Brainstorming

Inmortality
overpopulation is a big
problems

Family
-I can meet my granpchild.
- I can spend time with my
family.
- I can teach my children a
lot of things.
Careers
- I have studied all the careers
that I like. (photography,
administration, pastry)
My life in 2175 -I managed to be a great
teacher, marketer, business
administrator
-It got boring after several
years.

Marriage
I could be married and
fulfilled many goals with
my husband
I married with my true love
at 30
I helped him to live longer
like me

Outline
 I. INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH.

A. Hook
Millions died and we are still here

B. Thesis statement (topic sentence + the controlling idea)

things have changed significantly from 2020 to 2175 throughout my life and, in this
process, I have had positive and negative experiences such as marriage, careers and
overpopulation. (Thesis statement + the controlling idea)

II. BODY PARA GRAPH:

A. TOPIC SENTENCE: we can do things that we didn’t have enough time (topic sentence)

1. As we live longer, we can get married as much as we can (supporting

details)

B. TOPIC SENTENCE: People could study a lot of things, I learned how to play an
instrument, and I learned new languages (topic sentence).

2. People go after what I really want my “passion” (supporting details)

C. TOPIC SENTENCE: family members have increased.

3. since we can live longer, we can meet our grandchildren easily.

III.CONCLUSION:

To sum up, most of the things that we knew from the past have changed inevitably
Course: ARW2
Descriptive Essay
Millions died and we are still here. I received the pill, and I could live forever. I open
my eyes, it’s a chilly evening, the awesome sunset reflects my eyes, my mom is shaking
me awake. I got up rapidly because I heard a stronger sound. Opening the door of my
awesome bedroom, I noticed that everything is different. The lovely sunset, which was
a ball of fire is still there. I’m utterly happy because I would live that long. However,
things have changed significantly from 2020 to 2175 throughout my life and, in this
process, I have had positive and negative experiences such as marriage, careers and
family .
Immortality have affected the things that we because now we have more free time, and
we can do more things. For example: As we live longer, we are able to get married as
much as we can. I receive a lot of proposals. Besides, I am living with the challenge of
sticking by one husband. On the other hand, the relationship between my husband and
my last family, is complicated. Besides, I can spend more time with my lovers and
families.
Now that we have more time to live, people can take advantage about the time and learn
new languages or learn how to play instruments. For example, Taking advantages and
putting off a year or a decade without any problem. In addition, I go after what I really
want my “passion “(to speak a lot of languages). I’m finding out the universe’s secrets.
opposed, the university time studying is increasing, and it could be difficult for young
people. Moreover, we changed our routine of studying 5 years it is linked with the
careers. it is great that humans would have more time to invest in animal intelligence, or
cures for diseases. Moreover, I’m looking for new things that could be important.
Third, the number of the family members has increased. As people can live for more
than 100 years, family members are more than the past, I could meet my
grandchildren’s son, in my family we are almost 60 members and I live with all of
them. For example, last night I ran into someone that I didn’t know, but he said that he
was my relative. Finally, in 2175 scientists found out immortality, it generated
overpopulation. It apparently sounds good because people can make a better world, they
could donate things, rebuild continents like Africa, or eliminate poverty. Unfortunately,
overpopulation means limit jobs opportunities, pointing out that: with 10 billion people
on the planet and a limited amount of job opportunities available, more people will find
themselves struggling to earn enough to survive. Overall, experts found out the life
span, and people could make a better world, or we could destroy it.
To sum up, most of the things that we knew from the past have changed inevitably. The
nature is asking about the contamination that we made, people have destroyed the
environment and it has changed radically.