● Avoid saying things like this would have sufficed your question.
It does not convey
humbleness. ● Hobbies part is well written. ● When they ask what is unique about you, your answer seems a little rude. It seems as if you are trying to impress them. Try to frame it in a manner where you do not seem to be portraying a wrong image of yourself. ● The 7th question’s answer seems very artificially written. It reflects that it is written using chat GPT. Please answer this question with utmost honesty. This answer should be personal and unique to you. ● When you say you neglected mathematics in class 12th, support it with how you have realized it negatively impacted you and what you have learned from your mistakes. ● What is your backup plan????? ● Overall, I feel there is a lack of personal touch in your answers and AI is overtaking it for most of the part. I would recommend you to reflect and work more upon your answers and try to make it personal not artificial.