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Many things can influence the academic achievement and emotional growth of a student.

In
this regard, peers have more of an impact than teachers do.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Opinion: Agree
Main idea 1: academic success – motivated by competing w/ classmates
- Have a desire to outperform peers
- Ex) survey: peers motivated them to study more
Academic success is often driven by the motivation to outperform one's peers in a
competitive educational environment.In the pursuit of academic excellence, students are
frequently motivated by the desire to surpass their classmates, viewing education as a
competitive arena where success is measured in comparison to others.For instance, a recent
survey revealed that a significant number of students cited their peers as a primary source of
motivation, with the awareness that classmates' achievements fueled their determination to
study more diligently.This phenomenon is particularly evident when students observe their
peers achieving academic milestones, leading them to internalize a competitive spirit and a
heightened commitment to their studies. The survey respondents explained that witnessing the
success of their classmates served as a catalyst for increased effort and dedication.While some
argue that fostering a competitive mindset may induce stress and anxiety, it is essential to
acknowledge that healthy competition can inspire individuals to push their intellectual
boundaries, ultimately contributing to a culture of academic excellence.
Main idea 2: emotional development – grow thrw. Relationships

- Classmates provide new ideas, beliefs, exp.


- Ex) study: adolescents control tempers & cooperate by interacting
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