Dear Nithya,

I am writing this email to discuss about the RAINMAKERS conference. Our Management is Commented [MOU1]: Rainmakers
interested in showcasing AI- Automation tools, which will represent innovation idea in the field Commented [MOU2]: ‘M’ in small letters
of Artificial Intelligence. Commented [MOU3]: Keen on

To begin with, this conference is filled with knowledge, insights & thought – provoking sessions. Commented [MOU4]: a treasure trove of..
On sept 25, 2023, we air our conference with Bijan Choudhary as our key speaker. Bijan is from Commented [MOU5]: ‘S’ should be capital and the months
are written in full forms.
Pune, and serves as the head of the competency team he is competency head.
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Additionally, I would recommend to you to deliver a presentation on the AI tool developed by Commented [MOU7]: hails
you. As we have Bijan and competency team, there would be technical discussion and Commented [MOU8]: as it is one of the fields in which you
recommendation on the tool. This would a great opportunity to demonstrate our products to have the dynamic expertise.
the clients and this would certainly help in building strong relationship with the clients them in Commented [MOU9]: Consider adding a comma
terms of growth and billing. Commented [MOU10]: An excellent opportunity
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In addition to the presentation, there are other events like award distribution across all the
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business until and few more presentations. We are also organizing other fun activities and talking about the future and making statements in the
events, comprising of Quiz and fun filled brainstorming activities. Let’s get ready for captivating present tense.
sessions and do the best in conference. Commented [MOU13]: ‘Q’ in small letters

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remark.

Regards,
Sunita. Commented [MOU15]: Write your full name in formal and
semi-formal e-mails.

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