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Waring 2022 Stand-Alone Noticing As A Resource For
Waring 2022 Stand-Alone Noticing As A Resource For
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Abstract
Language teacher educators have made compelling arguments for the importance
of fostering reflective practices. This paper explores how potential ‘reflectables’ may
be located and negotiated through the practice of noticing. Based on a conversa-
tion analytic (CA) investigation of ‘stand-alone’ (not produced in conjunctions with
questions, advice, and assessment) noticings in mentor-trainee conversations, the
analysis shows how such noticing may be used to recalibrate the trainee’s reflective
gaze and develop their professional vision. Findings contribute to the small body of
video-based CA literature on post-observation conferences as well as the broader
literature on noticing as an interactional practice within the specific context of lan-
guage teaching and learning.
1 Introduction
2 Literature Review
and curious about their utility on the other. Given the inherent asymmetry
of the encounter, TEs tend to treat mentor questions as ‘tests’ (Waring,
2014, p. 117) and are typically positioned as passive recipients of advice
and assessments although both advice and assessments may be surpris-
ingly generative (Waring, 2013), and a persistent challenge for mentors is to
enable open conversations that can best facilitate TE growth. While being
fully aware of the inescapable asymmetry that is omnipresent throughout
mentor-trainee conversations, I can’t help but wonder whether an at least
ostensibly evaluation-free observation such as the stand-alone noticing
could get us a step closer to building that ideal space for democratic con-
versations. For the purpose of this paper then, my analytic eye is directly
and exclusively trained on the small collection of 33 cases of stand-alone
noticings.
21
11%
33
17% 138
72%
((lines omitted where TE explains some of her students’ reluctance to jump into
group work without preparation))
24 M2: =what ↑if you have the instructions on the:
25 gaze to TE-handout.
after the initial noticing is rendered more specific – upgraded with greater
granularity (Schegloff, 2000). Still, one might argue that these noticings
create a space for negotiating, or more specifically, for M2 to gauge TE’s
understanding of a reflectable, thus establishing a basis upon which further
problem-solving conversations can proceed.
As noted earlier, noticings may be positively-valanced as well. In one
instance that involves M3, for example, the mentor produces an explicit
noticing of a ‘fun game’ immediately after the two get settled, which is
promptly taken up by TE as an opportunity to describe, in a multi-unit
turn, the origin and rationale for designing the game as well as, at least in
part, an opportunity to perhaps address M3’s possible insufficient appreci-
ation for the little game. In other words, M3’s noticing obtains TE’s stance
toward, and her ‘designer’s thinking’ behind, the activity, which crystalize
for both its positive qualities – a ‘good will’ launching pad for any upcom-
ing work.
In sum, these first position noticings are produced in the sequence-
initial position with the format of (I noticed) you did(n’t)/do X or they
did/were doing X, which may be upgraded with greater granularity. By
calling attention to an aspect of the trainee’s teaching that the latter was
not themselves aware of, such noticings advance a pedagogy of seeing the
previously unseen as part of the mentors’ efforts to develop the trainees’
professional vision. Regardless of whether TEs treat the noticings as news
or whether they affiliate with the mentor’s stance, they tend to provide
accounts that reveal a range of behind-the-scenes feelings or thoughts.
To a certain extent then, these noticings offer up potential reflectables (cf.
‘fishing device’ in Pomerantz, 1980) that allow the mentors to gauge TE’s
stances, which may in turn facilitate further mentoring work.
4.2.1 Affiliative
In the segment below, TE draws attention to her trouble with time manage-
ment, calling it her weakest point (not shown). The segment begins with
her illustrating the issue by describing her conduct and thoughts in the
moment (lines 1–2, 4, 7–8, 10), and M1 closely aligns as a recipient of that
reflection largely through nods, smiles, and minimal response tokens (lines
03, 05–06, 09).
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Note that M1’s initial stand-alone nods develop into large nods in con-
junction with the smiling and the double mhm in line 09 as he gears up
for incipient speakership (Jefferson, 1993) before TE brings her turn con-
structional unit (TCU) to its completion to its completion in line 08. He
then lets TE complete her next TCU in line 10 before launching his explicit
claim of noticing in line 11. One might say that up to this point, M1 has
already done a great deal of interactional work to establish the independent
basis for his noticing, having treated TE’s telling so far as not news. Several
observations may be made of the design of M1’s noticing turn itself. First,
with an ensemble of verbal and visible resources, M1 puts forth a strong
claim of the independent nature of his noticing with the contrastive stress
on did in I did notice that (line 11), the nodding and smiling in conjunc-
tion with the pointing (line 11), as well as the mention of his plan (line 12),
prior to TE’s sharing, to talk about that. Second, M1 also demonstrates the
independent nature of his noticing through the vivid and rhythmic enact-
ment of TE’s teaching with the fast pace and finger snapping (lines 14–16,
18), which receive TE’s own smiling and nodding (lines 17 & 19). Third,
M1’s noticing unpacks and re-specifies TE’s reported intent (to make sure
that everyone understood) and her observation of the sudden change
(from a brief check to a long activity) as a series of quickly fired questions
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that she kept asking- with the format, again, of You did X (see ‘alterna-
tive, subsequent descriptions’ in Sidnell & Barnes, 2009). In other words,
M1 reframes intent and agentless change into specific TE behavior in the
moment. While intent as well as the situation of ‘X suddenly becomes Y’ is
less susceptible to change, behavior is. The sequence ends with M1 repeat-
ing his plan to address the issue with the specific goal to reduce that prob-
lematic behavior for TE (lines 22–23), with which TE aligns (line 24).
To recap, a great deal of work has gone into framing this second posi-
tion noticing as independent, and the affiliative stance is largely conveyed
through the claim and display of recognition of TE’s own descriptions,
which strongly validates those descriptions. And in this particular case,
the noticing also serves to prep an intersubjectively established problem
territory for upcoming work. Finally, and perhaps most importantly, the
specific design of the noticing here, compared to TE’s own observations,
embodies a shift from intent to behavior, from circumstance to agency, and
from broad strokes to specific portrayals. Put otherwise, one might argue
that it demonstrates one way of re-adjusting TE’s reflective gaze.
Similar to first position noticings, the affiliative second position notic-
ings also feature the format of (I noticed) person reference+predicate. They
are additionally marked as affiliative and independently arrived at via both
verbal and visible means, and part of the independent framing entails pro-
viding descriptions of greater granularity that sometimes also embodies
a shift of focus from mental states to concrete behavior that foregrounds
teacher agency. By producing these noticings, the mentor manages to sub-
stantively validate TE reflections, establish a common ground for further
work, and provide an opportunity for TEs to further display their knowl-
edge and divulge their stance. At the same time, these noticings operate on
the TE’s own observations and reflections by exemplifying ‘finer’ ways of
seeing as part and parcel of developing the TEs’ professional vision. These
noticings are received with confirmation, appreciation, accounts, and/or
display of greater epistemic authority.
4.2.2 Disaffiliative
responses remain minimal and restrained with (slight) nods (data not
shown). The segment begins with TE’s characterization of the student with
an extreme case formulation (ECF) (Pomerantz, 1986) as someone who
does not cooperate at all (line 01).
(4) M2 she bored
01 TE: a:nd (.) >she doesn’t< cooperate at all?
02 M2: gz away/scowls/slight headshake->w- yeah yeah.< she has
03 gz back to TE-an attitude.=[she’s $bored.$]
04 TE: [ hih-hih-hih ]
05 M2: gz down to notes- [$right right right.$] yea:h, ]
06 TE: [ h↑ih hih hh ]°(syl syl)°]
07 I don’t know if I should say this? But
((lines omitted where TE continues to complain about the student))
08 TE: she was actually um (.) sitting (.) um (.) with her
09 back towards you? [and I could] s- literally-
10 M2: [ slight nod ]
11 TE: literally see her face [>(syl syl)< expression]
12 M2: [ slight nod]
13 TE: change? [h .h when I s]aid you should talk
14 M2: [ slight nod ]
15 TE: [to: other people?]=so it’s- .hh [>it was a little-<]
16 M2: [ slight nod ] [ can you just ]
17 assi:gn °them?°=instead of giving the:m (.)
18 TE: °like-°
19 M2: I think you- they need more structure.
20 TE: [ °okay.° ]
21 M2: [do you talk to ] y- A talks to B:?=
22 [ B to- ] >just tell them what< to do]. Don’t ((continues))
23 TE: [°↑o::kay.]=so may be a (syl syl)°- ]
decision to join a lower-level class, or is she bored because the class is less
than stimulating? That M1 is delivering a dispreferred, thereby disaffiliative,
action is in part signaled in the mitigation of smiley voice and the multiple
right’s (lines 03 & 05) as well as the gaze shift toward her notes (Kendrick
& Holler, 2017). Still, it is unclear whether the disaffiliation is registered
by TE, who responds with laughter (lines 04 & 06) and further complaints
(beginning in line 07) about the student.
In line 15, as TE appears to start bringing her account into a possible
completion, M2 interjects with the advice to structure her activities with
more specific directives (lines 16, 17, 19 & 22), which implicitly treats TE
as at least partially responsible for the student’s ‘uncooperative’ behavior.
As can be seen, TE aligns with the advising activity immediately by asking
for specifics (line 18), accepting it (line 20), and displaying her understand-
ing of it (line 23). By reframing uncooperative as bored then, the mentor’s
noticing here is designed as a corrective to redirect TE’s reflective gaze (or
develop her professional vision) toward a re-analysis of the problem that
attributes greater agency to TE herself, except that this redirection is not
registered by TE until explicit advice is given.
In another instance that involved M4, the trainee’s self-deprecation is
treated as too simplistic as the mentor introduces greater complexities
into the issue. In fact, cultivating an alternative way of seeing with a view
toward developing the trainees’ professional vision appears to be the com-
mon thread running through the disaffilative second position noticings. In
these cases, the mentor disaffiliates with the trainee’s complaints either by
shifting her analytical gaze toward specific behavior within the trainee’s
own domain of responsibility or by introducing greater complexities into
the consideration of the same observable phenomenon. These pushes for
alternative ways of seeing receive various aligning, although generally min-
imal and sometimes delayed, responses from the trainees.
Acknowledgements
helping me build the larger ‘noticing’ collection. And finally, to the anony-
mous reviewers, thank you for making me look better.
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