Nama: Lilo Hutomo igustyanto

Nim: 049598122
Tugas 2 Bahasa Inggris

Number 1
The parts of the letter numbered 1-3 are as follows:
1. Dear Vincent Prasad: This is the salutation or greeting of the letter. It is the opening line
addressed to the recipient of the letter, Vincent Prasad in this case.

2. It's my pleasure to strongly recommend Ashley Singer for the Jr. Data Analyst role with
Clouddatanow Tech. I'm Rachel Gomez, a project manager at Asomtech Solutions. I have
12 years of experience working in the tech industry and have seen many young people
come and go. Ashley Singer is one individual I have worked with who has always
distinguished herself as a team member. This is the introduction and recommendation
section of the letter. Rachel Gomez, the writer of the letter, introduces herself, provides
her professional background, and expresses her recommendation for Ashley Singer for
the Jr. Data Analyst role.

3. Sincerely, Rachel Gomez Sr. Project Manager: This is the closing of the letter. It includes
the writer's name, title, and sometimes additional contact information. In this case,
Rachel Gomez signs off as the Sr. Project Manager.

Number 2
Errors in the letter:
1. The salutation is incorrect. It should be "Dear Mr. Reed," instead of "Thank u for your
letter of 4 july inquiring about our latest catalog, price list, and terms of payment?"
2. The sentence structure and grammar are incorrect. It should be "Thank you for your letter
of July 4th inquiring about our latest catalog, price list, and terms of payment."
3. The word "u" should be spelled out as "you."
4. The sentence "We hope you will find our prices n terms satisfactory" contains a
typographical error. "n" should be "and."
5. The sender's name is repeated twice at the end of the letter. It should only be mentioned
once.
Corrected version:
Bridgestone International Co.
1660 Maple Court
Kennett, MO 63857
July 21, 2021
William Reed
Purchase Manager
The Cooking Store
2175 Rivendell Drive
Mineral City, OH 44656

Dear Mr. Reed,

Thank you for your letter of July 4th inquiring about our latest catalog, price list, and terms of
payment. We are pleased to enclose our latest catalog, price list, and terms of payment
together with samples of our promotional gifts. We hope you will find our prices and terms
satisfactory.

I look forward to receiving your order.

Yours sincerely,
Robert Brown
Sales Manager