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Paulina Gicqueau
Allison Bocchino
Writing 2
10 June 2024
As the Beatles once said, “All you need is love!” Right? Love is an emotion present in
every person’s life. However, this seemingly universal statement gets approached from varying
angles by different academic disciplines. Two scholars within the psychological discipline, David
M. Buss and Davis P. Schmitt, investigated how males and females mate within their article
“Sexual Strategies Theory: An Evolutionary Perspective on Human Mating.” They delineate the
differences between each gender’s short term and long term mating rituals whilst highlighting the
obstacles they confront along the way. On the other side of the academic spectrum, an English
researcher named Andrea Kaston Tange approaches the same subject by dissecting the Victorian
love poetry of philosopher and writer Constance Naden within "Constance Naden and the Erotics
of Evolution: Mating the Woman of Letters with the Man of Science.” In the late
eighteen-hundreds, the young female intellectual Constance Naden began testing the boundaries
of the roles a woman could play in science and love through her poetry, influenced by the rise of
Darwin’s evolutionary theory. Examining the same concept through different genre lenses
highlights the different goals and approaches each genre possesses in comprehending the human
world around them by defining the roles and characteristics of groups all while separating them
from one another. On the other hand, the analysis of an English researcher seeks to break down
the boundaries that box people’s lives in. The juxtaposition between the two scholarly fields
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becomes prominent when comparing their compositions, particularly via the overall structure of
their scholarly articles, the complexity of the language utilized, and the wielding of evidence to
Both disciplines aim to reflect the outcome of their research through the organization of
their papers. The structure of the psychological peer-reviewed article mirrors the strict
data-driven point of view that psychologists embrace in regards to love. The authors built the text
to include short digestible paragraphs, section titles, and subsection headers. Each new aspect of
the relationships between heterosexual couples receives an indented section, making them simple
to locate. The authors clearly define these sections as exemplified by the title “Problems Men
Must Solve When Pursuing a Long-Term Mating Strategy” which is followed by multiple
distinct subsections such as “Problem of Female Reproductive Value.”1 Their subject lines
employ clear entry-level language, reflecting the ease of reading that comes with the
organization of their paper. The overall sense of order that they infuse into this layout
foreshadows the tone of the content. Their conclusions intend to create structure in the world by
explaining love as something that places barriers between men and women. In opposition,
Tange’s work veers in the opposite direction. While each page does include different paragraphs,
that is the extent to which the paper is organized. She only includes one pagebreak to
differentiate between the introduction and the rest of the work, which can be viewed on the fifth
page. The distinction between psychology’s methodical layout and English's freeform writing
indicates the open-mindedness of the latter discipline toward structure and content. Since
structure is one of the first aspects noticed, both fields of research set their papers’ tone through
the organization of their articles. While the psychologists lean further into the rigidity of their
1
David M. Buss and David P. Schmitt, “Sexual Strategies Theory: An Evolutionary Perspective
on Human Mating,” Psychological Review 100, no. 2 (04, 1993), 216.
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quantitatively driven outcomes, evinced through clear-cut sections and headers, English
researchers support their open-ended interpretations by refusing to confine their ideas to rigid
segments.
Whether achieved subliminally or not, the wording style employed by researchers within
their scholarly articles not only affects the reception of the content but also exemplifies the
objective they aim to disseminate. Typically, professionals completing research within the
science, technology, or mathematics fields present their results with complex jargon and
convoluted conclusions. Therefore, those outside the group frequently do not possess the
technical skills necessary to process the subject matter. However, Buss and Schmitt aim to
disperse their findings to the general public through comprehensible diction. For example, they
state, “The sex difference, however, is consistent across all 37 societies, and in no society do men
prefer older women on average nor do they mate with older women on average” in response to
relationships.2 This example reflects the legibility of the writing amongst the whole text:
while maintaining clear-cut, sterile language. Just as their paper’s organized structure reflects
their dispassionate tone, so do their words. On the contrary, Tange’s analysis of Naden’s poetry,
while conserving the readability of the information, assumes passionate diction. She summarizes,
“Naden is a writer and, by implication, posits a reader whose facility with both science and
poetics will indeed be an evolutionary step toward respecting women’s intellect.” 3 Traditionally,
the discipline of English studies the formation of the language through writing and reading. In
2
Buss and Schmitt, “Sexual Strategies Theory: An Evolutionary Perspective on Human Mating,”
218.
3
Andrea Kaston Tange, “Constance Naden and the Erotics of Evolution: Mating the Woman of
Letters with the Man of Science,” Nineteenth-Century Literature 61, no. 2 (2006), 214.
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that same vein, this quotation presents an emphasis on phrasing and diction, mirroring the
importance of impassioned language; Tange urges the language itself to be pondered and
questioned. The juxtaposition between the choice of wording within psychology and English
unveils the diverse objectives within their respective explorations of romantic relationships. Both
fields edit their phrasing to match the goals within their work. Psychology scholars narrow the
outpouring of emotion within their paragraphs to match the narrow-minded interpretations their
research presents. Such conclusions lead to limits being placed on groups, diminishing their
defined opportunities and capabilities. However, an English scholar edits their content to
correspond with their pondering of abstract themes and emotional implications; these actions
After the researchers ascertain the tone of their papers through their organization and
verbiage, they must decide on the methods with which they present their evidence. In accordance
with the standard in scientific research, Buss and Schmitt approach their examination of love
with quantitative tools. The outcomes of the studies are presented with explicit numerical results:
“The sex differences are highly significant (p < .001) at each time period less than 5 years (7 =
0.46 to 1.21, mean 7 = 1.00).” 4 Using statistical inferences, the authors appeal to logic and
numbers, further solidifying their claims in the minds of those examining them. Oftentimes, the
authors partner these quantitative values with a visual representation. They employ a wide array
of graphs and charts since many people fail to locate trends between digits on a page.
4
Buss and Schmitt, “Sexual Strategies Theory: An Evolutionary Perspective on Human Mating,”
212.
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While these numbers and graphical representations assist the scientists in explaining the
phenomena around them, their very nature is finite. By utilizing them, they place limits on the
subjects they describe, setting strict boundaries for what applies to one group and what applies to
another. As a result, a gap widens between the two—between the capacities and characteristics of
men and women engaging in romance. Tange, the English scholar, addresses the same topic by
drawing on opinions from critics within the field and from the wording of the poet. In Naden’s
poem titled “Scientific Wooing” Tange analyzes certain lines, explaining, “While he seems to
think that Q.E.D. lends gravity to the demonstration of a maiden’s acceptance of a marriage
proposal, the phrase’s rhyme with “random” undermines the young man’s “rigorous Logic” by
implying that there is no real proof accomplished.” 5 She begins by presenting and refuting the
conclusion of another scholar, arguing the validity of her understanding of the text. She supports
her statements with quotations and explications of the poem’s subtext. Ultimately, her
conclusions surrounding these Victorian love poems hinge on her interpretations, provided she
presents relevant textual evidence. In this regard, research within the English discipline leaves
space for the reader to weigh the reasoning of the author against their own, just as Tange did with
her peers’ deductions. The ideas Tange introduces are not set in stone. Instead they attempt to
circumvent the rigidity of other disciplines by inviting revisions. This allows for looser
5
Tange, “Erotics of Evolution,” 217.
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conclusions that do not place confines on human behavior. Psychological researchers define
distinctions amongst groups while English researchers seek to dismantle the confines which can
Even one of the most fundamental concepts within the human experience—love—which
is shared and experienced by all, can call attention to the discrepancies between disciplines.
examinations of romance with a strict paper layout, clear-cut phrases, and quantitative numbers
and diagrams. Conversely, academic disciplines within the humanities, for example English,
emphasize the dissection of overarching themes and historical context to provide a loosely
structured paper filled with emotive language and room for personal interpretations of evidence.
These opposing methodologies lead to varying goals within each field. Psychologists aim to gain
societal insight by delineating the functions and traits of various groups, simultaneously dividing
them from each other. On the other hand, an English researcher aims to dismantle the confines
that constrain people's experiences by focusing their lens on broader structures and themes.
These facts are crucial to consider when participating in either of these discourse communities as
the particular aims of each sphere will analyze the same content in contrasting manners. The data
and conclusions collected from a scientific paper in comparison to a humanities paper will
greatly differ. Would scholarly research benefit from all disciplines approaching the same topic
with the same techniques, allowing for easy comparisons and takeaways? Or do these
discrepancies enrich research by providing each field with diversity and idiosyncrasies?
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Bibliography
Buss, David M. and David P. Schmitt. "Sexual Strategies Theory: An Evolutionary Perspective
on Human Mating." Psychological Review 100, no. 2 (04, 1993): 204-232.
https://doi.org/10.1037/0033-295X.100.2.204.
Kaston Tange, Andrea. “Constance Naden and the Erotics of Evolution: Mating the Woman of
Letters with the Man of Science.” Nineteenth-Century Literature 61, no. 2 (2006):
200–240. https://doi.org/10.1525/ncl.2006.61.2.200.