By : Chong & Lee

Good Stress
(Eustress)
In Workplace
IELTS BAND 9 ESSAY
Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory
job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such
situations.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

 INTRODUCTION

Nowadays people are calling into question the

acceptance of situations that are severely harsh.
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While some of the individuals claim that accepting
these circumstances is superior, others insist on
improving these conditions.

In this essay, both sides will be scrutinised 仔细

检查followed by my own take on the matter.
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Core
On the one hand, the benefits of accepting demanding
competences
situations are by no means negligible. To begin with, being
in a hostile 敌对的 situation is highly likely to enhance
people’sispatience.
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Simply put, when ones are under severe pressure and fail
to change their position for the better on their own, they
are just obliged 有义务的to wait till, for example, an
external factor can assist them.

Consequently, they are being converted to more tolerant

people. Furthermore, it is bound to prevent immediate
reaction to these situations which can be destructive
decisions. Because reacting impulsively to a hostile
position might well result in an inappropriate response.
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On the other hand, opponents of the mentioned view say that
trying to figure out a solution to the problem is more beneficial.

First of all, a hard-working person who always seeks to find a

solution is more likely to achieve their goal. To be more exact,
the more hardworking people are, the less harsh situation they
will confront面对

Take PhD candidates who would face a mathematical problem

during their thesis as an example; they will potentially overcome
the barrier 克服障碍 by searching hard on the internet.

Moreover, it may broaden individuals’ horizons and acquire some

skills by learning substantial constructive information during
their attempts to find an alternative.
 CONCLUSION

In conclusion, although accepting a bad situation

would increase human’s tolerance and prevent
reacting compulsorily,

I strongly believe, not only will the hard-working

conquer the problem, but also they will acquire
knowledge in their way of finding a solution.
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