手把手 小学英语作文 入门与提高 5 ~ 6 年 级

习作三 A happy thing

一件高兴的事

◆名师指导◆

写 作 要 点 提示

1. 可以叙述别人所做的让你高兴的的事情以及原因。
示例：Today my father gave me a new mobile phone for my birthday. I
am very happy.
译文：今天爸爸为了给我庆祝生日送给我一个新手机。我很高兴。
2. 可以叙述自己所做的有意义的事情。
示例：I helped a kid find her mother in the park today.
译文：今天我帮一个小孩在公园找到了她妈妈。
3. 可以叙述自己和别人一起做的开心的事情。
示例：Today it is sunny, so my friends and I are flying kites in the park.
译文：今天天气晴朗，我和朋友们正在公园放风筝。

写 作 思 路 提示

这事发生在周一的公交车上。
开头
It happened on a Monday on a bus.

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描述事件经过。
Ten minutes later, an old woman got on the bus.
Unfortunately, there was no seat for her. So a little boy
中间
gave her his seat.

当我看到这种情况，我很高兴，因为我知道了这
个世界上到处充满爱。
结尾
When I saw that, I was very happy, because I knew
the world was full of love.

写 作 步 骤 详解
1. 如何写好开头
① 可以以问句开头。
示例：Do you know what makes me happy? Let me tell you.
译文：你知道什么事让我开心吗？让我来告诉你。
② 可以直接表达自己喜悦的心情。
示例：When I think of that, it makes me very happy.
译文：每当我想起这件事情，我就很开心。
③ 可以简单介绍事情发生的时间和地点。
示例：I saw something interesting on Sunday on the street.
译文：我周日在街上看到一件有意思的事情。
2. 如何写好中间
① 介绍事情的经过。
示例：I met a foreign woman. She didn’t know the way to the People’s
Park, so I took her to the park.
译文：我遇见了一个外国妇女，她不知道去人民公园的路，我带她
去了人民公园。
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② 描述开心热闹的场面。
示例：My brother is helping my mother clean the floor. I am cooking in
the kitchen for my mother.
译文：我弟弟正在帮妈妈擦地板。我正在厨房为妈妈做饭。
③ 可以谈谈事情让你开心的理由。
示例：When I saw my friend’s mobile phone, I wanted one, too. Today
my father bought a new one for me. I am very happy.
译文：我看过朋友的手机，我也想要一个。今天爸爸给我买了一个
新手机，我非常高兴。
3. 如何写好结尾
① 首尾呼应式结尾。
示例：That is why I feel happy.
译文：这就是我高兴的原因。
② 总结事情对自己的启示。
示例：I think I’ll help people, too.
译文：我认为我也要帮助别人。

◆佳作示范◆

经 典 范文(一)

Having a picnic
Today is a nice, sunny day.
My friends and I are having a picnic near the river, and we are very

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happy. Look! Jim is playing the guitar, and Lily and I are singing. There are
three little boys cooking delicious food for us. Li Ming is fishing, and the
other boys are rowing a boat in the river.
How happy the picnic is!

名师点评

开篇交代了天气情况，为下文叙述所做的开心的事情做一个很好的感
情铺垫。野餐活动描写得很有条理。结尾部分总结全篇的大意，并抒发自
己的感想。

精彩译文

野 餐
今天天气很好，阳光明媚。
我和朋友们在河边野餐。我们很开心。看！吉姆正在弹吉他。莉
莉和我都在唱歌。那边三个小男孩正在为我们做好吃的。李明正在钓鱼。
其他的男孩正在划船。
这次野餐真开心！

经 典 范文(二)

Helping a foreigner
One day, on the way to school, I met a foreign person. He looked very
worried, so I asked him, “Can I help you?”He said, “Yes, please. I need
to see my friend, she is in the hospital. I don’t know the way, can you help
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me? ”I gave him directions and he thanked me by saying, “Chinese people

are all very friendly, thank you.”When he said that, I was very happy and
proud.

名师点评

开篇交待事情发生的起因，是因为见到一个外国人看着很着急。正文
部分通过两人对话的方式为我们介绍了外国人着急的原因以及我是如何帮
助他的。结尾部分抒发自己的感想。

精彩译文
帮助一个外国人
一天，去学校的路上，我遇到一个外国人，他看起来很着急，我
就问他：
“我能帮你忙吗？”他说：
“是的，请帮帮我。我需要见一个朋友，
她生病住院了。我不知道怎么走，你能告诉我吗？”我就告诉他去医院
的路。他很感激我并对我说：
“中国人都很友好，谢谢你。”当他说这些
话时，我很高兴而且自豪。

经 典 范文(三)

Shopping happily
Yesterday was my shopping day. I went shopping with my mother
happily.
There were so many people and products in the supermarket. My
mother bought a blue skirt for me. It was eighty yuan. My mother bought

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a purple tie for my father. I thought it was cool. I bought five pencils, two
erasers and a lovely pencil sharpener. At last we decided to buy some fruit.
We bought a big watermelon, some sweet bananas and some red apples.
I feel happy. I like shopping. I hope I can shop everyday.

名师点评

小作者用流畅的语言、欢快笔调讲述了“购物”这件开心的事情，很
贴近日常生活。本文时态准确、用词得当，尤其是形容水果的词“a big
watermelon, some sweet bananas and some red apples”很准确。

精彩译文

欢乐购物
昨天是我的购物日。我和妈妈高高兴兴地去购物了。
超市里有很多的人和商品。妈妈给我买了一条蓝色的裙子，八十
元。妈妈给爸爸买了一条紫色的领带。我认为那条领带很酷。我则买
了五支铅笔、两块橡皮和一个可爱的削笔刀。最后我们决定买一些水果。
我们买了一个大西瓜，一些甜甜的香蕉和红色的大苹果。
我感到很高兴。我喜欢购物。我希望每天都能去购物。

经 典 范文(四)

Visiting Tian’anmen Square

On October 1st I was very happy because my parents took me to visit
Tian’anmen Square. When they told me we were going, I jumped for joy.
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When I got there, I saw a lot of people and beautiful flowers in the square.
We took a lot of pictures, then we visited the National Museum of China. It
was very interesting.
At the end of the day, I was very tired, but very happy.

名师点评

开篇介绍了当天的开心之情。接着介绍了开心的原因。结尾部分与开
头遥相呼应，再次表达了作者对在国庆节参观天安门广场这件事情的愉悦
之情。文中 when 从句和短语 take pictures 的灵活应用，
也给文章增色不少。

精彩译文

参观天安门广场
十月一日那天我很开心，因为爸爸妈妈带我去参观天安门广场了。
当我听到这个消息，我高兴地跳起来。到了天安门广场时，我看见很
多的人和漂亮的鲜花。我们照了很多照片。接着我们又参观了中国国
家博物馆。那里非常有趣。
那天晚上虽然我感觉很累，但是非常开心。

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