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偏锋出国雅思大作文预测-2023.8 月大范围

（针对 8.19 纸笔考试最新更新）

金长麟校长：2000 年归国进入雅思教学领域，从事一线教学和
至今。雅思官方认证培训写作讲师，全国出国语培学术联盟特邀
教师培训师。

金老师深谙雅思考试出题规律和得分原则，连续 22 年每场雅思
考试都会公益的为考生做考前写作预测及分析，被雅思考生赞誉
为雅思界摆渡人。

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2023 年上半年 24 场考试，大作文命中 15 场，命中率 63%

2023 年 1 月雅思大作文三场命中两场，14 号犯罪类，28 号环保类

2023 年 2 月雅思大作文四场命中两场，11 号工作类，18 号社会类

2023 年 3 月雅思大作文四场命中一场原题，11 号教育类

2023 年 4 月雅思大作五场全部命中，1 号社会类，8 号运动类，15

号社会类，22 号社会经济类（命中原题），29 号科技类（命中原题）

2023 年 5 月雅思大作四场命中三场，6 号政府经济管理，20 号工作

类，27 号广告文化类别

2023 年 6 月雅思大作四场命中两场，17 号犯罪类，24 号教育类

2023 年 7 月雅思大作五场命中四场，1 号科技类，8 号国际文化，22

号社会交通，29 号社会商业讨论

2023 年 8 月 5 号 大作文环保类讨论 预测第一梯队预警命中

2023 年 8 月 12 号 大作文犯罪类讨论 预测第二梯队预警命中

Part2--金长麟老师写作预测（2023 年 8 月）

 第一梯队预警：科技类、教育类

 第二梯队预警：社会类、广告文化类

 第三梯队预警：国际旅行-全球化类别、环保
类、犯罪类、

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科技类：
People nowadays put their personal and private information (address, phone number,
credit card number) online to go for everyday activities such as banking, shopping, and
socializing. Is it a positive or negative development? 本类别重点题

好处：
在线的行为变得更加快捷方便
相关咨询会被精准推送给特别的用户

坏处：
个人信息泄露带来经济损失
不法分子窃取个人信息冒名顶替从事非法行为

Some scientists think it is very soon that computers will be more intelligent than a
human. Some people think it is a positive development, while others think it is a
negative development. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 本类别重点题

好处：
人类工作变得更高效
机器取代人类劳动，解放人类
智能机器可以完成人类无法完成的工作：例如高速大数据运算 自然界危险环境的样本采集
纳米机器人的人类内部手术等

坏处：
取代人类劳动可能会带来失业
比人类更聪明如果是产生独立思考能力，可能对人类来说是不可知的灾难

Some people think that technology makes life complex, so we should make our life
simpler without using technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 本类别重点
题 4.29 相似题 命中删除

Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than
private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 本类别难题

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可以变成商品的科学研究应该是公司来完成，这样可以使公众使用到科技产品，感受科技给
生活带来的变化
而且这样的商业行为可以带来政府税收、公司盈利，反之公司也更愿意投入，带来科技的全
面发展

特定科学研究应该由政府完成：
1. 不盈利的科学研究，比如环境保护相关。公司不愿意投入，但这种研究对科技的
全面发展以及社会未来发展有好处。
2. 涉及社会安全、国际机密的科学研究应该由政府开展

Nowadays, people prefer to look on the Internet for medical advice instead of going to
see a doctor. What are the reasons for it? Is it a positive or negative development?

第一原因：方便快捷，随时随地查询
第二原因：相比医院问诊治疗更经济
第三原因：更多信息咨询比对，带来更准确结果

可能出现的问题：
1. 信息太多，不专业的病人无法甄别，对治疗无益
2. 虚假宣传和广告充斥在信息当中给病人误导

In the past, people store knowledge in books. Nowadays, people store knowledge on
the Internet. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

明显好处远远大于问题，甚至认为没有问题，是必然发展趋势：
便携
容量大
易保存
易查找检索
保存方式多样，不仅仅限于文字、图片，还可以有影像，更生动

教育类：
Discipline is an ever-increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that
discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the
role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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规范孩子的行为是老师的责任：
老师和学龄儿童相处的时间比家长多
孩子在学校出现的行为和意识问题老师可以第一时间纠正
老师给孩子传递的有关行为规范的信息收到社会验证，更加客观和专业

规范孩子的行为是家长的责任：
家庭教育对规范孩子行为培养孩子意识必不可少，因为孩子会下意识模仿自己的家长，家长
在教育过程有榜样作用
家长的错误行为，例如溺爱，会抵消学校教育的成果
家庭的环境如果不正确，孩子就会下意识学习不好的行为习惯和思维意识，并在学校环境中
也做出错误举动

In some high schools, part of the curriculum requires students to participate

in community work, such as helping the elderly or disabled. In what way do children
benefit from this? Do you think it should be part of the curriculum?

学生参加社会劳动的好处：
学会生活技能
学会和来自不同领域和年龄的人相处的社交技能
在社会工作中能培养学术课堂上无法培养的团队协作、时间管理、任务管理和组织等技能
更好的了解社会，知道社会的真实情况和需求，从工作中发现自己的兴趣。把社会需求和兴
趣结合找到自己今后发展方向
工作经历可以丰富个人简历，增加求职竞争力
通过社会工作了解生活的艰辛，对工作和金钱都存有敬畏之心
把玩游戏看电视的时间来工作，减少久坐不动的生活方式，有益于健康

Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punished. To
what extent do you agree or disagree?

对学生奖励的好处：
增加学习动力，建立学习自信 但可能让学生依赖这种机制变成没有奖励就不学习

对学生惩罚的好处：
犯错不能鼓励只能惩罚，帮助形成正确意识并教会学生错误被惩罚是社会常态形式
惩罚会让学生知道错误行为的结果，从而减少犯错。就好像法律惩罚罪犯一样。

Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus.

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Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

在线大学课程的问题：
缺少课堂的直接交流，减少了线下研讨活动的可能。这不利于小组讨论性学习，不利于学生
形成学术环境中的团队协作意识和行为

在线大学课程的优点：
为社会提供更多学习机会，让不能在固定时间到固定地点的求学者有了接受高等教育的可能
让专业的优质的教育资源被更广泛地使用，例如哈佛公开课
接受高等教育的成本和门槛降低

Some people believe the aim of a university education is to help graduates get better
jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both
individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

高等教育是为了今后就业：
今天社会需要有大学或高等教育背景的人才
社会工作岗位需要的很多专业技能，比如医师、会计，在非高等教育阶段没有教授，只是在
高等教学的专业中开设了相关课程
高等教育非常昂贵，如果不能和未来职业前景挂钩，会使很多人丧失接受高等教育的动力

高等教育带来的其他优势：
接受高等教育的很多人不一定今后从事和专业与学习相关的工作，所以高校为社会培养了很
多会思考、有文化、会学习的 well-educated people，这本身比就业更重要，也是国家经济发
展必须的
对于个人，高等教育帮助更好形成社会观、价值观，形成更为完整的人格和思想，变得更为
成熟。同时上大学往往离家很远，这也有助于个人独立性和社会性的培养

教育类补充：
The government should allocate more funding to teaching sciences rather than other
subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?
Science plays an important role in the growth and progress of a nation. However, other
subjects are also important for the economic development of a country. Therefore, I believe
that the government should allot equal funds for the teaching of all subjects.

Science subjects are definitely helpful. They help to solve many problems affecting us
and our environment. Government funding will lead to improvement in medical research and
the invention of many cures. Health, after all, is wealth. In order for a nation to progress, its
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people have to be healthy. Research in medical science facilitates this. In addition, scientific
research in agriculture can increase the fertility of the land and result in economic growth.
Science subjects like technology and engineering also play a crucial role in making our lives
happy and comfortable. Obviously, the government funding of science subjects helps the
country to develop and progress.

However, this does not mean that only science subjects are important. Other subjects
like arts, crafts, literature, and humanities also play an important role in the overall progress
of a nation. These subjects make people aware of their history and culture. They improve our
aesthetic skills and enhance the overall quality of our life. Art subjects provide plenty of job
opportunities too. After all, no nation can progress only on the wings of science.

To conclude, government funding should not be limited to science subjects. For the
country's overall development, the government should support the teaching of other subjects
as well.

Some people think that a person improves intellectual skills better when doing group
activities. To what extent do you agree?
In recent decades, many researchers have studied the importance of group-level
cognition. Indeed, to my mind, there is no convincing evidence that group activities improve
the intelligence of individuals. In this essay, I shall examine how research in team games and
study groups supports this view.

To begin with, team games clearly require individuals to perform a diverse range of
rapid mental calculations. This is because, in a sporting context, players must predict and
anticipate possible actions within tight time constraints. For example, a recent Cambridge
study showed that soccer players could calculate over a dozen different permutations that
could result from a single soccer-related action within the span of seconds. Such predictive
powers clearly improve players' mental abilities and result from activities performed in a
group context.

Secondly, study groups enable individuals to obtain information that they could not
acquire in isolation. This is because peer feedback allows individuals to refine their
understanding of concepts and to also learn new information from other members of the
study group. For example, a study by The British Institute for Learning found that if
individuals participated in study groups, they had a far more objective and sophisticated
understanding of a topic than learners who were not part of study groups. Therefore, it is
certainly the case that learning in a group improves an individual's mental abilities.

In conclusion, I strongly agree with the notion that group activities improve intellectual
abilities. In the future, we will certainly see schools take greater measures to ensure that more
group-level cognition occurs in the classroom.

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In contemporary society, everyone should have equal opportunities in education.
Therefore, universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in
every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In my opinion, men and women should have the same educational opportunities.
However, I do not agree with the idea of accepting equal proportions of each gender in every
university subject.

Having the same number of men and women on all degree courses is simply unrealistic.
Student numbers on any course depend on the applications that the institution receives. If a
university decided to fill courses with equal numbers of males and females, it would need
enough applicants of each gender. In reality, many courses are more popular with one gender
than the other, and it would not be practical to aim for equal proportions. For example,
nursing courses tend to attract more female applicants, and it would be difficult to fill these
courses if fifty percent of the places needed to go to males.

Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, I also believe that it would be unfair
to base admission to university courses on gender. Universities should continue to select the
best candidates for each course according to their qualifications. In this way, both men and
women have the same opportunities, and applicants know that they will be successful if they
work hard to achieve good grades at school. If a female student is the best candidate for a
place on a course, it is surely wrong to reject her in favor of a male student with lower grades
or fewer qualifications.

In conclusion, the selection of university students should be based on merit, and it

would be both impractical and unfair to change to a selection procedure based on gender.

社会类：（城市建设 社会问题 两性分析 经济话题 食品健康）

In many countries, the costs of living are rising. What are the effects of this on
individuals and society? What are the solutions to this problem?

城市生活成本增加带来的问题：
人们涌入城市，人口增加，住房压力增大，导致这部分开销增加，从而提高了生活成本。
这种生活成本的提升会给人们的生活带来巨大经济压力而改变人们的生活日常，比如上班时
间增加、生活节奏更快。
这同时也带来精神压力。
在这种高压的环境下，犯罪率也可能增加。人们可能通过一些犯罪行为来缓解压力和表现对
社会的不满。

解决办法：
政府可以立法减税来缓解人们生活的经济压力
政府可以通过宣传来帮助城市居民养成良好消费习惯，减少不必要开销来减轻压力

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The most effective way to solve city traffic and transport problems is to encourage
people from the suburbs or the countryside to live in the cities. To what extent do you
agree or disagree?

好处：
减少通勤的交通量。目前大部分公司、企业都在城内，人们住在城外，每日要有大量通勤。
这无疑会带来交通压力和问题。人们搬到城市居住可以解决这个问题。
保证城市近郊和城外的环境

问题：
对公共交通，尤其是城内的公共交通要求变大。这也会增加政府的投资
城市内部会拥挤，交通量会增加，带来更多的交通隐患。
交通相关问题并不能在大量人口居住的城市解决，比如停车和污染

In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units rather
than in large extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?

优点：
 人们的生活更加自由
People could have more freedom to travel and live far away from their hometowns.
 家庭成员之间的矛盾更少
Growing up in a small family unit, conflicts between family members would be
remarkably limited in comparison with a multi-generational family.

缺点：
 生活成本增加
Without help from other people, it would be impossible for many people to pay all living
costs, such as buying a car, paying a deposit, or even purchasing food.
 生活安全性会降低尤其对于单身女性或者独居老人。而且独居长期也可能引发心
理问题
For some people, particularly the elderly, living alone could trigger mental illnesses such
as depression or autism if people segregate themselves from human contact in the
long run.

Some people think living in big cities is bad for people's health. To what extent do you
agree or disagree?

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居住城市给健康带来的问题：
城市商业、公司众多，污染多
城市人口多，排放多，也是对健康的隐患
城市满足更多人的居住，绿地少，不能接触自然，空气质量也相对差

Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, certain
jobs are suitable for men, and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do
you agree or disagree?

性别不在是今天找工作的阻碍和条件：
男性女性不一定是有不同的特点，尤其在工作中。今天一份职业需要的工作能力，在两种性
别中都能发现，只要求职者体现对工作的胜任就应该有工作机会，这与性别无关
科技的发展使特定工作也没有了性别区分。一些体力劳动的确不适合力量稍弱的女性，但科
技的发展和机器广泛的使用是性别差异和劣势不再明显

In many countries, women and men are working full-time. It is, therefore, logical for
women and men to share household tasks. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

社会经济变化原因：
It is unfair to impose the burden of all housework on women, for their roles in modern
society have changed tremendously over the years.
社会中无性别差异的工作变多
现在社会家庭由一个人来支持全部经济收入压力太大
双方都工作，家务无法由一人完成，必须分担

篇幅不够可以反证：
Nevertheless, if these career women are heavily burdened with housework tasks after
work, they might be overwhelmed with fatigue and stress, eventually compromising
their physical and mental health.

In some countries around the world, men and women have children late in life. What
are the reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?

社会工作压力大，安排给孩子的时间少。担心不能较好养育孩子导致年轻夫妻较晚生育
In general, people who bear great pressure from their work are less likely to prepare for

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childbirth early, considering that they may have little time to accompany their children.
年轻女性工作，不是全职太太。平衡工作和生育关系，会导致较晚生育
Another reason for this is the difficulty in balancing work and life.

好处：
年轻夫妻有更多准备和学习时间来成为更好的父母。也可以积累更多经济基础
It cannot be denied that late childbirth can provide more time for young couples to be
ready for the new members of their families.
In addition, if they delay childbirth, they can provide more economic support for
children's rearing and education.

问题：
老龄化变严重
The low childbirth will cause an increase in the aging population.

Economic progress is one way to measure a country's success. Some people believe th
ere are other factors. What other factors should be considered? Do you think that any
one of them is more important than the others? 4.22 相似题 命中删除

Today we waste food. What are the causes of this? How can people be encouraged to
throw away less food?

原因：
社会经济快速发展，人们有钱了，扔掉一些食物经济上没有问题;
从健康着想，很多人会毫不犹疑地扔掉那些可能过期的食物;
很多人已经养成了随意扔掉食物的习惯。

解决方法：说明文的统一解决方法都会涉及到政府立法、教育、投资等方面
Governments can change people's views of food through charity ads sponsored by
authorities. It is crucial to make citizens realize that there are still many people
suffering from famine and poverty, and the food wasted in a restaurant can help so
many paupers live a better life.

Governments need to educate citizens to realize that only relying on eating may not
help people keep fit, and other measures, such as exercising regularly, should be

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recommended by governments to make people focus less on pursuing fresh food.

More people are interested in cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance.
Why? Is it a positive or negative development?

整容流行的原因：
医美广告的推广
社会经济发展，人们收入提高，对美和个人形象有更高追求
科技的发展使得整形技术更成熟和发达

整容的优点：
建立自信，尤其对本身有缺陷的人，例如兔唇或火灾伤害

整容的缺点：
没有缺陷的人整容，可能对自然美和自己的容貌产生病态的执著
大众容貌变得相似，千篇一律，缺乏美感和个性化
对身体的伤害
大量金钱的投入，对一些人产生巨大经济负担

Some people argue that the government should spend money only on medical care and
education but not on theatres or sports stadiums. Do you agree or disagree?
2023.2.18 原题命中，删除

Some people say that drug companies have the responsibility to spend money on
researching medicine to help poorer countries, while others think the main
responsibility of drug companies is to make money. Discuss both views and give your
own opinion.

医药公司要赚钱：
医药公司赚钱是医药发展的根本，这对人类健康有非常重大的意义
医药公司赚钱对提供工作岗位、增加政府税收都有作用

医药公司要投入研究帮助更多人：
投入研究不意味着不赚钱。很多药物的研究可以通过公益组织的资金支持来完成，这样降低
药物成本来帮助更多病人，尤其是经济能力有限的病人

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医药行业有特殊性，在赚钱和治病救人这个高尚目标中找平衡。两者都要兼顾，而治病救人
这个目标使其要投入研究

Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical
services should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private
healthcare outweigh the disadvantages?

医疗服务应该由 profit-making companies 来运营：

减轻公立医院和公立医疗系统的压力
减少政府在医疗服务上的投入
病人，尤其是能负担得起的病人，可以接受更好的医疗服务

医疗服务不应该由 profit-making companies 来运营：

会让很多人负担不起
对公民在医疗服务方面造成不平等

Nowadays, people prefer to look on the Internet for medical advice instead of going to
see a doctor. What are the reasons for it? Is it a positive or negative development?

第一原因：方便快捷，随时随地查询
第二原因：相比医院问诊治疗更经济
第三原因：更多信息咨询比对，带来更准确结果

可能出现的问题：
3. 信息太多，不专业的病人无法甄别，对治疗无益
4. 虚假宣传和广告充斥在信息当中给病人误导

社会类别难题：
Some people believe the best way to produce a better society is to ensure there is only
a small difference between the earnings of the richest and the poorest. To what extent
do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that a happier nation is evaluated by a short income gap
between the richest and the poorest people, but I can't entirely agree with this point of
view. I think that other factors contribute to the level of happiness in society, and
secondly, it is an impossible task to achieve a minimal distance between the rich and

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Firstly, people would be happier if their needs were met, especially in health care,
education, infrastructure, and entertainment. The government provides such essential
needs; thereby, the authority should be the one that manages and has a fair system to
use the income taxes received equally.
Secondly, taxes are contributed by the rich and the poor people; therefore, a
sound tax system would help to reduce the gap and would make the community
happier. For example, the wealthiest people would pay higher taxes, and the least
poverty classes pay less. And the government should use that money to pay back for
the benefits of the whole nation by giving free access to healthcare, education, or
entertainment.

On the other hand, shortening the income gap between the rich and the poor is
not a good strategy because it could not make the world strive for better. If everyone
gets the same amount of what they work for, no one wants to work harder and thinks
differently. As a result, the country could not develop well because everyone has the
same standards. Simultaneously, people may become lazier and more laid-back under
such circumstances, which would not make people happier.
Besides, wealthy people will innovate something new, becoming richer and richer.
For instance, most pro-athlete players become very rich in their professional lives, but
after their retirement, they become bankrupt, blaming the system and society for their
fall. Thus, poverty was from the beginning of humans and will continue because no
society or government will be able to remove it. A small difference between rich and
poor will not create a happier nation because no authorities can reduce the gap, and it
can be achieved if all the citizens are mentally at peace.

In conclusion, I think the government plays a vital role in controlling public money
and helps society become happier by enhancing local tangibles, not by cutting the
salaries between the richest and the poorest.

广告文化：
Society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no

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useful purpose and can even be harmful. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

广告的问题：
 打扰人们的正常生活秩序
The pumping out of advertisements on the Internet is distractive when doing research
online, and the insertion of ads during TV dramas and movies is obnoxious.
 对购物和消费产生误导并导致冲动消费
The exaggeration and eye-binding techniques employed in the advertisement
overshadow the true function of the products.
 虚假宣传

广告的好处和作用：
 部分广告还是可以便利购物过程并传递商品的有效信息
 广告是商家触及消费者并推广自己的途径，对新公司和小公司非常重要

Some believe that people will always purchase a product based on their needs. So,
advertising is not needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

广告仍旧被需要的原因：
 广告推荐产品并发布产品有效信息来引起消费者的购物欲望
Advertising increases profits as it plays a major role in convincing people to buy the
advertised product by giving the feeling that life with it can be happier and more
comfortable.
 广告可以帮助商家产生忠实客户，这些客户会会因为广告信赖品牌而消费，不完
全依照自己的需求和消费习惯
 在信息繁多的社会，广告仍旧是消费者最快速了解产品特点和相关信息，甄选需
要的商品的有效手段之一。
 即使消费者基于自身需求购物，广告也是帮助最终确认所购买商品的方法。广告
可以便利消费过程，提高消费体验。
 广告不仅仅满足需求，基于需求帮助甄选；同时也在创造需求。

Watching a live performance such as a play, concert, or sporting event is more

enjoyable than watching the same event on television. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?

在电视等媒体上观看的优点：
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  更便利
Instead of spending time on booking tickets, reserving fine seats, and queueing to get
to the stadium and standing among the crowd, plays or sports watchers can simply
observe their show with just a click of a remote.
 功能更多，观看体验更好，没有时间地点限制
Technology offers event audiences various outlet functions, such as recap shows,
volume control, and close-up scenes.

现场观看的优点：
 现场的体验更棒
Technology cannot replicate the holy sound of human voices from concerts, typically
opera shows, or the breathtaking feel of watching a quarrel between two soccer teams.
 现场可以和其他观众一起观看，氛围更好
At live shows, one has the chance to gather with other fans of a singer or sports team,
cheering for their favorite team or sharing opinions with other members.
 可以和明星或者运动员互动

Some people think that it is good for a country's culture to show imported foreign films
and TV programs. Others think that it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both
views and give your opinion

海外影视节目的优点：
 足不出户就可以体验全球文化。这是文化全球化之下的优势。观众开阔眼界。
Viewers, while enjoying the entertaining element of these programs, can simultaneously
learn more about the world and its various cultures.
Such a trend has aided the development of globalized culture and broadened people's
understanding of the diverse world around them.

本地制作的重要性：
 对本地文化的保护
The act of a country developing its own movies and broadcasting industry is a
necessity to preserve its culture.
 本地的文化可以得到最好的呈现
Domestic films and shows are irreplaceable products that bring people true feelings
and a complete understanding of the contexts and clichés used.

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Historical objects should be brought back to their country of origin. To what extent do
you agree or disagree?

历史物品应该回到发源地的原因：
历史的重要物品，例如艺术品，对一个国家的文化传承有重要价值，回到发源国家，可以使
本国人对自己的历史更加了解
很多历史物品离开发源地的原因是因为历史的错误，比如侵略和掠夺还有殖民。那么发源地
国家就有理也站在道德高度有权将其收回。
归还也意味对历史错误的承认和纠正，同时有助于新的国家双边关系的建立。也能减少本国
人对侵略掠夺国家的仇恨。这在合作共赢的全球化时代有着重要意义

Some people believe famous people's support towards international aid organizations
draws attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problem less
important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

名人参加公益带来的好处：
名人可以为公益活动背书，使很多公益活动更具有权威性
名人可以通过社会的影响力使公益活动快速引起社会关注
粉丝对名人的崇拜和模仿会使其在公益活动中推广的理念和价值观被快速传播和执行。对于
募集资金的公益活动也能快速得到资金的筹措

名人参加公益带来的好处：
名声不好的名人参加公益活动会带来反作用
有些名人只是借助公益活动来推广自己

国际旅行：
Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue,
but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting culture. Discuss both
sides and give your own opinion. 本类别热点

旅游业有益文化保护（cultural preservation)的论点：
 除了自然景观（landscape)之外，文化和历史是吸引旅游者去一个国家或者一个旅
游景点 (tourism site)观光的最主要原因（motivator);旅游业和文化遗产相结合（integrate
tourism and cultural heritage)为文化保护提供了经济支持（economic incentives)；
 在文化领域提供一些旅游选择(introduce the tourism options available in the cultural
sectors)， 如博物馆、历史景点、活动和美食等（including museums, historical sites, events,
and cuisine), 游客会深人了解当地传统和习俗（get an insight into local customs and traditions),
感受当地传统和艺术（experience local traditions, arts, and heritage),从而更加尊重当地社区

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 和周围的环境 (respect the host community and its environment),促进不同国家之间关于自然和
文化资源保护的交流与对话(the dialogue over conservation of natural and cultural resources )。

旅游业导致文化破坏 cultural destruction )的观点：

 保护的一般是食物、时尚、节日等（preserve food, fashion, festivals, and so forth) 一
些文化的表面特征（superficial elements of culture)；
 各文化定格成表演者（freeze culture as performers), 导致了文化、宗教、传统仪式、
物质文化和语言的损失（the loss of culture, religion, rituals, material culture, and language)；
将文化商业化(commercialize the culture),破坏了文化神圣和独特的本质(erode the sacred and
unique nature)；虽然很多活动是娱乐活动（entertain, rather than educate tourists),但有些是对
当地人的一种羞辱(humiliate the local people)；
 垃圾、涂鸦、破坏和噪音不断增加（increasing litter, graffiti, vandalism, and noise)，
游客在没有被允许的情况下进人建筑物、神殿、神圣的土地（enter buildings, shrines or
sacred lands without permission).这都与当地文化相冲突，是一种文化侮辱（an insult to the
local culture )。

Increasing travels between countries enable people to learn about different cultures or
increases tension between people from different countries.

 外来人口的增加有利于文化的交流：
游客或者移民都具备经济利益和价值（commercial interest and economic value)；
外国人的停留时间是和东道国的合作密切相关的（The length of stay depends on the cooperation of
the host society.)；
很多当地人因此表现得非常好客和友好，这有助于文化的交流（Many local people are very
friendly and hospitable, which promote the cultural communications.)。
 有利于文化全球化的发展以及多元文化的和谐共处：
对其他的文化和人民更为了解（a better understanding of other cultures and other peoples)，这可以
改变人们对其他民族和文化的态度（alter one's attitudes towards another people or culture)；人们
因此可以接受不同的文化和价值观（embrace different values and cultures),可以和平共处（create
motivation to coexist peacefully), 并促进对"多元文化的理解 (promote multi-cultural understanding)。

 外来人口的增加导致冲突：
违反当地的习俗会激怒当地人（breach of local customs can irritate the locals)；
不同文化的人看待同一事物总有不同的角度（harbor different perceptions),并给予不同的解释
(different interpretations)，比如对手势、衣服、言行举止有不同的理解；举止不当会引起当地人
意想不到的反应(provoke unanticipated responses)；
外国游客增多会对当地环境造成压力，甚至破坏环境；
移民增多可能导致工作机会减少，致使竞争更加激烈，这些都有可能引起当地人的反感
（cause resentment in local communities)。

There is a disagreement on the impact of increased business and cultural contact

between countries on a country's identity. What is your opinion?

商业和文化的接触增多会导致一个国家特征的丧失：
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  影响文化：文化不是静态的，而是动态的（not static, but dynamic)；—种文化的改
变主要是由社会环境(social environment)发生了变化。比如说，人们的饮食习惯发生了改变，
这 是 学 习 外 界 文 化 的 结 果 (People's eating habits have been changed as the result of learned
behavior.)； 例子：全球化情况下，本地的饮食文化可能会改变，以适应外国人的口味
（suit the tastes of visitors);
 影响生活方式：进口商品的增多，对外国产品的喜好（preference for imports);人们
更加熟悉他国的文化，而忘记自身的特点（sense of identity)，社会的团结也有所损害（an
erosion of social solidarity);服装、饮食、娱乐等等都被西化了 （westernized),比如说，西装
现在是流行的男性服装(the suit is the most popular outfit for men)；
 欠 发达 国家 在技 术革 新中 起到 的作 用甚 微(play a small role in the technological
revolution), 所 以 需 要 " 出 卖 " 自 己 国 家 的 主 权 或 者 利 益 来 获 得 国 际 的 帮 助 （ concede
sovereignty and interests to other countries for aid) ； 这 也 会 使 贫 富 差 距 加 大 (widening gap
between the richest and poorest parts of the world)；
 接受西方文化的人们成为一个国家新的统治阶级（new ruling class);人们摒弃传统
的观念 (renounce traditionally-held beliefs),觉得传统观念是过时的和低人一等的（outdated
and inferior);主流文化会取代老式的和各种各样的文化（A dominant culture takes over diverse
cultures.),人们不再尊重传统文化（lose respect for older cultures),而传统观念最终成为历史
{consigned to history)。

商业和文化的接触增多会加强一个国家的特征：
 来文化让人们意识到自己文化的特点，从而更加注意维持这种文化；
 一种特殊文化会引起世界的关注，人们会更加注意保护。

环保类：
Tourism today creates a variety of problems, such as pollution due to flights, traffic
congestion, and water pollution. Do you think that governments should impose extra
taxes on flights or accommodations to restrict today's tourism industry?

Governments ought to avoid levying more taxes on flights and accommodations：

旅游业可以为当地人提供更多的就业机会并促进当地的经济发展。
国际旅游业发达也能为国家创汇。
旅游业可以使当地人变得对不同地区和国家的文化更包容，眼界更开阔

政府应当积极应对问题而不是限制旅游业的发展
What should governments do?
雇佣更多清理人手
指导和限制游客产生污染
发展环保旅游设施：比如加强便利公共交通
发展科技，减少车辆和飞机带来的污染

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In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food or animal
products, such as clothing and medicines. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is still crucial to use animals for food purposes.

动物肉类的营养价值不容忽视：蛋白质和其他人必要的营养成分
但应该是消费家禽家畜而非野生动物

不必要的人类需求不应该消耗动物：例如皮草和象牙制品
消费动物的残忍行为和今天的文化价值观有冲突。
Such brutality conflicts with today's civilization.
消费野生动物会破坏环境和生态平衡。
对于动物器官入药随着科技的发展可以得到改变和终止

More and more plastic waste is polluting the world's cities, countryside, and oceans.
What does it cause? And find ways to solve the problem.

由于塑料便宜而被广泛使用，但塑料不是易降解材料，这会对环境产生负担和污染。

解决方法一：政府加强全民的教育，让公众意识到塑料的危害从而减少甚至停止使用。
解决方法二：政府立法限制塑料制品的使用，比如颁布限塑令或者提高塑料制品的税。
解决方法三：政府投资发展科技，找到环保的替代品。

Freshwater has always been a limited resource in some parts of the world. Today,
however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the
causes of the increased demand, and what measures could governments and
individuals take to respond to this problem?

人口增长是水资源短缺的主要原因之一：体现在农业、工业、日常生活三方面

解决方法一：政府加强全民教育，让公众意识到水资源短缺，增强对水资源保护和节省意识。
解决方法二：政府立法惩治污染水和浪费水的行为。
解决方法三：政府投资发展科技，找到更多水资源：比如海水淡化 地下水开发。对水的循环
利用也是重要方法之一

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transport. However, it is no longer the main form of transport. What are the reasons?
What could be done to encourage the use of bicycles among the wider population?

自行车不流行原因：
很多人仍旧把骑自行车当做娱乐或运动的一种形式
其他交通工具比自行车更快捷，尤其在较长途的旅程中
在城市中骑车有时很危险

解决方法一：政府加强全民的教育，让公众意识到绿色低碳出行的意义。
解决方法二：政府立法限制非绿色交通工具的使用。
解决方法三：政府投资建设骑车设施：比如专用车道、安全指示标、更多公共自行车

Some people argue that companies and private individuals, not the government, should
pay the bill for pollution clean-up. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

支持应该是个人和公司来支付污染清理：
个人和公司在使用自然资源和造成污染，所以应当是他们来承担后果和责任。谁是问题的根
源谁就承担职责
个人和公司来承担清理的费用可以是有效的惩治和震慑手段来减少个人和公司对环境和污染，
减少垃圾的产生

政府应该做什么：
投资发展科技来解决环境问题，这往往是个人无力承担和唯利是图的公司不愿投入的。也是
解决污染和环境问题长期的策略

The international community should immediately reduce the consumption of fossil fuels
in all countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

不能放弃 fossil fuels 的原因：

Fossil fuels 的开采技术成熟，使用领域广泛。人类社会和经济对其依赖性很重
人们仍旧认为 fossil fuels 藏量丰富

应当减少使用甚至放弃 fossil fuels 的原因：

使用 fossil fuels 带来的环境污染严重，fossil fuels 创造的价值抵消了解决其带来的污染的费用
fossil fuels 的生产和出口国或许获利，但全球环境在为其买单。因为 fossil fuels 的使用不仅仅
污染环境，还会带来气候变化，比如温室效应，这会威胁全人类的生存。而解决这些问题又
是很大的投入，会导致经济发展停滞，国家财富受损

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只有国家下决心减少 fossil fuels 的使用甚至停用，更多的绿色能源才能被研发

Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve.
Others, however, believe that the problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take
action. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

解决环境问题对于个人而言太大原因：
需要立法惩治和管制的部分个人无能为力
需要国家间完成国际协作也是个人无达到的
科技发展解决环境问题需要大量的资金投入，个人显然负担不起

解决环境问题需要于个人参与原因：
认为不需要公众力量的观点是短视的。提出这个观点的人忽视或者轻视了个人日常行为对社
会趋势改变的影响。所有的法律颁布和对环境问题改善的策略需要公众的参与才能实施和完
成。例如：公众如果坚持私家车优于公共交通，限制私家车来环节环境问题的政府举措就会
实施起来有阻碍。
公众是 an integrated force 当大家都朝着一个共同目标努力的时候。

犯罪类：
Some people think that criminals should not be sent to prison. Instead, education and
training should be provided. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
本类别重点题

罪犯应该被关押的理由：
关押危险的罪犯可以保障守法公民安全舒适的生活环境。罪犯应当和社会常规秩序隔离
关押罪犯有助于减少社会犯罪。关押有一定震慑作用。当考虑到人身自由长时间的丧失，犯
罪分子在犯罪时就会多次考虑是否要铤而走险

罪犯不应该被关押而是加强教育的理由：
关押的社会成本高。修建监狱，警务人员都是不小的开支。
其次教育也有助于减少犯罪，尤其是二次犯罪。关押罪犯不能确保他们已经得到教学和明白
自己的错误。教育会改造犯罪分子的思想意识。同时教育可以教犯罪分子生存技能

Should parents be responsible for their kids' crimes? 本类别热点

8.12 相似题，命中删除

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime.
Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the
motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on
the punishment.

固定刑罚的好处：
固定的刑罚可以提升司法系统的工作效率。法官可以依照固定案例和结果宣判相同或相似的
案件
由于参考之前的案例用固定结果来判决，也会减少司法过程中的矛盾和纠纷
固定的刑罚和判决也会减少司法系统的腐败和暗箱操作，毕竟所有过程和结果在这样的情况
下相对透明

一案一罚的原因：
固定刑罚不能体现司法的公正。每个案件都收到当时的环境和事实的影响，即使结果相同，
动机和过程却千差万别。蓄意杀人和正当防卫失手杀人不应当有相同的惩罚。用结果来判断
过程是不合理的，没有逻辑的

Giving detailed descriptions of crime in newspapers and television, someone says it

could have bad consequences; this kind of media should be restricted. To what extent
do you agree or not agree?

媒体报道犯罪细节的问题：
媒体对犯罪细节详尽报道会增加犯罪率。潜在犯罪分子会从报道中学习犯罪手段，没有判断
力的请少年儿童也会模仿犯罪行为，导致未成年犯罪的增加

媒体报道犯罪细节的优点：
对犯罪细节的了解有助于防止犯罪行为并自我保护。通过犯罪细节的报道，人们对犯罪的了
解提升，对犯罪的警觉性也提升。在面对犯罪行为时也知道如何更好保障自己的权益和安全

In countries, crime is increasing. What are the main reasons for this? What can be
done to improve the situation?

政府教育：总观点
政府投资：科技 经济
政府立法：更有力度地打击犯罪

犯罪率增长的原因：
法律教育的缺乏，没有形成什么是犯罪的意识

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行为教育的缺乏，没有从小养成正确处理和冲突的方法，也没有养成正确价值观
社会经济的萧条，失业率升高，也滋生犯罪行为
对犯罪行为惩罚不够严厉和及时也会增长犯罪。犯罪分子会觉得犯罪得不到严重后果，而不
仔细思考他们的行为

解决方法一：政府加强全民的法律教育、行为教育，尤其在小学课程里。让公众及早培养正
确的法律意识和价值观
解决方法二：政府加大对犯罪的打击力度。比如贩卖人口死刑会减少这一类犯罪
解决方法三：政府投资建设经济，增长就业，使人们更富足也是对犯罪有效的消除方式

Some people think that the development of technology helps to reduce crime, while
other people think it encourages crime. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

科技减少犯罪：
对很多传统犯罪形式，比如入室行窃和扒手等，科技的进步提供了更多预防和解决的措施

科技增加犯罪：
科技的发达给犯罪分子更多犯罪手段和逃避法律制裁的手段
科技犯罪是科技发达时代的产物，例如互联网诈骗和黑客

8.19 纸笔雅思小作文预测
2023 年上半年 24 场考试，大作文命中 15 场，命中率 63%，小作文命中 13 场，

命中率 51%

2023.7.22 雅思小作文表格命中

2023.7.29 雅思小作文柱图命中

2023.8.5 雅思小作文表格命中

2023.8.12 雅思小作文地图命中

2023.8.19 雅思小作文

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第一梯队预警： 柱图 第二梯队预警：线图

The bar chart below describes how many adults of different age groups used the
Internet in the UK from 2003 to 2006.
Overall, during the given time, an increasing number of people surfed online in
each age group. However, the older these people are, the less they may use the
Internet.

Specifically, the 16 to 24 years old group had the highest number of internet users
among the five groups, with the figure slightly increasing from 80% to peak at over
90% between 2003 and 2005, then declining to 85% in 2006.
Although the group of people aged over 65 had the same changing trend as the
group of 15 to 25, this group's figure was the least among all, peaking at 25% in 2005
before dropping to 20% in 2006. Noticeably, no person was surfing online in this group
in 2003.
The number of internet users aged 25 to 44 and 55 to 64 both climbed stably in
four years, rising from 80% and 50% to 85% and 60%, respectively. Notedly, internet
users aged 25 to 44 ranked as the second largest.
The figure for those aged 45 to 54 changed differently compared with the former
ones. Starting at almost 60% in 2003, the figure for internet users aged 45 to 54 rose
marginally by 10% in 2004; the number dropped to nearly 50% in 2005 before rallying
to the peak of 75% in 2006.

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 The line chart shows the proportion of the urban population in the USA, Korea,
China, and India from 1970 to 2030.
Overall, the number of people living in four cities increased from 1970 to 2030 to
different extents. Noticeably, the sum of the USA and Korea is always higher than that
of China and India.

In 1970, 70% of Americans lived in the city, which was the largest among the four
countries. The figure gradually increased to 88% in 2010. The gap between the USA
and Korea considerably narrowed when Korea's city population rapidly soared from
40% in 1970 to 85% in 2010. The urban proportion of China and India was equal to
20% in the first decade. From 1980, the number of India increased slowly to 35% in
2010. By contrast, the number of people living in China's cities remained at 20% from
1980 to 1990, and then it soared to 62% in 2010, exceeding that of India in 1995.
In the future, the four countries' urban populations will all keep going up as they
used to do. In 2030, the USA and Korea will reach 90%, to be the most, the proportion
of China and India will end up at 68% and 38%, respectively, but India's urban
population is the lowest among the four countries.

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