SCREENPLAY

BABAD PASIR LUHUR

1ST DRAFT

WRITTEN BY
MUHAMMAD SULTAN ZIDAN
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FILM YANG DIIKLANKAN TELAH RATING R, DIBATASI, DIBAWAH 13 TAHUN

WAJIB DENDAMPINGI ORANG TUA ATAU WALI DEWASA

LOGO NAMA KELOMPOK + PRESENTS

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FADE IN. INT.HUTAN RIMBA. SIANG

‘MUSIK TEGANG DIPUTAR’

a Tim_Name Production

Directed by Muhammad Sultan Zidan

Kamandaka sedang dikejar oleh Raden Pulebahas dan 2 orang prajurit. Kamandaka dikejar
dan dilempari tombak, tetapi kamandaka berhasil menghindar. Kamandaka ngumpet
dibelakang pohon sambil menghadap kearah pengejar.

[Raden Pulebahas:]

“HUWHAHAHAHH, MAU LARI KEMANA LU ANJING?!”

Raden Pulebahas pun melempar senjata kearah kamandaka. Kamandaka langsung

memalingkan pandangannya, menghindari lemparan senjata dari lawan. Kamandaka
menghela nafas sebentar kemudian melanjutkan larinya.

[Raden Pulebahas:]

“Kejar! Jangan sampe lolos!”

Raden Pulebahas berhenti mengejar Kamandaka, kini Kamandaka melanjutkan larinya sambil
dikejar oleh 2 prajurit hingga ia sampai dijurang. Kamandaka melihat belakang, ternyata 2
prajurit itu kehilangan jejaknya, 2 prajurit tersebut mencari kamandaka secara pelan. Karena
ditempat kamandaka agak licin dan agak curang, kamandaka ga sengaja menjatuhkan
sebuah batu. Prajurit yang mendengarnya langsung mengengok kearah sumber suara,
kamandaka disini pasrah melihat kearah bawah dan menutup matanya.
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‘MUSIK TEGANG MASIH DILANJUTKAN’

Judul Film (Babad Pasir Luhur)

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FADE IN. INT. PENDOPO. MORNING

‘MUSIK TEGANG DIMATIKAN DAN MUSIK BEGINNER DIPUTAR’

Kamandaka sedang melihat pemandangan.

Beberapa saat kemudian adik dari Kamandaka yaitu Raden banyakngampar menghampiri
Kamandaka

[Raden Banyakngampar:]

“Perlu kutemani?”

[Kamandaka:]

”Perjalanan ini pasti lama. Aku ngga butuh adik yang dikit-
dikit merengek minta pulang”

[Raden Banyakngampar:]

“Hahaha, kamu masih ingat itu?”

Mereka berdua melihat pemandangan sebentar, Banyakngampar mundur dan berjalan

beberapa langkah menjauhi Kamandaka. Banyakngampar berhenti berjalan.

[Raden Banyakngampar:]

“Aku ngga tau wanita seperti apa yang kamu incar, tapi yang
jelas kalau kamu mengincar wanita seperti ibu, menyerahlah.”

Suasana sunyi, Kamandaka masih melihat pemandangan sekitar, Banyakngampar menjauhi

Kamandaka.
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WIPE. INT. JEMBATAN. SIANG HARI

‘TRAVELING MUSIC PLAYING’

Kamandaka melambaikan tangan kepada adiknya.

FOOTAGE LANGIT SPEED UP

Kamandaka berjalan di sawah, Kamandaka membeli barang dari pedagang, Kamandaka

mengumpulkan kayu bakar, Kamandaka mancing, Kamandaka menelusuri sungai

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WIPE. INT. Pasir Luhur/Kamar Dewi Ciptarasa. SIANG HARI

‘TRAVELING MUSIC STOP’

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‘NONE DIAGETIC MUSIC CONTINES’

‘Are these hallucinations, or is this reality?’

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DISSOLVE. INT. SIENNA/SAFFY’S LIVING ROOM. DAYTIME

‘NONE-DIAGETIC MUSIC CONTINUES’

[SAFFRON CONWAY:]

“SIENNA YOU’RE NOT BEING STALKED, YOU KNOW THIS IS ALL IN YOUR
HEAD”

[SIENNA DELANEY:]

“SAFFY PLEASE LISTEN TO ME, SOMEONE OUT THERE IS ON A MISSION

TO MESS WITH ME”

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 SLOW MOTION. INT. SIENNA’S KITCHEN. EVENING

‘NONE DIAGETIC MUSIC CHANGES’

Balloons with faces drawn on them fall from above and surround Sienna, the camera pans to
Sienna’s face and reveals her looking shocked and confused

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CUTAWAY. EXT. LOCAL FIELD. EVENING

‘NONE DIAGETIC MUSIC SPEEDS UP’

Fireworks are going off

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CUTAWAY. EXT. LOCAL FIELD. EVENING

‘NONE DIAGETIC MUSIC CONINUES’

A bonfire is burning with a Guy Fawkes model on top.

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CUTAWAY. EXT. SIENNAS HOUSE. EVENING

Sienna throws a glass of wine against the wall

[SIENNA DELANEY:]

“LEAVE ME ALONE”

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WIPE. EXT. SIENNA’S GARDEN. EVENING

A letter about how to live with schizophrenia gets set alight and begins to burn

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 FADE IN. INT. SIENNA’S KITCHEN. DAYTIME

Sienna throws things off a table in fury and anger

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DISSOLVE. EXT.IN THE STREET. EVENING

Sienna is standing outside in the rain crying

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FADE IN. INT.SIENNA’S HOUSE. EVENING

Sienna slides down a wall with a glass of wine in her hand

[SIENNA DELANEY:]

“WHAT DO YOU WANT WITH ME”

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WIPE. EXT. SIENNA’S GARDEN. EVENING

Sienna smoking

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CUTAWAY. INT. SIENNA’S KITCHEN. EVENING

Sienna is knocking back vodka shots

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WIPE. ON SCREEN TEXT

‘UNBALANCED’

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 DISSOLVE. EXT. SIENNA’S GARDEN. EVENING

The room is pitch black and Sienna lights her lighter and the face of the masked stalker
appears behind her and then she looks into the camera and blows it out

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WIPE. ON SCREEN TEXT

‘COMING SOON’

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WIPE. ON SCREEN TEXT

‘CAST NAMES’

‘DIRECTED BY’

‘2015’ ‘LOGO’

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WIPE. ON SCREEN TEXT

‘SLOGAN’

‘UNBALANCEDFILM.COM’

‘#RESTORETHEBALANCE’

This screenplay may be subject to alterations as I film and

develop my narrative. I will be sure to include these changes
in my 2nd screenplay draft.