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Improve Your IELTS - Writing-6-13
Improve Your IELTS - Writing-6-13
Improve Your IELTS - Writing-6-13
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1 The gTaphs relate to sales of media technolog . .
Which graph a- h d o au think shows sales for each
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item in the p hotos 1-4?
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2 Match each grapb (a-h) w ith the most appr p riate
description below (1- 10).
] Sales of auelio cassettes fell steaelily. .......... ~...... .~
2 iPo sales rose gradually . .................. II
3 Plasma TV sales fluctuated wildly, but the trend
was upward . ..................
4 Sales of video cassettes nuctuated wildly, and the
tTend was downward ............ _.. ... _
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5 Total digital camera sales dropped slightly.
....... - ..........
6 Sa es of audio cassettes fell and then levelled off. m
..................
7 The sales of MP3-players rose gradually and then
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climbed sharply. ............. _....
B Purchases of video casse tte recorders d lined
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dramatically . ......... ,' .......
9 Sales of games consoles decreased and then
levelled off ................... m.---------------
10 CD sales dropped suddenJy............ .......
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UNIT 1 Charlge alld COli eqllell"s
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Related verbs and nouns
5 S en tc'n Cf:~ containin g verb phrQs es s uch as jeJl steadily call often b e re\-\'J.iLLen
u sing the correct form of there islare and a related noun. Read the examples.
Th en rewri te sentences a-j below.
Examples
Th co nsumption of cho colate fell steadily. (verb + adverb)
There was a steady fall in the consumption of chocolate . (there was a + adjective +
n oun )
There has been a dramatic rise in the produ crioD o f films . (there has been a +
adjeCtive + n oun)
Th production of film has risell dramaticalry. (verb + adverb)
a Spice expons fr om Afri ca fl uc tuated wildly over the p eriod.
There were ........................................ ................................. .. ..................................... .
b Th e development of n ew products fell gradually.
Ther was ...... ............. ..... .......................................................................................... .
c There has been a noticeable decrease in res ~a r ch investmen l.
Research ......................... ............... ........... ........ ... .. .................................................. ..
d The purchases of ti.cket dropped significantly last month .
Th ere ~,v as ............................................................................................................ ..
e On the Internet, th e illu rober of sites rose significantly.
There wa .................................................................................................................. ..
There was a su.dden decrease in th e sale o f mangos.
The sale .... ...... ........................................................................................................... .
g At the them e park. there "vere very slight fluctuations in the number of
visitors.
The number ................................................................ ............................................... .
h There was a gradual declin e in sugar impons.
Sugar .......................................................................................................................... .
The quality of food in supermarkers has tncreased slowly .
Technique •• Th ere h as ................................................................................................ .......... ......... .
• Include a variety of Th e number of air travellers fluctuated remarka bly.
• structures In your
• writing. Use both There ........ .. ................ ................................. .. ........................................ ..................... .
• verb +adverb a 1d
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• adjective + noun
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6 Phrases such as the consumplion oj chocolate can often be rewritten as just two
• structures In '{our nouns. Read the examples. Th en find and revyTitt' olh J examp les in 5 .
Task 1 answer.
Examples
• Express nouns as
The . of or as TWO The consumptioll oj chaco/ate can become Chocolate cOllsumption .
• nouns The production offt/lns can become Fillll production . (not Films production).
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Understanding data
9 Read the model text and decide wherher each missing phras
n oun, or an adverb.
Example
1 adverb
Model text
me graph providef, informa1ion about the increase to $120,000 , furthermore, the 10 March options
inc.ome trend~ of fo ur c.afe~ over the la5t inc.ome for both Internet £,y.pre5s and the a-g w ith gaps
1- 7 in Ib e model
i ear Wi-fi Gafe'J ............ in Duember. The
text.
There are two baf,ic. general trendf,: former ey.perienc.e.d 4 .... ... ..... to June, but
after Ihat, inc.ome rose S .. .. ..... ... ending a I adily
downwar and upward. As regards the
the ~ear at approy.imate\~ $1'30,000. b then rocketed
fir5t, the earning5 for The Tea \Zoom, \~ere
down over the ~ear, falling I ... ... .. .. .. from UKe\o ise, the trend for Wi-fi waf, upward, e dou bled
alm05l $ \ ~O,OOO earning5 a month tO jU5t Between Janua'1 to :ru\~, earnings d significant 11'
under $50,000 in December, I. .... ........ from $')0,000 to nead'j $100 ,000
e also ended the
and I .. .......... to around $lqO,ooo.
B-t contrast, the inc.ome for ihc other thre.e year lip
, ak5 went up b'j vat"(ing degrees,There It if, noticeable that the inc..ome fo r The a steady fall
"las :2. ., ... ....... in Gafe c.ool' (') 5ale5 over i ea \Zoom i5 lowel' in tne winter montho il ris '
the fir~t ten month5, followed b'j a sudden than for the. olne.r tnree. c.afes. ""
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Task 2 Understanding questions
1 Task 2 questions cOlltdin a gen eral subject and ofte n in cl ude a spe jfic
organizing word to help y ou org an ize yo ur t: ssay. In each group a-d belo w,
'o.vhich organil'Z ing word has a different m e an i n g fx JJ1 th e lher two?
a ad\ anlages dr aw back s benefits
b measu res st eps reasons
c ause eHecls consequences
d disadvanta ges drawbacks solutions
2 Cmnpkt ~ e,lCh Task 2 question below v-'" li ih organil.ing words 1t! n!)] th e b ox .
You may use each item more th an nce.
a ..
Wh at a re the ~~~~0. of learning skills jn th e mod rn vvo dd?
b An y attempts to preserve the n a tural w orl d will a lvva is h inder economi c
developmenL. The benefit will howe v r far outwe igh th e
.................. . Do you .................. ")
c What are the .................. and .................. of laking a eal" 0[[ b tween school
a n d univcrsit y?
d Stu dent s sh ould be trained on ho w to ope wit h ha nge in the modern
world. How far do you .................. ?
e Volunteer work with disadvantaged groups like underpr ivileged children is
[he best way for you ng p eople to learn about th e real world . ' '''hat are the
.................. of such work ?
Every day, anim a ls are becoming extinct throughout the world . What do
you think th e .................. of this are? What .................. can you uggest.
g Ov rcrowding in large ci ties h as always been a problem, bu t with
popula tions a ro und the w orld a out to double, th e social pro blems are
certain to multip ly. What ............ can y o u suggest to control th e p roblem s .
3 H ow many p ans are [here in each quest ion in 2? For example, (a) bas one
p art. If there are two or th ree p arts, how are th ey related?
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Expressing solutions
4 Change is more rapid in the m odem world than it was in th e pasl. umber
each category b elov 1- 5 accord 'ing to how rapi d ly each is changing in your
opinion (1 = most rapid; 5 = least rapid). Tltink of an example ofrapid
h ange for each catego ry.
Work Technology Travel Communication Health
5 Look at the Task 2 ques tion below and answer the q uestion
Task2
Jou should spend about 40 minutes 0 11 this task.
Write about the following topic.
/.ore lind. /}l o re people claim ti m " Hl O"~'''''1 1\" rk pa tterns a re a SOlI/'ce of s l r ess.
What do YOII think are the causes of this? Can you sllggest some possible
SOIIi/iolls'?
Give reasons for your anS'lver and inc/ude any relevant examplf!s from your own
knowledge or experienCe.
6 Read the Shen : How do you t hink people can deal with t heir
conversati on stressful lives, especially at w ork?
bel ' een rw o Tina: Firstly, I think employers should encou rage
workers to relax.
students d iscuss ing Shen : How?
the prob lem of s tress Ti na : Well. in so m e co m pa nies, gym facilitie s o r
at work . w hich p ar t m assa ge thera pies are available.
of the question in 5 S hen: Massage?
are they ans w ering? Tina: Yes . If you help yo u r employees to re lax, th is
im prove s their effi ciency and prod uctio n.
Wh at so lut ion s Sh an : A re t here oth er so lutions?
and resu lt s d o they Ti na: Of co u rse. Employees cou ld be trai ned in
suggest? how to plan t heir ti me mo re effectively.
On e w ay is to stop peop le taking w o rk
home. And then the workp lace w ill beco me
a lot happier.
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for employers to encourage workers to relax .
1 .. .. .. ......
. suggests a solution
in some companies, gym facilities or
- - - - -...... to [be Task 2 2 ....... .. " . ,
massage therapies are available . 3 .' .......... , this
Technique que llon in 5 .
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Identlf the type 01 • Com plete each gap improves their effiCiency and production. 4 .. .. .. . .. . .. train
with th e phrases in employees in how to plan their time more effectively,
que lion For cause/ -
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8 There axe several w ay s to express sol u tjon s. Should is u sed for SIl'ong
sugges tion s; could is used for possible s ugge (i on s. Other ph rases can also b e
used to express solution s. Read the example [rom 6 and 7 on page 10. Then
rewri te the sent ences in a- f.
Examp les
Employers should eJ/courage workers to relax .
[ think the most obvious solution is/or employers to ncouTage workers [Q relax .
Employees could be [rai/led in how to plan their Lime more effectively.
A further step is to train employees in h ow [Q plan Ih eir li me more dfe [i vely.
a 1 think the most obvious solution is to encourage people to exercise mo re .
PeopleshouJd ......................................... ,............................. ,... ,.,. ,....... ,.... ,.......... ,... .
b The obvious answer is to reduce the number 0 wo rking hours ,
The number of working hours ...... ,....... ....... ,............ ,................................. ,.......... .
c The government could provide each employee with their own computer.
One possibility is ....... ,.... ... ....................................................................... ... ...... .... .... .
d One option is to persuade parents to spen d more time with [heir children .
Parents could .............. ,............................................ ..... .............. ,.. .. .............. ,
e A good idea is to restri ct the number o f ars coming into iries,
The number of cars coming into cities .... " . ....... ..... .. ,' .......................................... .
f The go emmenl should build more sky rapers to solve the problem.
A good ide a is .................................................................. ..." ... ..................... .
10 Use·the follo wing phrases (0 add re ults to the Solul ions ab ove. Use YOUT
own ideas an d w ords.
Examp le
a I think the most obvious solution is to encourage people to exerdse more ,
By doing this, they would lose weight and would feel better generally.
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Linking phrases
11 Linking phrases mark the ftloctions 01 other s ent e nt: es i1n d phrases, s u c l~ as
solutjons, results, and examples. Match each linl(ing p h rase ' ' ,Itch th e cor Cl
function.
12 Read the paragraph from a Task 2 essay on overcrow de d cities and find the
UnkLn g phr ases which m a tch these functions.
Reason Result Example Solution
13 Lin~",ing phrases can be used to tr.i gger id eas becau e th ey mark fu n ctio n s .
When you plan a Task 2 answer, write down some trigger words to h elp you
dev d QP YOUT basic idea. Use [11e trigger w o rds below (a d eve lop th e ideas
given.
A
lfpeople migrale 10 cilies, they be come ................ ..
And so ................ ..
And as a restill .... .. ........... .
A good idea would be to ................. .
By doing this, ................ ..
B
People spend 100 /lllIch time watching TV.
For example, ................ ..
Con equemly, .. .. ,......... .. ..
If .................. , then ................ ..
This \vill lea d to ........ .. ...... . .
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The development of tourism ofTell creates resentment among local people because
For example, ......... .. ...... .
The obvious ans wer is to ...... _._ .. .... __
Furthermore, ....... _.. ....... .
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Task 1
You should spend aboUl 20 minutes on this task.
The 9rtJph belDH' shows il1 percentage terms tlu changing patterns of domestic aeee s
to Jil(){il'm tecJl11vlo9.\Jil1 homes in the UK
SIUJllII{//";ze flu "information by selectil1g and rep(wtillij tI,e IJ1l1in /catllres, anrl make
comparisons where relevant.
Percentages
100 - . - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ,
CD pl ay er
80 ~--------------------------~~~~=----=====~
MObile phone
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60
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40 - -- ---
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1996/97 1998199 2000/01 2002/03
Task 2
Yo u shou ld spend about 40 II/inures on this Jask.
Write about the followil1g topic:
Give reasons for your allswer and include any relevanr examples from your OHI1"1 knowledge
or experimce.
Write at least 250 words.
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