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P1 MS 4RP AFP tcm142 665765 PDF
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P1 MS 4RP AFP tcm142 665765 PDF
Stage 4
3124_01_MS_4RP
© UCLES 2023
S4/01 English Stage 4 Paper 1 Mark Scheme From 2023
• exotic
• also
• (You can imagine how) well-organised (the city government had to be…)
• however
5(b) Award 1 mark for: 1
• artisans
5(d) Award 1 mark for: 1
• pottery
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S4/01 English Stage 4 Paper 1 Mark Scheme From 2023
• Farmer because they could sell their fruits and vegetables at the market
• Craftsman because they spend their days creating beautiful things like
mosaics
7 similarities and 4
differences between
Paragraph 1
ancient Greece and the
modern world
typical occupations in
Paragraph 5
ancient Greece
• so
• societies
• sold
• some
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S4/01 English Stage 4 Paper 1 Mark Scheme From 2023
• several
• plenty (of)
• loads (of)
• all.
10(b) Award 1 mark for: 1
• scorching hot.
Yes
• He makes the writer use his imagination to help him understand history.
• He teaches him more about how the ancient Greeks lived.
• He made his son like history / got his son interested in history.
• He takes him on holiday.
No
• He made his son walk around in very hot weather.
• because before this trip the writer did not enjoy history lessons and Mrs G /
his teacher probably knows this.
• Dad’s been dragging me round historical sites for days now so it’s time for a
bit of a break.
• (I mean) history’s great, but enough’s enough!
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S4/01 English Stage 4 Paper 1 Mark Scheme From 2023
14 Award 1 mark for one of the following reasons and a corresponding piece of 2
evidence from the text up to a maximum of 2 marks:
The Acropolis:
• Reason – it helps you get a better understanding of what life was like in
Ancient Greece
• Evidence from text – ‘a complex of the ruins of several buildings from the
time of the ancient Greeks’
Santorini:
• Reason – it’s a lot more fun than looking at historical sites
• Evidence from text – ‘I can’t wait to see it and do some water sports’
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S4/01 English Stage 4 Paper 1 Mark Scheme From 2023
Section B: Writing
Notes to markers
Marks
[Total 25]
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S4/01 English Stage 4 Paper 1 Mark Scheme From 2023
Creation of texts (Wc) Vocabulary and language Structure of texts (Ws) Grammar and punctuation Word structure (Ww)
(Wv) (Wg) (spelling)
[5 marks] [3 marks] [7 marks] [7 marks] [3 marks]
A relevant response with Paragraphs and sections are Grammar:
well-chosen ideas and used consistently to Uses an increasing range of
content. Some ideas and organise ideas. sentence types accurately.
material are developed in
detail. Chronological or logical links Use of expanded phrases to
between paragraphs help develop ideas. For example:
Main features of the text the development of ideas. • noun, adverbial, adjectival,
type are evident. and verb phrases
Cohesion between • a range of connectives.
A straightforward viewpoint paragraphs is achieved
which is generally consistent using devices such as Past, present and future
verb forms are accurate.
and appropriate which connectives to establish
shows an awareness of the links.
Punctuation is used
audience.
consistently and accurately
• to demarcate sentences.
• Direct speech punctuation
includes other punctuation
alongside speech marks.
(Errors may occur where
structures are ambitious.)
• Commas are always used
in lists and often to clarify
meaning in sentences.
• Apostrophes correct for
possession (sing./plural)
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S4/01 English Stage 4 Paper 1 Mark Scheme From 2023
Creation of texts (Wc) Vocabulary and language Structure of texts (Ws) Grammar and punctuation Word structure (Ww)
(Wv) (Wg) (spelling)
A relevant response that Specialised vocabulary is Structure is clear using Grammar: Spelling of words with
elaborates on basic used that is suitable for the paragraphs /sections with • Grammatically correct common letter strings, but
information with some text type. good attempts to organise multi-clause sentences different pronunciations is
development of essential the content. using a range of correct, e.g., through, tough
detail. Good attempts to use connectives.
synonyms for overused Ideas set out in a logical Spelling of a range of
• Sentence openings are
Writing for a given purpose sequence, making common prefixes and
words. varied, using language of
is clear with main features of relationships between them suffixes is correct.
time, place and manner.
the text type clearly evident. clear. • Subject and verb usually Spelling of common
agree. homophones is correct
Use of content and language Links between paragraphs/ • Past and present tense of within their grammatical
in writing shows awareness sections to help the
regular and common purpose, e.g., they’re, their,
of audience. development of ideas are
irregular verbs are used there.
evident but may not be
consistent. accurately and consistently
throughout the text. Some correct spelling of
long and short vowel
Organisational devices may phonemes.
be evident such as bullets, Punctuation:
numbered lists. • Full stops, question marks
and exclamation marks are Spelling of plurals is usually
correct, e.g. -s, -es,-y/ies,
used correctly.
and -f/ves.
• Apostrophes of omission
are correct.
• Correct use of speech
marks around words
spoken.
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S4/01 English Stage 4 Paper 1 Mark Scheme From 2023
Creation of texts (Wc) Vocabulary and language Structure of texts (Ws) Grammar and punctuation Word structure (Ww)
(Wv) (Wg) (spelling)
The response includes some Accurate use of vocabulary Paragraphs / sections are Grammar: Spelling of common
attempt to elaborate on includes a variety of generally used to help • A mix of simple and inflections is usually
basic information. appropriate choices to organise and sequence compound sentences accurate, e.g. –ing, –ed,
convey meaning that is ideas. with some variation in
Some general elements of consistent and effective for sentence openings. Spelling of common regular
the text type are evident. the text type. Some attempt to sequence and exception words,
• Successful attempts at
including polysyllabic and
relevant ideas/sections compound sentences
The writer’s attitude to the Choice of words and compound words, is
logically. use simple connectives
subject may be conveyed phrases strengthen the generally accurate.
impact of writing. to join clauses, e.g., and,
but shows a limited
Within paragraphs / sections but.
awareness of the reader.
there are some links • Subject and verb
between sentences. agreement and tenses
often agree.
Punctuation:
• Demarcation of
straightforward
sentences is usually
correct.
• Note: if punctuation is
totally lacking and other
descriptors met, then
give the lower mark here.
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S4/01 English Stage 4 Paper 1 Mark Scheme From 2023
Creation of texts (Wc) Vocabulary and language Structure of texts (Ws) Grammar and punctuation Word structure (Ww)
(Wv) (Wg) (spelling)
Relevant material although Some attempt to expand the Ideas are in sections with an Some simple sentence All simple high frequency
some basic information may general vocabulary to match attempt to group related structures are used words are spelt correctly,
be inaccurate. the task with some word points together. successfully. e.g., that, she, put.
choices to create interest
Some elements of the text including some adventurous Some correct use of Spelling of high frequency
type can be seen. (A choices. punctuation, such as full words is generally correct,
maximum of 1 mark can be stops and capital letters. e.g., their/there, when, were,
awarded if not the given text what, some etc.
Vocabulary is simple and
type.) matched to the text type. Note: do not discriminate if
learners write with good There may be some
English but there are successful attempts to
punctuation errors. If phonetically spell
ambitious structures are polysyllabic and compound
used, begin marking at 2–3 words.
marks, provided there is
variation in sentence
openings.
Creation of texts (Wc) Vocabulary and language Structure of texts (Ws) Grammar and punctuation Word structure (Ww)
(Wv) (Wg) (spelling)
No creditable response No creditable response No creditable response No creditable response No creditable response
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