WRITING

REGULAR: FIRST DRAFT ASSESSMENT

ALL LEVELS
INTENSIVE W. 1 - 2

FULL NAME: Montenegro Quiroz Andrea S

COURSE:
ADV 04
(PRINT)
LAST NAMES FIRST NAME M.I. 8:00
TIME:
TEACHER’S JEAN ESPINOZA 08-13-2023
ROOM: DATE:
NAME:

I. PRE-WRITING

1. Waiting can be a sign of compassion

2. Ending a relationship in any situation is not an easy thing to do
3. Prolonging the breakup can also mean giving hope and confusing feelings
4. False hope
5. Seeing how the relationship is doing and what decision to make based on that.
6. Avoiding further emotional damage

II. WRITING:
Overleaf, write your paragraph, letter or essay using the ideas you brainstormed above.

Cont. / 6 Org. / 6 Gram. / 5 Vocab. / 5 Mech. / 3 Total: 25

Basic &
Intermediate

Cont. / 20 Org. / 10 Gram-Voc. / 10 Eff. on Read. / 5 Mech. / 5 Total: 25

Advanced
 REGULAR: FIRST WRITING
ASSESSMENT
DRAFT ALL LEVELS

INTENSIVE W. 1 - 2

Breaking up with someone is never an easy decision, and the timing of the breakup can make a big difference in
the emotional well-being of both parties. The debate over whether it is preferable to end a relationship during a
difficult period or to wait until things are better is a difficult one. However, while there is no right answer, it is
important to go through this situation with empathy and consideration for the other person's emotional state.

On the one side, it is said that it is better to wait until the person is in a better emotional and mental situation
because it is more compassionate. Passing through a difficult time, such as coping with a loss or personal crisis,
can make one vulnerable and emotionally fragile. A breakup during such a period may make it difficult to deal
with the breakup situation. By choosing to wait, people show understanding and respect for their partner's
problems, giving them the space and time to recover before facing the challenges of a breakup.

In contrast, another point of view says that it is essential to be honest and frank about one's feelings, even in
difficult times. Waiting may seem considerate, but it can confuse things and show attachment when there is no
longer any. Postponing a breakup can create false hopes of reconciliation and prevent both people from moving
forward with their feelings.

In conclusion, the question of should you break up with someone during a difficult period or wait for things to
get better has several aspects. Both perspectives have valid points, but the circumstances of the relationship must
be clearly recognized. Honesty and empathy are essential components of any breakup, and finding the right
balance between these factors can help both people get through the separation and not hurt each other so much
emotionally. Whether before or after, what really matters is the respect and consideration shown for each other's
feelings during this difficult time.