Name;______________________________________________

The Adventures of________________

List 3 adventures you will have with your creature.

1. 2. 3.

Lead: Tell what happened BEFORE the action: Who, What, Whe, Where, Why
Who? __________________________________________________________________________

What? __________________________________________________________________________

When?__________________________________________________________________________

Where?_________________________________________________________________________

Why? __________________________________________________________________________

How did you meet your creature?________________________________________________

What did you all say to each other? ______________________________________________________
 Example

The Adventures of________________

List 3 adventures you will have with your creature.

1. 2. 3. Beyonce
Castle Paris
Concert

Lead: Tell what happened BEFORE the action: Who, What, Whe, Where, Why
Who? My best friend Jenny and I

What? Driving in red convertible Mercedes

When? Sizzling hot day in July

Where? On the road to Miami, Florida

Why? Lat week before headed back to school to teach some wild children

How did you meet your creature? Heard a thump and a bump under the car
Pulled over, got out, and to our surprise we saw a creature that looked like a mixed between a
kitten and a butterfly.
What did you all say to each other? Jenny’s knees were shaking and her lips were quivering.. Kitfly
shouted, “No need to be afraid. I am just looking for some friends. Would you both like to join me on
some adventures?” Jenny and I looked at each other and yelled, “ Let’s do this!” and off we went.
 Name;______________________________________________

The Adventures of _________________________

Write your lead paragraph (who, what, when, where, how).
Use synonyms, adjectives, quotes, and show don’t tell phrases on GC.

Lead Paragraph

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 Name;______________________________________________

The Adventures of _________________________

Write a topic sentence for event/adventure #1.
Choose your own transition words.

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Write 3 detailed sentences about event/adventure #1.

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Additional transition words

Lead Event 1 Event 2 Event 4 Wrap Up

It all started To begin In The next In the end,

with, addition, day,
One hot To start, Later that Later on, As you can
summer day day, see,
One cold It all started, Soon after At (time of To
winter night that, day), conclude,
It was a…. Today Immediate Not long To sum it
ly after, after that, all up,
question In the That Yesterday, In
beginning, evening, conclusion,
onamonapia Once we At the The next
arrived same time, day,
quote All of a Much to my
sudden, surprise,
Sample topic Sentences
To begin with, Jenny, Kitfly and I decided to visit the most
incredible castle in Paris.

Kitfly, Jenny, and I decided to start our adventure by visiting

the most glorious castle in Paris.
To start our fabulous adventure, Jenny, Kitfly, and hopped on
our private jet and skedaddle off to a luxurious castle in Paris.
Expectations

What Must I have before a conference?

1. Include 3 Show don’t tells -underline them

2. Change out “boring” words for mini-thesaurus words

3. Use LOTS and LOTS of adjectives-describe EVERYTHING

4. Check for conventions: Capitals, punctuation, quotes

5. Use your BFF to check for basic sight words

 Name;______________________________________________

The Adventures of _________________________

Write a topic sentence for event/adventure #2.
Choose your own transition words.

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Write 3 detailed sentences about event/adventure #2.

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 Name;______________________________________________

The Adventures of _________________________

Write a topic sentence for event/adventure #3.
Choose your own transition words.

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Write 3 detailed sentences about event/adventure #3.

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 Name;______________________________________________

Closing Paragraph: restate your 3 adventures-closing sentence needed.

Don’t forget your transition word.

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Possible Adventures

Jungle Chattanooga WWII beach

Jo Anns Japan Argentina North

Fabrics America
Bahamas Hawaii Cloud Universal
Kingdom Studios
India Stone Submarine New York
Mountain
Vietnam France San Francisco Antarctica

Minnesota Moon Underwater Pouchie’s

habitat`
Saturn Fort Sumter Sun Rain forest

Mt Everest Glennwood Amazon Marquez

Mania
Possible Adventures

Walmart Publix zoo Aquarium

Backyard underground Marsh cave

rainbow river White house waterfall

Snow cave farm University of ocean

Georgia
Mercer Wheel House World Cup
Additional Word List

Verbs Common Adjectives other

Proper
encountered celery goopy Perspective

watch dinosaur dramatic travel

Mbappe JUSTICE journey

passport hairy tour

wallet sudden

Baseball
classic
Hall of fame
Additional Word List

Verbs Common Adjectives other

Proper
heard elephant

Naymar

MESSI

PELE
Sample Lead Paragraph
 Name;______________________________________________

The Adventures of _________________________

Write a topic sentence for event/adventure #2.
Choose your own transition words.

_______________, 2

Write 3 detailed sentences about event/adventure #2.

1.

2.

3.
Name;______________________________________________

The Adventures of _________________________

Write a topic sentence for event/adventure #3.
Choose your own transition words.

_______________,
2

Write 3 detailed sentences about event/adventure #3.

1.

2.

3.

Closing/wrap-up
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 Name;______________________________________________

The Adventure of _________________________

Write a topic sentence for each event/adventure.
Choose your own transition words.

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Write 3 detailed sentences about each event.

1. 1. 1.

2. 2. 2.

3. 3. 3.

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