WRITING PRACTICE HOUR

Group: Date: …
English III - Class # … Teacher: Laura Mariscal
Participants:
Topic: What are the best characteristcs to be a good friend.

First of all, Freddy is always ready for her fun.

Second, he is completely trustworthy

Third, Freddy understands my mood.

To sum, my Best friend is fun to be with, trustworthy,

and understanding even if he is just a dog.
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Topic: The best characteristcs of your best friend.

My Best friend, Eddy has three important qualities.

First, of all, Freddy is always ready for her fun.

Sometimes we play Frisbee in the park. Sometimes we
just sit around in my room listening to music.

Second, he is completely trustworthy. I can tell Freddy

my deepest secrets, and he doesn’t share them with
anyone else.

Third, Freddy understands my mood. When I am angry,

he tries to comfort me. When I am happy, he is happy
too.

To sum, my Best friend is fun to be with, trustworthy,

and understanding even if he is just a dog.
JUST READ:

TOPIC: GUAYAQUIL

TOPIC: The most delicious dish in Guayaquil

Topic Sentence: The ceviche is a traditional dish of Guayaquil. It is the most delicious one because of these 3
reasons.
Supporting Sentence 1: Ceviche contains all kinds of seafood.

Supporting Sentence 2: Ceviche is low in calories and high in protein.

Supporting Sentence 3: The omega 3 of ceviche helps fight the arthritis.

Conclusion Sentence: Ceviche is a typical dish that provides health benefits.

Topic Sentence: The tastier dish of Guayaquil city is Encebollado.

Supporting Sentence 1: First, It’s the most wanted for any person. (No)
Supporting Sentence 2: Secondly, the recipe changes for the places in the city. (no)
Supporting Sentence 3: Finally, the flavor is unique and special.
Conclusion Sentence: To sum up, this dish is the loveliest in the city because his flavor is
unique for any person. (check)

TOPIC SENTENCE:
Three main reasons why encebollado is the most delicious dish in Guayaquil. This is not a
sentence: s+v+c 0/10
Supporting sentences #1:
First, Encebollado contains fish and in turn this has phosphorus which helps to the memory.
Supporting sentences#2:

Second, it has an especial flavor that makes it delicious.

Supporting sentences#3:

Third, some people use it for hangover.

Conclusion sentence:

In conclusion, Encebollado is the best dish in Guayaquil including the ???? and many people
prefer than other dish. check this (write the 3 reasons if you want)

CORRECTIONS:
 Topic:
The encebollado is one of the best dishes in Guayaquil for 3 different reasons.
Supporting sentences #1:
First, the fish doesn’t contain bones.
First, Encebollado contains fish and in turn this has phosphorus which helps to the memory.
Supporting sentences#2:
Second, it has an especial flavor that makes it delicious.
Supporting sentences#3:
Third, some people use it for hangover.
Conclusion sentence:
In conclusion, the encebollado is the best dish in Guayaquil because first this dish contains
fish, second it has an especial flavor and third some people use it for hangover. Therefore,
many people prefer than other dish.
In conclusion, encebollado is the best dish in Guayaquil because of one’s delicious flavor
and benefits that make the people fall in love with this.

TOPIC: The most delicious dish in Guayaquil

Topic Sentence: Guatita is a typical dish from Guayaquil, which contains ingredients that make it
desired by many. This is not good because your topic is .. most delicious… not typical dish.. ok?

Guatita is a typical dish from Guayaquil, which contains ingredients that make it desired by many.
This could be a background but not the topic sentence …

Supporting sentences 1: First, the main ingredient of the guatita is "mondongo", this component
is key in its preparation because a good wash of “mondongo” gives an exquisite smell and flavor to
the dish. Ok.
Supporting sentences 2: Second, the peanuts that characterize the guatita, is which gives the
color to dish and is also good for preventing cancer. Color is not related to delicious…
Supporting sentences 3: Third, the dish also has potato that is the ingredient that makes it thick
but special that offers a good flavor.
Conclusion sentence: In conclusion, guatita is a typical dish which has a unique flavor for people
due to its delicious ingredients. Paraphrase the topic sentences writing about delicious….
Topic Sentence:
The most delicious dish in Guayaquil is Encebollado for many reasons.
Supporting sentences 1:
Encebollado can be eaten at any moment of the day.
Supporting sentences 2:
Encebollado has many vitamins and proteins that help you having a better healthy and make your
body more active.
Supporting sentences 3:
People use to eat it in the next day after a celebration event because encebollado helps to low the
hangover.
Conclusion Sentence: Encebollado is a typical dish of the coastal region of Ecuador, that is very
affordable at any time of the day, it has a delicious flavor and with its vitamins that will delight the
person who tries it.

These supporting ideas are not related to the topic sentence: reason why Encebollado is the most
DELICIOUS….