COMPARE 2 ARTICLES

Identify 4 linguistic differences and analyze them.

Read the articles and answer the following questions:
1. What are the two articles?
+ Diem Huong banned from performances nationwide.
+ Beauty queen banned from performing for résumé fraud
2. What was the event?
Diem Huong was banned because she was found to have lied about her marital status before
competing in Miss Universe 2012.

3. The differences between the 2 articles:

Differences Article 1 Article 2

(1) the + nationwide + for résumé fraud

difference in
how to the + Shows the forbidden scope of Diem Huong's + show why Diem Huong
focus of the 2 performance ban was banned from performing.
articles
+ the difference in how to focus in the title: In Article 1, used the word
“nationwide” to indicate the prohibited scope of Diem Huong's
performance. But In article 2, specify and emphasize the reason why Viet
Huong is banned from performing. ok
(2) Why is + dishonest + concealed the fact
Diem Huong got married in 2011 signed the guarantee
banned from her husband was filing for divorce. paper that she was telling the
touring? truth.
Who exposed + using words to indicate that Viet Huong
Diem Huong’s was banned from touring because she lied + Diem Huong deliberately
dishonesty? and her husband was the one who exposed concealed the truth and did
not mention who was the one
who revealed it.
Article 1 uses words to indicate that Diem Huong was banned from touring
and her husband was the one who exposed. But in Article 2, only mentioned
that Diem Huong lied and did not mention who was the one who exposed it.
(3) Who is + The Department of Performing Arts + taking back Huong’s Miss
responsible for It is a really rare case Vietnam World crown.
the problem? knowing all regulations, The inspectorate from the
she decided to lie Ministry of Culture, Sports
and Tourism.
the responsibility of Hoan
Vu Sai Gon Co..

+ Article 1, point out that everything is due +Article 2, mentioning the

to Diem Huong will take all responsibility responsibility of the
because she is the one who caused this company Hoan Vu Sai Gon
trouble and wrong thing. Co which sent Huong to the
2012 Miss Universe, be
looked into.
Article 1 points out that everything is due to Diem Huong and she will take
all responsibility that caused this trouble and wrong things, but Article 2,
mentions the responsibility of the company Hoan Vu Sai Gon Co which sent
Huong to the 2012 Miss Universe, be looked into. ok
(4) how to + not mention + Born in Ho Chi Minh City
provide 24 ages
personal + The sources of information are not 1.74m tall
information directly attributed boasts body
measurements of 85-62-94.
The beauty also made it to
semifinal of the 2010 Miss
Earth pageant.

+ pointed out Diem Huong's

achievements and strengths
and her importance to beauty
contests.
Article 1 does not mention achievements and personal information, focus on
the content of the title of the article. But article 2, pointed out Diem Huong's
achievements and strengths and her importance to beauty contests. Ok for
the idea! Fix your grammar!