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The Manila Times Blunder Portfolio (Flores, Orteo, Paneda, Pulgo, Rago, And Sibucao)
The Manila Times Blunder Portfolio (Flores, Orteo, Paneda, Pulgo, Rago, And Sibucao)
The Manila Times Blunder Portfolio (Flores, Orteo, Paneda, Pulgo, Rago, And Sibucao)
Final Requirement in
Journalistic Editing (JOUR 40063)
Submitted to:
Prof. Prestoline Suyat
Prepared by:
Flores, Khiel Precious
Orteo, Ma. Angelica
Paneda, Mary Grace
Pulgo, Adrian
Rago, Kriszel
Sibucao, Juan Carlos
BAJ 4-2N
TABLE OF CONTENTS
TABLE OF CONTENTS
TABLE OF CONTENTS
NOTE: The team has also undergone two roundtable discussions to consult
and corroborate the technical revisions, contextual impressions,
and ethical observations we did and/or noted per article.
The Manila Times through Time
Mary Grace Paneda
The Manila Times was founded in October 1898, around the time that news
about the Treaty of Paris being signed came out: ending the Spanish-American War
and transferring the Philippines from Spanish to American sovereignty.
Considering that, the publication witnessed and even became a part of the
longest history of the Filipinos and has been in the hands of different people:
Currently, the publication publishes under The Manila Times Publishing Corp.
and presents itself as having the fourth-largest circulation of the newspapers in the
Philippines, following the Philippine Daily Inquirer, the Manila Bulletin, and The
Philippine Star.
Police Beat
Kriszel Rago
ARTICLE LINK:
https://www.manilatimes.net/2022/06/15/news/national/suv-driver-surrenders/184746
5
DATE: June 15, 2022
AUTHOR: Francis Earl Cueto
Jose Antonio Sanvicente, the driver of the SUV involved in the viral hit-and-run
incident in Mandaluyong surrendered to authorities on Wednesday.
The SUV driver showed up following calls from the public and the national police to
face the charges against him.
As recalled, on June 13, PNP Chief Officer-in-Charge Vicente Danao Jr. issued an
ultimatum for him to surrender.
Sanvicente, along with his parents and a lawyer, appeared before the Philippine
National Police (PNP) and media at the Pulis @ Ur Serbis program hosted by UNTV
held at Camp Crame.
Pressed by the media to detail what happened and why he continued driving,
Sanvicente said he could not clearly remember what transpired.
"Hindi ko na po talaga maalala kasi blur na since nung nangyari, (I really can't
remember what happened; it was a blur)," he said.
"Hindi niya gustong mangyari 'yong aksidente. Nagkataon lang natakot siya,
nag-panic siya. Kami naman ang sinabi ko sa pamilya we do not condone the
incident as reported on the viral media. (He did not wish for it to happen. He
panicked. I told the family that we don’t condone the incident as reported on the viral
media)" his lawyer, Danny Macalino said.
“Kailangan magpakita si Anton nang personal para mahayag niya ang totoong
nangyari at saka mag-extend ng apology sa publiko (Anton needs to present himself
to narrate what happened and to apologize)," he added.
The Land Transportation Office earlier revoked Sanvicente’s license after failing to
address two show-cause orders from the said office.
NOTES ON TECHNICALITY:
NOTES ON CONTEXT:
NOTES ON ETHICS:
As per the Philippine Press Institute’s Journalist’s Code of Ethics, Francis Earl Cueto
didn’t violate any ethical conditions upon writing this article.
ORIGINAL ARTICLE:
(UPDATE) JOSE Antonio Sanvicente, the driver of the SUV (sports utility vehicle)
involved in a hit-and-run incident in Mandaluyong City, surrendered to Philippine
National Police Chief Officer in Charge LtGen. Vicente Danao Jr. on Wednesday.
He was accompanied by his parents and a lawyer. They surrendered also the vehicle
with plate number NCO 3781.
Floralde, a security guard, was injured when Sanvicente rammed him with his car
and ran him over when the guard, who was helping man traffic, signaled for him to
stop.
Pressed by the media to detail what happened and why he continued driving,
Sanvicente said he could not clearly remember what transpired.
"Hindi ko na po talaga maalala kasi blur na since nung nangyari (I really can't
remember what happened; it was a blur)," he said.
His lawyer, Danny Macalino, said Sanvicente panicked after the incident.
"Hindi niya gustong mangyari 'yung aksidente. Nagkataon lang natakot siya,
nag-panic siya. Kami naman ang sinabi ko sa pamilya we do not condone the
incident as reported on the viral media. Kailangan magpakita si Anton ng personal
para mahayag niya ang totoong nangyari at saka mag-extend ng apology sa publiko
(He did not wish for it to happen. He panicked. I told his family that he should be
presented to narrate what happened and to apologize)," Macalino said.
He debunked rumors that they reached out to the Floralde camp for a monetary
settlement.
Sanvicente said that they decided to show up after Danao issued an ultimatum for
him to surrender.
The Sanvicente family promised to shoulder all the medical expenses of the victim.
Danao said Sanvicente will undergo a preliminary investigation.
Sanvicente was previously summoned by the Land Transportation Office, but he did
not show up. His driver's license was revoked.
Political Beat
Mary Grace Paneda
ARTICLE LINK:
https://www.manilatimes.net/2022/06/22/news/national/sara-names-former-pcgg-chai
rman-as-new-spokesman/1848178
DATE: June 22, 2022
AUTHOR: Catherine S. Valente
Starting on June 21, Munsayac will replace Liloan Mayor Ma. Christina Frasco has
now joined the Cabinet of President-elect Ferdinand "Bongbong" Marcos Jr. as
secretary for the Department of Tourism.
"[Duterte-Carpio is] grateful for Mayor Frasco's help in the timely and effective
communication of her messages to Filipinos through the media," her camp said in a
statement.
Even before, Munsayac and Duterte-Carpio have already had a close relationship as
classmates in law school at the San Sebastian College of Law where the former
graduated class valedictorian.
Munsayac also assisted her in establishing the worldwide group Tapang at Malasakit
in 2017 while he was a designated commissioner and acting chairman of the PCGG.
In 2021, he resigned from his post “to help campaign for Inday Sara” and even filed
her certificate of candidacy for the vice presidency.
NOTES ON TECHNICALITY:
NOTES ON CONTEXT:
NOTES ON ETHICS:
As per the Philippine Press Institute’s Journalist’s Code of Ethics, Catherine Valente
violated:
“I shall scrupulously report and interpret the news, taking care not to suppress
essential facts nor to distort the truth by omission or improper emphasis. I recognize
the duty to air the other side and the duty to correct substantive errors promptly.”
She may or may not have intentionally meant to violate this ethical condition
because she did try to frame it in its most productive angle, but failed to do so when
she focused on the press release and the relationship between Munsayac and
Duterte-Carpio only.
Reynold Munsayac will replace Liloan Mayor Ma. Christina Frasco, who is joining the
Cabinet of President-elect Ferdinand "Bongbong" Marcos Jr. as secretary of the
Department of Tourism.
"Lawyer Reynold Munsayac will replace Mayor Christina Frasco as the spokesman
for Vice President-elect Sara Duterte-Carpio starting Tuesday, June 21," the vice
president-elect's camp said in a statement.
Duterte-Carpio is "grateful for Mayor Frasco's help in the timely and effective
communication of her messages to Filipinos through the media," her camp added.
"[Frasco] was committed to the truthful dissemination of information, and her duty as
the spokesman was marked with intelligence and grace," Duterte-Carpio camp said.
"Inday Sara wishes the incoming Secretary of the Department of Tourism Frasco all
the best in her new role in nation-building," it added.
The new spokesman was the valedictorian of their law school class.
ARTICLE LINK:
https://www.manilatimes.net/2022/06/08/news/chr-probes-police-misconduct/184658
9/amp
DATE: June 8, 2022
AUTHOR: Christian Crow Maghanoy
The Commission on Human Rights (CHR) will conduct investigations after multiple
incidents of ‘grave violations and misconduct’ were committed by several police
officers in Manila, Las Piñas, and Caloocan.
“CHR rejects the abuse of authority in any form, most particularly when it involves
the exploitation of the most vulnerable members of our society,” CHR Executive
Director Jacqueline Ann de Guia said on May 31.
The Las Piñas police arrested the suspect after the boy's mother had
complained.
According to Police chief Col. Jaime Santos, the suspect will face
multiple child abuse charges, as well as possible removal from service
and loss of benefits upon retirement.
The police officer was placed under the custody of the Manila Police
District and will face unjust vexation charges.
De Guia urges victims of sexual and physical abuse to assert their rights and
report the cases to authorities.
“We encourage the public to avail of the Commission’s Human Rights
E-Lawyering Service for free, real-time legal advice and counselling,” she
added.
NOTES ON TECHNICALITY:
● Headline: Revised for a more specific headline with an additional context. The
comma is used instead of a semicolon to substitute for ‘and’.
● Lead: Removed ‘expressing strong condemnation’ to avoid sounding like a
feature article.
● First paragraph: Instead of using alleged, a single quotation mark was used to
indicate that someone has been quoted for that specific phrase.
● Following paragraphs: In the original article, the author narrated the stories
one by one with so many details which can feel overwhelming and
unnecessary. Hence, in the proposed revision, the second paragraph is a
quote from CHR, following the cases mentioned in the story in bulleted form.
This will help the reader understand the story more efficiently.
● 14th Paragraph: Removed Republic Act Citation. Citing Republic Acts can be
done on a piece of follow-up news once the perpetrators have been
convicted.
● Last paragraph: good quote, retained.
NOTES ON CONTEXT:
The context was clear but the author has given too much context than necessary.
○ For instance, the author narrated The policeman allegedly touched the
teenage boy's body until he reached the boy's private part. The officer
allegedly even brought the minor inside his office where he molested
the boy further, which is not crucial and unnecessary to the news story.
Reporting on crimes involving victims is not as simple as reporting
every detail that can be found, even if it comes from official sources.
Consider who might be affected by the information that is shared,
either during an investigation or after a conviction. Suspects and
victims both have rights.
○ The author over-contextualized the story that his narration made the
story sound vulgar and informal.
○ The author used the term victim instead of a survivor which put the
story in the proper context. According to RAINN (The Rape, Abuse &
Incest National Network–the largest nonprofit anti-sexual assault
organization in the United States), the term victim is used when
referring to someone who has recently been affected by sexual
violence or when discussing a particular crime which in this case is
appropriate. Survivor is used when referring to someone who has gone
through the recovery process or when discussing on the short- or
long-term effects of sexual violence (usually used by advocacy
groups).
NOTES ON ETHICS:
As per the Philippine Press Institute’s Journalist’s Code of Ethics, Christian Crow
Maghanoy didn’t violate any ethical conditions upon writing this article.
ORIGINAL ARTICLE:
CHR Executive Director Jacqueline Ann de Guia referred to the alleged molestation
of a 15-year-old boy at sub-station 1 of the Las Piñas City Police last May 31.
Reports said the incident happened when the victim was approached by the police
officer while his mother was conducting a Bible study session inside the precinct.
The policeman allegedly touched the teenage boy's body until he reached the boy's
private part. The officer allegedly even brought the minor inside his office where he
molested the boy further.
The Las Piñas police arrested the suspect after the boy's mother had complained.
According to Police chief Col. Jaime Santos, the suspect will face multiple child
abuse charges, as well as possible removal from service and loss of benefits upon
retirement.
According to the 18-year-old student, she was waiting for her order when a police
officer sat beside her and masturbated in front of her.
The girl's scream alerted the barangay tanod (village watchman) patrolling the area.
They brought him to the nearest police station.
The suspect, a police officer from Cagayan Valley, was placed under the custody of
the Manila Police District. He will be facing unjust vexation charges.
Meanwhile, six Caloocan policemen were charged for the assault and robbery of a
vendor, as shown by CCTV footage. The vendor was apparently on his way to buy
dinner for his children after receiving P14,000 cash aid from the government when
the police officers cornered and physically attacked him.
'CHR welcomes the Philippine National Police's (PNP) recent recommendations and
swift action in response to recent grave violations and misconduct committed by
several of its officers. The cases reported included the following: the molestation of a
male minor inside a police precinct; the harassment of a Grade 12 female student;
and the assault and robbery of a local vendor,' de Guia told the media Tuesday.
Philippine National Police's Internal Affairs Service (IAS) chief lawyer Alfegar
Triambulo said that they have recommended the suspects' dismissal from service.
'CHR strongly denounces the aforestated incidents. We cite Article 3, Section 5(b) of
Republic Act No. 7610, which provides that 'coercion or influence of any adult' on a
child to participate in lascivious conduct is deemed to be sexual abuse. We, likewise,
specify Section 56 and Section 57 of The Criminal Code: Section 56. Molestation.
Any person who shall commit an act that subjects or exposes another to unwanted
or improper sexual advances or activity shall be punished within level 2. If the victim
is a child, the penalty shall be within level 3 (i.e. up to 10 years of imprisonment).
Section 57. Physical assault. Any person who shall physically assault another
without inflicting any physical injuries shall be punished within level 1. If the assault
shall result in physical injury, the penalty shall depend on the extent of injury caused,'
de Guia said.
'CHR rejects the abuse of authority in any form, most particularly when it involves the
exploitation of the most vulnerable members of our society. The Commission will
also be conducting its independent investigations to achieve justice and redress for
the violations against the aggrieved citizens,' she added.
'We encourage the public to avail of the Commission's Human Rights E-Lawyering
Service for free, real-time legal advice and counseling,' she said.
Economics Beat
Flores, Paneda, and Rago
ARTICLE LINK:
https://www.manilatimes.net/2022/06/29/news/national/economy-jobs-top-concerns-o
f-filipinos/1849101
DATE: June 29, 2022
AUTHOR: Kaithreen Cruz
PUBLiCUS report:
https://www.publicusasia.com/executive-summary-2022-pahayag-q2/
Majority of Filipinos believe that the new Marcos administration should focus on
economy and employment, PUBLiCUS Asia survey found.
The survey, conducted from June 16 to June 22, 2022, identified Filipinos top
concerns as the economy at 73 percent, employment at 53 percent followed by
education at 32 percent.
IN CHART: The most important issues that the next president should focus on.
The survey was conducted among 1500 registered Filipino voters randomly drawn
from a US-based panel marketplace, Purespectrum.
Meanwhile, the top concerns of households were not being able to afford basic
needs and difficulty in finding jobs at 59 and 46 percent, respectively.
Getting sick, not getting enough pay, losing a job, being a victim of crime, and not
being able to afford luxuries were also concerns raised in the household.
IN CHART: The biggest concerns of households heading into the third quarter.
Results showed that 67 percent of Filipinos believe that the economy will improve in
the third quarter of 2022.
The survey results had a +3 percent margin of error for the national percentages, +7
percent for NCR, and +6 percent for Northern and Central Luzon, South Luzon,
Visayas and Mindanao.
NOTES ON TECHNICALITY:
● There was too much data presented which made the article hard to digest and
understand.
○ The author could’ve presented the data with visual guidance, for
instance in the revised version, we have created a graph to make the
data and the article itself more understandable.
NOTES ON CONTEXT:
NOTES ON ETHICS:
As per the Philippine Press Institute’s Journalist’s Code of Ethics, Kaithreen Cruz
didn’t violate any ethical conditions upon writing this article.
ORIGINAL ARTICLE:
A MAJORITY of Filipinos, at 73 percent, believe that the economy should be the top
priority for the incoming administration of President-elect Ferdinand "Bongbong"
Marcos Jr., the PUBLiCUS Pahayag Second Quarter survey showed.
As respondents were asked to rank their top three priority issues, the Philippine
economy was the top issue with 42 percent.
Moreover, the inability to afford basic needs emerged as the most popular micro or
household-level issue among respondents, at 59 percent.
Next were difficulty in finding employment (46 percent), getting sick with a disease
apart from Covid-19 (41 percent), not getting enough pay (41 percent), getting sick
with a Covid-19 variant (39 percent) and losing a job (37 percent).
Being a victim of a crime (25 percent) and the inability to afford luxuries (11 percent)
were also concerns raised in the household, but of lower priority.
The pollster noted that these issues can be viewed to be "consistent with the
distribution of macro-level concerns, more specifically, people are keenly concerned
with the economy — and how it relates to their livelihoods."
PUBLiCUS conducted the Pahayag Second Quarter Survey from June 16 to 22,
2022, among 1,500 registered Filipino voters randomly sampled by a US-based
panel marketplace, Purespectrum.
ARTICLE LINK:
https://www.manilatimes.net/2022/07/06/news/dengue-cases-rise-by-58/1849953/am
p
Author: Red Mendoza
Date: July 6, 2022
From January 1 to June 18, 2022, about 51,622 cases of dengue were reported,
higher than the 32,610 reported during the same period last year.
Central Luzon had the highest number of dengue cases with 6,641, followed by
Central Visayas with 6,361 and Zamboanga Peninsula with 4,767 cases.
From May 8 to June 18, where 13,075 cases were reported, Central Luzon and
Central Visayas reported the highest number of cases with 1,825 and 1,570 cases
each, followed by the Cordillera Administrative Region (CAR) with 1,175 cases.
Figure 1. Dengue cases in the Philippines from 2021 to 2022 per DOH’s data
Regions with an increasing trend of dengue cases include the MIMAROPA (Mindoro
Occidental and Mindoro Oriental, Marinduque, Romblon and Palawan), Western
Visayas, Central Visayas, Zamboanga Peninsula, Davao, Bangsamoro Autonomous
Region in Muslim Mindanao and CAR.
Only Ilocos and Caraga had not exceeded their alert or epidemic threshold for
dengue cases during the past four weeks.
239 deaths from dengue across the country were reported, with a case fatality rate of
0.5 percent. The highest deaths were recorded in May 2022, with 62 fatalities.
Dr. Edsel Maurice Salvana, infectious diseases specialist from the University of the
Philippines, said most of the deaths that were reported resulted from repeat
infections that led to increased severity.
'We cannot predict deaths due to dengue, [but] we know that the peak of deaths
[was observed in those who were 10 years old] because that is where we see some
reinfection of dengue, which we know is more likely to bring severe disease,'
Salvana said in a briefing also on Tuesday.
DOH reminded the public to observe and practice the 4S strategies to combat
dengue — searching and destroying breeding places, securing self-protection
against mosquitoes, seeking early consultation, and supporting fogging and spraying
of hotspots.
NOTES ON TECHNICALITIES:
● The context was clear but the author has given unnecessary context.
● The whole context of the article could've been mentioned in the lead.
● Statistical data that were used in the article added factuality and certainty to
the report.
○ However, proper citation of the data was not practiced. – This may
confuse the audience as to whom the information came from since
DOH was mentioned in the lead and a non-DOH member/employee
was used as a resource.
● The author quoted Infectious diseases specialist Dr. Edsel Maurice Salvana
three times— some of the lines cited were not that relevant to the story.
● The author seems to assume that the audience are all familiar with Dengue.
Thus, to give more context about the disease, the author could have provided
brief information as to what and how Dengue spreads among us.
NOTES ON ETHICS:
Using the Philippine Press Institute’s Journalist’s Code of Ethics as the basis, no
ethical conditions were made in this article.
ORIGINAL ARTICLE:
From January 1 to June 18 of this year, around 51,622 cases of dengue were
reported, a number higher than the 32,610 reported during the same period last year.
Central Luzon had the highest number of dengue cases with 6,641, followed by
Central Visayas with 6,361 and Zamboanga Peninsula with 4,767 cases.
From May 8 to June 18, where 13,075 cases were reported, Central Luzon and
Central Visayas reported the highest number of cases with 1,825 and 1,570 cases
each, followed by the Cordillera Administrative Region (CAR) with 1,175 cases.
Regions with an increasing trend of dengue cases include the Mimaropa (Mindoro
Occidental and Mindoro Oriental, Marinduque, Romblon and Palawan), Western
Visayas, Central Visayas, Zamboanga Peninsula, Davao, Bangsamoro Autonomous
Region in Muslim Mindanao and CAR.
Only Ilocos and Caraga had not exceeded their alert or epidemic threshold for
dengue cases during the past four weeks.
Across the country, there were 239 deaths from dengue, with a case fatality rate of
0.5 percent. The highest deaths were reported in May 2022, with 62 fatalities.
Infectious diseases specialist Dr. Edsel Maurice Salvana said most of the deaths that
were reported resulted from repeat infections that led to increased severity.
'We cannot predict deaths due to dengue, [but] we know that the peak of deaths
[was observed in those who were 10 years old] because that is where we see some
reinfection of dengue, which we know is more likely to bring severe disease,'
Salvana said in a briefing also on Tuesday.
Salvana said the increase in the number of dengue cases was caused by the
disease being hyper-endemic or one that is being experienced all year round.
'Compared to last year, the kids are not going out and therefore they are not exposed
to dengue, now that people go out and we forget to drain stagnant water areas and
flower vases, there is a possibility that dengue cases will rise,' he added.
The Health department reminded the public to observe and practice the so-called 4S
strategies to combat dengue — searching and destroying breeding places, securing
self-protection against mosquitoes, seeking early consultation, and supporting
fogging and spraying of hotspots.
Entertainment Beat
Juan Carlos Sibucao
ARTICLE LINK:
https://www.manilatimes.net/2022/07/05/entertainment-lifestyle/show-times/does-jani
ne-have-an-issue-with-julie-anne/1849730
DATE: July 5, 2022
AUTHOR: Ronnie Carrasco III
After ending their 5-year-relationship, Janine Guttierez and Rayver Cruz have both
gone their separate ways but the actress might seem to have an issue with Kapuso
Star, Julie Anne San Jose, who is now being linked to the actor-dancer.
Intrigues arose as Janine reportedly unfollowed Julie Anne on social media negating
her statement that she has put everything behind her.
Janine's eventual network transfer last year certainly proved to be a sign of things to
come. What immediately followed was a falling out, which was to be expected.
Over at ABS-CBN, Janine has found a new scrèen partner in Paulo Avelino. The two
appear to have taken their working relationship to greater heights, yet there is no
confirmation if real-life romance has ensued.
On the other side of the coin, Rayer seems to have found the next girl he can
possibly woo as his off-cam closeness with “The Clash” co-host Julie Anne San Jose
is proven to be true.
Netizens also agree that the two look good together and if reports are accurate, they
are now an item,
If all is fair in love, as the song goes, why then are there reports that Janine
unfollowed Julie Anne on Instagram? Netizens speculated that it has something to
do with San Jose and Cruz’s closeness.
San Jose admitted she was also shocked but clarified that she doesn’t take it
personally as we all have our own reasons. She also added that she didn’t cross any
line or violated anyone.
“Wala naman po sa akin yun. Kasi, lahat naman ng tao ay may kanya-kanyang, like,
reasons. May kanya-kanya naman pong dahilan. But sa end ko naman po, sa sarili
ko, wala naman pong masamang tinapay sa kahit kanino”, said San Jose.
Meanwhile, on February 17, PEP reported that the two confirmed they are not in a
relationship despite the rumors.
NOTES ON TECHNICALITY:
NOTES ON CONTEXT:
● The angle of the story focused on the alleged animosity of actress Janine
Gutierrez towards singer Julie Anne San Jose following the circulating rumors
that the latter and Rayver Cruz, Janine’s ex-lover, are having a real-life
romantic relationship.
● This blew up after Janine unfollowed Julie Anne on social media making way
for the possibility that the actress might still be affected by the break-up or it
could be jealousy getting in the way.
● This alleged issue/ animosity is a form of entertainment for the readers,
especially since the parties involved are all prominent individuals/ celebrities.
● The author also did a good job in adding that the ex-lovers parted ways with
Janine transferring to ABS-CBN where she crosses paths with Paulo Avelino
and, on the other hand, Rayver, hosting with Julie Anne on GMA’s talent
show/ tv program entitled “The Clash”.
○ Is switching to a different network one of the factors that caused the
break-up?
○ Is Julie Anne the next girl that Rayver could possibly woo?
○ Is there something going on between Janine and Paulo?
NOTES ON ETHICS:
The author, Ronnie Carrasco III, violated the first mundane in the Philippine Press
Institute’s Journalist’s Code of Ethics as he did not manage to hear out the side of
Janine and Rayver first regarding the rumors before making those assumptions
based on mere reports/ speculations.
ORIGINAL ARTICLE:
Pilita's son Ramon Christopher is the father of Janine and who the latter fashionably
addresses as Mamita.
Quoting her granddaughter, Pilita revealed in a vlog interview that it was Rayver who
had called it quits. "Umatras" was the exact word that Pilita used.
As the story goes, Janine's revelation stunned Asia's Queen of Song, who had
approved of Rayver as her apo's boyfriend.
Immediately, Dianne came to her brother-in-law's defense, saying that as far as she
knows, Rayver is not the kind of boyfriend who'd initiate a breakup.
Earlier, Rayver had already clarified that there was no third party that ended his
relationship with Ja-nine.
In fact, Rayver had already been planning his and Janine's future, such as building
their dream house as though he was so sure they'd end up as husband and wife.
Netizens insist that Dianne didn't exactly like Janine as her future "bilas," and that
she was merely dip-ping her finger into the breakup issue.
Between Pilita and Dianne, netizens maintain that it's the former who has the
authority—and the credibility — to say anything.
After all, Pilita is more related to Janine by blood than Dianne is to Rayver.
Most importantly, Pilita's vlog interview was based on what her granddaughter had
told her in confi-dence, while Dianne's take was on general terms.
Janine's eventual network transfer last year certainly proved to be a sign of things to
come. What im-mediately followed was a falling out, which was to be expected.
Over at ABS-CBN, Janine has found a new scrèen partner in Paulo Avelino. The two
appear to have taken their working relationship to greater heights, yet there is no
confirmation if real-life romance has ensued.
Meanwhile, it's no reason for Rayver to accept his fate as it supposedly is. With Julie
Anne San Jose as co-host in GMA's "The Clash," Rayver has found himself the next
girl he can possibly woo. To be fair, the two look good together.
And if reports are accurate, Rayver and Julie Ann are now an item.
If all is fair in love, as the song goes, why then are there reports that Janine
unfollowed Julie Anne on social media? Was it because Rayver ended up with her?
Could it be taken to mean that Janine is jeal-ous of Julie Anne?
But if her attention is now focused on Paulo, then whoever is Rayver's girlfriend
shouldn't bother Ja-nine at all. If so, this negates Janine's statement that she has put
everything behind her.
Perhaps, compared to her situation now, Janine sees a better future for Rayver and
Julie Anne, whose extra closeness is not co-terminus with their hosting stint.
The Clash's last season ended in December last year, yet the two seem even closer
now.
In contrast, just as we are, Janine isn't sure whether she and Paulo will maintain the
same degree of closeness after their projects.
Will they still bask in the feeling of paradise exactly like their hush-hush Palawan
getaway?
Malacañang Beat
Adrian Pulgo
ARTICLE LINK:
https://www.manilatimes.net/2022/07/03/business/sunday-business-it/marcos-vetoes
-bulacan-airport-ecozone-bill/1849554
DATE: July 2, 2022
AUTHOR: Catherine S. Valente
Citing “substantial fiscal risks,” President Ferdinand “Bongbong” Marcos Jr. vetoed
the bill creating Bulacan Airport City Special Economic Zone and Freeport, a project
of San Miguel Corporation (SMC).
"At the foreground, fiscal prudence must be exercised particularly at times when
resources are scarce and needs are abundant,” Marcos said in his veto message on
Friday, July 1, in relation to his disapproval of House Bill No. 7575 or the Bulacan
Airport City Special Economic Zone and Freeport Act.
“I cannot support the bill considering the provisions that pose fiscal risks to the
country and its infringement on or conflict with other agencies’ mandates and
authorities," Marcos added.
He said that the proposed law was in contrast to the government's objective of
developing a tax system with low rates and a broad tax base, as it "will significantly
narrow our tax base with its mandated incentives applicable to registered
enterprises."
The President cited the Republic Act No. 11534, or the Corporate Recovery and Tax
Incentives for Enterprises (CREATE) Act, which already grants tax incentives to
eligible enterprises outside economic zones.
In accordance with Republic Act No. 7916 or the Special Economic Zone Act of
1995, businesses within established special economic zones are granted fiscal
incentives such as exemption from local and national taxes.
Marcos further explained that HB 7575 “lacks coherence with existing laws, rules,
and regulations,” and noted that the bill has no provisions for an audit by the
Commission on Audit, procedures for expropriation of lands awarded to agrarian
reform beneficiaries, and a master plan setting the boundaries of the economic zone.
He noted a measure in the bill that grants the proposed economic zone authority
"rule-making powers relative to environmental protection that is not found in the
charter of other economic zones," as well as "blanket powers to handle technical
airport operations in contravention of existing aeronautical laws."
The proposed economic zone is located near the Clark Special Economic Zone in
Pampanga, which is "against the government's policy on creating special economic
zones in strategic locations," Marcos added.
Marcos said that the National Economic and Development Authority and the
Regional Development Council 3 "assert the need to thoroughly study and assess
the costs to ensure that the establishment of the economic zone would be beneficial
to the whole country."
House Bill 7575 proposes the establishment of the Bulacan Airport City Special
Economic Zone and Freeport Authority also dubbed the Aerotropolis, which shall
manage and operate the Bulacan Ecozone.
The proposed law will cover the area of the proposed New Manila Airport, the Airport
City to be developed beside the airport, as well as lands adjacent to the Airport City.
The establishment of the special economic zone is seen to create jobs and support
the Philippine economic recovery, however, locals, advocates, and non-government
organizations express dissent on SMC’s Aerotropolis project as it displaced locals.
In an in-depth article by Pinoy Weekly published in October 2020, the majority of the
estimated 700 families of fisherfolk residing in Taliptip, Bulacan left the area to give
way in the construction of New Manila Airport.
As of December 2020, 364 families have received cash assistance and housing from
SMC.
Environmental group Advocates of Science and Technology for the People (AGHAM)
welcomed the President’s decision to veto the proposed law of creating a special
ecozone in Bulacan, however, the group urges Marcos to “stop the construction of
Bulacan Aerotropolis,” saying it “destroyed mangroves and displaced fishing
communities in Bulacan”.
In January 2021, SMC secured a 50-year franchise to build, operate, and maintain
the 2,500-hectare international airport in Bulacan.
NOTES ON TECHNICALITY:
● The comma (,) on the initial article’s headline would confuse readers that the
veto would also affect the construction of the New Manila Airport.
● The article needs minimal editing, rewriting, and reorganization of paragraphs
to make it more coherent.
○ There are cases of unnecessary use of adjectives
○ There is also a case of redundancy of a term
○ There is a case of tense inconsistency
○ Rewrote a quoted paragraph to better suit the story flow
○ Some paragraphs that should be in the earlier paragraphs are found in
the lower parts of the article;
○ The writer did a good job on her citation of legislatures as it followed
the proper format
○ On another note, the writer misquoted a law
NOTES ON CONTEXT:
NOTES ON ETHICS:
As per the Philippine Press Institute’s Journalist’s Code of Ethics, Catherine Valente
didn’t violate any ethical conditions upon writing this article.
ORIGINAL ARTICLE:
CITING "substantial fiscal risks," President Ferdinand "Bongbong" Marcos Jr. vetoed
a proposed bill to build the Bulacan Airport City, a project of San Miguel Corp.
(SMC), as a special economic zone and freeport, a Palace official confirmed on
Saturday.
"We confirm that the president signed the veto of HB 7575 entitled, 'An Act
Establishing the Bulacan Airport City Special Economic Zone and Freeport, Province
of Bulacan and Appropriating Funds Therefor,'" Press Secretary Rose Beatrix
Cruz-Angeles said in a statement.
In his letter addressed to the Senate President and members of the upper chamber
dated July 1, 2022, Marcos said he was "constrained to veto" the bill because of its
provisions that "pose substantial fiscal risks to the country" and its "infringement on
or conflict with other agencies' mandates and authorities."
"At the foreground, fiscal prudence must be exercised particularly at times when
resources are scarce and needs are abundant. "While this administration recognizes
the objective of the proposed measure to accelerate economic growth in its locality, I
cannot support the bill," Marcos said.
Marcos also explained that the enrolled bill "lacks coherence with existing laws,
rules, and regulations," noting that it has no provisions for an audit by the
Commission on Audit, procedures for expropriation of lands awarded to agrarian
reform beneficiaries, and a master plan for the specific boundaries of the economic
zone.
He said that the proposed measure grants the proposed economic zone authority
"rule-making powers relative to environmental protection that is not found in the
charter of other economic zones," as well as "blanket powers to handle technical
airport operations in contravention of existing aeronautical laws."
The proposed economic zone is located "in close proximity" to the Clark Special
Economic Zone, which is "against the government's policy on creating special
economic zones in strategic locations," he added.
The President also said that he decided to veto HB 7575 because it would be an
additional burden to the taxpayers.
He said that the proposed law was in contrast to the government's objective of
developing a tax system with low rates and a broad tax base, as it "will significantly
narrow our tax base with its mandated incentives applicable to registered
enterprises."
Marcos said that the National Economic and Development Authority and the
Regional Development Council 3 "assert the need to thoroughly study and assess
the costs to ensure that the establishment of the economic zone would be beneficial
to the whole country."
He also emphasized that Republic Act 11534, or the "Corporate Income Tax and
Incentive System," "already allows eligible enterprises to apply for and avail of tax
incentives outside economic zones by providing a favorable incentive package
without the need for creating new special economic zones."
The proposed measure covers the domestic and international airport, the airport city
to be developed adjacent to the massive gateway, as well as lands adjacent to the
airport city.
The establishment of the special economic zone is seen to create jobs and support
the Philippine economic recovery as such areas attract foreign investments.
Under the bill, a Bulacan Ecozone authority with a corporate life of 50 years should
also be created to manage the ecozone. It will be operated as a separate customs
territory to ensure the free flow of goods and capital.
The Bulacan air hub, designed to accommodate up to 100 million flyers annually, is
being eyed to decongest the country's main gateway Ninoy Aquino International
Airport.
In January 2021, SMC secured a 50-year franchise to build, operate and maintain
the 2,500-hectare international airport in Bulacan.
Environment Beat
Pulgo, Orteo, Sibucao
ARTICLE LINK:
https://www.manilatimes.net/2022/06/24/news/national/climate-change-the-real-threa
t-for-ph/1848440
DATE: June 24, 2022
AUTHOR: Kristina Maralit
CLIMATE change, not the territorial dispute with China or the Russia-Ukraine
conflict, is the real threat to the country's security, incoming National Security Adviser
(NSA) Clarita Carlos said on Thursday.
She said environmental concerns create a chain reaction affecting food, human, and
national security whereas developing countries like the Philippines suffer the brunt
effects of global warming.
The incoming security adviser also noted ‘so-called powerhouse nations’ reversion to
using sources of energy that are harmful to the environment, despite their vow to cut
carbon emissions by 2030.
"India is going back to coal, some countries are going back to using fossil fuel. That
is the reality on the ground," Carlos said in a roundtable discussion with the
Philippine Council for Foreign Relations (PCFR) in Pasig.
"The promises of de-carbonization by 2030, 2050, they are by the wayside in the
meanwhile because human survival is at the highest premium," she added.
A week before her start in office, Carlos presented the ‘broad strokes’ of a general
security strategy that she will propose to President-elect Ferdinand ‘Bongbong’
Marcos Jr.
According to Carlos, the incoming Marcos administration can consider giving tax
breaks to buyers of electric vehicles to entice motorists to switch from fossil fuels
whose prices have been skyrocketing.
Carlos also called for the use of solar energy as an option and to take advantage of
the country’s tropical climate.
She then proposed the establishment of solar farms in military camps to reduce their
dependence on power from grids that are disrupted during typhoons or earthquakes.
The Philippines has been strongly urging developed nations to ramp up their
assistance to developing countries that continue to grapple with climate change.
Several weeks ago, President Rodrigo Duterte called on wealthier nations to be held
accountable for failing to reduce their carbon emissions.
Marcos, meanwhile, has been invited to attend the 2022 United Nations Climate
Change Conference, or COP27, to be held in Egypt in November.
NOTES ON TECHNICALITY:
● The headline was a ‘remark’ of the subject; attribute the subject’s name
● capitalization of title and position
○ ‘national security adviser’ to National Security Adviser
● ‘The 76-year-old’ context was unnecessary and irrelevant
● Used a breaker to better organize themes in the article: Carlos’ strategy on
energy crisis
● Lacks quotables from the subject
○ ‘Carlos said’, should only be applied to direct quotations (?)
○ Quotations would give substance to Carlos’ remarks
● The article needs minimal editing
NOTES ON CONTEXT:
NOTES ON ETHICS:
As far as ethical concerns, Kristina Maralit has managed to abide by the Philippine
Press Institute’s Journalist’s Code of Ethics in writing the article titled “Climate
change the 'real threat' for PH”.
ORIGINAL ARTICLE:
CLIMATE change, not the territorial dispute with China or the Russia-Ukraine
conflict, is the real threat to the country's security, incoming national security adviser
(NSA) Clarita Carlos said on Thursday.
Carlos said environmental concerns create a chain reaction affecting food, human
and national security, especially among developing countries like the Philippines
which bear the brunt of the effects of global warming.
The 76-year-old Carlos said the so-called powerhouse nations' vow to cut carbon
emissions by 2030 will remain a promise since many of them have gone back to
using sources of energy that are harmful to the environment.
"India is going back to coal, some countries are going back to using fossil fuel. That
is the reality on the ground," Carlos said in a roundtable discussion with the
Philippine Council for Foreign Relations (PCFR) in Pasig City.
"The promises of de-carbonization by 2030, 2050, they are by the wayside in the
meanwhile because human survival is at the highest premium," she added.
Further pushing the use of solar energy is another solution, taking advantage of the
Philippines being a tropical country, especially amid disasters and calamities, Carlos
said.
All these make up the "broad strokes" of a general security strategy Carlos said she
will present to President-elect Ferdinand "Bongbong" Marcos Jr.
"I will have the President design the national strategy. I can present to him a draft, in
broad strokes," she added.
The Philippines has been strongly urging developed nations to ramp up their
assistance to developing countries that continue to grapple with climate change.
Several weeks ago, President Rodrigo Duterte called on wealthier nations to be held
accountable for failing to reduce their carbon emissions.
Marcos, meanwhile, has been invited to attend the 2022 United Nations Climate
Change Conference, or COP27, to be held at the Egyptian resort city of Sharm
el-Sheikh in November.