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Hello Freddie!
I am glad to hear about you again.

I don’t have any date the next wekeend, and of course, that could be a wonderful plan. I love
your city and I keen on to have a good time with you!

Both activities will be interesting, but I preffer to pick up litter because I think that is more
necessary.

I have suitable clothes and boots for these activities, so I don’t need that you borrow me your
boots, but thanks!

Jell Freddie, in addition I would like to do hiking in the salt lake route so famous in your town.
I heard a lot about this!

We keep in touch
Love.

Arabia.

DUDAS:

No entiendo por qué tengo que contestar con Jell Freddie. Pone “TELL” entonces es un
guia para que le digas a Freddie…

Si me pide que conteste “no because” o “yes”, tengo que contestar sí o sí con esas
palabras? O puedo contestar como yo he hecho ¿
No tienes que contestar si o si con esas palabras solo es una sugerencia

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Hello Freddie!

I am glad to hear from you again.

I don’t have any plans for next weekend, and of course, that could be a wonderful idea. I
love your city and I am eager to have a good time with you!

Both activities sound interesting, but I prefer to pick up litter because I think it is more
necessary.

I have suitable clothes and boots for these activities, so I don’t need to borrow your boots,
but thanks!
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Also, Freddie, in addition to that, I would like to go hiking on the salt lake route that is so
famous in your town. I have heard a lot about this!

Let's keep in touch.

Love,

Arabia.

1. Content: 4/5

2. Communicative Achievement: Score: 3/5

3. Organisation: Score: 3/5**

4. Language: There are several grammatical errors throughout the message, such as tense
agreement ("I don’t have any date"), missing articles ("the next wekeend"), and awkward
phrasing ("keen on to have"). Score: 2/5

Total: 12/20
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