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: New First Revision Second Revision

Name of Reviewer:
Manuscript Title: JAKARTA EVOLUTION SUSTAINABILITY INNOVATION WITH THE
PRESENCE OF THE ONLINE SINGLE SUBMISSION RISK-BASED APPROACH
SYSTEM, A SOLUTION FOR LICENSING SERVICES IN DKI JAKARTA PROVINCE

Dear Esteemed Reviewer,

Jurnal Dinamika Manajemen Dan Bisnis (JDMB) seeks to publish high quality, scholarly
empirical and theoretical research articles in management that test, extend, or build theory
and contribute to management practices. JDMB promotes new approaches to the
management study in marketing, strategic, human resources, finance, entrepreneurship and
aims to advance new thinking that is relevant to bussiness practices in global region.
Please evaluate the enclosed manuscript regarding:
1. The soundness of its introduction, literature review, methodology, analysis, and
discussions.
2. Its significance to the developments and advancement of marketing study, both in
terms of practical and academic implications
3. Its overall strengths and weaknesses, including its structure and relevance to the
scope of this journal
Please return your completed evaluation to: jdmb@feunj.ac.id

Editor-in-Chief
JURNAL DINAMIKA MANAJEMEN DAN BISNIS
Fakultas Ekonomi, Universitas Negeri Jakarta
Kampus A, Rawamangun Muka Jakarta Timur
Telp : 0859 2151 1970

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techniques used. Keywords do
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