Class code: AV4_100

Student’s name: Lê Quỳnh Nhi

Peer editor’s name: Nguyễn Thành Nhân
Date: 12/11/2023

WRITING ASSIGNMENT – LESSON 7

Unit:
Topic:

1. In the last decade, there has been a great increase in the number and variety of online
courses available to university students. What are the advantages and disadvantages
of studying an online course?
2. People in many countries are spending less time with their family. What are the
reasons and effects of this?

 1st draft

1. Introductory paragraph:
In recent years, there has been a significant rise in the availability of online courses for
university students. In my personal opinion, studying an online course has both benefits
and drawbacks.
Concluding paragraph:
In conclusion, I believe that online classes are preferable only for adults or students who
want to add knowledge recommended for students who start from scratch.
2. Introductory paragraph:
In today's world, most families around the world are too busy earning extra money, which
in turn, they cannot devote their time to their loved ones. This essay will discuss the
reasons for this trend and its associated effects.
Concluding paragraph:
In conclusion, busy work and living far away from family can cause some issues like the
unhealthy relationships between children and parents or some illnesses related to mental
health.

 Self-assessment (checklist):
Word count: 135 words
  Peer assessment (checklist):
Content Y/N Comments/ Suggestions
Sentences

Does the writer use punctuation correctly? Y

Are there any spelling errors? N

Does the writer check the verb tenses? Y

Do the subjects and verbs agree? Y

Does the writer use the provided useful structures? Y

Introduction and conclusion

Does the topic sentence paraphrase the task
Y
question?
Does the thesis statement briefly outline what is going
Y
to be discussed?
Does the conclusion summarize the main ideas (and
Y
give the writer’s opinion if possible)?

 Final version

1. Introductory paragraph:
In recent years, there has been a significant rise in the availability of online courses for
university students. In my opinion, studying an online course has both benefits and
drawbacks.
Concluding paragraph:
In conclusion, I believe that online classes are preferable only for adults or students who
want to add knowledge recommended for students who start from scratch.
2. Introductory paragraph:
In today's world, most families around the world are too busy earning extra money, which
in turn, they cannot devote their time to their loved ones. This essay will discuss the
reasons for this trend and its associated effects.
Concluding paragraph:
In conclusion, busy work and living far away from family can cause some issues like the
unhealthy relationships between children and parents or some illnesses related to mental
health.

 Rubric for grading

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