By: Chong & Lee

University
Dropout
Rates
IELTS BAND 9 ESSAY
Many students do not finish school.
Why is this, and how can the
problem be solved?

School Drop-Outs: Problems and

Solutions
 INTRODUCTION

1 2 In our modern times, the main problem in many

countries is the education of young people.

The student's learning demands are reduced.

6 3
This essay will look at the reason for this and
the purpose solution.

5 4
 PARAGRAPH 1
On the one hand, there are many causes of this
problem. First of all, most students do not know
about the benefits of studying in school.

They suppose that waste their time because the

knowledge being taught is not able to apply in real
life.

For example, In mathematics is taught about calculus

but in daily ,life people use only the knowledge of plus
and minus numbers.

Secondly, education institutes pupils to get good

grades. As a result, this makes pupils feel stressed
and think that school is a bad place to go and makes
them not want to finish school.
PARAGRAPH 2
On the other, this problem can solve in many ways. Firstly,
the government should create activities that demonstrate
the benefits of learning.

As an illustration, campaign about visiting science

museums. This campaign can illustrate how to apply the
knowledge in the science subjects to improve various
devices.

Moreover, parents should be involved in solving this issue

by finding the real reason why their children do not want
to study.

For instance, children who are stressed from studying

because they can not understand physics. In order to solve
this ,issue parents can find a tutor for their child.
 CONCLUSION

In conclusion, the cause of this issue is that

children do not know

the importance of studying and they do not

want to be forced to study.

However, the solution to this issue can solve

with the help of the government and parents.