Writing : Sample answers

Underline the mistakes you can find in these sample answers.

B (i) :

Sample 1

To salleha@gmail.com

Subject Funfair Near My House

Yesterday, I go to funfair near my house. It was so fun. At there have many game. I play all game. Father give me
RM20 to play game. After play game, I buy water and food too. That is all from me. Goodbye.

Sample 2

To mona@yahoo.mail

Subject Fun at funfair

Dear Fred,

Last week was fun! I went to funfair with my friend Alisha and Lidia. We went there by bus. At the funfair, we
play much game. I was so happy. I play roller coster, ferris wheel and shooting. I buy much toy too. I buy toy to
my sister Alia doll. She love it so much. That’s all. Thank you.

Mona

Sample 3

To Alia Qistina

Subject Fun Fair

Dear Alia,

Last week, I go to fun fair with my family. I and my family go there with car. We buy ticket to enter in fun fair.
Ticket RM5 one. My brother enter roller coaster, my sister enter ghost house and me play catch fish. I catch many
fish. I take fish home. Thank you.

Hanis

Sample 4

To firmanshah@gmail.com

Subject Funfair Vaganza!

Dear Firman,
 Hi, how are you? I hope you are doing well. Last weekend, I went to a funfair in Perak. It was so fun. I went there
with Ehsan. I play many game there. I play laser tag, dart game, shooting game and many more. I also play roller
coaster, ferris wheel, fishing game and many more. That’s all from me. Bye.

Faris

Underline the mistakes you can find in these sample answers.

B (ii) :

Sample 1

Dear Arman,

I want to suggest you buy a toaster. You can buy toaster from Gobu Store. It has mega sale. It has local made. It
has 30% discount on each item bought. it has gifts for every purchase. It has basic appliances for home. That’s all
from me. I hope you can reply as soon as possible. Goodbye.

Aniq

Sample 2

Dear Siti,

I suggest you go to Gobu’s Store. It has year end sale. There, you can buy clothes, books, furniture and electrical
appliances. The clothes has discount up to 50% and very suitable for hot climate. The book also has suitable for all
age group. It is affordable. The furniture is from China. It is stock clearance. The sale is from 15-18 January only.
It has children’s room. Lastly, the electrical appliances is local made. It has 30% discount on each item bought. It
has gifts for every purchase. It has basic appliances for home. That’s all. Thank you.

Shaqil

B (ii) :

Sample 3

Dear Fateha,

Hi, how are you. I hope you’re doing well. I want to inform you about a sale. Gobu’s Store has sale. You can buy
book at there. The book has sale. It has local writers. It is suitable for all age group. It is also cheap and
 affordable. I know you like book so much. You can buy book there. Thank you.

Aisa

Sample 4

Dear Betty,

Did you know that Gobu’s Store is on sale? You can buy so many things there cheaper. But all in all, I want to
suggest you to buy the clothes. The clothes is from Japan. It is very comfortable. The clothes alsa has discount up
to 50%. It is very cheap. It is also suitable for hot climate like Malaysia. I know you like Japan brand. You can try
to buy at this Gobu’s Store. You will like it. That’s all from me. I hope you will reply as soon as possible. Bye bye.

Samuel