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FARADILA AYU LESTARI

E41232285

PROGRAM STUDI TEKNIK INFORMATIKA / TEKNIK INFORMATIKA JURUSAN

TEKNOLOGI INFORMASI
POLITEKNIK NEGERI JEMBER
2024
 Vacation Kawah Ijen
Orientation:
During the last holiday, my cousin and I took a vacation to Kawah Ijen in Bondowoso. Fresh air,
bright sunshine and the distinctive smell of sulfur greeted us.

Event 1 :
Our first steps were greeted with a rocky and steep path. However, our adventurous spirit was
not deterred by these obstacles, as each step brought us closer to the spectacular view of the
crater that lay before our eyes.

Event 2:
When we reached the bottom of the crater, the majestic natural beauty mesmerized us. In the
center of the crater is a small, tranquil lake, with stunning turquoise water. Surrounding it, the
steep crater walls rise high, creating a breathtaking panorama.

Reorientation:
As the sun began to sink in the western horizon, we decided to head back up. However, the
experience at Kawah Wurung will always be an unforgettable memory for us. This natural
wonder has inspired us to continue exploring and appreciating the beauty of the world around us.
 FEEDBACK

Feedback By : Farhan Maulana (E41232012)

1. Topic:
The topic of this recount text is the experience of my cousin and I who spent our vacation
in Ijen crater.
The topic is very clear and focused on the vacation experience while in Ijen crater.
2. Objective:
The purpose of this recount text is to describe in detail the activities and experiences that
my cousin and I had during our vacation in Ijen crater. The purpose can be well achieved
through the description of the events that happened during our vacation in Ijen crater.
3. Topic Sentence:
The topic sentences in each section (Orientation, Activity 1, Activity 2,Reorientation) are
in accordance with the content of each section.
They give a clear picture of what will be discussed in each part of the recount text.
4. Language:
The language used in the recount text is appropriate for the information presented.
The language used is simple, descriptive, and able to describe the experience well.

Overall, the recount text has successfully described the experience of my cousin and me well.
The topic, purpose, topic sentence, and language used are appropriate and able to convey
information clearly and interestingly.