Amani, I have conducted the review over your paper, and I found it was wonderfully

done. Just, consider and give major focus on the following areas on your defense. It has
been listed out hereunder: -

A) On Introduction(Chapter-1) Part

® On background of the study, always examiner asked what motivates you

to conduct this study? You should reply with respect to the study relevance.
® On statement of the problem, always “KNOWLEDGE GAP” has been asked.
What is the gap not yet been covered/remained from the previous
researcher and what contribution does the current/your research
provides? Here, clearly show practical research output evidence done by
relating with variables. Show clearly as if your research is novel/new. You
should show knowledge gap (issues not addressed) by previous researchers
and show the necessities of current research. (it has a maximum value on
research and give due consideration).
® The other such as objective of study, significance and other shall be dully
presented.
B) Chapter Two (Literature Review) Part
© Here only present conceptual framework to show the relationship between
dependent and independent variables.
© In a rare case, you may list out some of the empirical evidence regarding
the subject of the study (empirical review).
C) Chapter Three (Methodology Part)
® Chapter three (research approach, research design, data source and
type, model selection & variable specification shall be clearly stated).
Accordingly give emphasis on each of it. For all your decisions (on each
parameters), answer the question “Why? /why not?”. For example, why you
use primary data? why not secondary? Why use logit model? Why you use
propensity score matching method? Why not other? Accordingly get
ready for each questions.
D) On chapter four, present only major finding by relating with the specific objective
you devised /the variable you proposed earlier. It shall include, but not limited to:
© Assumption of Violation for CLRM
© Descriptive statistics regarding the nature of variable
© Model result/estimation result & discussion/analysis on it.
© Model fitness for the study and other major.
E) Lastly, on Conclusion and Recommendation Part, relate with respect also the
objective of the study you devised. Check whether you achieved the objectives,
relate it with existing theories, and others.
***********************Wishing You Best Result, Keep your Trust on God**************************

“Do not fear, for I am with you; Do not anxiously look about you, for I am your God. I will strengthen
you, surely I will help you, Surely I will uphold you with my righteous right hand.” Know that any public
speaking is stressful, but God is there with you the entire time. Isaiah 41:10