The through line is the invisible thread that pulls the reader or the listener
through the story, from event to event. You can think of the through line as your
story’s theme, conveying what the story is about.
When we look for common story themes, we immediately think about love,
good versus evil, redemption, courage and perseverance, revenge, and coming of
age. Even our small personal stories have a plot and a connecting theme. It’s
important to stick to your through line as you craft and tell your story; otherwise,
you risk losing your audience along the way.
If you’ve ever watched a movie where you felt yourself become less invested
in the story, it’s probably because it didn’t have a consistent through line.
Maybe, as you watched it, you heard yourself thinking, Huh, I thought this was
about overcoming the forces of evil and it turns out it’s a story about finding true
love. The through line serves as a promise you intend to keep, made up front to
the audience.
Of course, you need to know your through line if you’re going to stick to it.
It’s not enough to know what happens in the story; you also need to know what
the story is about and what you hope the audience will learn from it.
My husband, Moyez, often tells the following story, about his first day as a
doctor, to the medical students he now teaches. At its heart, this is a story of
becoming—the next step on the path to becoming what he’d been working
towards for many years.
The first day of August is the worst day to end up in hospital in Ireland. That’s
the day all newly qualified doctors begin working on the wards with a mixture of
hope and fear.
I can still remember my first day. I donned my newly laundered white coat,
pocketed my stethoscope, my drug formulary and the Parker pen gifted to me for
my graduation by my proud parents. Fully equipped and more than a little
terrified, I headed through the swing doors into the surgical ward where I’d
spend the next three months of my internship.
I was met by Eileen Dorley, the nurse in charge. ‘Good morning, Doctor,’ she
said enthusiastically.
It was the first time anyone had called me Doctor. It’s a hard-won moment no
doctor ever forgets.
‘Good morning, Sister,’ I replied, as that’s what the nurse in charge was
called back then. ‘What can I do first this morning?’
‘Well, Doctor,’ she said. ‘You could start by prescribing anti-emetics for the
patients going to the operating theatre later today.’
I reached for the drug formulary in my hip pocket and hesitated for a moment
—my training had taught me there were lots of possibilities—then asked the
still-smiling Sister Dorley the name of the professor’s preferred anti-emetic.
I clicked the top of my pen and pulled up the first prescription on the pad. I
started to spell the word aloud as I wrote: ‘S-T-E...’ ‘M-E-T-I-L,’ she completed.
‘Thank you, Sister. And what dose does he like to use?’ ‘Twelve point five
milligrams twice a day, Doctor,’ she replied. ‘Just tick the “6am” and “6pm”
boxes.’ She paused for a moment, looking me in the eye. ‘The rest, Doctor,’ she
said, pointing to where I should sign my name at the bottom of the prescription,
‘is written on your name badge.’ She said it without a hint of sarcasm or
unkindness.
In the three months that followed, Eileen Dorley made it her mission to help
me transition from graduate to doctor.
It takes discipline to craft an outline and hit each of the 5 Cs of the Story
Scaffold, but once you begin applying these ground rules to your stories, you
will immediately see the difference, not just in how they flow but in how they
are received.
YOUR TURN: OUTLINE YOUR STORY
It’s only by being intentional that we can tell stories that are
emotionally resonant. Structure is the storyteller’s friend.
I’ll never forget standing in the green room at the Octagon Theatre, Perth,
waiting to go onstage to give my TEDx Talk. My heart was pounding. I was
petrified. There was no fluffing this. No room for ums and ahs during my
scheduled ten-minute talk that would be recorded and posted online. Right there
and then, those felt like the highest-stakes ten minutes of my career.
Outside, it was a typical Perth day, clear blue skies as far as the eye could
see, so I decided to duck out to the garden backstage to have some time to
myself. I stood under a giant gum tree with my hands on my hips, attempting a
power pose that might trick my physiology into calming down. I took a deep
breath and closed my eyes. When I opened them, they were drawn upwards,
from the base of the smooth tree trunk all the way to its fragrant canopy. For a
moment, I forgot why I was standing there. I simply looked in awe at this giant
tree that had likely stood solidly on this spot for more than two hundred years,
nurturing wildlife among its branches, providing shade for the people who sat
beneath them. In that moment, I was able to substitute my fear for wonder.
Staring up at the expanse of blue sky between the branches of that tree reminded
me of the paradox of the permanence and impermanence of life and how little
time we have to make a difference. It reminded me to be grateful for the
opportunity to speak to the people who had come to listen. And to find joy in the
moment.
The trouble started when I was turning twelve and just about to leave primary
school. Bear in mind that this was the late seventies—a time when, in many
schools, curiosity was seen as breaking ranks. What our teachers valued more
than the curious was the compliant. In other words, kids like me who weren’t
afraid to ask questions that might derail a lesson plan were a pain in the
backside.
One day, I raised my hand to ask a question the teacher didn’t have an answer
to. I don’t remember the question, but I do remember the reaction. ‘Who do you
think you are?’ she said. Her face was scarlet, her tone harsh as she marched me
to the principal’s office. Emboldened by the fact that I was soon to leave this
junior school for high school, I dug my heels in, declaring to Sister P., the head
teacher, that the accusation of ‘impertinence’ was unjust. This strategy didn’t go
well for me.
My mother was summoned to the school the following day to be warned that
her daughter’s outspokenness would land her in trouble when she went to high
school. Sister P. left my mum in no doubt about what I must do to fit in. I should
learn to pipe down and avoid speaking up, because doing so would be
detrimental to my future. Mum, who never had the chance to attend high school,
relayed the message to me with concern in her eyes. The message came over
loud and clear: Don’t blow this opportunity by voicing your opinions. It’s okay
to have ideas as long as you keep them to yourself.
It was thirty years before I had the courage to begin putting my ideas into the
world again. I started blogging in my forties—sharing ideas about reclaiming the
humanity in business, and about the joy and rewards of getting closer to the
people we serve. It was a low-risk endeavour since I didn’t have any readers at
first. But the more I spoke my truth, the more I found people who believed what
I believed, the truer to myself and the better my writing became. The very act of
writing, of voicing my opinion and telling my stories, reminded me of what I
valued and who I was.
Over the past decade, I’ve been lucky enough to be invited and paid to speak to
audiences around the world. During that time, I’ve always been surprised by
how the voice of my inner critic has rarely aligned with how a talk or a
workshop was received by the audience. Of course, there is always room to grow
and develop as a speaker, performer or storyteller. We should see the gap
between the storyteller we are today and the storyteller we want to be as an
opportunity to grow rather than as evidence of incompetence. When we truly
show up in the service of others, we are doing our best, most meaningful work.
YOUR TURN: HOW TO SPEAK YOUR TRUTH
Before We End
After nourishment, shelter and companionship, stories are the thing we need
most in the world.
PHILIP PULLMAN
“While stories have the power to
change other people’s minds and win
their hearts, they can also help us as
individuals to understand ourselves.”
ANY PEOPLE READING this book will have bought it to learn how to
We carry out our everyday routines and rituals according to the stories we most
believe in, and these days, the story is changing as we write it.
Stories give our lives meaning. They make us wiser and more resilient. Stories
help us earn trust, deepen connection and create change. That’s the reason we
began telling them—to share and spread wisdom through our tribes. In my work
with creatives, entrepreneurs and leaders who want to get better at telling their
stories, I see patterns emerging. Those who have a mechanism for finding,
owning and sharing their stories build strong cultures and create change. I
believe there are parallels between what I’ve witnessed in organisations and
what I’ve discovered in my research into how stories make individuals and
communities stronger.
Weeks after his TED Talk, Oliver Jeffers posted the following story on
Instagram.
Around 3 or 4 weeks ago, I fell into a bit of a low period. After more than a
month of lockdown, I was feeling sorry for myself and suffocated being cooped
up with two small children and nowhere to hide. My TED Talk had happened
virtually and my Apple TV film had been launched—two of the biggest things in
my career to date, that were relegated to happening in a living room.
I knew these were silly selfish thoughts, but, still, I wallowed. Here I was
seemingly only wiping bums, taming tantrums and doing the dishes. Our year of
travel had been cancelled halfway through, and I felt frustrated that I suddenly
needed to work again, but couldn’t with two kids constantly needing my
attention. There was no escaping them, and I couldn’t complete a thought
without interruption.
At one point, I took them on a drive to give my wife some headspace when
an ad on a local radio station, Belfast 98FM, came on for a local restaurant, the
Speckled Hen, where they wished everyone well during lockdown, including the
line: ‘Those with young children, don’t wish it away, as they grow up too fast.’ I
looked in the rear-view mirror at their two tiny faces and I had to pull over to
wipe a tear or two away. Never before has such an awakening been hit over my
head with such a hammer. What was meant to be a 20-minute drive turned into a
2-hour rock pool adventure (ended only with the loss of a shoe... not mine) and
the appearance of an anchor into a swirling vortex with which to pitch myself
against. Thank you, Jim from the Speckled Hen, for the precise words at the
precise moment to sway a man for the better, and remember the little fleeting
moments.
Every experience that we have in our lives fundamentally and forever changes us
in small, and large, ways. Therefore, once we’ve had an experience we don’t go
back to the way that we were before that experience. Resilience is about
understanding, making meaning out of what is happening, what has happened,
and allowing ourselves to be, again, fundamentally and forever changed in ways
that allow us to be both more compassionate and empathetic, and to have more
wisdom.
You can leverage storytelling to change the world for the better. In this book
you’ve learned that stories have a shape and a point—a beginning, a middle and
an end. What you will come to learn by telling them is that storytelling is two
parts courage and one part hope. It takes guts to find your voice and speak your
truth—yet here you are, open to learning the skills so you can get better. And
then there’s hope—the hope that we carry in our hearts, the hope that our ideas
will resonate and spread, that someone will care, that our stories will matter.
They’re both dead, but they’re alive to me... Two Roads Books, ‘Billy Connolly
on the Art of Storytelling’, August 19, 2019, YouTube video, 0:45,
https://youtu.be/2HEh95icYPs.
When vulnerability researcher Brené Brown took to the TED stage... Brené
Brown, ‘The Power of Vulnerability’, June 2010, TEDx Houston video,
20:04,ted.com/talks/brene_brown_the_power_of_vulnerability.
Princeton professor Uri Hasson’s research... Uri Hasson, ‘This Is Your Brain on
Communication’, February 2016, TED video, 14:44,
ted.com/talks/uri_hasson_this_is_your_brain_on_communication.
Narratives that cause us to pay attention... Paul J. Zak, ‘Why Inspiring Stories
Make Us React: The Neuroscience of Narrative’, Cerebrum, January–
February 2015, ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC4445577/.
In the seventh grade... George Saunders, Congratulations, By the Way: Some
Thoughts on Kindness (London: Bloomsbury, 2014).
Following the publication of a New York Times article... Marshall P. Duke, ‘The
Stories That Bind Us: What Are the Twenty Questions?’, HuffPost (blog),
May 23, 2013,huffpost.com/entry/the-stories-that-bind-us-_b_2918975.
Every experience that we have in our lives... Michael Bungay Stanier, ‘How to
Practice Resilience, with Dr Taryn Marie’, season 1, episode 1, in We Will
Get Through This, podcast, audio, 31:13, mbs.works/wwg.
Acknowledgements
IRST, I WANT to thank my dear friend and colleague Seth Godin for