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ADVISORY BOARD
Jens Allwood {Linguistics, University of Gothenburg)
Morton Benson (Department of Slavic, University of Pennsylvania)
Marilyn Gaddis Rose (CRIT, Binghamton University)
Yves Gambier (Institute of Translation and Interpreting, Turku University)
Daniel Gile (Université Lumière Lyon 2 and CEEI(ISIT), Paris)
Ulrich Heid (Computational Linguistics, University of Stuttgart)
Eva Hung (Chinese University of Hong Kong)
W. John Hutchins (Library, University of East Anglia)
Werner Koller (Department of Germanic, Bergen University)
José Lambert (Catholic University of Louvain)
Willy Martin (Lexicography, Free University of Amsterdam)
Alan Melby (Linguistics, Brigham Young University)
Makoto Nagao (Electrical Engineering, Kyoto University)
Roda Roberts (School of Translation and Interpreting, University of Ottawa)
Juan C. Sager (Linguistics, Terminology, UMIST, Manchester)
María Julia Sainz (Law School, Universidad de la República, Montevideo)
Klaus Schubert (Technical Translation, Fachhochschule Flensburg)
Mary Snell-Hornby (School of Translation & Interpreting, University of Vienna)
Sonja Tirkkonen-Condit (Savonlinna School of Translation Studies, Univ. of Joensuu)
Gideon Toury (M. Bernstein Chair of Translation Theory, Tel Aviv University)
Wolfram Wilss (Linguistics, Translation and Interpreting, University of Saarland)
Judith Woodsworth (FIT Committee for the History of Translation,
Concordia University, Montreal)
Sue Ellen Wright (Applied Linguistics, Kent State University)
Volume 17
Edited by
FERNANDO POYATOS
University of New Brunswick
Preface xi
Acknowledgments xii
Introduction 1
Fernando Poyatos
Part 4. THEATER
"Is this a dagger which I see before me?": The non-verbal language
of drama 187
Mary Snell-Hornby
Verbal and non-verbal constituents in theatrical texts and implications
for translators 203
Said El-Shiyab
Part 5. POETRY
"Whose morsel of lips will you bite?": Some reflections on the role of
prosody and genre as non-verbal elements in the translation of
poetry 217
Seán Golden
Part 6. INTERPRETATION
The reality of multichannel verbal-nonverbal communication in
simultaneous and consecutive interpretation 249
Fernando Poyatos
CONTENTS ix
Having contributed for many years to the advance of the very interdisciplinary
field of Nonverbal Communication Studies, a book on the translation of literature
and media language and on live interpretation was being felt as overdue in my
own work.
This is, therefore, the first volume of its kind. As such, it should not only
open many new perspectives in the various areas it presents, but also incite
others to further this kind of study in both scope and depth.
The theoretical and methodological ideas and models it contains should
merit the interest not only of students of literature, professional translators and
translatologists, interpreters, and those engaged in film and television dubbing,
but also of literary readers, film and theatergoers, linguists and psycholinguists,
semioticians, communicologists, and crosscultural anthropologists.
Fernando Poyatos
Fredericton, May 1996
Acknowledgments
To all those who through the years have spurred me to further my work in the
areas here represented by applying it to their own research.
To the colleagues and students of many universities who give me the
opportunity to share my ideas with them, for their very stimulating response.
To John Benjamins' editor Bertie Kaal, who invited me to do this volume;
and to my co-authors, who made it possible, for their knowledge and generosity.
To my University of New Brunswick, my God-given scholar's haven, for
its continued support of thirty years.
Introduction
Fernando Poyatos
University of New Brunswick
[1983]), with earlier versions in Spanish [Poyatos 1972, 1976a]), another one on
theater (Poyatos 1982) and many live discussions by him at conferences and as
lectures. In a later volume that resulted from an international symposium he
organized (Poyatos 1988), the term 'literary anthropology' was established as an
area for the diachronic or synchronic study of the historical and documentary
elements in literary works that constitute nonverbal communication within a
culture (that is, not only its paralanguage, kinesics and proxemics, but its many
other activities and nonacitivities). In his latest interdisciplinary volume (Poyatos
1992a), six papers treated of various nonverbal aspects in the Greek and Roman
classics (Holoka 1992; Lateiner 1992a; Newbold 1992), with references to other
writings by themselves (Lateiner 1987, 1992b; Newbold 1981, 1982, 1986,
1990), including a discussion of certain translation problems (Vermeer 1992) and
the relationship between literature and the arts (Golder 1992), in addition to one
on paralanguage in literature (Poyatos 1992b). Without attempting to be
exhaustive at all, other authors could be cited who dealt with different nonverbal
aspects of literature: Kuepper (1970), on Kafka; Wyndeatt (1979) and Benson
(1980), on Chaucer; Bevington (1984), on Shakespeare's gestures; Portch (1985),
on the novel; Fell (1986), on Maugham's novels; Marmot Raim (1986), on
Maupassant; Øyslebø (1987), on Jonas Lie; Levenston (1989), on Shaw's stage
directions; Romera (1989, 1991, 1994), on Columbus' Diary, and on literature
in general; Arnould (1990), on laughter and tears in the Greek and Roman
classics from Homer to Plato; Oancia (M.A. thesis, 1990), on Pérez Galdós's
novels; Poyatos himself became increasingly interested in identifying the
different aspects of the literary work which, for the most part, still awaited
greater attention, thus attempting to establish certain models and open various
new perspectives (Poyatos 1993, 1994, 1995a, 1995b), using also as a channel
the new Encyclopedia of Semiotics edited by Bouissac (Poyatos 1996a, 1996b,
In press). The less obvious aspects of nonverbal communication in literary
translation, however, as well as in the challenging experience of live interpreta
tion, seem to have been traditionally neglected.
The present volume, therefore, represents the first joint effort (which
certainly should be followed by similar and more ambitious endeavors) by those
interested in the various literary genres, specialists in visual translation as film
and television dubbing, and those who professionally practice and teach these
areas. In addition, it discloses the challenges of live interpretation, a field which,
as Viaggio complains in his contribution, still seems to lack a formal treatment
of nonverbal communication even on the part of its professional practitioners. On
INTRODUCTION 3
the other hand, although any single volume seems to lack something or other, it
is hoped that the readers will appreciate the pioneering effort of the present one,
which John Benjamin editor Bertie Kaal kindly invited me to edit during the
1993 International Congress of Applied Linguistics.
theory proposed by Vermeer (1992). Hatim recognizes in this volume what can
be called popular fiction ('action-packed' for men, 'heart-warming' for women),
analyzing the role, for the graphic representation, of its core vocabulary. As for
ńon-fiction, he refers to news report and its use of core and non-core vocabulary
for description of nonverbal features
Part 2: Cultures in translation
YAU SHUN-CHIU, a sensitive poet himself and the author of another intriguing
and illuminating contribution on Chinese writing characters to a former volume
by Poyatos (Yau 1992), offers an excellent complement to Hasada's article on
Japanese culture (and certainly to Golden's analysis of Chinese literature) and a
much needed reference about Chinese kinesics (which he recognizes as more
limited than, for instance, in Latin cultures), for which there is very little
information, no books and no names to refer to most gestures. While usually
explicit descriptions of gestures in idiomatic expressions do not pose many
problems, Yau discusses, with excellent examples, the less explicit ones, or
descriptions which do not disclose the function of the gestures in question, which
would easily dissociate it from its context in the text and even more in
translation. These would become stumbling blocks for the serious translators (the
others would not even acknowledge such obvious problems). Yau shows us also
a number of most interesting old gestures still present among today's Chinese
people, and others that have disappeared in that society and cannot be recon
structed (nor safely described by a translator). The second part of Yau's article
presents more Chinese gestures (some appearing in ancient literary works) in a
fascinating present-day crosscultural perspective, and translators will find very
specific and unsuspected implications in its sections on the concept of 'right' and
'left' spatial locations in Chinese culture, 'yes' and 'no' in conversation (similar
to Japan), and the peculiar notion of time of traditional Chinese speakers in the
'spatial' location in references to past and future (reflected in literature).
RIE HASADA'S contribution constitutes an exemplary illustration of the
interdisciplinarity of nonverbal communication studies. Combining the field of
literary translation with what can be aptly termed 'ethnocommunication', she
offers us a fascinating account of Japanese interactive nonverbal communication,
so often and typically puzzling and frustrating for westerners, and a glimpse of
the many misinterpretations to which readers can be exposed in literary
translations. She calls our attention to the risks involved in literal translation of
what, she says, are true 'culturemes' (Poyatos 1976b), in this case culture-
specific displays and functions of nonverbal behaviors such as smiling, crying,
INTRODUCTION 5
eye movements, and eye contact. In fact, hours before writing these lines, I had
occasion to see precisely those behaviors in Yasujiro Ozu's 1953 film Tokyo
Stories', smiling and eye contact being part of my own memories of Japan. By
doing this, the author provides also an excellent complement to Viaggio's and
Weales's papers, as she suggests the risks of live interpretation, when those
behaviors occur and, therefore, the interpreter must take care to (a) properly
translate any verbal reference to those nonverbal behaviors mentioned by Hasada,
and (b) even interpret those behaviors verbally when the speakers display them
themselves, thus meeting the interpreter's responsibility to carry out a correct
cultural rendering of activities and attitudes essential to the encounter.
Part 3: Narrative literature
CHRISTIANE NORD, drawing from her extensive work, deals with descriptions and
transcriptions of paralinguistic behaviors, based on Alice in Wonderland's original
text and its French, German and Spanish translations. After identifying the
characters' nonverbal behaviors and certain culture-bound verbal expressions —
linking on this point with Hasada's paper — she focusses on 'paralinguistic
behavioremes', distinguishing various aspects of speech found in her model
(tone, voice qualities, temporal features, the paralinguistic and kinesic manner of
speech, certain onomatopoeic utterances, and 'zero representations of para-
language', that is, when only the verb 'to say' is used, without specifying how).
She notes that a literary text is not so much the behavior itself as the way it is
described and (explicitly or implicitly) interpreted by the author, narrator and/or
the characters themselves, and calls our attention to the paralanguage used in the
narrator's own comments, a lively stylistic device (not rare in children's
literature), which in turn suggests the style of a potential story reader or teller.
Nord suggests a functional approach whereby translators may opt for either
descriptions or transcriptions of those behaviors, depending on their specific
(sometimes culture-bound) communicative functions and subfunctions (referen
tial, expressive, appellative, and phatic), which readers must interpret. Nord
concludes that this functional approach is much more truthful than the " 'true' or
'faithful' reproduction of any verbal or paraverbal surface features of the original
text". One should consider, of course, whatever the authors themselves might
have to say regarding what they would probably see as translators' liberties in
detriment of their 'carefully constructed literary text', thus establishing the
confrontation of two crafts with conflicting views and solutions.
PIERANGELA DIADORI, drawing from her continuing work on Italian kinesics
(e.g. Diadori 1990), analyzes the different ways in which the German and
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English translators deal with the gestures in Manzoni's famous Italian historical
novel I Promessi Sposi, some still common in the western world, while others are
no longer or rarely used, or simply absent in German and English societies.
Diadori explains, with a profusion of examples, how some translators dispense
with some details in their more general descriptions, or, for instance, add verbal
expressions to facilitate their readers' interpretation. It seems that the German
translators are more faithful ("probably also due to its illustrations"), while the
English often insert those metatextual elements. Another important metatextual
element (in fact, what we could call 'accelerating' channel) is the insertion of
illustrations, which may faithfully agree with the verbal description, add details
not present in the text, or even introduce a gesture which is not in the text.
KIRSTEN MALMKJAER, taking Andersen's stories as a clear illustration,
endeavors to heighten the translators' awareness of the extreme, but often
unrecognized, importance of punctuation when rendering the source text into the
target language. His method isolates a particular function of punctuation, namely
the signalling of nuances of semantic significance, suggesting that this function
is not widely recognized. Andersen's punctuation is generally considered to be
idiosyncratic, and Malmkjær suggests that his punctuation supports its lexico-
grammar, showing that the normalization of punctuation in translation accords
with, and amplifies, lexicogrammatical selections which alter the focus of the
source text.
YISHAI TOBIN presents a theoretical and methodological approach based on
his semiotic concept of language and a text as a system of systems used for
communication, which he applies to Zivia Lubetkin's In Days of Destruction and
Revolt, a first-hand, intimately personal autobiographical memoir of the Warsaw
Ghetto and its Zionist pioneering youth movement. He states that he is using
Poyatos' idea of the basic triple structure Language-Paralanguage-Kinesics to see
whether, and how, these systems match in the original text and in its translation,
and relates actions, states, or events to modern Hebrew' system of verb tenses,
seeing that in Lubetkin's text it constitutes a means to determining her own
perception of that environment. Studying the linguistic, extralinguistic and
paralinguistic systems, he shows how the non-random distribution of the
linguistic system specifically reflects the extralinguistic reality of the scenes, thus
"strengthening the common extralinguistic identity between the encoder and her
audience [...] creating and reinforcing a common communicative bond between
them". Tobin discusses also the interaction between the linguistic, extralinguistic
and paralinguistic systems, rightly concluding that they function together and that,
therefore, it would be unrealistic to study them separately, as is done much too often.
INTRODUCTION 7
Part 4: Theater
MARY SNELL-HORNBY, a well-known authority in the field of translation,
discusses the relationship between verbal and non-verbal language in a stage
performance and, using a number of examples from plays by Shakespeare,
Bernhard and Stoppard, investigates the means by which visions, sounds and
actions are created by the dramatic score of the text. In the world of theatrical
illusion, the nonverbal element is more immediate and basic than the verbal. The
theatrical sign is discussed in its relevance as icon, index and symbol, and the
verbal stage text is seen in its relationship to non-verbal means of communication
(paralinguistic, kinesic and proxemic), a sensory stimulus which only realizes its
full potential within the framework of the stage production. The logical
conclusion is that the translator should be integrated into the production team so
that the text can be adapted to suit the needs of the production concerned.
SAID EL-SHIYAB'S initial warnings concerning the translation of plays (e.g.
that "failure to produce their visual and non-visual effects in the target language
would yield unacceptable results", that sometimes "it is hard for the translator
to apprehend the precise import of such words", and that "the translator's job is
[...] to translate sense, spirit, style, and manner of the original") establish very
logical links with the other papers on literary translation, (in particular Golden's
on poetry, since it is also written to be read aloud). Furthermore, El Shiyab
discusses the different linguistic, social and cultural elements that often defy
accurate translation, as he illustrates with examples from Macbeth and Hamlet,
mainly, and references to Paradise Lost, showing how some Arabic translations
failed (e.g. at times unintentionally or intentionally considering Arabic morals
and tradition, or disregarding Shakespeare's metaphors) to express specific
aspects present in the original lines. Other problems arise too, including acting
style, the inevitable failure to preserve the original sound of the lines, special
meanings of words in the playwright's time, the playwright's hints on the play's
setting, etc.
Part 5: Poetry
SEAN GOLDEN'S contribution challenges existing hypotheses on poetry as a genre
and on translation of poetry as poetry. He shows how two things differ greatly
across cultures: the literary pragmatics of poetry and its semiotic role in the
ideology of a culture, and the formal elements that configure the genre of poetry,
among which there are a number of nonverbal aspects. Golden analyzes some
audible, visual and special aspects of the formal elements of poetry in order to
question some of the assumptions that are taken for granted when discussing the
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neglect this basic fact, concentrating on the 'micro level' of their communicative
situation, rather than weighing all the components of its 'macro level', including
the lexical functions of kinesics; although it is a fact that an audience prefers
"intelligibility and essentials over completeness". As for the visibility of the
listener's feedback, Viaggio confirms this basic need; consequently, he confirms
as well the invisible interpreters s natural audio-visual production of speech
during interpretation, as well as their awareness of their own nonverbal
inaccuracies. Thus, Viaggio's contribution is perhaps the first systematic attempt
at explaining the reason why good visibility of all participants in the act of
communication is essential for the simultaneous interpreter, emphasizing also the
importance of the speaker's and the audience's kinesics as comprehension aids,
as well as that of the interpreter's own kinesics for processing and delivery.
EDNA WEALE, another high-level professional interpreter, presents an
enlightening discussion of many of the problems caused by nonverbal commu
nication and, in the process, succeeds in demonstrating how interpretation can be
turned into an art, based entirely on her long personal experience. Besides adding
much valuable information to Viaggio's discussion on the speaker's amputation
of his/her audiovisual speech, she discusses (a) paralinguistic problems, including
the possible incongruence between the sex of speaker and interpreter, which
naturally affects the proper conveyance and interpretation of sex-specific
paralinguistic behaviors; (b) the time delay between the speaker's delivery and
its translation; (c) the problems involved in interpretating read speeches; (d) the
artificial culture created within a conference venue, (e) what Weale calls the
"joyful chaos" of conference misunderstandings, which she illustrates with some
memorable anecdotes, centered on humor, anger, pride and honor, and
appearance; and (f) some parallels between interpretation and music, poetry,
filming and theater.
cartoons and films, constitutes a brief but very useful manual for those who must
design and translate an audiovisual source product, offering quite a few
suggestions for dealing with specific problems encountered in audiovisual texts
that contain paralanguage, kinesics, proxemics, cultural signs, etc. Readers will
find this contribution most appropriate at a time when particularly TV commer
cials, mostly through multinationals, travel the world over, carrying with them
the verbal and nonverbal translation problems Chaume deals with here.
PATRICK ZABALBEASCOA, finally, complements Chaume's discussion,
showing how the translation of audiovisual texts forces one to rethink some of
the recurrent issues in the translation field, particularly the division into
intralingual, interlingual (regarded as translation proper) and intersemiotic
translation. New forms of text production like hypertexts, multimedia, films and
television certainly put such division into a new perspective. Zabalbeascoa argues
that those three types do not have such clear-cut borders and that it may be more
useful to think of translation as a matter of degree, where many verbal and
nonverbal factors come into play, some being more important or more restrictive
in one type and not so much in another. This approach requires a common
denominator or definition for all translation phenomena and a set of parameters
by which to study and evaluate translations, besides identifying the exact force
of each factor for each translation type. Zabalbeascoa describes some of the
specific features of audiovisual translation and accounts for them within his
general mode of translation, which hinges on the notion of variability within the
priorities and restrictions involved in that task.
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Part 1
Fernando Poyatos
University of New Brunswick
1. Introduction
A printed narrative text is, first of all, something we perceive through our eyes,
and then 'intellectualize' in a process conditioned by a series of factors, mainly
personal (e.g. socioeducational status), cultural (e.g. specific interpretation of
certain interactive silences, possibly indicated but not explained), and situational
(e.g. one's mood or emotional state). Therefore, basic also to any discussion of
that text seems to be the acknowledgement of how exactly our reading takes
place, the 'act of reading', as we might appropriately call it; that is, how we
perceive the writer's verbal and nonverbal representation of the characters, their
circumstances and their surrounding physical world (which in turn contains many
other elements implicitly). This representation is visually rendered on the space
of each page by typesetter and printer, those intermediaries who are as a rule
totally detached from the readers' complex and subtle experience of reading the
text which they are setting and printing, and yet are instrumentally responsible
for that intimate activity of ours.
If we think of speech as the basic triple audiovisual structure language-para-
language-kinesics, which the writer is forced to reduce to a verbal-nonverbal
visual depiction, we immediately see that that very spatial and visual medium,
the page, varies with each different edition according to the spatial location of
elements on each line and on each page. It is, in other words, quite alienated
from the reality of the living, organized, psychosomatic activity that it purports
to evoke and represent. Besides the physical characteristics of the book itself,
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In " 'You're a liar!', he yelled, banging the table with his fist. 'You're a liar,
you're a liar!' "(Lawrence SL I, I), we at least perceive the pounding on the table
immediately after the first "You're a liar!", but not in:
Mr. Pyser took his pipe from his mouth, and looked at Hetty in mild surprise for some
moments [...] / 'Why, what's put that idea into your head, my wench?' he said at last,
after he had given one conservative puff (Eliot AB, XXXI)
However, we prefer to become aware of the nonverbal qualifiers before and not
after the words, as in:
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Scully [the hotel's proprietor] banged his hand impressively on the footboard of the bed.
'Why, man, we're goin' to have a line of ilictric street-cars in this town next spring'
(Crane BH, I)
Even more in these two longer examples, where verbal and nonverbal expres
sions are presented in their actual sequence throughout:
fue tanto [don Quixote's annoyance] que, con voz atropellada y tartamuda lengua,
lanzando vivo fuego por los ojos, dijo: — ¡Oh, bellaco, villano, malmirado, descompuesto,
ignorante, infacundo, deslenguado, atrevido, murmurador y maldiciente! [...] ¡Vete, no
parezcas delante de mí, so pena de mi ira! Y diciendo esto, enarcó las cejas, hinchó los
carrillos, miró a todas partes, y dio con el pie derecho una gran patada en el suelo, señales
todas de la ira que encerraba en sus entrañas (Cervantes DQ, 1, XLVI)
And all at once Lucy began to laugh again, uncontrollably. She covered her face with
her hands, her whole body shook, as though she were passionately weeping. 'It's too
good', she gasped, dropping her hands and leaning back in her chair. Her face still
worked with laughter; there were tears on her cheeks (Huxley PCP, XI)
As for punctuation itself,2 we must recognize also the correlation between our
visual perception of written words and their simultaneous or almost simultaneous
features evoked by punctuation symbols, for instance: When Spanish [¡], is
associated to the words that follow, immediately modifying them a posteriori
(but with continuity) as they get farther away from it; and the perception and
anticipation a priori when those paralinguistic symbols follow the words, for
instance, [...], or, again in Spanish, the [¡] or [¿] of the following sentence; that
is, as an intellectual (but basically physiological) operation through macular
vision and even peripheral vision. Translators, therefore, must be extremely
conscious of the extent to which they should be aware of the presence and
location of the punctuation symbols they are translating, as they should
constantly help the more sensitive readers not just to 'hear' but to 'see' the
persons in the story. Both translators and translatologists should realize that the
various aspects and problems of punctuation fall squarely within nonverbal
communication studies, for it is precisely nonverbal elements that people have
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As for the similar inefficacy of, for instance, English [——?] as compared to
Spanish [ ¿ — — ? ] , I will just offer a few examples showing (but, naturally,
conditioned in turn by how it appears in this volume) how the readers of English
can be totally unaware of how those written words are meant to be uttered until
they come to the very last one of them, that is, whether it is going to be an
interrogation or not:3
You remember a certain famous occasion when I was more drunk than — than usual?
(Dickens TTC, XXI)
Je suppose que le compagnon auquel vous faites allusion n'est pas Alfred Meurant?
(Simenon MA, II)
you aren't going to give up playing just when the luck's running your way? (Waugh HD, VI)
— ¿Tú te quedas con lo mío después del favor que te hice? (Berenguer MJL, 64)
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5. The speaking face and body of the character and its perception in the
written text and its translation
Having said above that speech is a triple audiovisual structure made up basically
of words, paralanguage and kinesics, it must be specified now that its basic
instrument of transmission is the face, complemented by hand movements and
in general by the movements and still positions of the rest of the body. It is
essentially a facial anatomy of static signs or features that speaks to us in an
interaction, which we consciously or unconsciously see, consistently made
dynamic and lending specific characteristics to words and word-like utterances
(sighs, clicks, 'Uh-hu'), which are in turn accompanied by, and semantically
related to, gestures, manners and postures of equally specific personal and
cultural characteristics.4
Thus, when translators translate the words spoken by the characters, as well
as the authors's words that describe how those voices sound and what those
speaking faces look like as they speak, they ought to bear in mind the acoustic
similarities and differences between the words in the original text and those in
their target language, for the more sensitive readers will utter them to themselves
and therefore hear and see those faces. Therefore, if the narrator introduces
initially the characters' facial features, and their general style of visual behavior,
the reader will be able to imagine them more consistenly each time new
paralinguistic or kinesic features are described. And what is even more important,
that initial physical portrait, as with subsequent descriptions, will allow us to see
and hear the characters even when we are not given any paralinguistic and
kinesic descriptions. The writer, therefore, will exercise his or her ability, once
that initial presentation has been done, to maintain kinesic and paralinguistic
repertoires that correspond precisely to those characters:
The pouted-up deep red mouth to which this syllable was native had hardly as yet settled
into its definite shape, and her lower lip had a way of thrusting the middle of her top
one upward, when they closed together after a word (Hardy TD, II)
He [Sir Rupert Irons] had a heavily hard body, was square in the head, face, jaws and
shoulders [...] his neck was ridged with muscles acquired from a life-long habit of
stiffening his jaw and pushing it forward during all business conversations (MacLennan
TS, I, XI)
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A. Primary Qualities6
a. Verbal description:
'It must be nice to be famous', said the girl softly (Dreiser JG, I)
'No,' he said, with a slow sadness; 'I never saw you looking better' (Howells HNF, V)
b. Paralinguistic transcription:
Fine ol' lady—fi-ii-ne [...] Well, you'll have t'brace up an' be a comfort t' th' ol'
mother (Crane GM, I)
You're a man, you want to do a thing, you do it. You haven't the thousand obstacles a
woman has in front of her (Lawrence WL, IV)
B. Qualifiers1
a. Verbal description:
[Basilio] con voz tremente y ronca [...] con voz doliente y desmayada [...] [pretending to
die] ya los ojos vueltos, el aliento corto y apresurado, murmurando entre los dientes el
nombre de Quiteña (Cervantes DQ, II, XXI)
La voz [Hilda's] era vibrante, desgarrada, con matices aguardentosos, entre provocativa
y fiera, con unos altibajos y unos retintines que estaban pidiendo camorra (Pereda S, V)
he [Gerald] said [...] at last, forcing the words from his lungs, in a voice so soft and
low, it sounded like a dream within her, not spoken in the outer air (Lawrence WL, XIV)
her voice became husky because her throat was bathed in the irrepressible and
continuous crying which her happiness caused her (Doctorow R, VII)
b. Paralinguistic transcription:
MARTA (a snarl of disimissal and contempt) NYYYYAAAAHHHH! (Aibee WAVW, I)
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C. Differentiators8
a. Verbal description:
La Condesa gave a little saw-edged trill of laughter (Porter SF, II, 200)
Joe gave a reproachful cough, as much as to say, 'Well, I told you so' (Dickens GE, II)
b. Paralinguistic transcription:
'Ho-ho-ho!' laughed dark Car./ 'Hee-hee-hee!' laughed the tippling bride [...]
'Heu-heu-heu' laughed dark Car's mother (Hardy TD, X)
'Ow-w-w-w!' shrieked Irene. 'Do stop!' (Howells RSL, IV, 58)
Davy Byrne smiledyawnednodded all in one:/—Iiiiiichaaaaaaaach! (Joyce U, 177)
'Whoooee, here we go!'[...] and they gunned up the truck to seventy and passed
everybody on the road [...]' [...] 'Wagh! Whoo!' (Kerouak OR, IV)
'Hyesss,' Hannah said softly, sharply inhaling the first of the word, and trailing the
sibilant to a hair (Agee DF, VIII, XI)
I had my mouth full of tobacco juice. I bent down to her and Phth! says I to her like
that [...] Phth! [...] right into her eye (Joyce PAYM, I)
Arabella [...] hiccuped [...] 'It is—hie—never too late—hie—to mend!' (Hardy JO, VI)
D. Alternants9
a. Verbal description:
Jonathan made no answer to this; but his breath literally hissed through his clenched
teeth (Grey LT, XIX)
he pursed his lips [...] and emitted a sort of sorrowful whistle (Conrad U, XIII)
He stretched out with a murmur of relief and comfort (Crane RBC, XIII)
'A gentleman?' she gasped [...] She broke into a breathless affirmative groan (James TS, V)
b. Paralinguistic transcription:
'Hegh, hegh!' said Mr. Poyser, meaning to check her playfully, 'don't let's have any
crying' (Eliot AB, XXXI)
Mrs. Lapham fell back in her chair, and let her work drop in her lap with that Tckk!'
in which her sex knows how to express utter contempt and despair (Howells RSL, XI)
Ughgh—Ughgh—yuhyuh Ugh wheek yuh yuh Ughgh yuh wheek wheek yuhyuh: wheek
wheek: uh: {angry f rustration and a car not starting) (Agee DF, II)
Aw—I am—aw—your new captain [...]' [...] the look I gave him [...] made him
stammer {hesitation) (Conrad LI, VI)
la chusma le saludó como es usanza cuando una persona principal entra en la galera,
diciendo: '¡Hu, hu,hu!' tres veces (Cervantes DQ, 2, LXIII)
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The more sensitive readers can 'see' and 'hear' things that are not described nor
transcribed and yet are present in the text only 'between the lines' or 'along the
lines'. The translator must be acutely aware of this, since the text he or she is
translating is not a conglomerate of mutually independent elements, but a
structurally and functionally coherent whole; in the case of paralanguage (and the
same must be said of kinesics), we can identify these hidden elements:
a. By the character's kinesic behavior, to which we (not always as foreign
readers) know correspond certain voice features, as long as we are not too
far removed historically:
And Winfield, picking his teeth with a splinter in a very adult manner, said, 'I knowed
it all the time' (Steinbeck GW, XXX)
b. when both the kinesic behavior and its meaning are identified:
A smile coyly bridged the crack in the door./'Shall I bring in the milk?' (Dos Passos
MT, II, I)