Writing Lesson 6

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ADVANTAGES & DISADVANTAGES

International travel is becoming cheaper, and countries are opening their doors to more and more
tourists.

Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages?

Introduction: (around 2 sentences)

- Paraphrasing:
The affordability of international travel and the increasing openness of countries to tourists have
significantly boosted global tourism.
- General answer:
While there are some drawbacks to this trend, the benefits it brings in terms of economic
growth, cultural exchange, and global understanding far outweigh the disadvantages.

Body Paragraph 1: (around 5 sentences) disadvantages

- Topic sentence
- 1st idea
- Supporting sentence
- 2nd idea
- Supporting sentence

Body Paragraph 2: (around 5 sentences) advantages

- Topic sentence
- 1st idea
- Supporting sentence
- 2nd idea
- Supporting sentence / 3rd idea

Conclusion: 1-2 sentences

- Summarizing main ideas: While international tourism presents challenges such as


environmental degradation and cultural commodification, its overall benefits in terms of
economic prosperity and cultural exchange are undeniable.
- Final thought: Efforts should be made to mitigate the negative impacts while maximizing the
positive outcomes of increased tourism for sustainable global development.
Advantages

 Economic Boost: Tourism generates revenue for local economies through spending on
accommodation, food, transportation, and souvenirs, thereby creating job opportunities and
stimulating business growth.
 Cultural Exchange: Tourism encourages cross-cultural interactions, leading to the exchange of
ideas, traditions, and perspectives, fostering understanding and tolerance among different
societies.
 Infrastructure Development: To accommodate tourists, destinations often invest in improving
infrastructure such as roads, airports, hotels, and public facilities, which can benefit both locals
and visitors.
 Preservation of Heritage: Tourism can incentivize the preservation of historical sites, cultural
traditions, and natural environments, as they become valuable assets for attracting tourists.
 Global Connectivity: Increased tourism connects people from different parts of the world,
promoting diplomacy, international cooperation, and the sharing of knowledge and technology.

Disadvantages

 Environmental Impact: Tourism can contribute to pollution, habitat destruction, and strain on
natural resources, especially in ecologically sensitive areas, leading to long-term environmental
degradation.
 Overcrowding: Popular tourist destinations often suffer from overcrowding during peak seasons,
resulting in congestion, noise pollution, and the degradation of local infrastructure and
amenities.
 Cultural Erosion: Excessive tourism can lead to the commodification and distortion of local
cultures, traditions, and lifestyles, as communities cater to tourist preferences rather than
preserving their authenticity.
 Social Disruption: Tourism can exacerbate social inequalities, as locals may face rising living
costs, displacement, or exploitation in the face of increased demand for land and labor in tourist
areas.
Useful Phrases for Presenting Advantages and Disadvantages

ADVANTAGES

Introduction of Advantages

 One major advantage is...


 A significant benefit is...
 One of the main advantages is...
 An important positive aspect is...
 One considerable advantage is...
 A notable benefit is...
 One key advantage is...
 One of the primary benefits is...

Elaborating on Advantages

 This is because...
 For example...
 This means that...
 As a result...
 Such as...
 For instance...
 Consequently...
 Therefore...

Linking Additional Advantages

 Another advantage is...


 Additionally...
 Moreover...
 Furthermore...
 Besides this...
 In addition to this...
 Also...

Examples in Context

 One major advantage of online education is the flexibility it offers. This means that students can
access their courses at any time and from any location, which is particularly beneficial for those
with busy schedules or living in remote areas.
 Another advantage is the wide range of resources available online. For instance, students can
use digital libraries and educational platforms to find materials that are not available in their
local libraries.
DISADVANTAGES

Introduction of Disadvantages

 A significant drawback is...


 One major disadvantage is...
 One of the main drawbacks is...
 An important negative aspect is...
 One considerable disadvantage is...
 A notable downside is...
 One key disadvantage is...
 One of the primary drawbacks is...

Elaborating on Disadvantages

 This is due to...


 For instance...
 This can lead to...
 As a result...
 Such as...
 For example...
 Consequently...
 Therefore...

Linking Additional Disadvantages

 Another disadvantage is...


 Additionally...
 Moreover...
 Furthermore...
 Besides this...
 In addition to this...
 Also...

Examples in Context

 A significant drawback of online education is the lack of face-to-face interaction. This can lead to
feelings of isolation and may hinder the development of communication skills that are typically
fostered in a traditional classroom setting.
 Another disadvantage is the potential for technical issues. For example, unreliable internet
connections or outdated software can disrupt the learning process and cause frustration for
students and teachers alike.

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