Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Pequen Zen Comedy or Stand Up Comedy Course
Pequen Zen Comedy or Stand Up Comedy Course
ad humot
To my family
Agustina, Pedro and Milagros.
To Diego Wainstein, Natalia Carulias, Sergio Lumbardini, Hugo Fili and Martin Rocco, who were
there before everything exploded.
To Judy Carter.
To all my Colleagues, who build and push Stand Up with their brave egoism.
Thanks
Thanks a lot! to the colleagues who collaborated with their vision of Stand Up for this book. They
have honored me with their collaboration:
For Argentina: Sebastián Wainraich, Diego Wainstein, Pablo Fabregas, Fernando Sanjiao, Natalia
Carulias, Martin Rocco, Hugo Fili, Dalia Gutmann.
For Spain: Miguel Iribar, Carlos Clavijo, Marcos Mas, Manu Badenes.
For Uruguay: Laura Falero, Santiago Reyes, Rafa Cotelo, Ernesto Muñiz, Juan Pablo Olivera.
For Chile: Rodrigo Vasquez Mena, Sergio Freire, Fabrizio Copano.
Special thanks
The first paper edition was made through the “Crowdfunding” system, that is: Many people bet and
trusted me, and bought the book in advance so that it could be published.
The real heroes of Comedia Zen are:
Pia Giudice, Cecilia Guerty, Agustina Petrella, Marine dos Santos, Danilo Pelaez, Martin Zaragoza,
Nadia Chiaramoni, Pablo Bruschi, German Andres Daverio, Hugo Fili, Checho Falco, Diego
Gualda, Belu Casal, Federico Winkel, Leandro Groisman, Ricardo J. Urresti, Hector Omar Martin,
Juan Martin Bentolila, Octavio Palomino, Cuca Lujan, Nico Braun, Seba Crespo, Soledad Echague,
Daniel Bria, Mariano Potel, Raul Etcharren, Veronica Hernandez, Gabriel Grosvald, Gabriela
Wasser, Jorge Gianfrancesco, Silvia Antón, Dami Losada, Zongalo, Nora Schiavoni, Ariel Davila,
Nico Ferrari, José Otegui, Gabriel Kalenberg, Walter Gomez, David Masajnik, Carlos, Juan
Barraza, Gerardo Gardiman, Diego Feijoo, Alfredo Garcia Santillan, Gerado Bentatti, Gustavo
Budmann, Andres Rena, Silvina Marchesotti, Nicolas Barraza, Gabriel Marsili, Melina Villalba,
Christian Nigri, Matias Mendiondo, Gigo Quintenla, Eduardo de Bonis, Sergio lumbardini, Carol
Inturias, Ale Bavera, Eliana La Casa, Fernando “Chuck” Sanjiao, Luciana Demadonna, Gabriel
Gomez, Gregorio Rosello, Fer Crisci, Hernanez, Kristof Micholt, Silvia Elisabeth Burgos, Gervasio
Calderón, Fernando Puente, Giancarlo Angelini, Sofía Mora and Nestor Frenkel, Virginia M. Demo,
Connie Ballarini, Leo Camiser, Nicolas De Tracy, Pablo Valenzuela, Vicky Estrin, Maxi Gonzalez,
Tato Broda, juan Manuel Prieto, David Midanson, Leo Di Cesare, Damian Kogan, Gabriel, Fede
Rodriguez, Cristian Quiroga, Agustin Luchessi, Daniel “Lithuanian” Aglinskas and Paola Perez.
Index
Dedication
Thanks
Index
Zen Comedy
What is Laughter?
Chapter 2: Premise.
What is a Premise?
Practice 2a
The Mother Premise.
Practice 2b
Tacit and Explicit Premises.
Requirements of a Premise.
Practice 2c Summarizing.
How do I build new Premises?
Chapter 3: Attitude.
The four basic attitudes.
Importance of attitude.
Meta-attitudes.
Practice 2d
Practice 3
Practice 5
The Bridge.
The freedom that the Bit offers.
Practice 9
Santiago Reyes.
Rafa Cotelo.
Ernesto Muñiz.
Juan Pablo Olivera.
Rodrigo Vazquez Mena.
Sergio Freire.
Fabrizio Copano.
THANK YOU
GLOSSARY
Zen Comedy
“Stand Up Comedy” is the purest form of comedy. The comedian is alone, without a net, in front of
the audience. All you have is your talent and your technique to achieve the goal of making them
laugh. All he has is... himself
What then occurs at the moment of the Act is a deep communion between the audience and the
comedian. Doing stand up comedy is relating to the audience. It's like surfing in the sea of
spectators.
This characteristic of Stand Up comedy requires an attitude of total openness to what is happening
at the moment of the Act. Leaving behind the burden we bring from our daily lives, the prejudices
about us and our material and, above all, the idea of knowing exactly how the public will react
during our Event.
The seasoned comedian presents himself to the audience with an open attitude and is prepared to
navigate the surprise of this relationship. Without judgments or preconceptions. An attitude of
listening and openness to what happens.
A Zen attitude.
What is laughter?
Pretentious question to start a stand up book… It is a mystery that only belongs to human beings.
Laughter is one of the things that differentiates us from the rest of the animals. No other animal has
a sense of humor. Why?
Let me outline a little THEORY, on which this book is based.
The sense of humor is one of the ways that man has to modify his reality. One of the ways in which
man exercises his capacity for creation. Man, through his sense of humor, creates new realities. It is
a manifestation of our rationality. Our Reason builds funny worlds or allows us to decode what is
funny in the world around us. The sense of humor is a rereading of the world through our rationality
This was born at the beginning of Homo Sapiens, when man stopped being just another animal and
learned to relate to the world through reason. Remember that in the beginning, the world was a very
dangerous place for man... Full of animals with very large teeth... The ability to rationalize was the
weapon that allowed man to survive and surpass other animals. It gave man the ability to modify his
environment. The sense of humor is one of the weapons that reason gave man, to ensure his
survival. The ability to imagine a different reality is a survival weapon.
Literally.
Laughter in front of “Something” (a concept, a situation, a character, etc.), changes its place in our
world. In reality, it changes our world towards another form, in which that “Something” goes from
being an object of Fear to an object of Laughter. By becoming an object of laughter, he loses power
in this new world we imagine.
If we can laugh at something, we can beat it.
When we laugh at something, what we laugh at loses gravity. Laughing at something allows us to
imagine a world where what we have laughed at is not powerful. Therefore... we have already
defeated it or we can defeat it. The object we laugh at no longer has power over us.
That unique capacity that man has, Laughter, has two components:
A RATIONAL component and an ENERGY component.
The rational component gives us the tools to imagine that new reality in which the object of our
attention becomes an object of laughter. The rational allows us to build this new world. It allows us
to understand that we can overcome the topic we laugh at. If we laugh at something it is because we
have power over it, it is because it is not as powerful as it seemed.
The energetic component charges us with energy to overcome those we laugh at. Laughter not only
allows us to understand that we can overcome an issue, but it also charges us with energy to be able
to do so. Laughter and energy are directly related. Not only that, but laughter also works as a
regulator of our energy. When we are low on energy it helps us charge and when we are high on
energy it helps us discharge it.
This is one explanation for the very common phenomenon of jokes at wakes. A wake is an
environment where the most concrete enemy of man (Death) is present. The atmosphere is charged
with fear, pain and the memory of our mortality. It is not strange that one way to defeat that enemy
is to make jokes. The moment we laugh, we have defeated death and raised our energy level to face
that hostile environment.
But also... Have you not found yourself laughing for anything or for no apparent reason, just
because you had a good day? When we feel happy we are charged with energy, that excess energy
manifests itself in the form of easy laughter. Laughter is one of the forms that a human being's
energy takes to manifest itself.
IN SUMMARY:
A sense of humor is a way to generate changes in my reality.
Laughter gives power to those who laugh.
It has two aspects that are always present: a rational aspect and an energetic aspect. To do Stand up
we have to take both components into account.
The rational component is more present in the construction of the material. How do I build that
world so that my object of attention is funny?
The energetic component is more present in the execution of my material. How do I execute my
material so that it causes laughter?
But both components are always present in the act of laughing. The structure and the way I build my
material has an implicit energetic component. And the execution of the material has an implicit
rational component.
BOOK 1
The comedian is alone. It's easy, comedy performed by one person is called “Stand up”. When there
are two people, it is called a Duo or Comedy Step
The ultimate goal is laughter. It seems obvious, but it is not. Many people use Stand up as a way to:
do therapy, confess, educate or do politics. The goal in stand up comedy is always to make people
laugh... I can do it: doing therapy, confessing, educating, doing politics or whatever I want.
There is no fourth wall. This is a fundamental quality of stand up comedy. There is no artificial
separation between comedian and audience. Everything the comedian says he says to the audience,
what the comedian does he does to the audience. The comedian is aware of the presence of the
audience and his act is influenced by his relationship with it.
The time is Here and Now. This is because since there is no fourth wall, the viewer's time and the
comedian's time are the same. It may happen in an imaginary time (say the 15th century in France)
but in that case comic and public are in the same time and space. Everything that happens, happens
in real time and for the first time in front of the public. The public witnesses and participates in a
stand-up act.
The better a stand up comedian is, the more it seems like he is improvising, it seems like what he
says and does is something that occurred to him for the first time in front of that audience.
Chapter 1
Don't rush or obsess: Finding one's true stage persona takes a lot of scenery. It's a matter of trial and
error. We will see this concept in more depth in the second book: “THE ENERGY OF HUMOR”
when we talk about STYLE. Stage Person and Style go hand in hand,
For now, enjoy exploring different ways to manifest. I try different versions of myself until I find
the one I REALLY FEEL COMFORTABLE with. Do not seek to find the Stage Persona as if it
were a trophy. I know many new comics who become obsessed with finding a truly original stage
persona, violently shape-shifting on stage without enjoyment. You cannot find the stage persona if
you are not comfortable on stage. Like almost everything in life, for others to enjoy it, you first have
to enjoy it. IMPORTANT: While you are on the road: “Enjoy the ride.”
The elephant in the room
Americans call the elephant in the room something that is present in a very obvious way, but is not
talked about. It is as if one were having tea with friends in the living room and there was an elephant
sitting between them. If I try to deny its presence, it will become more and more evident. Let's
imagine that I am a very modest host and I want to ignore the presence of the elephant, resorting to
touching on increasingly interesting topics so as not to talk about it. Eventually someone will
interrupt the conversation shouting: - But what's the matter, no one talks about the elephant!!!! - Not
naming the elephant makes it grow bigger and bigger.
Sometimes the comedian can carry an Elephant in his image. A characteristic or quality so strong
and evident that it cannot be ignored. Denying the presence of the elephant in the room is death in
comedy.
If I have an image with some very evident quality, it is likely that while I am making jokes the
public is thinking about that quality of my image that is so evident. The elephant in the room doesn't
allow you to listen to me.
In summary :
If you have an ELEPHANT, any decision you make is well made. You can get on it, you can kill it,
you can use it whenever you want and have it grazing. The Elephant is not a problem, it is a tool
(NOTE: For a comedian, absolutely everything is a tool to make people laugh). What you have to do
is name it as soon as you can. The only possible mistake you can make is to IGNORE IT.
Practice 1
With the image with which you feel most comfortable, your base image, find 5 people with whom
you do not have any type of relationship and ask them:
- I'm doing an exercise for a course and I have to ask you: What image do I give you? If you had to
define me with a phrase: What would you say? -
It is important that you do not have any type of relationship of trust or power.
That is: Obviously they cannot be friends or family. Nor can they be people who depend on you or
are in charge of you at work. This power relationship colors the response.
It could be: Some co-worker with whom you do not have a very direct relationship or power
relationship. Some friend from the gym, club, school, course, etc... with whom you are not friends
or have not previously chatted. The newsstand , grocer, etc... in your neighborhood with whom you
don't have a chatting relationship. Some stranger you stop on the street.
In a notebook write down the place and circumstances in which you asked the question, the
characteristics of the person you asked and the answer. Try to find a common factor in all the
answers. That common factor is a real characteristic of your image.
Try to define it with a phrase.
The rest are different readings that the observer puts. It is interesting that you notice that your image
also changes depending on the Observer.
Change your image. Change your hair, your way of dressing, your body posture.
Repeat the exercise. Notice how the answers change.
This exercise is interesting to discover the common points that your Image has and also to discover
how little you can change an image.
After exploring this exercise several times you will have a pretty good idea about your image and
how you can modify it.
You will also have learned something more about the audience you want to make laugh...
Episode 2
Premise
The secret of the rational aspect of laughter is the PREMISE.
Every joke is based on a premise
What is a Premise?
It is a statement of reality. An idea or concept that shapes a worldview.
What's more: Our reading of reality is based on premises that we have incorporated throughout our
lives. ALL our reading of reality. Absolutely everything. We see the world around us. through the
premises that guide us. The premises we have acquired shape our world.
The Stand Up comedian is a creator of new premises. Or someone who knows how to recreate the
old ones. As an example, let's look at some of my material about the subways:
(To the public) Are you comfortable? They are sitting.
They come from their houses where they sit most of the time.
Most of you work sitting down.
You get on the subway or the bondi and all you want is to sit down!!
You don't care about anything else.
You go up standing up!, thinking:
(Obsessed) -I have to sit down, I have to sit down... I have to sit down!-
You were born to sit!!!!
From here a routine continues where I exaggerate and act out everything one does and thinks when
one wants to sit in transport and can't find a place.
All the humor in this routine, what makes people laugh, is in the absurd and exaggerated way in
which the premise appears and is fulfilled: Man was born to sit.
This premise is NOT a prejudice, it is a new look at man. It shows us a new way of reality.
This is what premises do, for better or worse, they shape the reality in which we move.
How does the premise work in the joke?
The premise is an affirmation of reality that is confirmed through humor.
WHENEVER WE LAUGH AT A JOKE WE ARE LAUGHING AT A PREMISE THAT IS
CONFIRMED.
I repeat in another way: When we laugh at a joke we are really laughing at the PREMISE that the
joke SHOWS.
Always?
Yeah.
ALWAYS.
I did not discover this, it was studied by Freud and other great thinkers and has been used in
advertising for many years.
Why do you think humor in advertising is so fashionable? Because the best way to convey an idea
is through a joke. When we laugh at a joke, we laugh at the idea it contains. All Galician jokes
cause laughter because the punchline confirms the premise: All Galicians are brutes . What's more:
ALL Gallegos' jokes are just DIFFERENT WAYS OF SHOWING that “ Galicians are brutal .”
All blonde jokes are different ways of saying: “ Blondes are dumb .” All mother-in-law jokes are
different ways of saying: “ Mothers-in-law are bad,” etc.
So let's go to the Mother Premise, the one that has created all the other premises and the one that is
behind all the premises that exist, the one that is always fulfilled when I laugh.
This is:
I HAVE POWER OVER….
Or its various forms:
I am superior to…
I have surpassed…
This is the Mother Premise, all premises derive from It.
THEREFORE: “ The Galicians are brutes” comes from the Mother Premise: “ We (My group of
belonging) have power over the Galicians ”… because they are brutes.
“ Blondes are stupid ” comes from the Mother Premise: “ We (My group of belonging) have power
over blondes ”… because they are stupid.
And so with all the Premises.
All Premises derive from the MOTHER PREMISE: I HAVE POWER OVER…
PRACTICE 2b
When I create a new premise that is not installed in a society, I have to install it or make it explicit.
It is important that the premise is clear for the joke to work. These are the Explicit premises.
Whenever I change the group I belong to, I have to be sure that the premises that I consider tacit are
installed in the collective unconscious of the group to which I am addressing, if not, I must Install it
or not make the joke. Whenever there is humor there is a Premise that is confirmed: It can be Tacit,
when I don't have to say it because it is in the collective Unconscious of a group. It can be Explicit,
when it is new and I have to INSTALL IT.
It is very important that when I work with an Explicit Premise that I install it correctly so that my
joke works.
Premise Requirements
The Premises must be:
Simple and clear, Universal and True.
Simple and Clear: It is obvious, a premise should leave no doubt about what it says and should be
as synthetic as possible.
Let's analyze “ Blondes are dumb ”: It leaves no doubt and is simple. If I formulated it in the
following way: " Women who have light hair tend to have an easier life due to the fascination that
the tone of their hair exerts on men in certain societies, which means that they often do not
generate a ability to resolve conflicts that often put them at a disadvantage compared to those
women who do not have hair of the same shade .” I would be saying the same thing but in a
complicated and boring way. This is wrong, not only do I run the risk of not being understood but
also the audience may fall asleep before I finish saying it.
You always have to find the clearest and most synthetic way to say the premise I want to say. In
addition to this being important so that the premise is understood when I say it, it is very important
so that I really understand what I am saying... One of the most common defects in beginning
comedians is not knowing what they are really saying.
Universals : The concept of Universal in Humor is not that the entire Universe understands it.
Universal means: That it is understood by the group to which it is directed. If I make jokes about
Gallegos in Argentina or Uruguay where the premise: Gallegos are gross is shared, these jokes will
cause laughter. But if I make the same jokes in the United States where that premise does not exist
and they don't even know what a Galician is, those jokes are not going to work. In the United States
there is the premise: Poles are brutes . In that case I have to change the jokes from Galician to
Polish and thus make the Universal Premise. I always have to be sure that the premises I use are
Universal
True: You have to understand the concept of truth in humor. It is not the absolute truth. It is not the
moral truth. It is not the truth of a society. It is not divine truth. In short: it is NOT the truth. It is a
Sophist truth. That is: It is a logical statement that is not contradicted in the jokes that follow it.
Any premise can be true if the jokes that support it confirm it. It is obvious that I do not believe
that: “ The Gallegos are brutes .” I do not consider it a TRUTH. But this is True if the jokes that
support it confirm it. If not, I have a false premise, whatever it may be.
The premise: " My grandmother gets very angry when she plays golf on the moon ." Is it a true
premise?
It may be, if the jokes that follow it confirm it. This is the basis of absurd humor. A series of
premises that at first glance seem illogical, but that make up a valid logical structure. And therefore
within the laws of humor: TRUE.
BEWARE: Many beginning comedians deny their premises with the jokes that follow them, thus
constructing false premises.
Another form of false premise is believing that one is using an tacit premise in a certain group of
membership when this is not the case. In that case the lack of Universality makes a false premise.
NOTE:
To understand the importance of the universality of a Premise and how this influences the
TRUTH, let's see this joke:
• Man reads the world and life through Premises, these build the reality in which he
lives.
• Every joke is based on a Premise.
• The comedian creates new premises and uses existing ones.
• When I laugh, I laugh at the way the Premise is confirmed
• The more original the way it appears, the more intelligent the humor. But I always
laugh at the same thing: The Premise that appears.
• Behind every premise is the Mother Premise: I have power over…
Attitude
Every Premise is born from a POINT OF VIEW of reality.
Reality comes into existence from a reading that I make from a subjective position, from a Point of
View.
IF SOMETHING IS INDIFFERENT TO ME, I HAVE NO PREMISE ABOUT THAT.
To have a Premise about an Issue, I have to take a position on it. The comedian, through a joke, is
always giving his opinion and defining reality. In Stand Up the POV is called ATTITUDE.
Let's see the different Premises that a different ATTITUDE will give us:
Pessimistic Attitude: “ The glass is half empty ” (Pessimistic Premise).
Optimistic Attitude: “ The glass is half full ” (Optimistic Premise)
We can create more original premises with different attitudes:
Paranoid Attitude: “ Someone is drinking my water. ”
Winning Attitude: “ Whenever I'm thirsty I find what I need. ”
Nonconformist Attitude: “ Life always gives me less than what I want. ”
To find premises about reality we first have to have a clear attitude about reality.
THEME + ATTITUDE = PREMISE
Theme (Glass of water) + Attitude (Paranoia) = Premise (Someone is drinking my water.)
•IT'S STUPID.
•IS RARE.
•IT'S HARD.
•I'M SCARED OF IT.
These attitudes applied to any Topic are excellent engines for the creation of Premises.
As an example, let's take our old theme of “Glass with water half full” and apply the 4 basic
attitudes to it:
It's stupid: The example of the half-full glass of water is stupid because when you're thirsty you're
not thinking if it's half full or half empty. I don't believe that a guy who comes from exploring the
desert will stop in front of a glass of water and say: AHA!!!!! A glass of water half full, will it be
good luck or bad luck? .
It's strange: A half-full glass of water is strange because it forces me into a philosophical discussion
with something as simple as water. It paralyzes me, I forget whether I'm thirsty or not and stop to
wonder about the subtleties of the human psyche. Is it half full or half empty? I believe that Freud
wrote his treatise on Psychology one night when he went to the kitchen in slippers and found a half-
full glass on the counter.
It's difficult: It's difficult to find yourself with a half-full glass because I don't know if it's going to
be enough to quench my thirst. But on the other hand, the promise of turning it off gives me
enormous pleasure. Should I take it and face the reality that it may not be enough or should I stop
and revel in the possibility of quenching my thirst? I have wasted many hours of my life in silent
contemplation of the possibilities of a half-full glass. As you can see, I don't have a very interesting
life.
It scares me: A half-full glass of water scares me because I don't remember why it's half-full. Is it
because I already took the other half? Could it be that my grandfather uses it to clean his teeth?
Why do I think this, if I live alone? Maybe someone else is living in my house and I don't know it?
Will I have Alzheimer's and will I fill it? My God! , free me from this glass of water!!!
NOTE: Notice that each of these attitudes opens up a world of different possibilities and premises to
build Humor.
I take the topic (Glass of water) and apply an attitude to it (It's stupid) and then the keyword
BECAUSE (It works as a trigger). Going through the Why leads me to explore the topic and find
the different premises. A clear attitude gives me several premises. In these examples I have found
one in each, but if I continued I would have found several more.
PREMISES FOUND:
It's stupid: The example of the glass of water is stupid because when you're thirsty you're not
thinking if it's half full or half empty .
It's strange : A half-full glass of water is strange because it forces me into a philosophical
discussion with something as simple as water.
It's difficult: It's difficult to find myself with a half-full glass because it paralyzes me. (Note that this
is the real premise that appeared in the exercise, although I found it in a later analysis)
It scares me: A half-full glass of water scares me because it makes me paranoid. (Same case as the
previous one, this is the true form of the premise that triggers the material)
IMPORTANCE OF ATTITUDE
Attitude is the point of view from which we see reality, but it is much more than that. Remember
that Stand Up is a style of comedy to be performed in front of an audience. The way I convey the
material is as important as the material itself.
Build the material. As we have seen, to develop a topic and find the premises it is essential to have a
clear and powerful attitude.
Transmit the material. The attitude that builds a material is the key to transmitting that material. It is
the feeling about the subject that will guide my action.
He saves my life on stage. Many times a clear and powerful attitude will hide bad material. (I don't
know what he said, but he said it very well!)
META-ATTITUDES
There are two attitudes that I call Meta-attitudes: These are LOVE and HATE.
Many comedians consider them attitudes. THEY ARE NOT. Nobody Loves or Hates in the
abstract. LOVE
BECAUSE IT'S STUPID, WEIRD, DIFFICULT, IT SCARY ME, ETC..
The same with Hate. Love and Hate function as a motor for other attitudes, the true attitudes that
build the material.
They are great for enhancing attitudes, but they are not attitudes.
They also work very well for making material by opposition: I love something that makes me sick
and I work on humor by opposition and vice versa.
Don't be confused, when you build a material from Love or Hate, you are always building it from
another attitude that is hidden behind.
To really shine the material I must know what the hidden attitude is that built it.
2d practice
Apply the 4 attitudes and let yourself be carried away by what arises.
Remember that the key is: THEME + ATTITUDE = PREMISE.
The word BECAUSE is the trigger that pushes me to develop a topic from Attitude.
Once you have developed the topic, analyze what you have written to see what premises have
emerged.
Each attitude will give you at least one Premise.
Look for how to formulate it in a way that is as synthetic and simple as possible. Save those
Premises, they will be gold dust for the future.
BOTE: It gives me an idea of something small, it gives me a feeling of loneliness, of effort, even
poverty, almost the idea of a loser, visually it is something very clear and defined: at water level, in
contact with water, outdoors, it can give me a feeling of cold, etc.
BOAT: It gives me an idea of something big, it gives me a feeling of power, commerce, work, long
trips. Visually it gives me an image of greatness, of a micro world, of a traveling building, of
chimneys, noisy engines, separated from the water, protection, I smell fish, I hear the sound of the
siren, I see the smoke from the chimneys, etc...
SENSORY: Obviously the other senses are also very important. A sensory load is also associated
with each image. If I think of a sailboat I inevitably feel the heat of the sun on my skin and the wind
caressing my face. If I think of a ship I hear the sound of the siren.
EMOTIONAL: It is very important to understand the emotional charge of each image. Every image
has a feeling attached to it. Depending on the context and the feeling I want to convey in a joke, a
boat is very different from a sailboat.
Bote gives me an idea of loneliness, effort, it can make me hungry, desperate, weak, poor, etc.
Sailboat can give me romance, triumph, freedom, speed, sex, wealth, etc.
Depending on the emotion I want to convey in a joke, I have to know which image has the most
powerful emotional charge to convey it.
But… If you are reading this chapter, in this context you have read the BOTTLE image as well. And
if you have some culture, it has automatically referred you to Hemingway's story: “The Old Man
and the Sea.” Therefore this image gives you: Hemingway, loneliness, reflection, fight, swordfish,
sharks, fear, cold, hunger, despair , boat and everything associated with the story.
Notice everything you have seen and felt just with a phrase, with an IMAGE.
HUMOR IS BUILT ON IMAGES.
Everything we say generates an image in the viewer.
All.
The premises are images.
Jokes are images.
The more powerful the images we choose to build our material, the funnier our material will be.
It is not the same as saying: - I felt more alone than a GENOCIDAL DICTATOR on friend's day.-
What to say: - I felt more alone than HITLER on Friend's Day. -
The HITLER image is more powerful than the GENOCIDAL DICTATOR image.
It is always convenient to choose the most powerful image we can find to build our joke.
I chose an extreme image like Hitler to graph my concept, but don't be confused, the power of an
image is not always in the extreme of the image.
The POWER of an image is how exact the load of the image is, to the load of the concept, or
general image, that I want to give.
We will see this in depth in chapter 5: “The Jokes”
Practice 4
Review the Premises that you found in the previous exercise and see them as Images. See if they
are made up of other images, what final image they create and most importantly: what charge do
they hide?
Let's see as an example some Premise that I found in previous exercises: “ The example of the glass
of water is stupid because when you are thirsty you are not thinking if it is half full or half empty .”
The jokes
What is a joke?
People identify jokes with those phrases, dialogues or stories that end in a punchline. But... any
construction designed to make people laugh is a joke.
An Act Out is a joke. A Morisqueta is a joke.
I repeat: ANY construction designed to make people laugh is a joke.
And obviously a dialogue or phrase armed with a punchline is a joke. What is commonly known
as: “Foot and Finish Joke”.
I repeat again: ANY construction designed to make people laugh is a joke.
Let's start with the most primitive, and most effective, form of joke: “The ACT OUT”
Act Out, the first joke
The simplest way to make a joke and one of the most effective is Act Out.
Basically Act Out is showing the premise by making it appear in a situation.
It is the first joke structure that children make.
Do you remember when at school you wanted to make a joke about a classmate who had some
visible characteristic?
The typical way to make fun of that child was to imitate him.
That's an Act Out.
Suppose that child (Juancito) had a stutter. The hidden premise would be: “ Juancito cannot
speak .” The Act Out would be: “-(Exaggerating the Stuttering) I'm Juuu—Juuu—an—citooo, I
can't haabbblaaar!!! -¨
What the scofflaw has done is take the premise, exaggerate it, and show it to his peers.
A Perfect Act Out.
Due to the influence of theater on Stand Up, many times in Spanish-speaking countries the word
Act Out has been confused with the word Acting.
This is a serious error.
Acting makes us believe that the joke is made by acting out the premise, while in truth the joke is
made by exaggeratedly showing the conflict that the premise brings.
The importance is not so much in acting the situations well, but in the situations showing in an
exaggerated way what the Premise means.
Many of the great Stand Up comedians are very bad actors but they know how to do great Act
Outs. Well, with very little they show the absurdity or ridiculousness of the premise.
(I make me ring a doorbell) You make Ring! (I make myself run like an idiot) Run!... (I make a
stupid face) It's over!
-(As if someone asked me) How did you spend it?-
-(With a stupid face and voice) I don't know, I left! …You tell me! … I was not there...-"
Every premise has an Act Out that screams to be shown. Therefore every premise hides a joke.
What's more: Every punch line joke can be told in the Act Out form.
The Act Out is a perfect vehicle for the comedian's attitude towards a topic to be expressed.
Not only is it very powerful and funny, but it produces empathy and identification between the
comedian and the audience.
Through Act Outs I discover what the comedian feels about a topic.
A good comedian always reviews his material to see how many Act Outs he can add.
An excellent comedian has an Act Out for each premise and all of his Foot and Punch jokes are
resolved through Act Outs.
Practice 5
Take the premises you found previously and look for the Act Outs you can do with those Premises.
Play with the Premises, take them to the absurd.
Look for every possibility to show what that Premise means.
Explore…
Look at the Attitude that built the Premise you are using and exaggerate it. The key is in the
attitude. If it's stupid, look how incredibly idiotic following that premise can be... Be ridiculous, no
one is watching. Have fun with the Premise. If it scares you, show how scary that Premise can be.
Why are you reading this book if you don't want to have fun?
Remember: you can always be more ridiculous!
Once you've found an Act Out, write it as if you were writing a movie. Telling the actions you
perform and the way you perform them, the tones in which you speak, the emotions you feel and
obviously writing the dialogues.
It's the first thing we think of when we hear the word joke. A Foot or Preparation takes us to a place
where the Punch appears (the funny thing) and we laugh.
Example:
A blonde and a brunette are walking through a park. La Morocha sees a dead bird and says: - Oh,
how disgusting, a dead bird! -The Blonde looks at the sky and says: - Where? Where?-
The Premise:
As we already said, the Premise is that statement of reality that will appear clearly to us at the end.
It is the final meaning of the entire construction. What we affirm and demonstrate with the joke.
Sometimes it is Tacit and sometimes we have to make it Explicit. That is: we have to state it
CLEARLY and FIRMLY.
In this case the Premise is Tacit. What would this joke be like if we said it in a group that doesn't
know our belief that blondes are dumb? If we had to make it Explicit?
The foot
It is the minimum information necessary for the auction to fall. Americans call it SETUP, which
seems like a more accurate word to me. SETUP means: Preparation. The Foot is that, a Preparation
for the arrival of the Finish.
In the Foot is installed:
The Who: the characters or concepts the joke is about. THE Where: The location in time and space.
The Situation: The context in which the joke happens and the actions and details that prepare us for
the punchline.
THE Who, the Where and the Situation are IMAGES.
The strength of the Foot lies in choosing the best and strongest Images to prepare for the arrival of
the auction.
THE ENTIRE FOOT IS PICTURE PERFECT.
We laugh at the Auction but what gives shine and meaning to the auction is THE FOOT. The more
perfect the Foot is, the more graceful the Finish will be.
The Finish
It's what makes you laugh. The explosion where the confirmed premise appears. Americans call it
PUNCHLINE, which literally means: “Line where the punch is.” And it is exactly like that, it is an
unexpected blow that disorients the viewer and confirms the premise.
IT IS ALSO AN IMAGE.
The strength of the auction is in choosing the most powerful images to confirm the premise.
Let's go slow…
Whether it is a tacit or explicit premise, at the bottom I am building a story. This story has a form
and a logic. It's going somewhere. If I continue that logic of the story in the way it is expected and
confirm the Premise, I don't have a joke, I have an STATEMENT.
The difference between a joke and a statement is that in a joke there is ALWAYS a break in the
logic of the story.
BUT THIS BREAK CREATES A NEW LOGIC THAT CONFIRMS THE PREMISE.
In this case: “ Blondes are stupid because they believe that dead birds can fly.”
Therefore: The PIECE is the break in the logic of the PIE where the PREMISE is confirmed.
Definitely:
A JOKE IS A BREAK IN THE LOGIC OF A STORY THAT CONFIRMS A PREMISE.
Importance of images
We already said that everything we say we transmit through images.
A blonde and a brunette walking through the park is a clear image.
A dead bird is another.
A blonde looking at the sky and saying: - Where? Where? - is a very powerful image that defines
the GRACE of the joke.
The more powerful and accurate the images are, the funnier the joke is.
Let's remember the Premise: “Blondes are stupid.” What is the Attitude behind the Premise?
It's stupid.
Humor by exaggeration
In this type of structures the logic of the Foot changes due to an exaggeration taken to the absurd in
the Finish.
Example :
“My girlfriend is so fat that when she steps on the scale, the scale says: To be continued.”
We laughed at the EXAGGERATION of the result.
Where is grace?
The Premise is confirmed but in an EXAGGERATED way. We never expect the Bride to be SO
FAT that the Scale tells us CONTINUE. The PICTURE of the Finishing surpasses any image the
PIE has made of the bride in our heads.
The Logic of the FOOT is broken by EXAGGERATION.
An exaggeration that breaks the logic of the story and creates a new logic.
If the joke had been:
“My girlfriend is so fat that when she steps on the scale, the scale says: 450 Kilos ”
The joke wouldn't be funny.
Because?
Because even though 450 kilos is a lot, it is a possibility. Exaggeration does NOT break the logic
of the story. The IMAGE of the Auction DOES NOT surpass an IMAGE that the FOOT has
installed on the fat woman. I have no real hype.
To be continued... instead it breaks all logic, it is infinite.
NO Image that the PIE has installed in our head CAN COMPETE with the Image of the Finish.
The secret in an exaggeration joke is to create an image in the punchline so exaggerated that it
surpasses the image that the viewer may have in their head.
CLUE:
When you make a joke out of exaggeration, the IMAGE of the punchline is the key to the joke. The
more powerful and accurate the IMAGE is, the funnier the joke will be. Be careful that the IMAGE
of the AUCTION has to be exaggerated and absurd but COHERENT and that generates a new logic
that is sustained.
ANALYSIS:
Let's look at the logic of the Foot:
My girlfriend is so fat that when she steps on the scale...
It has a meaning: My girlfriend is fat and is going to weigh herself.
It has an address: I am saying that my girlfriend is going to weigh herself and waiting for the result
of that weight. The PIE is going somewhere.
It has an intensity: It has an energetic charge. In this case our IMAGE of a VERY FAT woman who
is going to be weighed, we expect a great result.
Let's see it graphically: The PIE is going somewhere with a certain intensity
It has a meaning: The result of the weight. DOES NOT change the PIE logic
It has a direction: The scale gives us the result. DOES NOT change the direction of the FOOT
It has an intensity: It is SO Fat that the scale has no numbers, it is INFINITELY fat.
CHANGE the intensity of the FOOT. We expected a very Fat woman, but NOT SO FAT.
The INTENSITY of the image of the Finish EXCEEDS the image that the Foot created in us. This
produces a change in the logic of the PIE.
F
FOOT AUCTION
The Finish continues the meaning and direction of the Foot, but modifies the Intensity.
Practice 7A
Take the Premises you found in the previous exercise and try to make at least one exaggeration
joke with each Premise.
IMPORTANT:
Jokes are not always as short as the one I just used as an example. The Footer can be much longer,
it can have dialogue, etc.
Don't try to find the Foot and the finish in a single sentence. There will be time to synthesize, if you
feel like it.
Look for how to confirm the Premise with a very exaggerated Image….
Play with the exaggeration.
If you don't have fun first, it's difficult for the audience to have fun.
After hard work and cursing about your inability several times... I'm sure you wrote some joke out
of exaggeration. Bravo!!!
Humor for Change of Address:
In this case the break in logic occurs due to a change in the direction of the PIE. We think we are
going one way but in the FINAL we discover that we are going another.
We laugh because of the surprise we feel when it seems that I am going to teach the public
something profound that I have discovered about women and instead I say that I am a loser and that
women want nothing to do with me.
Change the direction of the PIE.
NOTE: This premise works connected with the MOTHER PREMISE. If the comedian is a loser
with women and confesses it, then the viewer feels a little more of a winner or identifies with how
badly he is doing with women (if he feels like a loser).
That gives POWER to the viewer, it is true: I have power over... (In this case his relationship with
women).
In the case of the female spectator, it is exactly the same but in her relationships with men. And in
the case of the homosexual spectator, ditto.
Where is grace?
We laugh when we find out that in reality the comedian is not a winner and a man of the world but
rather he is a loser with women, BECAUSE the PREMISE appears with the CHANGE OF
DIRECTION AT THE PICTURE.
The PREMISE appears as a SURPRISE
We believe that the material will continue with a lesson that the comedian will give us thanks to his
numerous trips and the many women he has met and in reality he confesses to us that he is a loser.
The secret in a joke by change of direction is to make the audience believe that we are going to say
something, that we are going to continue with a speech or that something is going to happen and in
the Punchline the direction changes and we say something else or the unexpected happens.
CLUE:
When you make a joke by changing direction, the key is to generate a well-marked and clear
DIRECTION in the FOOT, so that the change in the PICTURE is effective.
I repeat: the key in a change of direction joke is to mark the direction of the FOOT WELL. The
clearer the direction in the Foot, the easier it is to make the change.
The important thing when I do this material is NOT TO SEE IT COMING that I am a loser. I mark
the ATTITUDE of a man of the world well in the FOOT until I CHANGE in ATTITUDE in the
FINISH.
ANALYSIS:
Let's look at the logic of the PIE:
I have traveled a lot, I have met women all over the world... And throughout the many trips and the
many women I have met, I have learned something from them. All over the world women have one
thing in common, they are equal in one thing...
It has a meaning: I have traveled a lot and all over the world I have noticed that women have
something in common
It has a direction: The comedian is going to share a profound teaching with the public. He's going to
tell us a secret about women.
It has an intensity: Something is approaching, we wait for a revelation.
It has a meaning: All women have something in common, it DOES NOT change the meaning of the
FOOT.
It has a direction: When we think he is going to share a profound teaching, the comedian CHANGE
the direction and confess I am a Loser.
The direction of the PIE changes, a teaching does not come, a confession comes.
We thought we were going one way but in reality we were going another.
We thought we were going to learn from a winner but in reality we are going to sympathize with a
loser.
It has an intensity: What came was a possible revelation, it did NOT change the intensity.
IMPORTANT:
You know the Premise that you have to confirm. You know the punch line that confirms it. Build
a
Foot that allows you to put in the shot, but that looks like you are going the other way.
Remember, the key is in the FOOT.
Don't let the auction be seen coming.
Distract them!!!
After hard work and cursing about your inability several times... I'm sure you wrote a joke about a
change of address...
Bravo!!!
Pun
The pun is a type of joke in which the funny thing happens by breaking the logic in the MEANING
of the FOOT.
The auction produces a change of MEANING in the foot.
We believe that the comedian is saying one thing, but in reality he is saying ANOTHER THING.
What it looked like one way is different.
Example :
Two gauchos are in the middle of the field, in the distance you can see a group of Indians
approaching. One says to the other:
-The Indians are coming! -
-Are they friends or enemies? -
-They must be friends, they all come together.-
We laugh because at the end. the one who answers. changes the meaning of the question. From
friends or enemies of the gauchos, they become friends or enemies among themselves.
In the word game WE CHOOSE a different reading of the phrases or words to change the meaning
of everything.
In these jokes the break in logic is always in the CHANGE OF THE MEANING that we choose.
In the first: We discovered that one of the gauchos misunderstood, instead of friends or enemies
between them, the other had asked friends or enemies of the gauchos. WE DISCOVER THE
CHANGE OF MEANING: What a fool, he misunderstood.
In the second: We laugh because we understand the change in meaning proposed by the comedian.
Instead of telling a story he was telling us that there was an ostrich.
- Hahaha, he made me believe he was going to tell a story but it was a lie, I understood it. –
The audience laughs when they discover the NEW meaning that the comedian proposes. In the
game of words, the structure or the story does not matter, what makes us laugh is discovering the
new meaning.
CLUE
I always said that word games are an intelligence test...easy to pass.
That is why puns occur both in the silliest jokes and in so-called intelligent humor. The more work
it takes to discover the new meaning, the more intelligent the joke seems to us.
So the key when we make a play on words is to make it clever, but not so clever that it is not
understood.
It is an intelligence test that must ALWAYS be passed.
It is very important when we play word games to know which group we belong to: Do the words,
for this group of belonging, mean the same as they do for me? Do you share the idioms that this
joke has? Do you share the cultural images that this joke has?
We must be very careful with word games when we travel to another country, another region of our
country or even when we address a very closed belonging group.
Practice 7C
Try to make at least one Pun joke with each of the Premises you have found.
IMPORTANT:
Focus on what the Premise means.
The Punchline has to make the meaning of the Premise appear.
Play knowing the real meaning you want to achieve and have fun with the words.
After hard work and cursing about your inability several times... I'm sure you wrote a joke for Pun
Game.
Bravo!!!
Humor by Comparison
Another structure for making jokes is humor by comparison.
It is about taking two images that apparently cannot be compared and finding common points or, in
contrast, taking two images that are apparently similar and finding the differences.
Basically it is:
Finding the similar in very different images
EITHER
The different in very similar images.
Examples:
How is a man like a pin?
In which both have a head, but neither of them thinks.
Other:
How do women and computers are alike?
Both in a woman and in a computer you have to
invest a lot, they have a lot of memory but no intelligence and shortly after having one you already
want a better one.
And other:
The difference between a misfortune and a tragedy:
That you are on the beach with your entire family and suddenly a giant wave comes and takes your
mother-in-law away, that is a misfortune. But after 5 minutes the giant wave returns and returns
your mother-in-law, that is a tragedy!
Two totally different images. In principle not comparable. Grace appears when you manage to
make that comparison that apparently is not possible.
Where does the premise appear?
In the comparison. What is the ending
By saying: both have minds but neither of them thinks.
The premise appears: ' All men are simple' .
Which is a Tacit Premise.
Clue
The key in comparison humor is to analyze the subtlety of the Images and the most powerful
characteristics of each Image to make the comparison.
The more extreme and powerful the images are and the more fair and exact the characteristics we
find to compare them, the funnier the joke will be.
Graphically:
Practice 7E
1) Try to make at least one Comparison joke with each of the Premises you have found.
Important:
Again focus on the meaning of the Premises.
Find something to compare the main IMAGE of your Premise with so that it is confirmed.
For example: If your premise is: Blondes are Dumb.
The question is: What can I compare a blonde to to SHOW how stupid they are? Blondes are like
supermarket Easter eggs. They are very cute and attractive on the outside, but inside they are
hollow.
Now it's your turn, get the most out of those Premises...
I start:
Drunks are like Pears:
When they are ready they fall. You always find them lying under a tree. A little bit is sweet but a
lot of it ends up making you sick.
You didn't think you could compare pears with drunks, did you?
Reader of little faith... Now make a comparison You.
Humor by Association:
Humor by Association is a higher form of humor by comparison.
In this case we take two Images and instead of comparing both images, we associate the loading of
those images and create a third image that has a life of its own.
This third image is the union of those two previous images.
Example :
(SPECIAL NOTE: THE FOLLOWING MATERIAL WAS WRITTEN BEFORE GOD MADE
THE JOKE TO THE WORLD OF CHOOSING AN ARGENTINE POPE, AS I ALWAYS SAY,
GOD IS THE BEST COMEDIAN)
What would the Catholic Church be like if the Pope were Argentine?
In confession, instead of doing penance, the priest would ask for a bribe .
Instead of bread and wine at mass, choripan and beer would be taken.
The priest would begin the chants of the mass, fluttering his cassock shouting: - Sing everyone!,
you bitches !!! –
The breakdown of logic appears in the creation of a new reality that does not seem possible but
nevertheless exists and works in my joke.
Another example:
This magnificent joke is from my colleague Hugo Fili, one of the Argentine comedians who best
handles humor by association:
Have you seen those signs on the street with a photo of a dog that says: -I got lost. - ?
Fucking dog!! You took the photo. You made the posters with the phrase: -I got lost-. You stuck
them all over the city... And you're not able to call your owner? Tell him: - Look, I got lost... I'm on
such a corner... pick me up, I'll pay you for the taxi... -
Another example :
This joke is from a student of mine and came up in a class:
An aguaviva is a flavorless gelatin... but with a bad vibe.
Clue:
The key in humor by association is to make an accurate reading of the images that you intend to
associate. When we want to corroborate or make a premise appear about an image, the key is to
associate that image with another image that meets the characteristics that our premise seeks. It is
important to have a clear reading of the load of the images for the public to which our joke is
directed, before making the association.
My joke about the Argentine Pope may not work in another country.
Perhaps in another country the Argentine image does not have: neither the burden that I am
proposing, nor the characteristics that I am presenting are known.
Graphically:
( Image 3,
a new and living reality, is the finishing touch and when it manifests itself, the one or more
that
we want
to share appear.) premises
Practice 7E
1) Try to make at least one Association joke, with each of the Premises you have found.
IMPORTANT:
Once again the key is in the Premise.
Find something to ASSOCIATE the main IMAGE of your Premise so that it is confirmed. For
example, if your premise is: “Blondes are Dumb.” The question is: With what IMAGE can I
associate a blonde so that the premise appears in action.
Example:
What would the Catholic Church be like if the Pope were a Blonde?
In confession, instead of counting our sins, we would tell each other EVERYTHING!!!
List 1 List 2
Pears Spyglass
Men Fire
Trains Russians
Soccer Lawyers.
Astronauts Poker
Shoes Bus
Women Frogs
Refrigerators Hospitals.
Jail drunk
Monkeys Piano
I start:
What comes from crossing a Pear and a Drunkard?
A “happy hour” fruit.
You didn't think pears could be associated with drunks, did you? Reader of little faith...
Now make an Association You…
Humor for “Out of Context”
It is a form of humor by association.
If humor by Association is an evolution of Comparison, “Out of Context” is an evolution of humor
by Association.
Basically it is taking an IMAGE (A character, a thing, an event or a concept) and placing it in a
totally different context than usual. The break in logic occurs when you manage to place something
from a certain context in a totally different context.
A brilliant example of this way of doing humor is Eddie Izzard's routine: “Death Star Canteen”.
In it Izzard places Darth Vader in line at the “Death Star” cafeteria waiting to arrive to order
something to eat. The absurdity of seeing this extraordinary character in such an ordinary context
makes us laugh.
It can be found on YouTube with subtitles, it is worth watching.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8BFQIQpVQ9c
CLUE:
For out of context to work, the key is that the logic of what happens is within a perfect association
between the Object of the joke (A character, a thing, an event or a concept) and the New Context.
THE MIX:
The Mix is a type of joke that uses out of Context to work.
It's about installing a character and then placing him in a totally different context.
For example :
First I install my German Granny: how stingy she was, how strict she was with discipline and how
she had all of us grandchildren running around and then I change the context:
I say something like: - That's why I think that if my grandmother were Minister of Transportation
the trains would run better... -
and I start a routine with my Grandmother challenging the train drivers, reviewing expenses,
controlling the passengers. Etc.
PRACTICE 7 F
Take a character from list 1 and a context from list 2 and make a joke.
CHARACTERS CONTEXT
Hitler took power at the age of 45. I mean... He was a forty year old...
He had to have annual prostate exams.
What would your visit to the Proctologist be like?
- Don't stop Herr Doktor!!! Blitzkrieg me and call me Poland!!!! –
HUMOR BY OPPOSITION
Opposition humor is also a form of “Out of Context.” Basically it is placing an image in a context
diametrically OPPOSITE to the one that this image naturally usually has.
Humor by Opposition occurs when the ASSOCIATION of an Image and a totally opposite Context
WORK. For this, the characteristics of both must be perfectly associated.
For example :
1) A Nun teaching sexual education classes.
We see an impeccably dressed Nun with a soft and demure voice speaking in totally profane words
about the most daring sexual fantasies...
2) A delicate girl threatening the public.
We see an angelic and petite girl threaten the public with the harshest atrocities imaginable,
3) A criminal lawyer teaching pastry.
We see a lawyer with an absolutely legalistic image and tone teaching us how to make a homemade
cake.
CLUE
The more exaggerated the OPPOSITE characteristics that are ASSOCIATED in these Images that
we build, the funnier the result will be.
MANY TIMES WE DO NOT NEED TO BUILD A CHARACTER TO CREATE HUMOR BY
OPPOSITION.
In Stand Up we simply develop a song with an OPPOSITE ATTITUDE to what it should have...
Example of my material:
( HAPPY)
I love the way my wife decides my life for me. My life is much easier...
She tells me how to dress, I dress myself...
She tells me that I like it… that I don't like it. There are things that I don't like anymore... and I
didn't know, look how stupid.
There are friends of mine who are not good for me. Thank goodness I found out... because I kept
seeing them...
The more innocently and resignedly happy I make this material, the better it works.
PRACTICE 7 F
1) Find an image and associate it with an activity or speech absolutely opposite to what it should
have.
Example: Speak like an Italian chef about the characteristics of the Israeli-Palestinian conflict.
2) Choose something from the material that I have already written and diametrically change the
attitude with which it was written to say it.
Example: If I wrote something about how much I hate public transportation in my city, try saying
the same thing but with an attitude that suggests the opposite. (You have to change the text in
addition to the shape obviously)
THE OVER-AUCTION
The over-punch is a punch that is said immediately after another punch. The over-punch uses the
previous shot as a foot. This gives it enormous strength because it climbs on the energy that the
previous shot has left.
Example: Let's try the last joke I wrote:
What comes from crossing a Pear and a Drunkard?
A “happy hour” fruit….
…are fruits that ripen only from 19 to 21 on trees that grow in front of an Irish pub.
NOTE:
Be careful with over-finishes!
Sometimes they are very effective because, as I said, they build on the laughter of the previous
punchline. But many times, if the punchline has worked very well, it is better for us to keep the
over-punchline to ourselves so as not to run the risk of lowering the effectiveness of the joke.
The use of the over-punch is up to the comedian to decide at the moment he tells the joke. It
depends on how the public feels.
Practice 7H
Try adding a punchline to each of the jokes you wrote.
FINAL COMMENT ON THE JOKES:
I repeat: Humor is not something rigid, it is something that flows and is alive.
These structures are examples of common ways of doing humor.
Nothing is so rigid, as we saw previously they are often combined.
An exaggeration is made through a change of Address. A comparison becomes an association…
Etc…
The important thing is to create a new logic.
Break with the logic that the FOOT brings in the FINISH in a coherent way so that a PREMISE
appears.
If what you write sounds funny to you, if it makes you laugh... it's probably a joke and you have
complied with one of these structures.
If it doesn't work when you say it, revise it according to what you've seen in this chapter.
Sometimes you think you are telling a joke and you are making a statement.
CAREFUL!
For a statement to be funny, the audience has to agree with what I say. A joke is often funny even if
the audience does not share my thoughts.
The key is the breakdown of logic.
Chapter 8
Number one
Number one is the number of absolute truth.
The authority number. Of the truth revealed.
As we have already said in the comedy, the rational and the energetic are intrinsically related. The
number one also brings its own energy charge.
It's a blow.
The charge is powerful, direct and non-continuous. A pineapple straight to the jaw.
This translates into a joke structure that is directly related to the number one load: The One Liner.
The One-Liner:
The translation of One-Liner would be: “One-Line Joke.”
It's exactly that.
It's a joke where the Premise, Footer and Punchline are all in ONE line.
More precisely, the premise is in the Foot or is an tacit Premise. Let's look at an example with a
joke that I used before:
“My girlfriend is so fat that when she steps on the scale, the scale says: To be continued.”
Premise, Footer and Finish are on a single line as we have already seen in the analysis of this
structure.
ONE-LINER FEATURES:
The One-Liner is a structure where everything is integrated into a single line. Therefore it is
governed by the number 1.
Its characteristic is to be powerful and blunt. What the One Liner says is like this. After hearing the
previous joke, no one doubts that my girlfriend is the fattest in the world.
The One liner goes from 0 to 100 in a very short time. As we have already said, it relies on the
charge of number 1. It's a blow.
A good One Liner, well said, is an instant laugh. The public has no time to prepare for Laughter.
In other structures, with longer Pies that prepare us for the punchline, with dialogues or descriptions
of situations, the audience starts laughing as the joke unfolds. Not in the One Liner. Laughter
surprises us.
It is, as I already said, a direct shot to the jaw.
KEYS OF THE ONE-LINER
The One Liner is a statement. He has the number one burden. It's EVERYTHING in one line.
Therefore we do not have much time or many words to make our statement. The key then is to find
the most powerful and perfect Images to construct the joke.
In a One-Liner we have to pay close attention to making the images perfect. A weak image gives us
a doubly weak One-Liner. Just as we use the power of number one, if what we say does not
correspond in power to this rhythm that we are choosing, it will be doubly exposed.
If we are using another structure, where we slowly build the joke, we can afford to use images that
may not be as powerful but that together give the powerful Image that we need.
In the One Liner we don't have time. Every Image we use has to be perfect. They have to
correspond to the power that we are assigning when using the number one.
When we want to define something we do it with One example or Three. Using Two examples is
weak.
When we want to define the end of a state we use the number Three.
Before starting a race we say:
- Ready, Set, Go! –
We use pace three to define that the waiting state is finished and the running state must begin.
In general, to perform any act that involves a change of movement we use the number three. The
most common phrase before starting something is:
- On the count of three. One two three! –
This rhythm is firmly rooted in the human being.
Energetically, it generates a tension in us that tells us that something is finished and something new
must come. It prepares us for a jump.
This has a very strange correlation in the public. When we tell them things in threes, it is as if we
were saying:
- Ready, Set, Go! –
The audience feels the need to laugh at number Three.
As strange as it may seem, this is so.
That is why the number Three is called the magic number.
This translates into a joke structure that is directly related to the charge of the number Three: The
“List Joke”.
Let's look at an example, with a joke that circulates on the Internet, rude but effective:
They call Maradona Fernet Branca :
Because it's black, bitter and works well with coke.
As we see, these definitions about Maradona grow in intensity until they end with “It works well
with coke.”
This one-two-three generates the audience to unconsciously feel: After three I have to laugh. It is
the growth of the energy that the Three rhythm has incorporated into the Human being.
For this growth to be fulfilled, the following rule must be given: What I say must grow in
Intensity.
What we do in a list joke is find three images that grow in intensity to take advantage of the energy
boost that the number Three gives us.
We get on it: - Ready, set, Go! -
The structure of the list joke is so powerful that it can be applied to any list of Threes.
You can also construct a list joke with three jokes. In this case it would be a List Routine. Let's look
at an example with another joke that I used before:
What would the Catholic Church be like if the Pope were Argentine?
In confession, instead of doing penance, the priest would ask for a bribe. Instead of bread and wine
at mass, choripan and beer would be taken. The priest would begin the chants of the mass, fluttering
his cassock shouting: - Everybody sing!, you bitches!!! -
As we see, this list "joke" is built with three jokes that grow in intensity. We will see later what a
Routine is.
Therefore:
Any List Joke can become a One-Liner and vice versa.
I simply take the last image from the list joke and build a One-Liner.
And every list routine can be turned into a single joke (One liner or not):
What would the Catholic Church be like if the Pope were Argentine?
The priest would begin the chants of the mass, fluttering his cassock shouting: - Everybody sing!,
you bitches!!! –
A perfect joke.
In the same way I can turn any One-Liner into a List joke. I just have to increase the intensity of the
images until I reach the end of the One Liner.
Let's see what it would be like: “My girlfriend is so fat that when she steps on the scale, the scale
says:
To be continue." , turned into a list joke:
“My girlfriend is so fat that when she steps on the scale: Thriller music is heard… The birds stop
singing… And the scale exclaims: To be continued!!”
If I want to close a concept with the number Two I have to make an Opposition or a Conjunction.
“This is like this AND like this” or “This is neither like this nor like that”
Black and white.
Ying and Yang.
The Two serves to Oppose and Complement.
This becomes an incredibly strong rhythm for making a statement.
PRACTICE 8
The material
One very important thing to understand the essence of Stand Up and its difference from theater is
that comedians do not do monologues on stage, they do their material.
The material is the collection of jokes and routines that the comedian has to make people laugh.
Unlike the theatrical monologue (whether comic or not) where what is said is always the same show
after show, the material is something dynamic that can be modified depending on the comedian's
preference. Before a performance, the comedian chooses from his material what he wants to say and
in what order he is going to say it.
That's called: The Set.
Each function has its own Set that depends on the audience it is aimed at and the comedian's mood.
What do I feel like saying today?
The Set is assembled with the material that the comedian wants to do in the order that the comedian
decides.
THE SET
To understand how a set is built, I'm going to take a set of mine and then we'll analyze it.
We will analyze part of a set that I put together for a show in Montevideo, Uruguay. I find it
interesting to analyze it because it has several elements that I have been talking about in previous
chapters.
Note: Many of the jokes are from Act Out, they appear as if in a dialog box.
URUGUAY SET:
I love Montevideo, but one thing that made me sad is seeing that here, like in Buenos Aires, you
also find people begging, drunks who live on the street. Very sad, in the corner of my hotel there is
a drunk begging. Step into the morning... there's the guy, drunk, begging. Step into the afternoon...
he's drunk begging... Before coming here I see him, poor, drunk, begging... When does he buy the
alcohol?
I confess, I am an Argentine who does not understand anything about football. What's more, I am
disabled from football. My desperate Father tried to make me understand, he took me to the square,
he threw the ball at me... (Act Out of ball that hits me without any reaction from me) - tuc! knock
Knock! nothing…-
It had nothing to do with the ball, so my dad thought I should sleep with it to see if it was cool. I
have scoliosis from that time, nothing more.
My mother, who was very tender, painted a face on the ball, so that it would take affection.
That worked, but when I went to the square and saw the boys playing I shouted: - (Desperately as if
they were kicking my pet) No Puffy! No Puffi!
This is not my first trip. I have traveled a lot, I have met women all over the world... And
throughout the many trips and the many women I have met, I have learned something from them.
All over the world women have one thing in common, they are equal in one thing:
With me nothing... But nothing... nothing.
The Problem in relationships is that the woman is deep, complicated... and the man is simple.
Simple!!
The woman is a labyrinth, the man is a train track.
A train.
It leaves the Sleep station and arrives at the station: Take .
What is the Terminal? In the middle is eating and shitting. Nothing else.
-(Acting like a train that makes a journey) Sleep, eat, catch, fuck... Go to sleep! - It is a circular
road.
That's why the world is the way it is. Because until now we men have handled it. And we don't want
to go anywhere! Sleep, eat, shit and fuck, nothing more. There is no plan, there is no Utopia.
And if they rush us... having sex is enough:
- (Concerned) Unemployment rates are reaching alarming levels! -
- (Relaxed) I don't know, I'm fucking... .
If you don't believe me, look at the men who have changed the world. Who are the men who have
changed the world? Men who didn't have sex.
Look at Marx... with that face he couldn't catch
Look at Freud's face... he didn't catch
Look at Jesus Christ... I'm not saying it... the Bible says it!!!
ANALYSIS
You will notice that the Set is divided into units separated by a space. Each unit of these is an
independent comedy unit. I could take it separate from the Set and it would work on its own.
What is a Bit?
It is an independent comedy unit.
Something that doesn't need anything before or after to be funny. It has all the elements in itself to
make you laugh.
I mean, a joke?
Yes... but it can also be a Routine, a song, a dance, a pantomime, etc...
What is a Routine?
It is a series of jokes grouped under the same Premise.
It is the basis of a comedian's set.
Important: It is not a series of jokes grouped under the same TOPIC, I repeat it is a series of jokes
grouped under the same Premise.
The same Topic can have several Premises and therefore several Routines.
This is not my first trip. I have traveled a lot, I have met women all over the world... And
throughout the many trips and the many women I have met, I have learned something from them.
All over the world women have one thing in common, they are equal in one thing:
With me nothing... But nothing... nothing.
The Problem in relationships is that the woman is deep, complicated... and the man is simple.
Simple!!
The woman is a labyrinth, the man is a train track.
A train. It leaves the Sleep station and arrives at the station: Take. What is the Terminal? In the
middle is eating and shitting. Nothing else.
-(Acting like a train that makes a journey) Sleep, eat, catch, fuck... Go to sleep! - It is a circular
road.
That's why the world is the way it is. Because until now we men have handled it. And we don't want
to go anywhere! Sleep, eat, shit and fuck, nothing more. There is no plan, there is no Utopia.
And if they rush us... having sex is enough:
- (Concerned) Unemployment rates are reaching alarming levels! -
- (Relaxed) I don't know, I'm fucking... .
If you don't believe me, look at the men who have changed the world. Who are the men who have
changed the world? Men who didn't have sex.
Look at Marx... with that face he couldn't catch
Look at Freud's face... he didn't catch
Look at Jesus Christ... I'm not saying it... the Bible says it!!!
JOKE 1
This is not my first trip. I have traveled a lot, I have met women all over the world... And
throughout the many trips and the many women I have met, I have learned something from them.
All over the world women have one thing in common, they are equal in one thing:
With me nothing... But nothing... nothing.
Premise: I'm a loser because women ignore me
Jokes that correspond to the premise: 1. A change of direction.
ROUTINE 1
Women have left me in every possible way. From the classic: (In the tone of a capricious girl) I'm
confused...-
- Confused…Confused…(Angry) Give me back the iPad, motherfucker!! -
Or Also: (In a sympathetic tone) The problem is not you, it's me... I like big penises!
Even the most original: (Thinking and doubting, he looks at me as if he didn't know me) …Who
were you?... ah yes, I don't love you anymore! -
But the prettiest, the prettiest was a girl who once told me: - (With a lot of love) I love you so much,
I love you so much... that I'm going to leave you so as not to hurt you. - (Totally disconcerted) I
never understood what he wanted to tell me...
Premise: Women leave me
Jokes that correspond to the premise: FOUR jokes in the form of ACT OUTS
Let's analyze the different jokes I make. The first is a change of address: (When I say: Give me back
the iPad!!.................... It is clear that she is not confused and that she is shitting me). The second is
a change of direction: (Normally this phrase ends in “it's me”, in this case I continue it with: I like
big penises… with which I close the change of direction). The third is an exaggeration: (He directly
does not remember me). The fourth is an obvious change of direction (The comment: I never
understood what he meant... IT'S NOT THE PICTURE, it's a BRIDGE, we'll see what it is about)
ROUTINE 2
Women are a mystery, a labyrinth. A labyrinth of contradictions.
(Pretending to get lost in a labyrinth) A contradiction leads you to another contradiction, which
leads you to another contradiction, which leads you to another contradiction
- (Playing angry Mina) If you don't know what's happening to me, I'm not going to tell you!
–
- (Desperate) And how do I do it!!!... There is no manual!!!- Premise: Women are
complicated.
Jokes that correspond to the premise: 2. An association (done as Act Out) AND An Act Out.
JOKE 2
The Problem in relationships is that the woman is deep, complicated... and the man is simple.
Simple!!
The woman is a labyrinth, the man is a train track.
A train. It leaves the Sleep station and arrives at the station: Take. What is the Terminal? In the
middle is eating and shitting. Nothing else.
-(Acting like a train that makes a journey) Sleep, eat, catch, fuck... Go to sleep! - It is a circular
road.
Premise: Man is simple.
Jokes that correspond to the premise:1. A joke by association in the form of Act out.
ROUTINE 3
That's why the world is the way it is. Because until now we men have handled it. And we don't want
to go anywhere! Sleep, eat, shit and fuck, nothing more. There is no plan, there is no Utopia.
And if they rush us... having sex is enough:
- (Concerned) Unemployment rates are reaching alarming levels! -
Set structure
As I already said, a set is assembled with the BITS that we choose for a certain presentation or
ACT.
What is an Act?
It is the presentation we must make.
These are the questions I have to ask myself: 1) What style of show am I presenting in?
Is it my sole proprietorship?
Am I part of a stand up group? If so... in what position do I come out? I am the presenter, the first, I
am in the middle, I am the closing.
Am I invited to a stable show? Is it a rotating comedian show?
Once I have an idea of the Act I must perform, I perform the corresponding Set. One more time…
How do I structure my Set? How do I choose which Bits to do and in what order?????
Looking for the laughter curve…
ATTENTION: Let's call it the midpoint. The public is attentive, follows us, reacts to our speech,
but... without expressing itself too much. Its not all bad. At least we are not alone on stage, they are
listening to us. It is not what the professional comedian is looking for (in fact, this alone is not
enough for us, damn egos), but believe me, for many beginner comedians, getting the attention of
the public is already a challenge. achievement…
Up:
LAUGHTER: The public is not only attentive but they laugh. Our jokes work! For a professional
comedian it is the starting point, for a beginner comedian it is often an achievement...
LAUGHTER AND APPLAUSE: Now if we are talking, this is what the true comedian looks for as
an average of his act. He doesn't want the public to just laugh at his jokes, he wants them to
celebrate and applaud them. The thing that every professional comedian hopes for and every
beginning comedian craves.
OVATION: The true objective of the Act. The comedian who does not intend to receive an ovation
at the end of his act does not deserve to be called a comedian. Many beginners think that it is a rare
thing that happens once in a while. Professional comedians wait for you in each and every one of
our acts.
Down :
DISTRACTION: The public is distracted, they lose track of what we are saying. It's not that he's
bored, he's distracted. A curse for the comedian. Many times it can happen to us during the act that
the audience is distracted, sometimes it can be because of our material (false premises, poor images,
too long feet, etc.), sometimes it can be our fault (distraction on stage, blood sausage, a hypnotic and
boring rhythm) and sometimes because of the environment (a glass falls, a cell phone rings,
someone makes a noise or speaks during our performance). Do not underestimate the distraction of
the public, it is the comedian's number one enemy. We will see how to combat it later in the
Economics chapter and also when we talk about Energy and Public Management in BOOK 2. Don't
feel bad if at the beginning of your career it is the daily bread of your actions, it is normal. That the
public is only distracted when we speak at the beginning of our career is to have an auspicious
beginning.
BOREDOM: The comedian's hell. All the jokes fall like dead. We feel the public slowly falling
asleep. It is torture for both the audience and the comedian, who only thinks about when to finish so
he can leave. And know this, it happens to all beginning comedians. At first, getting them to just be
distracted and not get bored is already a triumph! Cheer up!!! We have all been there.
I'M LEAVING: It happens. The audience gets up and leaves in the middle of the event. Sometimes
they cry out for their money back. Happens.
It has happened to all of us at some point in our careers. If it has never happened to you, it is
because you have not acted enough. Comedians are tested here. The true comedian learns from his
mistakes and improves. And pray that it never happens again… NOTE: If it happens to you often, it
may:
1) You are a misunderstood genius. (very rare)
2) Yours is culinary or another form of Art. (Quite more likely)
1) THE OPENING:
It is the first BIT or, at most, the first two or three Bits of my material.
It's not the first third of my material, it's much less.
It is the first blow I give to the spectator. In the case of a standard material, 15-20 minutes, the first
3 minutes at most.
In the case of a long material, one-person type of 60 minutes or more) I can take 5 - 7 minutes for
the opening, but no more.
What is asked of the material in the opening?
In the blue curve of the graph you can see that during the opening the material is asked to take the
audience's reaction from a situation of possible DISTRACTION to a situation of LAUGHTER. In
this block it is requested that the curve ascend QUICKLY AND WITHOUT DIFFICULTIES.
Therefore, what type of material should I choose for my opening?
This is where, knowing the type of act I must do and answering the previous questions:
1) What style of show am I presenting in?
2) How long is my presentation?
3) What audience is it aimed at?...
For this to happen my OPENING BITS must meet the following characteristics:
It has to have very powerful images, hilarious Act Outs, explosive endings, etc…
Look at the curve on the graph.
It has to bring the public to LAUGHTER.
Remember, it has to be funny, really REALLY FUNNY.
NOTE: In a short act (3-5 minutes) all the material is considered as if it were opening material
except the last Bit which is the Closing, sorry...
EXAMPLE:
Let's look at the Set I made in Montevideo as an example of Apertura material.
1st. BIT:
Hi how are things? My name is Alejandro Angelini
I'm Argentinian... (Pause) that's not funny, I know.
(Dejected) It's more of an accident...
The first thing I do is recognize the ELEPHANT. Believe me, being an Argentine in Uruguay is an
ELEPHANT. The Image of Argentine has a very strong charge in many Latin American countries.
(I said strong image so as not to say negative, I am Argentine after all...)
2nd. BIT:
I love Montevideo, but one thing that made me sad is seeing that here, like in Buenos Aires, you
also find people begging, drunks who live on the street. Very sad, in the corner of my hotel there is
a drunk begging. Step into the morning... there's the guy, drunk, begging. In the afternoon... he is
drunk, begging... Before coming here I see him, poor, drunk, begging... When do you buy alcohol?
I use this joke to get out of the ELEPHANT. Notice how I start from the ELEPHANT and end with
another topic that has nothing to do with it. Furthermore, this material seeks an identification
between what happens to ALL the inhabitants of a big city.
3rd BIT
I confess, I am an Argentine who does not understand anything about football. What's more, I am
disabled from football. My Father desperately tried to make me understand, he took me to the
square, he threw the ball at me... (Act Out of ball that hits me without any reaction from me) - tuc!
knock Knock! nothing…-
It had nothing to do with the ball, so my dad thought I should sleep with it to see if it was cool. I
have scoliosis from that time, nothing more. My mother, who was very tender, painted a face on the
ball, so that it would take affection. That worked, but when I went to the square and saw the boys
playing, I shouted:
- (Desperate as if they were kicking my pet) Not Puffy! , to Puffi noooo! -
This material has a very fun Act Out at the end, which I have a lot of fun doing and ends high in a
heartbreaking scream that always causes an explosion in the audience.
2) THE MIDDLE.
Here is the rest and pleasure of the comedian. It represents the large part of the material, between
the opening and closing. As you will see in the graph, it is a plateau (Blue Line) that is actually the
result of the bits that manage the public's reaction between LAUGHTER AND APPLAUSE and
ATTENTION (A sinuous curve that goes up and down and averages laughter ).
The important thing in this part is to never lose the ATTENTION of the public and to always be as
much as possible within the LAUGHTER. Therefore:
What requirement must the Bits included in this part of the Act meet?
Be funny and work for the audience to which the event is directed. Nothing else.
Here are the Bits that I like. They may not be so universal. Be Complex.
Of course everything I say has to be powerful, but I can afford to say some things that just keep the
laughs going without being explosive. It's where we can treat ourselves. A place for the most
delicate luxuries to the palate.
SPECIAL NOTE:
This is the part where we comedians try out our newest material. We mix the new material with
proven material in the middle of our Set.
NEVER TRY NEW MATERIAL AT YOUR OPENING OR CLOSING.
3) THE CLOSING.
The big end. The Big Bang. Americans say: "Always close with a Bang."
It is the moment of our Act in which we seek the OVATION. They are the last 2 or 3 bits. But
especially the last bit. It has to be our most powerful bit. I repeat: It has to be our MOST
POWERFUL BIT.
It may be complex or politically incorrect, if we have done our job well they have already bought
us. That it is Powerful is the only thing that matters, leaving people screaming and asking for more.
SUMMARY:
At the Opening our Bits must be:
Universal, Simple, Install us and give us security and Powerful.
In the middle:
We provide the luxuries, what costs us the most and the new material.
At Closing:
The most powerful thing we have.
THE BRIDGE:
As I already said, what defines the order of the SET is given by the public's Reaction curve and not
by a Dramatic or Thematic issue.
Many times the comedian feels the need to give a dramatic justification to the order of the BITS.
This happens especially when changing TOPIC, but can happen within the same TOPIC when
changing BIT.
It's as if we needed a glue to give unity to our SET. That is why comedians often add Phrases or
Comments between BITS to serve as BRIDGES.
Let's look at an example:
Comedian X chose to add some Bridges to his SET
SetX
Premise -.............—
Joke -..................... Bit 1 (Routine)
Joke .......................
Premise-------------
Joke ----------------
Joke ----------------
Joke ----------------
Premise -...............
Joke --------------- Bit 4 (Routine)
Joke ---------------
Premise ------------
Joke ----------------
Joke----------------- Bit 5 (Routine)
Joke-----------------
BRIDGE
It's really NOT necessary. The best comedians don't need to use bridges. EVERY PREMISE IS A
BRIDGE.
If you have your premise well stated, the pause that the audience's LAUGHTER gives you at the
end of the previous BIT is more than enough to enter the Bit that continues.
But if you feel that you need to add a BRIDGE, it is good that you follow the following tips:
Whenever I use bridges I try to disguise them in a joke. Let's look at an example of my Previous set.
Women have left me in every possible way. From the classic:
(In the tone of a capricious girl) I'm confused...-
- Confused…Confused…(Angry) Give me back the iPad, motherfucker!! -
Or Also: (With a sympathetic tone) The problem is not you, it's me... I like big penises! -
Even the most original: (Thinking and doubting, he looks at me as if he didn't know me) …Who
were you?... ah yes, I don't love you anymore! -
But the prettiest, the prettiest was a girl who once told me: - (With a lot of love) I love you so much,
I love you so much... that I'm going to leave you so as not to hurt you. - (Totally disconcerted) I
never understood what he wanted to tell me...
The Problem in relationships is that the woman is deep, complicated... and the man is simple .
Simple!!
The woman is a labyrinth, the man is a train track.
A train. It leaves the Sleep station and arrives at the station: Take. What is the Terminal? In the
middle is eating and shitting. Nothing else.
-(Acting like a train that makes a journey) Sleep, eat, shit, fuck... Go to sleep! -
It is a circular road.
THE CHOICE OF THE SHAPE THAT I GIVE TO THE FOOT, IN THIS CASE, IS TO INSTALL
A CERTAIN BIT AFTER ANOTHER, WITHOUT THE NEED OF BRIDGES.
EVERY BIT CAN BE SAY IN THE ORDER I WANT AND WITHOUT THE NEED OF ANY
BRIDGE
Practice 9
It is important that you discover that the Bits can be modified and ordered in the way that suits you
best.
Don't sacralize your material!!!!
EVERYTHING can be modified
Chapter 10
Economy
The economy of material is one of the most important topics in Stand Up. Let's understand well
what we mean when we say ECONOMY.
The definition of economics is: “The optimization of resources” And it is exactly that. It's not just
about being synthetic, although synthesis is important in stand up.
Finding economy in a material is finding just the right images and the perfect shape for the material
to shine. It has to do with the structure and also with the energy of the material. To find the
Economy of a material you have to ask yourself a key question:
Where is the funny thing? What was fun for me when writing this material?
That is something that resonates deep within one. Why did I think of this material? What was it that
made me laugh?
And once I find it, how do I make it shine?
In order to answer this question there is a concept that I have to talk about first: “The Resources of
Humor”
Humor Resources
Humor is a relationship.
In the construction of the material, it is a relationship between the comedian and the world around
him. The comedian relates in a certain way to reality, with a certain attitude or point of view, and
this relationship generates the material.
In the Act, it is a relationship between the comedian and the audience. The comedian relates to the
audience in a certain way when he is delivering his material. The material is communicated in a
relationship.
In that relationship laughter arises.
Every relationship is a communication. And in all communication there is a transformation in the
other. What the comedian communicates produces an effect on the audience.
That effect is what allows the joke to shine. All material seeks a type of relationship with the public
to produce a certain effect.
Those effects that the material seeks to provoke in the public are called Humor Resources.
These are: Surprise, Identification, Absurdity, Repetition and Saturation and Catharsis.
1) THE SURPRISE:
Many times our material seeks to surprise the viewer.
Notice that I used two different structures to break the logic of the Foot. In one case an exaggeration
and in the other a change of direction.
They are two different structures that IN THIS CASE rely on the resource of Surprise.
The resources of humor are not tied to the structure of the joke (change of direction, exaggeration,
play on words, etc...). Different jokes can share the same structure but rely on different humor
resources.
The material that relies on the resource of surprise seeks to provoke in the viewer a comment such
as: - Que HdP! I did not see him coming! I was surprised! -
Have you ever found yourself saying this while laughing at a comedian's material? That is what we
look for when our material relies on the resource of Surprise.
CLUE:
The key to making a material that relies on the resource of Surprise shine is NOT TO SEE IT
COMING.
The FOOT has to have the right images and it has to be said in the perfect way so that you don't see
the surprise coming, but when it arrives it HAS TO CLOSE PERFECTLY.
2) THE IDENTIFICATION:
Other times our material seeks to provoke identification between the audience and the comedian.
This almost always happens in the comedian's most personal material.
Remember that I said that: THE POWER IS ALWAYS IN THE ONE WHO LAUGHES. When we
identify with the comedian in a feeling, we can laugh at that feeling. - It's not that bad, the
comedian is worse than me... - We can overcome that feeling, in this case we are more than losers.
That charges us energetically. Identification generates an energetic charge, which also pushes
Laughter. Surely you have ever laughed at a comedian thinking: - He is just like that!! The same
happens to me!!!-
That's identification.
CLUE:
The key to identifying a joke is emotionally, never rationally. We identify with what the comedian
feels, not with what the comedian says.
Why can we watch an Iranian movie about a farmer who is taking care of his goats and get excited?
It's not because we are interested in the adventures of an Iranian goat keeper.
It is because we identify with the feelings that his adventures generate in him.
Why do we say that “Hamlet” is universal?
It is not because the tribulations of a Danish prince are familiar to us. It's not because we can relate
to his father's murder at the hands of his uncle. Much less with the appearance of his father's ghost
asking for revenge.
It is universal because WE IDENTIFY with the anxieties and doubts, the feelings, that these events
produce.
Where is the key to making a material that relies on the resource of Identification shine? In the
attitude that generated that material. All material was generated from an attitude, in identification
material it is very important that this attitude manifests itself in the form of feeling.
3) THE ABSURD
The absurd is one of the most beautiful and effective resources to use. Sometimes our material
introduces the viewer to an unreal world, absurd but sustained by discourse.
The viewer enters a new world with its own rules but as real as the one they live daily.
This can happen in a joke, in a routine, or in an entire set.
There are comedians who have made absurdity their style.
Woody Allen, The Marx Brothers, Buster Keaton, Diego Capusotto here in Argentina, are clear
examples of masters in the use of this resource.
I highly recommend looking for a Woody Allen routine called “THE MOOSE”, on You Tube, you
can find it at: https://youtu.be/_I5EBQQ9SJU
CLUE:
The key when making absurd material is that the new logic proposed is perfect.
If we are going to modify the rules of reality and propose new rules, these rules have to be well
established and work logically within my new world. If I am going to invent a new reality I can't
cheat, it has to be more perfect and believable than the true reality.
For example:
Within the new world that the Superman comic presents, this is an alien who obtains powers due to
the difference between the sun of his home world and our sun. This gives him a series of
superpowers such as: more strength, x-ray vision, more speed, the ability to fly, etc... This absurd
new world in which Superman exists tells us that he can perform all of these feats because of his
different physical and molecular structure and the way he reacts to our Sun. But Superman does not
perform magic, he is not a magician, he cannot perform miracles. Superman's followers accept the
absurdity and continue his adventures. But... if in some adventure, Superman makes his enemy
disappear in a magic trick instead of hitting him, there would be a rebellion among the readers. They
would shout: - Trap!!!!-
Because? Because Superman's rules of absurdity do not stipulate that the hero does Magic.
It is very important that the viewer enters this new world with the rules very clear and that these do
not contradict each other. Superman is an alien, NOT a magical being.
In the previous example the Dog behaves exactly as we imagine the person who posted the sign
behaved.
In stand up we use it a lot in the way we build routines. Many times we saturate the viewer with
examples and images, increasing the energy in the Foot more and more until when we feel that the
viewer can't take it anymore... we give them a break with the Finish. We are going from less to
more, but we are really going to more. We drop the viewer from a high position.
Another way to use the Saturation resource is in Word game routines. They are those routines that
are built based on a single resource that is repeated ad nauseam. For example, tell a story only by
repeating the names of songs, or cars, or actors, etc.
CLUE:
To rely on the resource of Saturation you do not have to stay halfway. That is: either we install the
concept in a Foot with the right images and the right words or we REALLY overextend ourselves.
Staying halfway when we want to use the Saturation resource is NOTHING.
5) THE CATHASIS
Catharsis is an emotional release.
It is also directly connected to the energetic nature of laughter.
It is not exactly a resource in itself, it is taking the resource of IDENTIFICATION to the extreme so
that the emotion that that Identification contains is discharged.
The comedian performs Catharsis on stage and downloads what the spectator does not dare to
download in public. The viewer responds to that release with an energetic release in the form of
laughter. What the viewer thinks is: - Wow, that's how he dared to say it!!!
To do Catharsis is to shout, insult, cry, spill any emotion that the material contains but that is not
convenient to demonstrate in public. WORKS.
Sam Kinison, American comedian, knew how to take this resource to the form of art. You can see it
on YouTube:
https://youtu.be/vdd_LJgws1c
Many comedians have based their careers solely on the resource of CATARSIS. Enrique Pinti is an
Argentine example of a career supported by this resource.
An example of this resource in my material is when I make the joke:
Women have left me in every possible way: From the classic:
(In the tone of a capricious girl) I'm confused...-
- Confused...Confused...(Angry) Give me back the iPad, motherfucker!! -
In this Bit I try to do CATARSIS when I scream: -Give me back the iPad, motherfucker!! -.
In that part I try to let all the anguish of having been left and humiliated spill over. People
ALWAYS laugh and the punch line is NOT a big deal, however it is supported by the resource of
CATARSIS.
CLUE:
It is so powerful to do Catharsis on stage that it can become a trap for any comedian. It is the first
way to finish off any observation that appears to us. Bad words placed at the right moment are a
form of CATARSIS and we all know that they always generate a laugh. Many comedians have lost
their talent and generated mediocre material by ABUSING this resource.
BEWARE: The berret comedians believe that making observations about life and then doing
CATARSIS on them is doing stand up. IT IS NOT, doing that is being a stupid comedian, nothing
more. The key to CATARSIS is NOT TO ABUSE and always use it as a resource to support a
punchline and not as a punchline in itself.
CALL BACK
The Call back is a joke that plays with repetition within the structure of a set. The translation would
be: “Call again.” It is about taking an image or a concept from one bit and then repeating it in
another bit. The key to Call Back is to change the context of this image and make the image work
the same.
RUNNING GAG
The Running Gag is a List Joke that is completed over the course of a set.
The literal translation would be: “Running joke”
It is a joke that is repeated and seems like a Call back but then it appears again and is finished much
higher. Work the magic of the number Three. It's like a list joke hidden among the material.
The key to a Running Gag is the crescendo.
Each appearance of the image or joke must grow in intensity until the third one must finish high.
Do you remember the Call Back from the previous example?
Many times with that I build a Running Gag.
I continue talking about what those who died for a while and came back say, about the journey to
reach heaven and meet your relatives, and then cross the light. In that part I say:
But no one knows what happens after the light. Those who have returned to tell us did not cross. It's
a mystery…
I think it's because on the other side of the light is God... (Screaming) Naked, eating pizza and
looking at Tinelli!! …
That's a Running Gag. Notice that the third repetition closes the list joke.
Note:
Like all List Jokes, the Running Gag can have a fourth appearance, but in this case, this appearance
of the joke must comply with the characteristics of number 4 and change the essence of what is
repeated.
For example :
If I continue the Set and later in another BIT I install another character. I can talk about the fact that
I surprised this character by opening a door and there asking the public:
Imagine how I found it?
(I can bring the microphone closer so they can answer. Someone is sure to say: - Naked, eating
pizza and looking at Tinelli!!!-)
There I cut and say: No... reading a book...-
TAG
The filler is a form of joke that relies solely on repetition. Basically it is a phrase or a grimace that is
repeated throughout the Act. This phrase or grimace defines the character and the way they would
act in a certain situation. It is linked to the characteristics of the comedian and his stage persona.
The grace is in the Repetition.
The crutch works in a basic and primitive place of the Human Being. Once a filler is installed, we
are waiting for the comedian to say it so we can laugh. It's incredibly powerful and it's incredibly
basic.
In modern Stand Up it is about not abusing this resource, it has the smell of old humor. But I must
admit that many careers were sustained thanks to a couple of good crutches...
ECONOMY AND SYNTHESIS
Let's remember the definition of ECONOMY in Stand Up:
“The fair and perfect way to make a material so that it shines at its maximum power”
This does not necessarily tell us that in Economics everything always has to be Brief. Many times a
Pie must be extensive because the Economy of the material requires it. Some structures such as
changing direction sometimes ask me for an extended Foot to establish a very clear and powerful
direction before changing it.
Some resources like surprise are the same.
Or I want to use the resource of Identification and a more extensive and descriptive bit helps me to
install my emotion
All structures and resources can have a justification for extensive material.
6) Finally, again, when faced with any decision, remember: “When in doubt: Less is more.”
Every time something occurs to me that might be funny (be it a joke, an image, a premise or
anything else) it's because a little laugh occurred inside me. That's the funny thing. What was it that
made me laugh? No matter how small it may be, there was something that ignited a small spark of
internal laughter.
Yes, in the logic of an Argentine Pope, this new creature behaves like an Argentine-Pope and not
like a French-Pope or an Argentine-Rabbi.
In this particular case, an important question for the Economy of this material, when adding it to my
Set, is:
Can I end with: “-Everyone sing!, bitches!!! -“in front of this audience?
Is it an Act where I can say bad words? If not, I have to find another image to top it off.
Practice 10
Review ALL your material.
Check your ECONOMY.
Pay attention to what RESOURCES it relies on.
See if you are really getting the most out of those Resources.
Review your Act Outs.
Check everything.
Try putting together Sets where you can put Call Backs and Running Gags.
Do you have any crutches?
Rewrite ALL your material based on what you've tried.
EVERYTHING can be improved.
Chapter 11
But first we have to talk about a comedian's first nightmare to write material: “THE BLANK
SHEET”
On very rare occasions a comedian is walking calmly and out of nowhere a joke, a routine or some
genius comes to mind. That's called inspiration. And little happens...
Most of the time we know that we want to talk about a topic but we are not clear about what we
want to say. Or, if we work on this professionally, many times we have to talk about a topic for a
special event or job and we have nothing thought about it. Many times it is a topic that never
mattered to us. For that we use the “Techniques to face the blank sheet”
TECHNIQUES TO FACE THE BLANK SHEET
The key to facing the blank page is not to look for a result.
It's very difficult to develop a topic if I want to be funny.
VERY IMPORTANT:
Don't judge yourself when you write material. Don't look for a result when exploring a material. Let
yourself go and be surprised. Sometimes you think you are exploring one Theme and you end up in
a totally different one. Everything is valid and with work it can be good.
The best material takes a lot of work and rewriting. And many times it is nothing like what we
thought when we started writing it.
There are techniques that help us face the blank page and develop a Theme.
2) Mind Mapping
Mind mapping is a technique for developing Themes widely used in advertising and creativity. We
take a blank sheet of paper. The idea is to write the name of the topic in the center of a sheet of
paper and then write all the subtopics that come to mind without thinking or judging. In each
Subtopic we do the same and explore it with everything that comes to mind, always without
judging. If an idea, a concept, or anything arises, we write it down. If a connection arises between
the themes, we write it down. Basically we try to fill the sheet with thoughts, ideas, images,
subtopics, connections between subtopics and anything that comes to mind, WITHOUT
JUDGMENT. Let's see what this would be like, I'm going to do a mental mapping with the
Television topic:
As you can see Mind Mapping is a CHAOTIC technique.
This is how you should work.
In the first instance we explore the different subtopics that arise and write down all the ideas that
appear without seeking an order or a result. Notice how naturally some subtopics gave me
connections that inspired new concepts.
In a second instance we can look for these connections to see if we expand our concepts.
Finally we analyze the entire mapping and separate what seems valuable to us to work on.
It can be an idea, an image, a joke, a premise, whatever. We reread and rescue to continue working
on what inspires us.
1) The actors are no longer the most famous on TV, they now compete with reality show
participants.
2) Contest questions are getting easier. Idea for a routine: in the future by knowing your name you
will win a contest. “Prodigy children were those of before”
4) TV is addictive. People prefer to watch life on TV rather than live. My wife prefers to see a kiss
on the soap opera before kissing me.
5) There are more and more cable channels and they are increasingly more specific. Search what a
strange and absurd Hobbies channel would be like.
These ideas, premises or images that I found are going to be the basis of my new material.
This is where I can combine with the 4 attitudes technique if I want.
Or I just have fun playing with what I found.
Basically I take each of these findings and explore them, play and have fun with them, until I feel
like I found a joke, an Act Out or a routine.
The key to finding a joke is not to try to be funny but to have fun and play with what you find.
Exaggerate it, make a change of direction, do Act Outs, look for associations, etc.
Have fun and play!
3) Automatic writing
This is my preferred method, I always use it in combination with the attitude method.
Basically it's about choosing any topic and starting to write automatically, without filtering or
judging anything that comes up.
The key is to set an external limit to write automatically without seeking an end or meaning to what
I write.
For example, we decided to write non-stop for 5 minutes. We set an alarm for 5 minutes and write
down everything that comes to mind on that topic until the alarm goes off.
We can set other types of limits, for example 5 pages, then we write without stopping until we fill
all 5 pages.
It is important that the limit be external so as not to be looking for closure or resolution of the issue.
We simply write everything that comes to mind until an alarm goes off or the blanks we choose to
fill out are fulfilled.
Find the modality that is most comfortable for you.
Some comedians feel more comfortable speaking to develop a Theme.
That's valid too.
I set a limit of, say, 5 minutes, I RECORD MYSELF, and I begin to talk about the chosen topic
without judging myself, saying everything that comes to mind until the established limit is met.
Then I unrecord what I said and write it out.
Anything goes. The important thing is to be free to explore everything that arises, WITHOUT
JUDGING OR SEEKING A RESULT.
It's pretty simple to explain and not that easy to do. It requires training to be able to allow yourself
to explore what arises without judging it. It's worth it, believe me.
Normally you start talking about what you think you want to talk about and end up talking about
what you really want to talk about.
I advise starting with short limits (5 minutes, 5 veneers) and after taking practice, push the limits
further (15 minutes, 10 veneers).
Once I finish the exercise I do the same as with all the methods to face the blank page.
I reread what I wrote and rescue what I like to work on.
It can be an idea, an image, a premise, whatever makes me laugh. This is where I use reason, not
before.
THE PATH OF THE MATERIAL
It's not easy to write good stand up material.
Or rather, when inspiration appears it is very easy but it almost always requires a lot of work to
really have good material.
4) Untested material
This material is a proposal. I still can't know if it's good or bad.
I can only say that I find it funny and that I want to share it. It has to go through the true judge, the
only judge: “THE PUBLIC”
Whenever something makes me funny, it's FUNNY. The problem is that perhaps it is not well
structured so that it reaches the public.
I MAY THINK I'M SAYING ONE THING AND I'M SAYING ANOTHER.
I have to test the material in front of the public and be willing to modify it based on the result.
Errors appear in front of the public. Maybe I am making a change of direction, but the direction of
the foot is not very clear... perhaps my material relies on the resource of identification but what I am
feeling is not clearly shown... perhaps I established an association that is not understood …maybe
my foot is too long…maybe…maybe…
It's good for comedians to record their performances whenever they try new material.
Don't be bitter if a material that you thought was great doesn't work at first, it always happens to all
of us.
Your material is not finished.
It lacks the public filter.
I work on the material based on the changes that arose from the public's reaction.
NOTE: Remember that new material is tested in the middle of your material. Try never to try new
material in your opening or closing. I test and modify the material in front of the public again and
again.
NOW I CAN KNOW IF THE MATERIAL WORKS OR NOT. If after trying it several times it doesn't
work, let it go.
Do not waste time. Don't fall in love with material that doesn't work. This is where we really judge
the material. IF IT WORKS, I have:
5) Tested Material.
This is what we comedians call material.
It has gone through all possible filters:
The filter of fear. (The blank page)
The filter of reason. (The structure)
The body filter.
The public filter.
IT IS YOUR REAL MATERIAL.
Congratulations!!
THE DISCERNMENT
This is one of the keys to a good Stand Up comedian.
What Bits I do and what Bits I don't do.
Sometimes I have three good jokes, but two of them are very similar and cancel each other out. I
have to get one. It is better for two jokes to shine than to have three good jokes that don't shine. That
joke that I make is reserved for another context where it can shine. 5 excellent jokes are better than
10 good jokes.
What jokes do I leave and what jokes do I destroy.
There is a time when the comedian has to make these decisions. DON'T FALL IN LOVE WITH
THEIR JOKES.
EVERYTHING can be improved. EVERYTHING can be sacrificed.
Sometimes public reality tells us that some of our bits are not as good as we thought. Sorry, they
need to be modified or die.
The experienced comedian defends his material to death when he is on stage and then, calm at
home, questions EVERY bit he used.
FINAL Practice
Find a stage.
It can be a bar, a theater, a private party, whatever.
Find a stage.
Build a Set for that scenario.
Get on the stage.
SHOW YOUR SET.
Record the Act. You don't need to record it on video, it can be audio. Check how it went. Check
every bit. Rewrite them.
Let's see if we can summarize them in the most Zen way possible:
10) CHECK THE ECONOMY OF YOUR MATERIAL ONE AND A THOUSAND TIMES.
The economy of a Material is one of the most important points of the structure. There is no point in
finding a good punchline for Association if the economy of the joke is wrong. Remember that every
joke seeks to produce an effect on the viewer and Economics is the way to achieve it.
12)HAVE FUN
The most important law of all, if you don't have fun with what you do, don't expect others to do it.
Appendix
Comedian's Word
Comedy is not something rigid.
There are no unique formulas.
This manual is a method. MY method. Backed by years of experience and study. But it's just my
method.
At the end of the day every comedian has to find their own method to make people laugh. It is true
that over the years, most of us who work in this field have reached similar waters.
Similar rivers, but not the same.
Each comedian enriches the comedy with his or her particularities and nuances.
In this appendix I would like to share with you some of these peculiarities of colleagues whom I
respect very much.
They are comedians from Argentina, Spain, Chile and Uruguay, whom I admire and many of whom
it has been a pleasure to work with.
To learn a small part of their way of approaching comedy, I sent them three simple questions:
1)How do you face the blank page?
2)How do you work on an idea to get the most out of it?
3)What is your favorite material and why?
In addition to pestering them with questions, I asked these stage bosses to write a short bio to
introduce themselves.
Come get your feet wet in different rivers that are worth knowing...
SEBASTIAN WAINRAICH
ARGENTINA. I'm Sebastian Wainraich. I drive Metro y Medio on Metro 95.1 and I am part of the
Cómico theater group. I have been working in radio since I was 16, and I was an assistant,
producer, scriptwriter, co-host and host. In theater I produced and collaborated with scripts in
works by Fernando Peña, I have been in Cómico for 8 years and I also did a one-man show. On TV
I was a notator of Arde Troya and Indomables and hosted Kitsh, TVR and La Bible and El Calefón.
I wrote two books: I'm Tired of Me and Other Stories and Being Happy Makes Me Shame and
Other Stories.
2) How do you work on an idea to get the most out of it, when you know it's ready?
I never know it's ready. As I said in the previous answer, the scenario defines and often surprises
and breaks our prejudices of thinking that such an idea would work or vice versa. To get the most
out of an idea, I leave life. Please, let this not be understood literally but almost.
2) How do you work on an idea to get the most out of it, when do you know it's ready?
It is said that the joke is a draft that is tested with people, and I very much agree with that idea, you
bring your hypotheses of where the joke can go and connected with the people, you develop it, the
best materials I have They were currently closed above the stage...
2) How do you work on an idea to get the most out of it, when you know it's ready?
Those ideas that seem to have potential accompany me day and night for weeks. They are there,
they haunt me. I think about them and rethink them. I repeat them as if I were monologuing on air.
This is how they take shape. By the time they are finished printed they have already had hours of
grinding while driving, walking or cooking. But fundamentally they had “entire functions” while I
was bathing. Yes, instead of singing in the shower, I monologue. In this repetition and repetition of
tentative routines I am finding their strengths. I'm also discovering something that seems silly but
isn't: what do I mean? Personally, I feel that many times routines fail because they do not have a
strong idea that drives them, that gives them authority. When I repeat them to myself so much it
ends up working like a therapy in which in the end I discover that big WHY.
2) How do you work on an idea to get the most out of it, when you know it's ready?
That is learned over the years, there is less and less margin for error or "burrs", if before I threw 7
jokes on stage of which there were finally two left, today I try 3 and 2 remain, but because there is a
process between creation and delivery with more experience and self-criticism.
2) How do you work on an idea to get the most out of it, when you know it's ready?
I divide the work into three parts, the first is the creative part where I let the ideas come out without
any form, the second is where I clean the material giving it shape, for that I begin to polish the
premise so that it is clear and understood and finally and there It's where I get the most out of it, I
exhaust the possibilities of finishes either to improve the one I have, to reinforce it or add more
finishes if I can think of more... I look for it on the most absurd, ridiculous, exaggerated side and
that's where they appear. It is very likely that although it is not completely finished, I will try it on
the stage where the only truth is, with a real audience where I finish polishing and improving it...
2) How do you work on an idea to get the most out of it, when you know it is ready?
I think of possible jokes. Structures. I leave it and come back to see it another day. I investigate the
topic. I like to play with other paths than the usual ones, the known ones. Try to communicate other
things based on a topic. I never feel like it's finished, but it feels like it's ready to show when I repeat
it in my head and it flows and I like the content. I record myself, polish a little more and I'm going
to try it. Surely later it will have to be polished more.
2) How do you work on an idea to get the most out of it, when you know it's ready?
The craft of writing humor gives you a certain intuition that allows you to know when something is
perfect or needs to be worked on more. Also, it depends on the demands of each person regarding
not lowering the level of what is presented on stage or resenting the style. I have a flat: every
sentence I utter has to end. Every joke I throw has to have its own humorous flight. The viewer has
to notice my work. I don't insist too much on the same thing. When I feel like I've hit the nail on the
head with what I wanted, I quickly move on to something else. We do not have to cover a topic
from all possible sides, nor exhaust it, nor leave our absolute and total philosophical, emotional and
political imprint on this or that thing. Two or three accurate darts and hunt another prey.
2) How do you work on an idea to get the most out of it, when you know it's ready?
It's good to know "the topic" I would like to talk about. So the material comes together from things I
experience, things I hear about the subject, etc. I also have "friends" who are dedicated to this and I
count on them a lot. I tell them what occurred to me and they help me and give me more ideas. I
think that generosity among friends who dedicate ourselves to this "crazy" work is very important to
grow.
2) How do you work on an idea to get the most out of it, when you know it's ready?
Well, I follow a fairly traditional way of working. You have a block, you look for related topics, you
go around and around, you write, you erase, you rewrite and you erase again. There is an almost
magical moment when a gag pops into your head, you know you have something good and you can't
wait to try it out in public. You try it and no one laughs. Everything starts again. The process goes
on like this, until you more or less have it, and then, as you make more and more passes of the same
material, you realize that it is a living thing: the text evolves, the tones change, you remove that
phrase that was left over, you add one last reinforcement gag that took a year to appear... the last
thing you have to do is settle.
2) How do you work on an idea to get the most out of it, when you know it's ready?
In general, it is the audience that tells you when it is ready, by their laughter. There are many
working methods. There is the systematic comedian, who writes comedy every day. And there is the
one who sits down once every 6 months and writes a monologue, because his subconscious has been
assimilating, taking notes, filling himself with experiences. I have been more of the latter because I
often work in television or film writing more marked things.
Seinfeld thinks that the hours dedicated to writing a text are not synonymous with anything. And I
agree. In the end, writing can come easy, and in several sittings you can get a 20-minute block, or
you can spend months fighting with the blank page, putting too much pressure on yourself, or
obsessing over a topic whose approach in the end is not funny. I am increasingly in favor of the Zen
vibe. At least in my case, the best ideas almost never come to me working. Or at least not
consciously. But above all, they don't come to me if I don't have fun.
Therefore one is not infallible. You may have the feeling that 70 or 80% of the jokes in your text
will work the first time you try it. But sometimes you get surprises, and jokes that you consider
better pass without much glory and real nonsense, very obvious, delivered without any effort, is
very popular.
There are not too many secrets with the way of working with ideas. You reread what you have
written and see if it makes you smile, if it makes you laugh or laugh out loud. If you let the text rest,
time can also act as a filter for you. Three weeks later you may be surprised to see that things you
thought were funny are no longer funny. But it is the public that decides.
When I make texts from 2003 in 2012 and see that they still work, I hit the bullseye at the time.
2) How do you work on an idea to get the most out of it, when do you know it's ready?
There are two types of ideas that should be worked with: the very good ones and the great ones. The
rest must be despised or, at least, temporized. You know the very good ones are ready when the
laughter of the spectators, or even their applause, tells you so. You can write it with your maximum
dedication and passion, but only the barometer of the public will save it or send it to the limbo of
“that-gag-that-I-didn't-remember-for-3-years”. But the genius, the sublime, appears when, as soon
as it arises, it makes you laugh out loud. It happens very rarely, but when you laugh at your own
idea... you know it's going to break the show."
2) How do you work on an idea to get the most out of it, when you know it's ready?
I generate as much written material as possible about it, and later discard everything that gives me
doubts. Then I tell it to friends who are not comedians when they least expect it, if they laugh, it
works. If not, I give it a few more chances by rephrasing it or rearranging it in the order of the
routine. Sometimes I share it with fellow comedians and we brainstorm. But there's only one way to
know if it works: by going on stage. And it can still fail. I know it's ready when it works 80% of the
time.
2) How do you work on an idea to get the most out of it, when you know it's ready?
I work on ideas a lot internally, long before they reach paper. I would say that an idea can take years
to grow, until I finally dare to express it. When I have an idea, I spend many hours thinking about it,
and evaluating what it really means as honestly as possible. Then I discuss it with others, which is
when it is truly born, when the word organizes it (I also tend to talk a lot alone).
Then begins an intense work of expressing and transgressing my own thoughts, values and notions
of the world, in order to be able to play with it, and in turn play with myself, something like testing
myself against my own idea, it is the only way I have found so far. the moment, to feel free in the
construction of the material, to test myself. This can take a long time until that idea hits the stage.
Then comes the more technical process, which is building the structure of the idea to turn it into
something that makes you laugh. That's hours of work, searching for different paths within the
technique of writing jokes, I think about it a lot, consult with other comedians I trust, until I manage
to organize the words to my criteria in an effective way. Next comes the most difficult stage, which
is accommodating them, and that happens on stage. The idea is finally tested on stage. It is also the
audience that often tells you what you really want to say, many times the audience acts as a guide,
you have to perceive with your five senses, and in my opinion exercise them every day as a
comedian.
You could say that an idea is ready when it fulfills its objective, in this case to make people laugh.
But with the passage of time and experience I have verified that ideas are not static, I never finish
checking if they are ready or not, they always surprise me. Because ideas also mature with one, I
don't think I could yet say that any of my ideas are ready, that's what I have proven in my artistic
experience as a comedian. I can only affirm that they have given me great unforgettable moments
and they will surely continue to give them to me.
2) How do you work on an idea to get the most out of it, when you know it's ready?
Working on an idea for me is carrying it out several times in different ways and with different
elements until I find the best way. When I try a joke I'm sacrificing that audience because it might
not work. I'm experimenting with them. I consider an idea finished when the audience laughs in
unison, all at the same time, as if they were organized to do so. That doesn't stop me from thinking
of more ideas that can be added to that routine or change some details to improve. Sometimes I want
to add information that isn't funny. That it can be presented in a funny way is part of the job to get
the most out of it. In other words, it is very difficult to finish an idea, that would mean that I no
longer have anything to contribute, and that would be very sad. On the other hand, it is necessary to
close circles to continue with others.
Sometimes I have something I like, I know I want to use it. I like to use interesting things like feet.
The auctions are coming. I think it's much harder to find an interesting caption than a funny punch
line.
2) How do you work on an idea to get the most out of it, when you know it's ready?
Honestly, many times ideas are stretched based on a need: completing a space. It is much more
difficult to get a good idea than to stretch it when it appears and you basically train that chewy
muscle. It is still impossible to know if the idea “is ready” until it becomes whatever it is in front of
an audience on stage. That instance is as implacable as it is defining and you are usually surprised
by the “verdict.”
2) How do you work on an idea to get the most out of it, when you know it's ready?
I have the feeling that ideas are never ready, they simply reach a point where they reflect you. Ideas
are children of thought and thought fluctuates and changes and grows and expands and is
influenced by moods. Being a professional in creation means delimiting, giving you a margin to be
able to cover them. I take advantage of an idea until it's no longer funny to me. It's ready there.
2) How do you work on an idea to get the most out of it, when you know it's ready?
I am very demanding when I think that the idea is good and even more demanding when I think that
the idea is bad, but I always and without exception develop both... I still believe that a good and
effective idea is ready when after many draft arrangements, or rehearsals, The result begins to repeat
itself or no matter how much you want to correct it, you arrive at the same thing, just there is the
idea for the real filter… the public.
2) How do you work on an idea to get the most out of it, when you know it's ready?
I usually write from a theme, for example "The Drunkards" from there I get everything I can in
terms of types of drunks, before and after a drunkenness, famous drunks, etc. Then I do the work of
discriminating (with the pain of my soul I take out what seems boring to me and throw it in the trash
can) and as the last stage I try to summarize all the jokes to be told in the fewest possible words,
when I achieve it, I am happy and I can see my girlfriend's face again.
2) How do you work on an idea to get the most out of it, when you know it's ready?
When the premise makes me laugh. If I don't get rid of it, if it doesn't cause anything to me, even
knowing how effective it may be, I prefer to give up and let it go away. I never think they're ready
either. When I create them lists, they even bore me and I start to change them, say them in a
different way or I definitely delete them.
BERRETAS:
Berreta, colloquial way of calling something of little value.
False, doubtful.
In English: Hack.
BIRRA:
Colloquial way of calling beer in Argentina.
Choripan and beer is a typical food combination in Argentina.
BOLUDA:
Colloquial form of insult in Argentina.
Of little light. Silly. Moron.
BONDI:
Colloquial way of calling public transport in Argentina.
Bus.
Collective is another colloquial way of calling it.
GROSS:
Of little light. Silly.
Singular: Gross.
CHORIPAN:
Very typical type of sandwich from Argentina.
It's a chorizo between two breads.
TAKE:
Make love.
Fuck.
COIMA:
Bribery.
FERNET BRANCA:
Very popular alcoholic drink in Argentina.
It is a bitter and dark-colored appetizer that is usually prepared mixed with Coca-Cola.
GALLEGOS:
Colloquial way of calling Spaniards in Argentina.
Native of Galicia.
MAMMOTH
Prehistoric animal, father of elephants.
Much larger than a modern elephant and with enormous tusks, it cohabited with the first men.
MORISQUETA:
Make a ridiculous face or an absurd and exaggerated gesture.
POLOTUDO:
Idiot, Fool, Stupid
PINEAPPLE:
Colloquial way of saying punch in Argentina.
FUCKING:
Homosexual.
“Sing everyone fucking” is a typical exclamation that fans make in soccer stadiums during a game.
KIOSK:
Small place or business on the street where candy, cigarettes, drinks, ice cream, etc. are sold.
NEWSKIST:
Who works in a Kiosk.
SUBWAY:
Underground, Metro. Metropolitan.
TINELLI:
Very famous television presenter in Argentina.
Their programs have a reputation for being cheesy and tawdry.
He is accused of exploiting women and always falling into easy humor.
Table of Contents
Chapter 1 Image of the Comedian
Chapter 2 Premise
Chapter 3 Attitude
Chapter 4 Starting to create different realities
Chapter 5 The Jokes
Chapter 6 The stand-up joke
Chapter 7 Structures of Humor
Chapter 8 Economics and Numbers
Chapter 9 The Material
Chapter 10 Economy
Chapter 11 The path of material
Chapter 12 The Zen of Comedy