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Teaching English writing in junior high school becomes a challenge for English
teachers especially in EFL countries. Basically, writing is a complex English skill
due to its requirement of mastering several components such as grammar,
vocabulary, content, organization, and mechanism. The aim of this study is
elaborating the challenges and solutions in teaching English writing to junior high
school students. In attempt for collecting the data, this study conducted an
interview to three participants in one of junior high schools in Tasikmalaya, West
Java, Indonesia. The data were analyzed using thematic analysis (Braun & Clarke,
2006). The findings from this study discovered that there are seven challenges
faced by teachers when teaching English writing. Those challenges involve: (1)
students’ poor English grammatical competence, (2) students’ incapability of
developing ideas for English writing, (3) students’ inadequate English vocabulary
knowledge, (4) students’ demotivation to learn English writing, (5) insufficient
time management to teach English writing, (6) limited sources of English writing
materials and (7) limited facilities to teach English writing. In addition, the
findings of this study also identified the solutions to overcome those challenges
which are: (1) explicit teaching English vocabulary, (2) collaborative English
writing activities, and (3) exercises of English writing. By knowing these
challenges and solutions, teachers are expected to be more effective in the process
of teaching English writing to junior high school students.
Keywords: Challenges and Solutions of Teaching English Writing, Junior High
School Students, Teaching English Writing.
PREFACE
This thesis is filled with the background information on why this research
conclusion and suggestion. The first chapter contains background information that
provides the context of the research that is about writing, the gap, the formulation
of the problems, the significances of the research, and the aims of the research.
The literature review consists of a brief about teaching writing, teaching writing in
EFL contexts, EFL teachers’ challenges and solutions to overcome the issue in
teaching writing are explained in the second chapter. The third chapter presented
research design, setting and participants, data collection, and data analysis. The
results of this study come out in the fourth chapter, it includes the data findings
and discussions. The last chapter consists of the conclusions based on the data
findings and other ideas for the next researcher dealing with teaching English
The writer
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ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS
blessing, love, opportunity, health and mercy to complete this thesis. In arranging
this thesis, a lot of people have provided motivation, advice and support me. In
Tasikmalaya.
2. The honorable Dr. Yusup Supriyono, M.Pd., as the first supervisor who
3. The honorable Santiana, S.S., M. Pd., as the second supervisor who has
5. My beloved parents Mr.Amin Jaelani and Mrs.Iis Aisyah who always give
support and pray for me, and for my lovely Sister Riris Rismayanti, S. Pd
who always helps and accompanies me in the night during write this
thesis.
8. My best friends Indra Ramadhan, S.Pd who always hear me when I was
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9. All people who have helped and supported me to finish this thesis
successful realization of this thesis. They cannot mention one by one in this
page, but they always be in my heart and my pray day and night.
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TABLE OF CONTENTS
PREFACE................................................................................................................i
ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS..................................................................................ii
TABLE OF CONTENTS.....................................................................................iv
LIST OF TABLES................................................................................................vi
ENCLOSURES LIST..........................................................................................vii
CHAPTER 1 INTRODUCTION..........................................................................1
1.1. Background...................................................................................................1
1.2. Formulation of the Problems.........................................................................3
1.3. Operational Definitions.................................................................................3
1.4. Aims of the Research....................................................................................5
1.5. Significances of the Research.......................................................................5
1.5.1. Theoretical Contributions......................................................................5
1.5.2. Practical Contributions...........................................................................5
1.5.3. Empirical Contributions.........................................................................6
CHAPTER 2 LITERATURE REVIEW..............................................................7
2.1 Teaching Writing in EFL Contexts: A Brief Overview...............................7
2.2 EFL Teachers Challenges in Teaching Writing...........................................9
2.3 Possible Solutions for Teaching Writing Challenges in EFL Contexts.....10
CHAPTER 3 RESEARCH PROCEDURES.....................................................12
3.1. Research Design..........................................................................................12
3.2. Setting and Participants...............................................................................12
3.3. Data Collection...........................................................................................13
3.4. Data Analysis..............................................................................................14
3.4.1. Familiarizing With the Data.................................................................15
3.4.2. Generating Initial Codes......................................................................15
3.4.3. Searching for Themes..........................................................................16
3.4.4. Reviewing Themes...............................................................................16
3.4.5. Defining and Naming Themes.............................................................17
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3.4.6. Producing the Report...........................................................................17
3.5. Research Schedule......................................................................................18
CHAPTER 4 FINDINGS AND DISCUSSIONS...............................................19
4.1. The Challenges in Teaching English Writing to Junior High School
Students......................................................................................................19
4.2. Teachers’ Solutions to Overcome The Challenges in Teaching Writing to
Junior High School Students......................................................................35
CHAPTER 5 CONCLUSIONS AND SUGGESTIONS...................................42
5.1. Conclusions.................................................................................................42
5.2. Suggestions.................................................................................................43
REFERENCES.....................................................................................................44
ENCLOSURES.....................................................................................................47
BIOGRAPHY.......................................................................................................74
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LIST OF TABLES
Table 3.1 Generating initial codes.........................................................................15
Table 3.2 Grouping the codes................................................................................16
Table 3.3 Defining and naming themes.................................................................17
Table 3.4 Research Schedule.................................................................................18
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ENCLOSURES LIST
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CHAPTER 1
INTRODUCTION
1.1. Background
EFL students in all educational levels including to junior high school students.
written form (Dombey, 2013; Salma, 2015, and Nassi & Nasser, 2018).
ideas. Hammadi and Sidek (2015) noted that writing in education is the way
be taught to students.
challenging.
Tasikmalaya, West Java, she observed that there was insufficient exposure to
she found the challenges faced by the teachers when teaching writing. The
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preliminary interview indicated that three of the participants agreed that writing
Dueraman (2012) found that the teachers in one of the Southern colleges of
addition, Adas and Bakir (2013) noted that teaching writing has developed
examples, the students encountered problems while using lexical and content
aspects of writing. The next research was conducted by Badi (2015) showing
In a similar vein Nassi & Nasser, (2018) scrutinized when teaching writing, the
background among the students and teacher and the teaching context. The last
teaching writing viewed from the aspect of large classes, low proficient
teachers in teaching writing to junior high school students. Even, a very scarce
investigation on the way how the teachers overcome their challenges during
teaching English writing. Therefore, this study aims at examining the teachers’
challenges when teaching writing and how they overcome such challenges to
teaching writing?
form.
education continuation of
written form.
teachers in teaching writing to junior high school students and the solution to
writing.
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challenges and the solutions when teaching writing to junior high school
students.
CHAPTER 2
LITERATURE REVIEW
sends and expresses the ideas and also information through written forms.
Hidayati, 2018).
d. Free writing: the learners use patterns they have developed to write an
knowledge and skills of teaching writing because most of the teachers found
are only given the exercises to make some sentences, then make
more active, and students are less to develop their ideas in writing skills
(Ariyanti, 2016).
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Liaghat and Biria (2018) showed that in EFL context writing can be
learning English. They also stated several approaches to support the learning
2012, p. 261).
different learning styles of students (Ali & Ramana, 2018). On the other hand,
doubt and use traditional methods. For instance, the teacher uses a single
method to teach writing skills (Nassi & Nasser, 2018). Moreover, the teachers
grammar and vocabulary knowledge, motivation, the topic in the text book is
In addition, the teachers faced challenges related to have a big class who
made the learning process not effective, the time for teaching writing is less
which makes students difficult to understand the materials that have explained
(Ariyanti, 2016). Adas and Bakir (2013) stated that there are causes of writing
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problems such as English language learners who have limited vocabulary and
less creativity.
habits. On the other side, externally the teachers faced challenges such as the
Contexts
There are two factors to identify the problems in teaching writing, that
when teaching writing the teachers can try to instruct their students to use
the internet for learning English and make more creative exercises.
buy some English books, magazines and newspapers to make their children
one of the solutions to teach writing, they noted that blended learning is a
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flexible approach that provides online English courses and it can support to
improve students' writing skill to keep learning with their teacher and
and Bakir (2013) reported that using various activities such as students may
get online sessions for example students were asked to upload their written
the indicator of writing related to vocabulary the teachers can provide the
text drilling vocabulary and meanings. They also reported the solution for
language use such as the teachers can give an explanation of tenses related
to a text, give the feedback for students’ writing assignment and for
students who have lack motivation, the teachers can give discussion and
(Almubark, 2016).
CHAPTER 3
RESEARCH PROCEDURES
is used to describe a phenomenon and contexts that occur in real life (Yin,
2018). This research design was selected because this study described and
4 hours for two meetings in a week. This place was selected because first,
junior high schools in Tasikmalaya. The reasons why the participants are
three because they taught at the same junior high school in each grade level.
They are Indonesian EFL teachers who teach in seventh to ninth grades.
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They were recruited since they agreed to participate in this research. They
were chosen from each level of class and they have long experiences in
teaching English writing. Their ages ranged from 48 to 59 years old with
Indonesian), and foreign language (i.e. English). Based on gender, they are
carried out through voice recording using a cell phone to investigate the
numbers of topics for posing questions. The topics are related to the
interview, namely:
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availability to be a participant.
research site.
comprising of four-phases:
The researcher analyzed the data from the interview transcripts used
data” (p. 6). The reason why this analysis is adapted because it was identified
the challenges and solutions in teaching writing frequently arose from the
results of the interview data and made into several themes to report the
results. Using thematic analysis can make active choices about the particular
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form of analysis they are engaged in (Braun & Clarke,2006, p.5). They noted
The researcher transcribed the data from the interview, and then
read and re-read the data transcript related to the topic of this research about
the challenges and the solutions in teaching writing to junior high school
students.
The researcher categorized the data by using the initial codes that were
colored to highlight the challenges faced and the solutions made by the
The researcher grouped the codes into possibly in the same themes
from the data that has been categorized and highlighted earlier in the
second step.
The researcher re-examines the themes that have been identified about
school students to ensure the placement of the code has been grouped into
The researcher determined and given the name of the theme based on
the data that has been obtained, namely about the challenges faced by the
students.
Collecting
the data
Analyzing
the data
Reporting
the data and
making
conclusion
Final thesis
examination
CHAPTER 4
during teaching English writing to junior high school students. The findings of
this study cover two main themes, namely (1) the challenges in teaching
English writing to Junior high school students and (2) teachers’ solutions to
More technically, the first theme is specified into several sub-themes, namely
materials and limited facilities to teach English writing. The second theme
Students
and asked students to write that sentence, they did not understand
follows:
Excerpt 1
Participant Extract
writing. For instance, the word “study” in English has several forms
structure. It made them confused when they were asked to write the
they explained grammar, such as about the present perfect and simple
past tense, the students seemed bored and did not pay attention to the
students who lack grammar knowledge and writing skill is one of the
should be constructed and how their ideas can be understood, and also
the teachers found that the students lacked in this respect, it made their
writing. Students were confused when they wrote the sentences, for
after they wrote those sentences, they did not know the next sentence
that will they write and when they develop the ideas in writing about
Excerpt 2
Participants Extracts
The data of the interview results above indicated that students were
and daily activities, they were difficult to write because they do not
know how to write ideas in English. They could not determine the main
ideas in the textbook and also felt difficult to write the text, such as
descriptive and narrative text. They were difficult to develop their ideas
for instance writing sentences into paragraphs related to the text. This
Adas and Bakir (2013) found that the teachers had some
and developing their ideas which made them less creative. Copland,
Garton, and Burns (2013) stated that when the students were asked to
the assignment, and they could not even begin to do the writing
assignments.
became a challenge for the teachers. The teachers should pay attention
when they were instructed to write some text. The students were lazy to
aspect of all four English skills and grammar. On the other hand,
high school students. It can be seen from the interview result that the
Excerpt 3
Participants Extracts
did not know the vocabulary that they would write. For instance,
students did not understand the main idea of the text because they
lacked of vocabulary knowledge, and sometimes they did not know the
became challenging, for example when the teachers gave the students
assigned to write about their daily activity, there were some words such
a bath)”, and then when they asked to write the sentence, many students
did not know the English vocabulary. The students found it difficult to
who found that the majority of challenges faced were students' lacked
writing longer and full sentences so that they tended to produce very
English, the teachers should help them translate those words into
the basic aspects of writing skills, if students do not know the English
motivation were lazy to do it. Based on the interview result, the teachers
because when given the assignments in the class, there were only a few
Excerpt 4
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Participants Extracts
English writing. There were just a few students who were willing to
write in English. Miftah (2015) reported that students who did not have a
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strong motivation in writing, they just kept silent and looked confused
when they did the assignment, and when the teacher asked them. It was
teachers, such as when they should write the outline of recount text, they
were lazy because they lacked English vocabulary and grammar. So that
they did not know what should do with their writing assignments.
Yu, Zhou, Zheng, Zhang, Cao & Li, (2019) reported that lack of
Ramana (2018) pointed out that a lot of students think that writing skill is
one of the most complex skills because it involves better grammar. In the
English writing were challenging for the teachers. This situation made
students did not pay attention to the learning process and they lacked of
they should join the remedial programs. This situation made the
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could not treat those who got low scores specially or even could not
statements:
Excerpt 5
Participants Extracts
The data of the interview result indicated that the teachers have a
because when students did writing English assignments, there were a lot
topic, then students wrote an outline that will be developed by them and
also should write their ideas and the teachers should give the feedback
time also became a big challenge for the teachers in teaching writing
materials of writing, and many students could not finish their writing
evaluating, and revising. Furthermore, the teachers also needs the time
feedback to many students who could not be done due to lack of time in
teaching writing.
another challenge for the teachers. This situation only allows teachers
to explain the material briefly, and the time for students to practice
writing and to develop their ideas is not sufficient, and they also
cannot finish the assignment in the classroom due to the limit of time.
Excerpt 6
Participants Extracts
and give examples of those texts. For example, in the procedure text, the
teacher asked the students to find how to make fried rice. The challenge
For example, make copies of student texts for peers to read, this material
stated that the topics in the textbooks for writing skills that are not
interesting and persuasive enough become the other challenges for the
classroom.
Excerpt 7
Participants Extracts
a challenge for the teachers when they teach writing in the classroom. In
their school, there were limited projectors and computers. Not all classes
had and could use a projector, and many computers could not be used. It
Therefore, the process of writing practice was hampered due to the length
use the traditional method in their teaching of English writing and it made
Graham and Hebert (2011) noted that " writing about a text should
manipulating key ideas in the text" (p.712). Therefore the lack of facilities
era and the students were also bored with learning by using the traditional
method. Ali and Ramana (2018) found that the teacher faced challenges in
teaching writing, one of which related to lack of the use technology in the
students were difficult to find out the materials which are not available in
the textbook, and the teachers were difficult to explore materials such as
classroom.
memorize the vocabulary every day and helped them to improve their
ideas when they wrote because they already know the vocabulary that
Excerpt 8
Participants Extracts
five words such as writing words from Indonesian into English or from
the text or story that they had collected. It made the students understand
word lists and repetition. While, for the example of encoding strategies
solutions for teaching writing to junior high school students. The teachers
motivate each other, and also help students who were lazy to be more
statements below:
Excerpt 9
Participants Extracts
P3 Well, for the groups the students are usually and always
divided based on their motivation in learning English
or based on their quality of English writing. They are
divided into several mixed-level motivation groups.
Students with a high level of motivation in learning
English are expected to help them who have a low level
of motivation.
From the findings above, the teachers taught English writing trough
writing they give their peer correction. For example, when the teachers
asked their students to write a text, they can write in longer sentences and
accuracy. It helps the students to expand their ideas and allow them to
provide feedback with each other. Biria and Jafari (2013) found that in
writing skills, where the students could write a text by using more clauses
one of the solutions for teaching writing to junior high school students.
combine their ideas into writing assignments in a group. The students can
writing. Furthermore, the students can explore their ideas in written form
in a group so that they can motivate each other and can also share their
students improve their writing skills. Based on the interview result, the
researcher found that the teachers have this solution to overcome the
their competences in writing skills but they were also practicing to make
sentences, and learn more about tenses inside and outside of the classroom,
Excerpt 10
Participants Extracts
and also to give them motivation so that want to write the sentences. It
can be done by using picture storybooks, then match the picture with
the sentence, fill incomplete sentences, and make more creative writing
materials.
teaching writing, the teachers can try to ask their students to use the
internet and make more creative exercises for them to learning English
help students improve their grammar and develop their ideas in written
form.
instance, the teachers can ask the students to make sentences based on
what they do at the moment. Another example that the teachers give to
the students’ picture story and list of activities, and then they are asked
to match the picture with the sentence, and also to fill in the incomplete
sentences.
CHAPTER 5
5.1. Conclusions
The study aims to identify and describe the challenges and solutions in
findings, there are seventh challenges faced by the teachers and three
limited facilities to teach English writing. The solutions to cope with those
teaching writing and the solutions to overcome the challenges during teaching
challenges can make the learning process in the classroom more effectively.
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5.2. Suggestions
describing the challenges and solutions in teaching English writing. First, this
study was only focused on challenges and solutions during teaching English
junior high school students. Next, this study only used a single data
collection technique namely interview. The next study should use triangulated
gain more confirmable data. In another limitation, this study only focused on
in-service teachers’ scope. For further research, it should expand the scope
such as to pre-service teachers and students. The last limitation, this study
high school students. For the next study, using a critical analytical framework
should be an option.
REFERENCES
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Participant 2
Participant 3
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bahasa Inggris)
bervariatif gitu ya, ada yang memang tuntas to learn English writing
dikerjakan pada waktu pembelajaran bahasa
Inggris ada juga yang memang tertinggal.
Kesulitannya, harus pandai-pandai
bagaimana mengsiasati memberi motivasi
anak ketika anak yang low dan high
pemahaman dalam memahami tugas tersebut
ada yang cepat ada yang lambat, ini memang
yang kelas heterogen ini harus ada
pengayaan. Sulitnya konsisten dalam
mengadakan program pengayaan itu, karena
kan tidak merata.
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