By : Chong & Lee

Academic Success
…...IELTS BAND 9 Essay…...
Some people say that educational success
depends most of the time on having a good
teacher.

Others say that attitude of students also matters.

 Introduction
There is no doubt that academic
excellence has become essential
nowadays.

Some believe that this is solely

dependent on having good tutors;

however, I would strongly that it

is also important for tutees to
have a constructive demeanour.
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On the one hand, good educators are vital for engaging the
learners in a particular subject.

This is because these tutors are able to connect well with

their tutees, which in turn makes that particular course
quite compelling.

As a result, their scholars are able to perform better in

the exams. For instance, since the quality of tutors are
better in most private schools, therefore these institutes
produce better academic results in comparison to the
government schools.

In contrast, if the educators had not been up to the mark

in private schools, a lot of tutees would have lost interest
in studying, leading them to perform worse in their exams.
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On the other hand, I am a firm believer in the
fact that an appropriate demeanour is imperative
for teenagers to succeed academically.

The reason for this is adolescents with a positive

mindset are very keen to learn about the subjects
and ready to put in the efforts.

To illustrate this point, children who prepare well

for exams are more likely to get better grades.

Alternatively, if a student is arrogant, they will

not respect their educators and hence will not be
able to learn from them effectively.
 CONCLUSION

In conclusion, although having good tutors is

indispensable due to their ability to connect
with students and make the course
interesting,

it can hardly be denied that a positive

approach can make the scholars study hard,
leading them to excel academically.
ATTITUDE IS THE BEST BRAND TO WEAR ;)