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Book Snow Globe 3
Book Snow Globe 3
Book Snow Globe 3
The title "Snow globe" is good and unique and also suits the story.
Cover: 9/10
Blurb: 9/10
The blurb sums up the story and has a lot of detail. I like it when authors put a question in
their blurb, like you did in your last paragraph, because it adds a sense of mystery and
suspense!
The characters are just beautifully represented. I really like how Yn was being kind and
calm.
Grammar: 10/10
For your grammar, I don't really have anything to say. It was perfect.
Vocabulary: 9/10
Pace: 9/10
I really enjoyed the pace of the chapter is really good. I really liked this story.