seuuessues BY smireacnce sts 645 WRITING AND LANGUAGE TEST 35 Minutes—44 Questions ‘Tuam o Section 2 of your answer sheet to answer the questions in this scten, Directions: Each passage below is accompanied by « numberof questions. For some questions you will consider how the passage might be revised to improve the expression of ideas. For fther questions you will consider how the patsage night be edited to coreterors in sentence ‘teucture, usage, or punctuation, A passage or a question may be accompanied by one ot more {rapes Guchasa table or graph thst you willconsier a you make revising and editing decisions. Some questions wil direct you to an underlined portion ofa passage. Other questions wil diet you toa locaton in a passage or ask you to think about the passage ata who ‘After reading each passage, choose the answer to each question that most effectively improves the quality of writing inthe pasage or that makes the passage conform tothe convention of standard written English, Many questions include a "NO CHANGE" option Choose that option {fy think the bes choice is oleve the relevant potion ofthe passage ast i ‘Questions 1-1 are bated onthe following passage From Here to the Stars (Gee Kian had et in ages @ Te gh itso ping 1. A) NOCHANGE 1B) Theflgharectr paced (©) The pacing fight director D) Theflgh director pacing en emf mani n NASAS Mision Control Cntr an imposible robin weighing hey ais weary min: Tre aronais wee peng pled pacer eal 20000 mls rom Earth And ine ws runing ot 2. 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Eutermare, poi ecu, power nd protection ‘bear more sgncance or the ature Ube UC hope to manna and a. ‘and is iatent presence in wa ender, teases and se invavemest wih preter Europea Copier that 2 ‘he ear probably oes lover sk magi thn many ave spp, ‘hebeneits of ewe adoption @ to secure EN member and. sung cause, bl Bean areal econ Questions 2-3 are based on the flowing pasage Coffee: The Buzz on Beans Ares ince @ Suu das you an fd see op ely very Amen ly But this walt Haw dai wich as fis gov a Aa oe Sv handed er apc tn Aca? 7 “Teco plant en wich ner gt thee tht @ indi. nda ito wat wean, tpn Et Aan coat Bhp. athe province oa From thesis the Abin Penola, whee he fhe or ahah Kh Arb, sey popu Likespces and th oferta interatnly » » ° > [NO CHANGE Aspe tential relat ‘Which sentence islent eleva fo ‘he cent en ofthis page a 5 © > ” » o » » » ° » ° ” » °) setene Sentence 3 ‘amScanner No CHANGE Ate, a No CHANGE to secure BV memberiip sod strengthen cae to cure EU membership ad strengths is ease io secute EU membership and strengties is case, The Thee te bing diel ond roasted tne dried andeoeted ls being dian rns’seuuessues BBY aroun exlorr enced ands nd @ sling shiping ote. “Theft European cfehouse open in Ven, ay 1689, and round that tine odo @ dpe oe tre handed calluses ‘Therein end of coffe eing amongst the cargo af the Mayflower nich reached the New Worn 1620.1 nt wat 16 tat he fit writen efrence to coffee in America was made beverage wat being made fom roasted bean 2ndavored with gar hone, and clanamon, Cote was then described ia the New ‘England colony ofc rcord of 167. a 1653, Willa Pen, whol in stem onthe Delaware Rives, wrote of buying supple of cole in « Nev York:makt. he pid eightcen shiligs and nin pence per pound EXE * ° > smpeacncerest= 651 No CHANGE cette ava established sea etbishing NO CHANGE: raged igh ited oat NewYork mate and ‘witam Penn ‘New York market 0 he pal New ere mare, eying Which ice mat tty stable a mummate condaig sentence othe paragraph a Coffe’ appearance inthe ‘stil record hows was decoming more and ‘more establihed in the New Wort “The colonies probaly used moe tee than coe since ther ae records of beng imported rom England Wiliam Pena founded Peoayvania Colom. which Iecime the tate of Penasyvanin after the eylationary War with Englund ended ‘The Mayflower dl carey ‘crumb fers hat the ‘olan nested for sete ‘et, icing animals and tookCofeoake hose a Europe were o0n eased in American colonies and ae Ameria expanded westvar oe consumption gr Inthe element dy, @ Chicago St. Loic and ‘New Oransech had famous aeons By the went centr cofechouses wee sundance ke New Yr apd San ranch became conf with cortersar a lice where Inet and artis atered ohare as In Ameren homes, ‘ote was soc hbict,einging pope ose to sci sflernon tet nd done ia Egle: With the nverion of the ecto pt it became x coro corey atk gust fhe wate oo ta” a, >) » » ° > Wich choice moat civ ‘Chicago, St. Lis and New Ouse ‘Chicago, St. Lai and, New Oren ‘Chcago St Laisa, New tiene [NO CHANGE related stil coupe ‘amScanner a ‘stables the mua op ofthe argraph? » o ‘Thre were many coer shops in New tk Chee lec fe machines changed how geople serait tame (rer tine, cafe became & prt of eseryy America Iie People went tcafleboues 6 cus major uesseuuessues BY Hwee bythe 18505 US. nictrng i cor wt tad one @ athe oo grat cep smart and lone the gut Coe wa ron nd groin manusicrng anand recede for long storage which compromised is arr An “rap panting bck haga cng. dak roel te fot an sped othe st ofthe woe @@ ner mae ‘hed oiaesamund he wd eapesttabealetagaban, lice Sesh. and ins cop fsae—and ty an » o a NO CHANGE other foods produced ter foods, produced ter ood: produced Now sees, in vey aor tye the worl around the world expect tobe able rab upliig fesh and detcbus cup of eafoeand they en Now in every major city of the word travers around the word expect tobe ale ab an upliing eh ad dkticbus cup of afore they an. 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