Name: María Erales Treviño Date: Thursday, October 29, 2020

Assignment: Revising Your Rough Draft Title: In my head

I was born in San Diego California, but I have lived all my life in Tijuana, Baja California,
Mexico. Since I live next to the border, many of the US customs have been something normal to
celebrate, except Halloween, my parents don’t even let me trick or treat with my friends. In a few
days, I’m going to have a Halloween party, a costume party, it took me more than two weeks to
have their permission.
I have always been good at sports, it has been part of my life, it has influenced and changed me.
When I was young, I wanted to become a professional soccer player, after some time it started to
bore me and it stopped captivating my attention. Sometime after, I realized that I loved cooking,
my cousin had influenced me, she studied gastronomy and she had agreed to teach me, and later
realized that I wanted to be a chef. I still like soccer and cooking, but I had a lot of time in my
hands these days doe to quarantine, and found that my new favorite hobby photography, my big
sister had agreed to be my model, and helped me get better at it.