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Example Analysis Exercise
Example Analysis Exercise
Example Analysis Exercise
Step 1
Read the example essay
o Paste the PT into the box below
Decide which of the AOK example paragraphs needs the most improvement
o Paste the paragraph into the box below
From the paragraph, choose 5 sentences that you feel need the most improvement
o Do not choose the opening or closing sentences of the paragraph
o Highlight the 5 sentences
Prescribed Title
Sentence 1
How does this sentence
relate to the thesis
sentence?
What are the transition
words that connect this
sentence to the previous
sentence?
Why does this sentence
follow the one before it
in terms of content?
What is the function of
this sentence within this
paragraph?
Why is this sentence
necessary to this
paragraph?
Sentence 2
How does this sentence
relate to the thesis
sentence?
What are the transition
words that connect this
sentence to the previous
sentence?
Why does this sentence
follow the one before it
in terms of content?
What is the function of
this sentence within this
paragraph?
Why is this sentence
necessary to this
paragraph?