HOME LIVING CLUB

PART 4
Hi Jane,
How’s it going? I hope everything goes well with you.
I got the email from the manager of the home living club. This email asked me to
give idea for young families who want to buy home. I think they should
recommend palaces that is near good schools and parks. They should check the
safety and price of the neighborhood. My sugguestion is use to the website that
compares different options.
What do you think about it? Please reply soon.
Bests, Quan

Dear manager,
I hope this email finds you in good health.
Firstly, I would like to introduce myself. My name is Tran Pham Anh Quan and I
have been a member of home living club for three years. I am writing this email to
express my opinion concerning the recent the email that I have received from the
club.
According the email, the club asked me give ideas for the young families who want
to buy a house or a apartment. I am happy to share my opinion and sugguestions to
help young families.
I think we should creat a website for the club. On the website, we can post the
room pictures and furnitures, share informations, ect about the different types of
houses or apartments. This way, young families can learn about their options and
compare them easily.
Besides, it would be great if club organize a home tour for the young families.
They can visit home or apartment and see the view of the room, know a lot of
information about area to live. This can give them the better sence of the space, the
neighborhood, ect.
I hope you like opinion and my suggestions. Please let me know what you think
about it.
Regards,
Quan

I am writing this email to express my opinion concerning the recent the email that I
have received fron the club