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Laurie G. Kirszner
University of the Sciences, Emeritus
Stephen R. Mandell
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How to Use This Book
As writers, you already know that to express your ideas clearly, you need
to understand the basic principles of grammar, mechanics, and style. And,
as writers in the digital age, you also know that you need to use a variety
of electronic tools to compose and design documents and to navigate the
Internet and find information in the library. We wrote The Concise Cengage
Handbook with these needs in mind. The result is a book that you can
depend on to give you useful, no-nonsense, practical advice about writing.
Despite its compact size, The Concise Cengage Handbook is a complete
reference for the college writer. Not only does it explain and illustrate the
writing process, but it also offers guidance on grammar, style, punctua-
tion, and mechanics and includes extensive sections on research and MLA
and APA documentation styles. In addition, a unique section—Part 2,
“Composing in Various Genres”—includes chapters on writing essay exams,
writing in the workplace, designing effective documents, and composing in
digital environments.
We have worked hard to make The Concise Cengage Handbook inviting,
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marginal cross-references and navigational aids—throughout the text to help
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Throughout The Concise Cengage Handbook we have made every effort
to address the challenges that real writers face in the twenty-first century
and to provide you with clear explanations and sound advice. The result is a
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even with pleasure.
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Acknowledgments
We would like to take this opportunity to thank Anne Stameshkin for her
work on the new “Ten Habits of Successful Students” foldout and on the
documentation updates; Kelly Cannon, Muhlenberg College, for his research
advice; and Sherry Rankins-Robertson, University of Arkansas at Little Rock,
for her digital writing advice.
We would also like to thank the following reviewers for their advice,
which helped us develop the fifth edition:
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Ten Habits of Successful Students
College makes many demands on your time, and if you don’t take control of
your schedule, it will take control of you. If you are organized, you will be
better prepared to handle the pressures of a college workload.
For school,
Record . . .
• assignment due dates.
• your study schedule.
• study group meetings.
• exams conference
appointments.
Comfortable
f chair
e
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Figure 2 Sample study space.
Supplies
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3 Be sure you understand school and course requirements.
School Policies
Consult your school’s student handbook, which is likely available online. Be sure
to keep copies of any orientation materials you receive, and if you have questions,
ask a peer counselor or your advisor.
Course Policies
Requirements vary significantly from
course to course. Consult the course’s
syllabus to tell you when assignments
are due and exams are scheduled. Usu-
ally, it also explains your instructor’s
policies about attendance, lateness,
deadlines, plagiarism, and classroom
etiquette, as well as information on of-
fice hours and grading.
Participate.
✔ Take as many small classes as you can.
✔ Take classes that require writing (See Parts 1– 2).
✔ Do your homework and keep up with the reading.
✔ Attend classes regularly—and arrive on time.
✔ Listen attentively and take careful, complete notes.
✔ Engage in class discussions: ask and answer questions.
As successful students know, education is more than just attending classes. You
can take an active role in your education beyond the classroom.
At School . . .
✔ Take advantage of your instructors’ office hours. Make appointments, and
ask questions.
✔ Get to know your academic advisor, and share your interests and goals
with him or her.
✔ Keep up to date on your school’s news and activities. Read your school
newspaper. Open and read any relevant emails and newsletters. Check your
college’s website regularly.
✔ Participate in campus activities. This can enhance your education while
offering opportunities to make valuable connections and friendships.
Beyond School . . .
✔ Try to arrange an internship, a job that enables you to gain practical
experience. Many businesses, nonprofit organizations, and government
agencies offer internships—paid or unpaid—to qualified students (See
Chapter 10). Visit your school’s career services department to start explor-
ing options.
✔ Take service-
learning
courses, if they
are offered at
your school, or
volunteer at a
local school or
social agency.
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Even—and especially!—in the digital age, learning to use the library is an impor-
tant part of your education (See Chapters 42– 43).
A library provides . . .
● a quiet place to study, away
from family or roommates.
● access to materials that
cannot be found online: rare
books, special collections,
and audiovisual materials.
Lichtmeister/Shutterstock.com
● expert advice from refer-
ence librarians, who can
answer questions, guide
your research, and point out
sources you might never
have found on your own
(See Part 7). Figure 8 Students in the library.
Being tech-savvy is essential to success in college. You probably already have most
of the skills you need but if you don’t, it’s important to make an effort to become
fluent in the following:
✔ Composing in word-process-
ing programs such as Microsoft
Word or Google Drive
✔ Sending emails and attaching
files to them
✔ Using the Internet and evaluat-
ing websites (See Chapter 43)
✔ Using your library’s electronic
resources (See Chapter 42)
✔ Scanning and inserting docu-
ments that contain images as
well as text
✔ Using technology to enhance a
project—for example, learning
how to use PowerPoint or Key-
note for a presentation or Google
Sheets to make a table (See Chap-
ter 11)
✔ Syncing information among var-
ious devices (phone, computer,
tablet, etc.)
✔ Knowing when to use technology
—and when not to (See Chapters
11–12)
Classmates
Be sure you have the phone numbers
and email addresses of at least two stu-
dents in each of your classes. These will
come in handy if you miss class, need
help understanding notes, or want to
form a study group. Figure 11 Student talking with instructor.
Instructors
Develop a relationship with your instructors, particularly those in the areas of
study that interest you most.
10 Be a lifelong learner.
1
Approaching Texts
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Approaching Texts
P a r t
1
3–98
Approaching Texts
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C h a p t e r 1
Reading to Write
1a Previewing a Text
Before you begin reading a text, you should preview it—that is, skim it to get
a sense of the writer’s subject and emphasis.
When you preview a periodical article, skim the introductory and con-
cluding paragraphs for summaries of the writer’s main points. (Journal
articles in the sciences and social sciences often begin with summaries
called abstracts.) Thesis statements, topic sentences, repeated key terms,
transitional words and phrases, and transitional paragraphs can also help
you to identify the key points a writer is making. In addition, look for the
visual cues—such as headings and lists—that writers use to emphasize ideas. See
11b–c
When you preview a book, start by looking at its table of contents; then,
turn to its index. A quick glance at the index will reveal the amount of cov-
erage the book gives to subjects that may be important to you. As you leaf
through the chapters, look at pictures, graphs, or tables and the captions that
appear with them.
Checklist
Previewing a Text
When you preview a text, try to answer these questions:
❑ What is the text’s general subject?
❑ What are the writer’s key points?
continued
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4 1c Reading to Write
1b Highlighting a Text
When you have finished previewing a work, photocopy relevant sections of
books and articles, and print out useful material from online sources. Then,
highlight the pages, using a system of graphic symbols and underlining to
identify the writer’s key points and their relationships to one another.
Checklist
Using Highlighting Symbols
When you read a text, use strategies such as the following to help you understand
the material:
❑ Underline to indicate information you should read again.
❑ Box or circle key words or important phrases.
❑ Put question marks next to confusing passages, unclear points, or words you
need to look up.
❑ Draw lines or arrows to show connections between ideas.
❑ Number points that are discussed in sequence.
❑ Draw a vertical line in the margin to set off an important section.
❑ Star especially important ideas.
1c Annotating a Text
After you have read through your material once, read it again—this time,
more critically. At this stage, you should annotate the content, recording
your responses to what you read. This pro-
cess of recording notes in the margins or
Multilingual Tip
between the lines will help you to better
You may find it useful to use
understand the writer’s ideas and your own
your reactions to those ideas.
native language when you
annotate
a text. Some of your annotations may be rela-
tively straightforward. For example, you may
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Annotating a Text 1c 5
define new words, identify unfamiliar references, or jot down brief sum-
maries. Other annotations may reflect your personal reactions to the text.
For example, you may identify a parallel between an experience of your own
and one described in the text, or you may note your opinion of the writer’s
position.
See
As you start to think critically about a text, your annotations may iden- Ch. 6
tify points that confirm (or challenge) your own ideas, question the appro-
priateness or accuracy of the writer’s support, uncover the writer’s biases, or
even question (or dispute) the writer’s conclusion.
The following passage illustrates a student’s highlighting and annotations
of a passage from Michael Pollan’s book The Omnivore’s Dilemma.
6 * 1d this: American farmers were producing far too much corn. This was
Reading
particularly to in
true Write
the newly settled regions west of the Appalachians,
where fertile, virgin soils yielded one bumper crop after another. A
Examples mountain of surplus corn piled up in the Ohio River Valley. Much as
from con- today, the astounding productivity of American farmers proved to be
temporary their own worst enemy, as well as a threat to public health. For when
US farming?
yields rise, the market is flooded with grain, and its price collapses.
What happens next? The excess biomass works like a vacuum in reverse:
This is Sooner or later, clever marketers will figure out a way to induce the
his point human omnivore to consume the surfeit of cheap calories.
Exercise 1.1
Find an article that interests you in a newspaper or magazine (or online). Read
it carefully, highlighting it as you read. When you have finished, annotate the
article.
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Writing a Critical Response 1e 7
Link to
related
book
Links to
related
articles
Request
for email
comments
Link
Link to to FBI
related data
web page
Figure 1.1 Excerpt from “Do More Guns Mean Less Crime?” A Reason Online
Debate. Reprinted by permission of Reason.
You can also highlight and annotate web-based texts by using a pro-
gram such as Diigo, which makes it possible for you to highlight and write
self-stick notes on electronic documents.
Exercise 1.2
Find an essay online that interests you. Print the essay, and then high-
light and annotate it, paying special attention to the features discussed
in 1d.
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8 1e Reading to Write
response that summarizes, analyzes, and interprets the text’s key ideas and
perhaps evaluates them as well. It can also synthesize the ideas in the text
with ideas in other texts.
Checklist
Elements of a Critical Response
When you write a critical response, you may include some or all of the following
elements.
❑ Summary: What is the writer saying?
❑ Analysis: What elements is the text made up of?
❑ Interpretation: What does the text mean?
❑ Synthesis: How is the text like and unlike other texts? How are its ideas like and
unlike ideas in other texts?
❑ Evaluation: Is the text accurate and reliable? Do its ideas seem reasonable?
Checklist
Writing a Critical Response
As you first read a text, keep the following questions in mind:
❑ Does the text provide any information about the writer’s background? If so,
how does this information affect your reading of the text?
❑ What is the writer’s purpose? How can you tell?
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Understanding the Rhetorical Situation 2 9
❑ What audience is the text aimed at? How can you tell?
❑ What is the text’s most important idea? What support does the writer provide
for that idea?
Then, as you look more closely at the text, think about these questions:
❑ What information can you learn from the text’s introduction and conclusion?
❑ What information can you learn from the thesis statement and topic
sentences?
See
❑ Does the writer make any statements that suggest a particular bias?
6c
❑ How would you characterize the writer’s tone?
❑ Are there parallels between the writer’s experiences and your own?
❑ Where do you agree with the writer? Where do you disagree?
Exercise 1.3
Write two critical responses: one reacting to the newspaper article in
Exercise 1.1 and one reacting to the electronic text you worked with in Ex-
ercise 1.2. When you have finished, write a few sentences summarizing the
similarities and differences between the two articles.
C h a p t e r 2
Understanding the
Rhetorical Situation
Everyone who sets out to write confronts a series of choices. In the aca-
demic, professional, public, and private writing that you do in school, on the
job, and in your personal life, your understanding of the rhetorical situation
is essential—influencing the choices you make about content, emphasis,
organization, format, style, and tone.
Before you begin to write, you should try to answer the following ques-
tions:
● What is my rhetorical situation, or context for writing?
● What is my purpose for writing?
● Who is my audience?
● What genre should I use in this situation?
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10 2b purp ● Understanding the Rhetorical Situation
2 Writing to Inform
In news articles, writers report information, communicating factual details
to readers. In reference books, instruction manuals, and textbooks, as well
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Determining Your Purpose ● purp 2b 11
3 Writing to Persuade
In proposals and editorials, as well as in advertising and on political websites
and blogs, writers try to convince readers to accept their positions on vari-
ous issues.
America must make sure the melting pot continues to melt: immigrants
must become Americans. Seymour Martin Lipset, professor of political science
and sociology at the Hoover Institution, Stanford University, observes: “The
history of bilingual and bicultural societies that do not assimilate are histories
of turmoil, tension and tragedy. Canada, Belgium, Malaysia, Lebanon—all
face crises of national existence in which minorities press for autonomy, if
not independence. Pakistan and Cyprus have divided. Nigeria suppressed
an ethnic rebellion. France faces difficulties with its Basques, Bretons and
Corsicans.” (Richard D. Lamm, “English Comes First”)
4 Writing to Evaluate
In reviews of books, films, or performances and in reports, critiques, and
program evaluations, writers assess the validity, accuracy, and quality of
information, ideas, techniques, products, procedures, or services. Sometimes
they assess the relative merits of two or more things.
Review of A Dance with Dragons by George R. R. Martin. Random House, 2011. May 16, 2015.
I am a fan of the HBO series Game of Thrones, so I was looking forward to the release
of A Dance with Dragons, the fifth book in the series A Song of Ice and Fire. Although I found
the fourth book in the series slightly disappointing, A Dance with Dragons is a great read.
Westeros, the world created by George R. R. Martin, has a complex history that stretches
back thousands of years. The characters who inhabit Westeros are interesting and believable.
Their various motives, flaws, and morals drive their actions in compelling ways with surprising
and far-reaching consequences. It was easy to get lost in this faraway world and wrapped up
in its people and history. I’m looking forward to seeing how this latest volume comes to life on
the screen in Game of Thrones.
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12 2b purp ● Understanding the Rhetorical Situation
Your purpose for writing determines the material you choose and the way
you organize and express your ideas.
● A memoir might reflect on the negative aspects of summer camp, fo-
cusing on mosquitoes, poison ivy, homesickness, institutional food, and
so on.
● A magazine article about summer camps could inform, presenting facts
and statistics to show how camping has changed over the years.
● An advertising brochure designed to recruit potential campers could
persuade, enumerating the benefits of the camping experience.
● A nonprofit camping association’s website could evaluate various
camps, assessing facilities, costs, staff-to-camper ratios, and activities
in order to assist parents in choosing a camp.
Checklist
Determining Your Purpose
Before you begin to write, you need to determine why you are writing. Your purposes
can include any of the following:
❑ to reflect ❑ to draw comparisons ❑ to take a stand
❑ to inform ❑ to make an analogy ❑ to identify problems
❑ to persuade ❑ to define ❑ to suggest solutions
❑ to evaluate ❑ to criticize ❑ to identify causes
❑ to explain ❑ to motivate ❑ to predict effects
❑ to amuse or entertain ❑ to satirize ❑ to interpret
❑ to discover ❑ to speculate ❑ to instruct
❑ to analyze ❑ to warn ❑ to inspire
❑ to debunk ❑ to reassure
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Determining Your Purpose ● purp 2b 13
Exercise 2.1
The primary purpose of the following article from the New York Times is to
present information. Suppose you were using the information in an orien-
tation booklet aimed at students entering your school, and your purpose
was to persuade students of the importance of maintaining a good credit
rating. How would you change the original article to help you achieve
this purpose? Would you reorder any details? Would you add or delete
anything?
What Makes a Credit Score Rise or Fall?
By Jennifer Bayot
Your financial decisions can affect your credit score in surprising ways.
Two credit-scoring simulators can help consumers understand the potential
impact.
The Fair Isaac Corporation, which puts out the industry-standard FICO
scores, offers the myFICO simulator. A consumer with a score of 707 (consid-
ered good) and three credit cards would be likely to add or lose points from his
score by making various financial moves. Following are some examples:
• By making timely payments on all his accounts over the next month or by
paying off a third of the balance on his cards, he could add as many as
20 points.
• By failing to make this month’s payments on his loans, he could lose 75
to 125 points.
• By using all of the credit available on his three credit cards, he could lose
20 to 70 points.
• By getting a fourth card, depending on the status of his other debts, he
could add or lose up to 10 points.
• By consolidating his credit card debt into a new card, also depending on
other debts, he could add or lose 15 points.
The other simulator, the What-If, comes from CreditXpert, which designs
credit management tools and puts out its own, similar credit score. A con-
sumer with a score of 727 points (also considered good) would be likely to
have her score change in the following ways:
• Every time she simply applied for a loan, whether a credit card, home mort-
gage or auto loan, she would lose five points. (An active appetite for credit,
credit experts note, is considered a bad sign. For one thing, taking on new
loans may make borrowers less likely to repay their current debts.)
• By getting a mortgage, she would lose two points.
• By getting an auto loan or a new credit card (assuming that she already
has several cards) she would lose three points.
• If her new credit card had a credit limit of $20,000 or more, she would
lose four points, instead of three. (For every $10,000 added to the limit,
the score drops a point.)
• By simultaneously getting a new mortgage, auto loan and credit card, she
would lose seven or eight points.
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14 2c aud ● Understanding the Rhetorical Situation
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Identifying Your Audience ● aud 2c 15
When writing for your instructors, you need to demonstrate your knowl-
edge of the subject; instructors want to see whether you can express your
ideas clearly and accurately. They assign written work to encourage you to
think critically, so the way you organize and express your ideas can be as See Ch. 6
important as the ideas themselves.
Instructors expect accurate information, standard grammar and cor-
rect spelling, logically presented ideas, and a reasonable degree of stylistic
sophistication. They also expect you to define your terms and to support
your generalizations with specific examples. Finally, instructors expect
you to draw your own conclusions and to provide full and accurate See
documentation for ideas that are not your own. Chs.
47–48
If you are writing in an instructor’s academic field, you can omit long
overviews and basic definitions. Remember, however, that outside their
areas of expertise, most instructors are simply general readers. If you think
you may know more about a subject than
your instructor does, be sure to provide
background and to supply the definitions,
examples, and analogies that will make your Multilingual Tip
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ideas clear. Instructors are available outs
clas s dur ing offic e hou rs, which
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study—or disciplines—share certain values, syllabi. Keep in mind that
instruc-
instructors in different disciplines empha- are ava ilab le thro ugh out the semester
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size different aspects of writing. For exam- to help you succeed in you
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ple, they expect your writing to conform to first wee k of sch ool to introduce
during the
discipline-specific formats, conventions, and yourself and to explain wha
t you hope to
citation systems. Keep in mind that their re- can email them
learn in your courses. You
stop by during
quirements will often be different from those to set up appointments or
you will learn in your composition classes. office hours.
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16 2d plan ● Understanding the Rhetorical Situation
Checklist
Writing for an Academic Audience
Before you respond to an assignment in your college courses, you need to identify
the audience you are writing for. The following questions can help you understand
what your audience expects:
❑ What discipline are you writing for?
❑ What kinds of assignments are typical of this discipline?
❑ What expectations do instructors in this discipline have?
❑ What style considerations are important in this discipline?
❑ What writing conventions are used in this discipline?
❑ What formats are used in this discipline?
❑ What research sources are used in this discipline?
❑ What documentation style is used in this discipline?
Exercise 2.2
Look again at the article in Exercise 2.1 on page 13. This time, try to decide
what audience or audiences it seems to be aimed at. Then, consider what
(if anything) might have to be changed to address the needs of each of the
following audiences:
• College students
• Middle-school students
• The elderly
• People with limited English skills
• People who do not live in the United States
2d Selecting a Genre
In your college courses, you will compose many different kinds of texts—for
example, academic essays, book reviews, research reports, proposals, lab re-
ports, and case studies. These different types of texts—with their distinctive
characteristics and conventions—are referred to as genres. In simple terms, a
genre is a way of classifying a text according to its style, structure, and format.
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Understanding the Writing Process ● plan 3a 17
A writer’s choice of the genre, structure, and medium for writing is based
on the message he or she wants to send and the audience he or she intends to
reach. For example, if a writer seeks to inform an audience about an upcom-
ing sales event, an Instagram post might be appropriate for college students,
but a newspaper advertisement might be better for a more mature audience.
Most college writing assignments specify a particular genre. For example,
your composition instructor might ask you to write an essay about a personal
experience, to evaluate a novel or a film, or to take a position on an issue
that you feel strongly about. In these cases, your familiarity with the con-
ventions of the narrative essay, the book or film review, and argumentative
writing, respectively, would help you decide how to approach and develop
the assignment. (For detailed discussions of the genres most frequently used
in various disciplines, see Part 2.)
C h a p t e r 3
Planning
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Understanding Your Assignment ● plan 3c 19
to a digital drop box. Or, you may use discussion boards for attaching or
sharing your documents with other students. Chat room and Net meeting
software also allow you to discuss ideas collaboratively and to offer and re-
ceive feedback on drafts.
Although the specific tools you use may be course- or workplace-specific,
you will still have to develop an efficient writing process. Chapter 12
provides more comprehensive information on the options available to you
as you compose in digital environments.
Checklist
Understanding Your Assignment
To help you understand your assignment, consider the following questions:
❑ Has your instructor assigned a specific topic, or can you choose your own?
See
❑ Has your instructor indicated what genre you are to use?
2d
❑ What is the word or page limit?
❑ How much time do you have to complete your assignment?
❑ Will you get feedback from your instructor? Will you have an opportunity to
participate in peer review? See
5c2
❑ Does your assignment require research, and, if so, how many and what types of
sources should you use?
❑ What format (for example, MLA) are you supposed to follow? Do you know what See
its conventions are? Ch. 47
❑ If your assignment has been given to you in writing, have you read it carefully
and highlighted key words?
❑ Have you reviewed (and do you understand) your instructor's grading criteria?
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20 3d plan ● Planning
3d Finding a Topic
Sometimes your instructor will assign a specific topic, but most of the time
you will be given a general, structured assignment, which you will have to
narrow to a topic that suits your purpose and audience.
From Assignment to Topic
Course Assignment Topic
American History Analyze the effects of The effects of the GI
a social program on Bill of Rights on
one segment of American service-
American society women
Sociology Identify and evaluate The role of the
the success of one Salvation Army in
resource available meeting the needs
to the homeless of Chicago’s
population of one homeless
major American city
Psychology Write a three- to Animal-assisted
five-page essay therapy for severely
assessing one method depressed patients
of treating depression.
If your instructor permits you to do so, you can work with other stu-
dents to narrow your topic.
Rebecca had no trouble thinking of ways she used Wikipedia to find
general information, but she knew that the site was controversial in the
academic community because several of her instructors discouraged her
from using it as a research source. As she composed her essay, she knew she
would have to find a balance between the usefulness of Wikipedia on the
one hand and its lack of reliability on the other.
Because her assignment was so specific, Rebecca was easily able to restate
it in the form of a topic.
Topic: Wikipedia and college research
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Finding Something to Say ● plan 3e 21
Exercise 3.1
College campuses across the United States are working to achieve sustain-
ability, making an effort to be more sensitive to environmental concerns and
to become more “green.”
With this exercise, you will begin the process of writing a three- to five-
page essay in which you consider how your school is working toward this
goal, what more it needs to do in the future, and how your suggestions for
improvement will benefit your school.
Begin by looking up the word sustainability on the Internet. Think about
this issue as it applies to your school, and (with your instructor’s permission),
talk to your friends and classmates about it. When you think you understand
what is being done (and what is not being done) to make your campus more
“green,” list five specific environmental issues you could write about. Then,
choose one of these areas of concern as the topic for your essay, and write
a few sentences explaining why you selected this topic.
Your purpose in this essay will be to make recommendations for changes
that could be adopted at your school. Your audience will be your composi-
tion instructor, members of your peer review group, and, possibly, a wider
campus audience—for example, readers of your campus newspaper.
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22 3e plan ● Planning
2 Keeping a Journal
Many professional writers keep print or electronic journals (sometimes in
the form of blogs), writing in them regularly whether or not they have a
specific project in mind. Journals, unlike diaries, do more than simply re-
cord personal experiences and reactions. In a journal, you explore ideas, ask
questions, reflect on your thinking and the information you are processing,
and draw conclusions. You might, for example, analyze your position on a
political issue, try to solve an ethical problem, or trace the evolution of your
ideas about an academic assignment.
One of Rebecca’s journal entries appears below.
Journal Entry
I use Wikipedia all the time, whenever something comes up that I want
to know more about. Once my roommate and I were talking about graffiti
art, and I started wondering how and where it began. I went to Wikipedia
and found a long article about graffiti’s origins and development as an art
form. Some of my instructors say not to use Wikipedia as a research source,
so I try to avoid going to the site for essay assignments. Still, it can be really
helpful when I’m trying to find basic information. A lot of business and
financial terms come up in my accounting class, and I can usually find simple
explanations on Wikipedia of things I don’t understand.
3 Freewriting
When you freewrite, you write nonstop about anything that comes to
mind, moving as quickly as you can. Give yourself a set period of time—
say, five minutes—and don’t stop to worry about punctuation, spelling,
or grammar, or about where your freewriting takes you. This strategy
encourages your mind to make free associations; thus, it helps you to
discover ideas you probably aren’t even aware you have. When your time
is up, look over what you have written, and underline, circle, bracket,
star, boldface, or otherwise highlight the most promising ideas. You can
then use one or more of these ideas as the center of a focused freewriting
exercise.
When you do focused freewriting, you zero in on your topic. Here, too,
you write without stopping to reconsider or reread, so you have no time to
be self-conscious about style or form, to worry about the relevance of your
ideas, or to count how many words you have (and panic about how many
more you think you need). At its best, focused freewriting can suggest new
details, a new approach to your topic, or even a more interesting topic.
Excerpts from Rebecca’s freewriting and focused freewriting exercises
appear below.
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Finding Something to Say ● plan 3e 23
Freewriting (Excerpt)
I’m just going to list a bunch of things from my accounting class
notes that I’ve recently looked up in Wikipedia: shareholder, stakeholder,
strategic management, core competency, certified public accountant,
certified management accountant, financial accounting, profit and loss.
Not really sure which entry to focus on for this assignment. All the
entries have strengths and weaknesses. I guess that’s the point, but some
Wikipedia articles are better than others. Maybe I’ll choose an article that’s
sort of in the middle—one that provides some good basic info but could also
be improved in some ways.
4 Brainstorming
One of the most useful ways to collect ideas is by brainstorming (either on
your own or in a group). This strategy enables you to recall bits of infor-
mation and to see connections among them.
When you brainstorm, you list all the points you can think of that seem
pertinent to your topic, recording ideas—comments, questions, single
words, symbols, or diagrams—without considering their relevance or trying
to understand their significance.
Collaborative Brainstorming
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Availability of info
Financial accounting example
Finding Ideas
You can use the following computer strategies to help you find material to
write about:
● When you freewrite, try turning down the brightness of the monitor,
leaving the screen dark to eliminate distractions and encourage spon-
taneity. When you reread what you have written, you can boldface or
underline important ideas (or highlight them in color).
● When you brainstorm, type your notes randomly. Later, after you print
them out, you can add more notes and graphic elements (arrows,
circles, and so on) to indicate connections between ideas.
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And therefore, in a continuous series, there are no immediately
adjacent terms. Dr. Stout’s own illustration brings this out—
β α a b
M
In a diagram like the accompanying b and β are, he argues,
“mediately conjoined,” but a and α are “immediately co-adjacent.”
Surely Dr. Stout forgets here that what can be intelligibly called “co-
adjacent” are not lines but points or positions on the lines. And
between any point in α and any point in a there are a plurality of
intermediate positions, except for the special case of the extreme left
point of a and the extreme right point of α. These, of course,
coalesce in the single point M, and there is therefore no connection,
mediate or immediate, left in this case.[99] The illustration, I think,
may serve to reveal a serious discrepancy in Dr. Stout’s theory. He
sees that relations presuppose a unity which is supra-relational, and
which he calls “continuous,” on the ground of its supra-relational
character. At the same time, to save the relational scheme from
condemnation as leading to the endless regress, he has to turn this
supra-relational unity itself into a sort of relation by calling it an
immediate connection between adjacent terms, and thus ascribing to
it the fundamental character of a discontinuous series. And I cannot
help regarding this procedure as unconscious evidence to the truth
of the principle, that what is not the truth about the whole of Reality is
not ultimately the truth about any reality.
73. See the admirable account of the “natural conception” of the
world in the final chapter of Avenarius, Der Menschliche Weltbegriff.
74. May I say here once for all, that when I oppose practice to
intellectual speculation, I must be understood to mean by practice
the alteration by myself of some datum of given existence. The
activity of thought is thus for me not practical, precisely because the
“truths” which I know or contemplate are not quà truths given
existences operated upon and altered by the act of thinking.
75. Such a view of the mental life of the animal seems to have
been actually held, for instance, by the late Professor T. H. Green.
Yet see Green, Works, ii. 217.
76. Strictly speaking, the “solidity” or “impenetrability” of the
ultimate particles of matter, which is with Locke and Newton one of
the most prominent “primary” qualities, is not a “mathematical”
property, but it still owes its inclusion in the list to the conviction of
these philosophers that it is, like extension and form, fundamentally
important for mathematical Physics. The explanation of the
“secondary” qualities as subjective appears to go back to
Democritus.
77. See the further elaboration of this analogy in Bk. III. chap. 3, §
2 ff.
78. Professor Sidgwick’s defence of the Lockian view (Philosophy:
its Scope and Relations, p. 63 ff.) seems to me to ignore the point at
issue. namely, that in any sense in which “secondary” qualities get
their meaning from the content of sensation, primary qualities do the
same. The whole point is that the sensation is not merely (as
process) the occasion of our cognition of, e.g., hardness or softness,
but also (as content) furnishes the very meaning of “hard” or “soft.”
Cf. with what follows, Appearance and Reality, chap. 1.
79. The former alternative is that of scholasticism; in modern
science the latter has been more or less consciously adopted by
those thinkers who retain the notion of substances. The various
qualities are on this view consequences of the relations in which
each substance stands (a) to other interacting substances, and (b) in
particular to the unknown substratum of our “consciousness.”
80. See chaps. 1 and 2 of bk. i. of his Metaphysic.
81. The reader who desires to study Kant’s doctrine in detail may
begin by taking up Kant’s own Prolegomena to the Study of any
future Metaphysic, which may be profitably consulted even by those
who find the Critique of Pure Reason too diffuse and technical. The
latest and cheapest translation is that included in the Open Court
Publishing Co.’s series of Philosophical Classics.
82. “Arbitrarily” because it is, as all recent psychology insists, the
direction of our attention which determines what qualities shall be
presented together, and thus become “associated.”
83. In Psychology this comes out in the rejection by the best
recent writers of the whole associationist account of the process of
perception, according to which the perception of a thing as a whole
was taken to mean the actual presence in sensation of one of its
qualities plus the reinstatement by association of the “ideas” of the
others. For the modern doctrine of the perception of a whole, as
distinct from the mere perception of its constituent parts, consult
Stout, Analytic Psychology, bk. i. chap. 3, or Manual of Psychology,3
bk. i. chap. 3.
84. This is just as true of the so-called primary qualities of things
as of any others. Thus the mass and again the kinetic energy of a
conservative material system are properly names for the way in
which the system will behave under determinate conditions, not of
modes of behaviour which are necessarily actually exhibited
throughout its existence. The laws of motion, again, are statements
of the same hypothetical kind about the way in which, as we believe,
particles move if certain conditions are fulfilled. The doctrine
according to which all events in the physical world are actual
motions, rests on no more than a metaphysical blunder of a
peculiarly barbarous kind. Cf. Stallo, Concepts and Theories of
Modern Physics, chaps. 10-12.
85. Thus, e.g., so fundamental a proposition in our current
mechanical science as the “first law of motion” is avowedly a
statement as to what would be the behaviour of things under a
condition which, so far as we know, is never actually realised. On the
thing as the “law of its states,” see Lotze, Metaphysic, I. 3. 32 ff.
(Eng. trans., vol. i. p. 88 ff.), and L. T. Hobhouse, The Theory of
Knowledge, pp. 545-557.
86. Mr. Hobhouse (op. cit., p. 541 ff.) thinks that the solution is
simply that those qualities belong to one “substance,” which are
apprehended together as occupying one space. As a working
criterion of what we mean by one bodily thing, this account seems
satisfactory, and has probably suggested itself spontaneously to
most of us. But it leaves untouched the more fundamental question
how the identification of a certain sight-space with a certain touch-
space is effected, and what are the motives which lead to it. Mr.
Hobhouse is content to take the identification as “given in adult
perception,” but it seems to me to emerge from his own good
account of the matter that it is the still more primitive apprehension of
my own body as a felt unity upon which the synthesis between sight
and touch spaces is based. If so, the ultimate source of the “unity of
substance” must be sought deeper than Mr. Hobhouse is willing to
go for it. And quaere, whether his account, if accepted as ultimate,
would not lead to the identification of substance with space? For the
difficulties which arise when you say the substance is the space and
its filling of qualities, see Appearance and Reality, chap. 2, pp. 19,
20 (1st ed.).
87. Monadology, §§ 8-16, 57-62.
88. This is true even where we merely count a number of
qualitatively equivalent units in order to ascertain their sum. It is their
positive character of being qualitatively equivalent which makes it
permissible in this case to take any one of them indifferently as first,
any other as second, etc. Whenever you apply the numerical series
to the arrangement in order of the qualitatively dissimilar, the nature
of your material as related to the character of your special interest in
it decides for you what you shall call first, second, third, etc.
89. As to the possibility of relations which are in this sense
external to their terms, see B. Russell, The Philosophy of Leibniz, p.
130, and the articles by the same writer in Mind for January and July
1901.
90. See the elaborate discussion of the relational scheme implied
in any assertion of difference in Royce, The World and the Individual,
Second Series, lect 2.
91. Bradley, Appearance and Reality, chap. 3. Compare also
chap. 15, “Thought and Reality.”
92. The reader who desires further knowledge of the researches in
the theory of Numbers upon which Prof. Royce’s doctrine is based,
may profitably consult Dedekind, Was sind und was sollen die
Zahlen, and Couturat, L’Infini Mathématique.
93. Professor Royce’s own illustration of the map of England
executed upon a portion of the surface of the country is really a
typical instance of a self-contradictory purpose. He argues that such
a map, to be theoretically perfect, must contain a reduced facsimile
of itself as part of the country mapped, and this again another, and
so on indefinitely. But the whole force of the reasoning depends on
overlooking the distinction between the surface of England as it is
before the map is made, and the surface of England as altered by
the presence of the map. Prof. Royce assumes that you set out to
represent in the map a state of things which can in fact have no
existence until after the map is made. The previous existence of the
map at a certain spot is falsely taken to be one of the conditions to
which the map-maker is to conform in executing it. Every one of the
supposed “maps within the map” will thus involve distortion and
misrepresentation of the district it proposes to map. It is as if Hamlet
had chosen “Hamlet” as the subject of the “play within the play.” The
professor’s illustration thus does less than justice to his theory.
94. The fundamental defect in Professor Royce’s reasoning seems
to me to lie in the tacit transition from the notion of an infinite series
to that of an infinite completed sum. Thus he speaks of the series of
prime numbers as a “whole” being present at once to the mind of
God. But are the prime numbers, or any other infinite series, an
actual sum at all? They are surely not proved to be so by the
existence of general truths about any prime number.
95. See, e.g., Dedekind, op. cit., § 2: “It frequently happens that
different things a, b, c ... are apprehended upon whatsoever
occasion under a common point of view, mentally put together, and it
is then said that they form a system; the things a, b, c ... are named
the elements of the system”; and § 3 (definitions of whole and part).
96. Ante, Bk. II. chap. 2, § 5.
97. It is no answer to this view to urge that as soon as the intellect
undertakes to reflect upon and describe Reality it unavoidably does
so in relational terms. For it is our contention that the same intellect
which uses these relational methods sees why they are inadequate,
and to some extent at least how they are ultimately merged in a
higher type of experience. Thus the systematic use of the intellect in
Metaphysics itself leads to the conviction that the mere intellect is
not the whole of Reality. Or, in still more paradoxical language, the
highest truth for the mere intellect is the thought of Reality as an
ordered system. But all such order is based in the end on the
number-series with its category of whole and part, and cannot,
therefore, be a perfectly adequate representation of a supra-
relational Reality. Hence Truth, from its own nature, can never be
quite the same thing as Reality.
98. Or does Dr. Stout merely mean that there may be a hat and a
head, and also a relation of on and under (e.g., between the hat and
the peg), and yet my hat not be on my head? If this is his meaning, I
reply we have not really got the relation and its terms; if the hat is not
on the head, hat and head are not terms in the relation at all. I do not
see why, on his own principles, Dr. Stout should not add a fourth
factor to his analysis, namely, qualifiedness, or the fact that the
qualities are there, and so on indefinitely.
99. If you consider the lines a and α, as Dr. Stout prefers to do, I
should have thought two views possible. (a) There are not two lines
at all, but one, the “junction” at M being merely ideal. Then there
remains nothing to connect and there is no relation of “immediate
connection.” Or (b), the junction may be taken as real, and then you
have a perfectly ordinary case of relation, the terms being the
terminated lines a and α, and the relation being one of contact at M.
On every ground (a) seems to me the right view, but it is
incompatible with the reduction of continuity to “immediate
connection.” Thus the source of the difficulty is that (1) immediate
connection can only hold between the immediately successive terms
of a discontinuous series, and yet (2) cannot hold between them
precisely because they are discontinuous.
CHAPTER V