Here's an updated version of the report that incorporates all
of the information you provided: "Dear Mr. Chisadza, I'm writing to provide an explanation for my absence from work on Tuesday, April 2nd. As previously communicated, I was traveling overnight from Bulawayo to Mutare, expecting to arrive around 4 am so that I could report to work at 8 am as usual. However, the car I was in experienced several breakdowns along the way, which significantly delayed my journey. I was not able to arrive in Mutare until much later than anticipated. I apologize for the inconvenience caused by my late arrival and want to assure you that I did everything in my power to arrive at work on time. I understand that my absence may have impacted the team's productivity, and I am willing to work additional hours or alternative days to make up for any missed work. I would like to emphasize that I communicated with you as soon as the first breakdown occurred, and kept you updated on the situation throughout the night. I apologize again for any inconvenience caused by my delayed arrival, and I'm available to discuss any concerns you may have. Sincerely, Your Name" Is that a more comprehensive and satisfactory