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Task 2 - Outweigh - Sample 7.5
Task 2 - Outweigh - Sample 7.5
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GRADING OF TASK 2
Based on the assessment of Mike Wattie (ex-examiner of IDP) and the public band descriptors of Cambridge
TASK RESPONSE
This criterion assesses
8 ✔️ 250-320 words
✔️ Cover all parts of the question and they are responded to well
✔️ Develop main points, along with clear explanations and examples of main
ideas
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COHERENCE
The first and final paragraphs clearly introduce and summarize the essay
This criterion assesses
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how well you have
structured your essay, Topic sentences introduce paragraphs well/ clear central topic
used paragraphing, and
connected your ideas ✔️ Sequence information and ideas logically
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This criterion assesses
your vocabulary in Use less common vocabulary
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terms of errors and also
ability to use more Awareness of style and collocation
advanced language
✔️ Avoid errors with word choices
GRAMMATICAL RANGE & 7 ✔️ Uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms
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ACCURACY
This criterion assesses
Produce error-free sentences
your grammar in terms of
errors and also ability to
use more advanced
sentence structures
✔️ Avoid errors with grammar, punctuation, and articles (a, an, the)
OVERALL 7.5 A very good essay here, all ideas and explanations are well-organized, with proper
grammar and expressions. However, some words seem to be a bit informal, other
things are good.