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Essay (Advantages & Disadvantages)
Essay (Advantages & Disadvantages)
Topic: More and more people choose to move to other countries to study higher education. Do you think the
advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Intro: An increasing number of students go overseas to attend unversity. In my opinion, the disadvantages of
this trend surpass the advantages.
Lập luận
- Đưa ra 2 lợi ích
- Đưa ra 2 bất lợi
Studying abroad can help students become more independent. This is because they will have to live on their
own without parental support, and do part-time jobs to cover living costs . Consequently, being highly
independent might help them to become more self-reliant when they have to deal with challenges or
difficulties in the real life.
Students can have opportunities to broaden their knowledge about culural diversity. This is because they
study with classmates from other countries. As a result, this will boost their ability to adapt to international
working environments quickly.
- Đi du học một mình => gặp vấn đề về tâm lý như sốc văn hoá và nhớ nhà. => trong trường hợp học
sinh không hoà nhập được với bạn bè => học sinh có thể tự cô lập bản thân => hệ quả: trở nên trầm
cảm => ảnh hưởng xấu đến việc học ở trường.
Going abroad to attend university alone can make students suffer from mental issues, such as culture
shock and homesickness. If they are not able to adapt to a new environment, they may isolate themselves and
suffer from deprression. As a result, this will have a negative effects on / negatively affect their study at school.
- Đi du họ các nước phát triển => gây áp lực tài chính cho gia đình học sinh => Lý giải : học phí và sinh
hoạt phí cao => hệ quả : học sinh sẽ dành nhiều thời gian đi làm thêm => bị xao nhãng việc học => kết
quả học tập kém.
Going overseas to enter university in developed countries, such as the United States or Australia can put
financial pressure on students’ families. This is because tuition fees and living costs in these countries are very
expensive. Consequently, this distract them from their study at school and lead to bad academic performance.